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A very exclusive club.
Invitation only, and by rather unorthodox methods.
How will you know? You’ll know.
No cash or credit card required.
Leave your sanity at the door.

110 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 30, 2022

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Mark Towse

111 books515 followers
Mark Towse is an English horror writer living in Australia. He would sell his soul to the devil or anyone buying if it meant he could write full-time. Alas, he left it very late to begin this journey, penning his first story since primary school at the ripe old age of forty-five. Since then, he's been published in over two hundred journals and anthologies, had his work made into full theatrical productions for shows such as The No Sleep Podcast and Tales to Terrify, and has penned fourteen novellas, including Nana, Gone to the Dogs, 3:33, and Crows. He also has two very well-received story collections, 'There's Something Wrong with Aunty Beth,' and 'You Only Live Once.' Chasing The Dragon is his debut novel.

'Mark Towse is an exciting new discovery. His stories are hidden gems that glint in the darkness. His characters draw you into their worlds, making you care, then plunge you into the abyss, leaving only a memory of warmth. These tales will linger in your mind long after the telling. His are heart-felt stories with an icy edge. Highly recommended.'
Trevor Denyer – Editor and Publisher – Midnight Street Press

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Author 3 books1,664 followers
January 14, 2023
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Mark Towse is a cheeky fella – an Englishman who lives down-under, and who would love to write full time.

I will be the first to admit that the cover got my attention immediately, and as I tend to do a lot these days, I decided to go into this one blind. Not that the blurb gave too much away, in hindsight. Because this is a story about a very exclusive club, where you can only go by invitation and don’t need any money.

That’s right – total fiction for me. I don’t get invited anywhere, because I am totally awkward and anti-social. It is not a complaint – please don’t get me wrong – I might actually be bragging a bit. It saves so much time having to come up with a plausible excuse not to go, you know?

And when I was into the story a little, I thought to myself that this will be story I have read before. While the details might differ, the main idea would be the same.

And then Towse wagged his imaginary finger at me and said tsk, tsk, tsk…

I love this author’s humor (for the Americans), and humour (for the others), and his writing is half decent, too. So, yes, this one is well worth the read for any horror fan.

Oh yes, there might be a bonus short at the end…

5 STARS!
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292 reviews113 followers
June 1, 2025
This book lived untouched on my Kindle for far too long. I'm glad I finally took the time to crack it open this weekend! It was a quick and easy weekend read. Many people could easily read it in just one sitting.

As the story progressed, my curiosity got the better of me. What was going on with the main character? And what was to become of him? I felt an instant bond with him from the beginning of the book, missing the easy magic that comes with childhood.

Between the pages, we learn at what lengths he's willing to go in order to get a bit of that magic back into his life. Was it worth it? You'll have to read and decide for yourself.

Five stars.
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535 reviews204 followers
December 4, 2022
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3:33 by Mark Towse
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Frank is beginning to show signs of aging. Loss of hair, an extended belly and sunken eyes are the unavoidable signs of getting old. Relationships with his wife and teenage kids are steadily deteriorating into non-existent. One evening he stumbles upon a mysterious exclusive members only club. Agreeing to a one-time opportunity, he believes his life is finally changing for the better. However, there is a price to be paid for this signed contract of promises.

Mark Towse brings his imaginary gift to a literary hallucinatory manifestation of wicked weirdness to his book 3:33. Invoked by colorful potions and multicolored pills, Towse leads the reader down a psychedelic rabbit hole of ecstasy and intoxicating sinfulness. This adult-rated bizarre playground of pleasurable patrons plays on emotions of vanity, self-pity and insecurities that one might possess. Invitees are expected to compensate for the entrance fee and their running tab of depraved decadence.

Towse cleverly exposes the sinful side of humanity and the lure of temptation as he gives the reader a taste of Heaven but not without serving up a heaping spoonful of Hell. Merging illusions into reality with sinister serums and nocturnal fantasies, this tale of luminescent splendor exploits pleasure, depravity and bizarre behavior all rolled into one macabre mindf**k. I mean for Christ’s sake, the bartender’s name is Lloyd. Gotta love that!

