I wanted to read Morris' book 'Cutting to the Chase', but it's not available on Kindle or iBooks. This book caught my eye and I bought the Kindle Edition.
So, the beginning was pretty nice. When I read ebooks, I highlight and comment on lines or confusing parts. The first part was after the "reckless night" Bayleigh had. Great lines in this book for Dane. Throughout the whole book, I was rooting for him and annoyed by everyone else.
Unfortunately, there were some places where I wish Morris would have shown us. It was the first day back to the office for Bayleigh and she knew she had a meeting with Dane. It would have been nice to read about how much he threw her off her game since she's so reserved and conservative or even how he squirmed during the meeting. Either way, it would have been nice to see this struggle. Missed opportunity!
Again, Dane's lines in the book were awesome! I loved them, but I couldn't really picture him after awhile. The description for him seemed so long ago. This might have just been me reading, but I felt like I didn't have a clear picture of him. This line, "Do you know what you do to me?" was used twice! I love this line, but there is a better way of describing this feeling.
At the beginning Bayleigh has three friends Maylea, Deidre, and Giselle. I get to chapter two and there is Lani. Who is Lani? (I think it's suppose to be Maylea and Morris changed her name during the editing phase.) I had to go back to the beginning just in case I missed something. I didn't know. Lani just decides to show up from no where. Lani turns into Lana as well in chapter 8. Also, when Bayleigh and her friends go into club Onyx Dane's name changes to Josh. I had to read and re-read everything again because I thought I missed something.
Let's talk about Bayleigh. Now, Morris describes her coming from an emotionally abusive relationship with Erwin. Also, Bayleigh blames herself and ultimately obtains low self esteem from it. Morris continues to describe that Bayleigh is smart, not much of a fashionista, did very well in school, very conservative, and reserved. This is all fine and dandy, but what else? Morris reiterates the same description over and over. She even recycles the part how bad of a relationship Bayleigh had with Erwin, but never ever goes into the details. This became annoying. It would have been nice to have been fed bread crumbs about Bayleigh and Erwin's relationship.
Bayleigh's relationship with Erwin is the part of the reason she doesn't want to be with Dane. Also, Dane is her best friend. That is the only "ammo" Morris gives her. There is a part where Dane and Bayleigh run into Erwin at the coffee shop. After a few unkind words, Bayleigh tells Dane that Erwin did a lot more to her than she told him.
Again, this was another missed opportunity! As a reader, I wanted to know these juicy details. In a way, it had been build up until this point. I'm sitting at the top of the biggest slide in the world ready to take off only to hit the ground after 2 seconds.
Overall, I love the storyline. It's a great idea, but it needs more meat. There were so many missed opportunities to this book. I love interracial romances, and I still plan to read more from this author. I love the cover! This review is honest in every way. I don't mean any disrespect at all.