Brief Synopsis:
When meddling deities call forth their harbingers, only the nations’ Guardians can assemble to stop them. Warriors, mages, outcasts. Six standing together to protect the realms from demons and gods’ monsters.
Serenna Morgan, the crystal mage Guardian, breaks the Pact when she opens herself to the God of Death in order to protect her kingdom from invasion. But when a new harbinger rises in the land in which her kingdom fights, she joins the rest of the Guardians in performing her duty, but only after she nearly falls prey to Death, saved only by a simple soldier, Zeen Parsons.
With a harbinger in a hostile land, and more dangerous harbingers ready to serve the deities, Serenna must shed her fears and lead, putting her trust in a team who may or may not take her back after her actions.
What worked for me:
Treat this statement as made with all the respect possible: this book tells a very simple story. And that’s exactly why I liked it! If told correctly, a simple story can be excellent and in my humble opinion, this story is excellent!
I love good subplot heavy stories with multiple POV characters. I love complex worlds with betrayals, cultures galore. Characters with their own agendas.
It’s not to say PTD doesn’t possess all of these, it does! But every facet of the worldbuilding, of the characterization, the subplots all follow the singular, linear plot arc. Any deviation off the main arc path is swiftly turned back and strengthens the road upon which we are traveling. To continue the traveling metaphor, everything added to the story is like expanding from a two-lane road to four. Everything serves to build toward the ending, an ending in which we are essentially given in the very first chapter. I simply love it!
Speaking of characters, I can hands down say that the cast of PTD is so engaging, so well-rounded, so flawed, I was actually in awe at how Mr. Wolff was able to craft such a group. The best thing a large cast of characters can be is different. Different in behavior, different in introspection, different in overcoming obstacles, different in mindset, different in determination. Every POV character, as well as most of the side characters all feel realistic in their differences.
David is the grizzled veteran Guardian who has turned to drink to suppress his feelings, not just toward his role as a Guardian, but to forget the losses he’s suffered through his leadership over the years, to his love of Melissa (who might be the only level-headed one of the group btw!!!), with whom he can never have a normal life with. David goes through some stuff, dang you Mr. Wolff for Chapter 15: Falling, Falling, Always Falling… But the outcome to David’s arc is quite tragic, but also fitting to the character we are introduced to.
Francis is the jealous mage who strives to be seen for his power, his ability, his skill, and yet, he is referred to as the Invisible Guardian by many, a moniker that drives his ambition to make a decision that I won’t lie, saw coming a mile away, but the way in which it played out/ended, I was not expecting. I also liked that Francis’ constant internal dialogue of ‘they’re looking at me again’ was quite humorous.
Before getting to the two main characters, huge shoutout to Sardonyx and Pyith, the warrior zephum (aka lizard people). These characters are great and the entire basis of the zephum is really neat. I cackled multiple times when either were on page, especially during Sardonyx’s lone POV chapter. It was glorious! I also want to say the various god characters were quite interesting. Wisdom and Fear had some great moments that we can tell are going to play a major part in Book 2.
Oh, can I just say I love the simple modern names of many of these characters: David Williams, Francis, Melissa, Mary Walker, etc. It was kinda refreshing.
So Zeen Parsons, I don’t think I’ve ever read a character like him. The dude seriously gets his butt handed to him more times than not but still has this endearing, caring belief that anyone can still be a good person. Even the main villain working for the God of Death (the baddie’s name is Nyfe and he has a knife hahaha, I really enjoyed that). He isn’t the most skilled warrior, doesn’t have magic, isn’t great at talking to women (or Sardonyx), and loves these weird in-story books everyone else dislikes/questions, but the man is driven to protect his friends, his people, his love. Zeen was a great protagonist, I really liked reading his arc.
Serenna Morgan, the platinum mage Pact Breaker who Death constantly courts to be his harbinger. From breaking the Pact in the 1st damn chapter to her tasting the power gifted by the God of Death to her redemption as a Guardian to the growing romance between her and Zeen, I loved every word of it. She is fascinating as a character, super flawed, but also one of the most realistic warrior-type characters I’ve read in a while. Her decision making is so succinctly human, driven by things anyone might care about, giving in to temptation to save what matters most. Exquisite character work, Mr. Wolff.
As far as prose, worldbuilding, and pace go, this story nails all three. The world is fleshed out slowly, no big, long info dumps that break up the flow. We get what we need to advance the story where it is most necessary. We don’t get a ton of concepts thrown at our face all at once, which helps keep the pace steady. There are very few, if any, scenes I can think of that dragged or slowed the story down. And that, to me, means the prose is spot on. There is some great use of descriptors and metaphors, but nothing too purple-y.
Everything about this story hits the right chord for a great fantasy story.
What didn’t work for me:
Honestly, anything I found (such as everyone snickering constantly or resheathing/drawing weapons during continuous battle scenes – also, how does one sheath a polearm? Gonna have to YouTube that later…) would be extreme cases of picking nits.
If I had to find something to comment on, I suppose a bit more backstory on HOW Nyfe was able to become a general in Terrangus’ army would have been a ‘nice-to-have’. He seemed a pretty dastardly dude for quite a long time, especially with the Herald of Death in hand, soooooo maybe some more explanation of how perhaps the former emperor wanted to exploit someone like him? Again, not necessary but would have added another layer to his villain arc.
Seriously, Platinum Tinted Darkness doesn’t have much wrong with it!
Rating: 4.5 out of 5