If there were ever a soundtrack for 3:33 it would be Hotel California. I strongly endorse this feel good story of the year…just be sure to stay away from the Golden Door. One last notation, an extra feature entitled Last Train is also included. A story of anticipated fear as a man’s train ride leaves in thirty minutes. Seems simple enough doesn’t it? Well, with Mark Towse as the conductor of this Hell ride anything can happen. A five star ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Horror Bookworm Recommendation.
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1,642 reviews440 followers
June 7, 2023
I enjoyed everything about this story, I can't think of a single thing I would "fix".

The main character was relatable and engaging, his relationship with his teenage children seemed almost too real. His kids are at that soul crushing age where everything their parent does is the epitome of cringe and they want nothing to do with them but also not really, and as a parent you just wonder how to connect with them. His life is a bore, when he gets a glimpse of temporary escape and of a potential new lease on life, he can't help but to go for it and we can understand him, escape comes at a cost though... The story is skillfully written and it makes for a quick and hard to put down read, trust me, go in as blind as possible, you'll thank me later.

For personal reasons I will not accept any criticism of this novella. Thank you.
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Author 40 books101 followers
January 24, 2023
What will it cost, Lloyd? Towse opens the doors for the reader to enter a world that will give you everything, if you are willing to pay the price. This one was a page turner, great story telling!
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630 reviews407 followers
September 8, 2023
Mark has such a unique voice and style, I really enjoyed this! A short but impactful read, full of dark humour and creepiness!
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583 reviews7 followers
December 17, 2022
Mark Towse is quickly becoming one of my favourite authors. His books are weird, wonderful and very memorable. This book in particular was a wild ride. It was quirky, unique and the reminder of it makes me panic everytime I wake up at 3am! 😂
Highly recommend to those that love a short and intense thriller! 😈
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191 reviews20 followers
December 4, 2022
Great book about an Englishman who has it all but isn't happy. He joins a club that has a high price, but is it worth it? Creepy and entertaining, and the bonus short story at the end is creepy as hell.
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5,742 reviews342 followers
May 22, 2023
"I'm drowning, but nobody's patrolling the beach."

Such is the lament of our Narrator, an unreliable and seriously depressed forty-eight-year-old male, crushed by overwhelming and ever-intensifying financial pressures, emotionally estranged from spouse and children although still physically present, despairing of an unexamined, never-worth-living, lifetime.

This is a Bizarro novella, most cleverly "out of this world" (in so many ways!). I appreciated the premise, the settings, and the plotting. I just couldn't get behind the [not-feckless just-foolish] Main Character! Okay, I can empathize with his aging, his serious depression, his hopelessness and despair; but come on, there were repeated times when he could have stood up for himself, with his spouse, children, boss, in "the very exclusive club," in the pub, near the rural train station [and the isolated rural scenes comprising the conclusion, ESPECIALLY involving the Train Station, are PURE Ramsey Campbell to me, and yes, that is HIGH praise]. So yes, Ralph is Drowning, and nobody knows, but he knows, AND STILL DOESN'T ACT!!!

In the end, Ralph has summed his failure up himself:

" I deserve this. I deserve this. The mantra of the lifelong loser."

Ralph: I despair of you.
Profile Image for Cristy Villemaire.
344 reviews32 followers
March 19, 2023
This book definitely hit home for me. I admit that growing old is one of my all-time fears. Mark took that fear and amplified it like no other. One thing I love about Mark's writing is how he pulls you in with just a taste of what the book will bring, and you are immediately hooked.

