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This book was pretty lacking. The writing is very dry and written in a matter of a fact tone. The story doesn't flow well and the writing isn't smooth.
The bad guy was beyond extremely obviously u less it was someone who hadn't been introduced in the book. The plot was hardly original. The author states it has happened to her in some similar but different way in the afterward but the way she described her real life situation seemed significantly different and the way she worded the afterward made the author seem not quite authentic. That's not the word to use but I can't think of the right one but the afterward just seemed off.
The sex scenes are dull. The book in general is boring. At the beginning, when she was with a group of friends, it gave off the vibe of a group of middle school girls circling around the girl who had been the first to kiss a boy. A lot of Elle's pov seamed juvenile.
The author appears to have put very little thought into the security agency. Not much research seems to have been done. You have the MC, who is being stalked, and you leave her in your home, alone, day after day, without making it clear she should not go anywhere. The security expert, our other MC, thinks she'll be safe there because the house has a top notch security system? In reality, all the security system would do is let them know something bad happened, not stop it. He also doesn't think it is a problem for her to drive herself places? Never is she guarded unless the male MC is home.
Elle is a part time singer. She writes her own music and presumably has to practice. I don't believe she had another job. She mostly does gigs at bars big enough to have changing rooms for the talent. But, they can't be that big because of the size of the towns she mostly sings in. She doesn't have a record deal, or anything like that. Yet she makes enough to keep her own apartment, own a car, etc. In addition, her best friend, who is a veterinarian, and does work full time, I believe, does all of her promoting, managing, and social media. What kind of sense does that make. She's a 20 something that doesn't want to learn how to use social media. The world is going to leave her behind. Of course, if she expects to work part time, push off other parts of her business to others who already work full time, and can't be bothered to post to Instagram to promote herself - or have any smarts to keeping herself safe - perhaps she should be left behind.
The male MC was fine but nothing about him stands out. It's been about a week since I read this and I can't remember really anything about him. I made motes in the book about the things that made no sense and that's the only reason anything stands out about this book at all. It is highly forgettable.
With the small amount of effort that went into making this book make any kind of sense, I have no interest in reading anything else by this author. I wished I had believed the reviewer that stated this book was a waste of time and warned others not to read it.