In 3:33, we meet Frank. Like many people, he is aging and isn't happy about that. On the other hand, his wife Vanessa is as fake as can be. She refuses to age and makes sure to avoid it at any cost. Having teenage kids doesn't help the situation either. They don't want anything to do with Frank and ignore him constantly. On one of his late night drives, Frank stumbles on a very exclusive nightclub. It promises to make all his dreams come true. The question is, will it be worth the price you're willing to pay? This novella had major The Shinning vibes, and I couldn't get enough of it.
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173 reviews13 followers
May 8, 2023
This went in a direction I did not expect, and I'm glad it did! I can't elaborate because it's best that the reader goes in blind. So settle in and hang on for a surreal WILD ride! My first by this author and I will definitely read his other works.
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731 reviews41 followers
June 15, 2024
When everything you've ever held dear in your life (your family, your body) seems to be breaking at the seams, the appeal to find an escape is great.
Ralph took me down the rabbit hole, and even deeper, so much so, that I couldn't find the way up anymore. And I loved every part of the experience.
Mark Towse' novella 3:33 is definitely not for the faint of heart. It's brilliantly creepy, incredibly atmospheric and pitch black.
Oh, I laughed and almost immediately recoiled, frantically reading until the last eerie chapter.
Luscious, sinful, gore, worrying, the adjectives aren't lacking when it comes to this story that left me screaming and mind-blown. If your looking for a magistral mindfuck, I highly recommend 3:33.
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21 reviews5 followers
December 7, 2022
A very exclusive club.
Invitation only, and by rather unorthodox methods.
How will you know? You’ll know.
No cash or credit card required.
Leave your sanity at the door.

Charlie Kaufman is my favorite mind. Fortunately, he’s a screenwriter, so we get to see his thoughts come to life. Not just on the page. My favorite film of his is Adaptation starring Nicolas Cage. 3:33 by Mark Towse is so Kaufman-esque (and I mean that in the most positive way) that my internal voice as I read was Nicolas Cage’s and I finished Towse’s novella wanting to see it come to life. I’m looking at you Netflix. Help a brother out. 3:33 would drop a few jaws. Until then, read the book. You won’t be disappointed.
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46 reviews6 followers
December 6, 2022
If you hated your life would you give up years to feel happy again?

Overall, I found this novella a quick, easy read. It gave me anxiety, it made me feel for Frank, who just wanted to do shit with his family and be noticed by them but they were too self-absorbed to notice his struggles and suffering. But, in a way I don’t feel bad for him because he could have left his selfish wife and none of the shit to follow would have happened. 🤷‍♀️

I thought this novella was well written, the detail never had me questioning anything. The only thing I didn’t enjoy about this novella was the animals and sex scenes. But that’s just me!

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738 reviews154 followers
May 15, 2024
I picked this up on a whim, as I do many things that are on the shorter side of novella nowadays. I haven't read anything by Mark Towse before, but at least one person I know seems to enjoy his work. And now I know why.

This was a fun story following a middle-aged man who discovers a paranormal "Eyes Wide Shut" type of club that calls out to him through his car radio while contemplating suicide. Inside, he finds everything his mid-life crisis and depression crave. I'll leave it at that since it's a quick story. Though I will say, I enjoyed the tip of the hat to The Shining.

My favorite thing about this story was the prose. While I like a straightforward, working man's style, I'm also a fan of poetic language. This story combined both efficiently, diving in and out of the figurative language quickly to make a point and then hopping back onto the plot.

I look forward to reading other works by the author!
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47 reviews6 followers
April 9, 2023
Growing old is not for the weak. Frank is slowly losing his youthful appearance and ambition, and his wife is fighting the aging process with every penny. This makes him a perfect guest for the halcyon club.
This short story invites us along for a trip to hell with several stops along the way filled with human depravity. I went into this book blind, and I suggest you do too, as every twist and turn will shock you and have you compulsively turning the pages for more. If you are ready for a no limit experience, check out this gem!

I recieved a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
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Author 21 books79 followers
June 19, 2023
A vivid, gripping, terrifying descent into madness!

3:33 follows the plight of poor Frank. He's hopeless, he's self-destructive, yet, as a reader I completely loved Frank. I wanted things to work out for him eventhough it was obvious that it was too late.

When the same night terror grips him over and over, Frank finds himself driving through the night over the same stretch of road again and again. Until a strange crackling over the radio takes him down an unexpected path.

The world that opens up for him is beyond words. The author supremely paints vivid pictures in the mind of the reader, filling them with intrigue and chills of terror.

As Frank continues to make choices, however bad or good, I was with him till the bitter end. The things happening to him are over the top imaginative and frightening.

The story took me so deep into another place that it could have stood on its own as complete book.

I highly recommend this for the lover of weird, creepy, and gut wrenching scary!
Profile Image for Daniel B.
79 reviews6 followers
December 13, 2022
‘A very exclusive club.
Invitation only, and by rather unorthodox methods.
How will you know? You’ll know.
No cash or credit card required.
Leave your sanity at the door.’

Such an interesting book, just completely different from anything I’ve read before. Frank isn’t aging well in his mind, he’s balding, over weight and disconnected from his family. With debt mounting up he’s looking to end it all when his car radio leads him to exclusive club, where his wildest dreams are available, the ultimate cure for a midlife crisis but at what cost?

I really enjoyed 3:33, it was so weird but I struggled to put it down, to the point where I was fight sleep just to read a bit more. There are a couple of great nods to The Shining in there as well which is always appreciated.

I enjoyed the time spent with Frank and his family, the dynamics of their fractured relationships really played into Frank looking for something else out of life, and it pushes him towards a whirlwind experience and questionable choices.

Mark got in touch to other me a free copy of 3:33 but I knew nothing about the story beforehand and it is one of those that definitely helped...going in blind enhanced this wonderfully weird experience. I don’t want to go into too much of what happened in the novella as I don’t want to rob anyone of the opportunity of discovering this with a fresh mind.

The main bulk of this novella is 3:33 but there is also a short story, Last Train which is a great addition. From the opening paragraph there is just a sense that this isn’t going to end well.

Ralph has hooked up with someone out of his league and is heading to an isolated pub, it’s very quickly apparent that Ralph has messed up and his only hope is the Last Train.

Big thank you to Mark for this copy of 3:33, I’ve had some of his books on a must buy list so it was great when he reached out!

I definitely recommend this, it’s a quick read and just a weird and wonderful look at someone looking for an escape from their life.
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582 reviews85 followers
December 5, 2022
You've been invited to a very special club. An extremely exclusive club. You will get an invitation in a rather unusual way. No uninvited guests allowed.
Cash or card won't be needed.

3:33 grabbed my attention immediately. I related to the protagonist, Frank, and his pre teen daughter brought back so many memories.
Mark has purposely been very vague in describing this novella and I'm thankful to have gone in blind.
The characters are very well fleshed out, although some are left mysterious to fit the story. I loved the family dynamic, it felt realistic and relatable.
The best part for me was Frank thinking of The Shining and repeatedly using that name. It felt so off the cuff but flowed perfectly.

I have read some of Mark's other work and his style of dark humour makes for a delightful read but I do believe this may be his best book yet.

I could rave more about this novella but I don't want to give hints to the story away too much!
I highly recommend you jump on Amazon and get yourself a copy!!
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223 reviews5 followers
December 14, 2022
3:33 is a fast paced, surprisingly funny and also creepy novella! I really enjoyed a lot of the running themes in this book as well as the references made. This read felt like a fever dream filled with horror and mystery! There is also another short story at the end, Last Train, that I really enjoyed.
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234 reviews138 followers
February 14, 2023
A very exclusive club. No cash or credit card required. Leave your sanity at the door.

Like other reviewers mentioned, you should absolutely go into 3:33 blind as a bat. I mean, it’s not like Mark gives you much to dig for. Any information on this novella is vague, but I guess that makes sense because well, it’s exclusive. Only those who actually get through this book can truly understand and become an active member.

Frank just wants love. He wants his family back. He’s in his mid-forties facing a lot of debts and dealing with a lot of bull. He can’t even “get it up” anymore in the bedroom with Vee without his little blue pills. He feels worthless. You feel for him when you read this book and honestly, he kinda deserves to be apart of the exclusive club, right? Right.

Until that exclusive club is absolutely nuts. But why would I tell you what goes on inside? You have to crack open this one on your own to find out.

This novella was silly, weird, a bit thrilling, and do I say… kind of cosmic? I often felt a lot of curiosity while reading this, probably the same way Frank does inside his own story. Frank and I both didn’t understand just what in the hell was going on. And I find that element of curiosity and questioning as a big part of what deems something as cosmic.

The writing was also excellent. Very descriptive and thorough. I enjoyed Mark’s writing style quite a bit and will look into other works of his. Definitely a good book! I will also make sure that my eyes are always open at 3:33AM so that I can avoid slipping into the club and selling my soul.
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74 reviews
February 24, 2023
3:33 will be the most special, deranged, weird but awesome novella you’ll ever read. I promise you that. I won’t tell much about it cause it’s better if ( like me) you dive in without knowing anything about the story !

A very exclusive club, where you don’t pay with money, but with time. Frank is offered a membership, he isn’t happy with the life he has now. And finds happiness at the club, at first…

This was a great story, I finished it in one sitting. It was weird but I loved it !
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62 reviews12 followers
March 24, 2023
If you enjoy weird cults, middle age crisis’, and erotic scenes that will also frighten you then you’ll enjoy this hellish book! The bonus story “The Last Train” at the end is also a scary good time!
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101 reviews27 followers
December 30, 2024
Reminds me of the twilight zone. Poor Frank. Those of you that’s grew up on the twilight zone, you understand. Those kids and his wife, what a $#%€?!. To get a better review of his book you really need to read the other readers reviews.

READERS I know it’s hard to leave a review. I feel like my reviews are from a child. If you enjoyed the book a positive review would mean so much for the author. They rely heavily on word-of-mouth recommendations to reach new readers. Please consider leaving a review, even if it’s only a sentence.
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Author 41 books178 followers
April 20, 2023
Great story. Really enjoyed it. I want to read more by Mark Towse
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458 reviews91 followers
December 23, 2022
Frank has been invited to an exclusive night club, so exclusive you need to be invited through a dream. Animals masks are mandatory and the high end drinks come at a great price, it’s a magical adult paradise where ecstasy awaits, what is there to lose? …

As soon as I started reading, I didn’t want to put it down. The premise is unique and very compelling, the idea of a night club that only appears at 3:33am is what lured me in. I needed to know what it was all about and what surprises awaited inside this mysterious kinky nightclub. There’s a very bizarre aspect in the story that was completely unexpected but I ended up really enjoying the weird and gross visual it gave me, who knew hair growth could be so creepy?! You’ll need to read this to find out what I’m talking about.

I thought of this little novella as “fun” horror touching on bizarro. While it contains some bloody and suspenseful scenes it wasn’t as mean-spirited as other books in the genre. Theres also a bonus short story in the end titled “Last Train” that was a delightful little horror tale that will please “creature-feature” loving horror fans.

Overall, this was totally wild and entertaining, Towse really has fantastic ideas and the books I’ve read by him so far have never let me down. I highly recommend checking out 3:33! But make sure to be there particularly when time splits the Devil in two 😉

𝚁𝚊𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐: 4.5/5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💫
12 reviews
December 24, 2022
What a fantastic experience. Thoroughly enjoyed this one from Towse.
Profile Image for Diana  | Indie Book Addict.
552 reviews24 followers
December 5, 2022
When you receive an invitation to a very exclusive club you join, right? This was a great opportunity, or so Frank thought. No money is needed to enjoy the luxuries this club offers. When time splits the Devil in two, put your mask on and see what awaits you.

Towse has become one of my favorite authors. You are always in for a treat when it comes to his writing. 3:33 has some great offerings. I loved the vague blurb. It really leaves things open, so you have no expectations going in. It’s an exclusive club, after all. Once you’re in, be prepared for a wild and intense ride full of twists and thrills. Some of the story elements had me thinking of The Shining and Squid Games. A great balance of crazy, horror and mystery. Read it for yourself and find out. I’ll say no more because what happens in the club stays in the club.
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99 reviews54 followers
February 21, 2023
This was my second novella by Towse and it was brilliant! 3:33 was such a unique experience. The premise was so different and so bizarre.

Once I started this one I could not put it down. I love stories that put us right inside the characters mind. Stories where we get to follow along as they battle with themselves, trying to make the right decisions.

In this case we get to follow alongside Frank - invited to a very exclusive club, in the most unusual way.

I would recommend going into this one blind and knowing as little as possible (also why this review is so short and not telling at all, sorry). I think that’s how the author wanted us to go into this one with his own description of the book being so vague.
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