This book was provided for free by NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
I definitely seem to have liked this one a lot more than my fellow lesfic readers!
From the beginning, both Cardic and Olivia felt like full characters, even apart from one another. I hate when I read a romance that has two people who seem to have no lives or ambitions apart from sex or romance. I got just as invested in Olivia's athletic-wear line and Cardic's anthropological research as I did in their romance. Of course, that's a big part of the story itself--both women have no time for love, so they'll happily fall into a no-strings relationship.
And it goes fine and all is well. Just kidding.
I had a hopeless crush on both characters, and when they got together, it was fire every time. Olivia is a type-A toppy femme and Cardic is a laid-back toppy butch, so there's some delicious, playful push-pull as they both try to keep each other at arm's length and fail. I really liked how Olivia demanded control and was the "dominant" one in a butch/femme relationship. Her assertiveness and Cardic's lazy charm created sparks on every page. And I'm just such a hopeless lesbian, because they're both so hot...Olivia, a plus-size redhead going jogging in a lavender sports bra? Cardic being a loving aunt in her white-button down with rolled-up sleeves? Guh.
Where was I?
Ah, yes. Halfway through this book, I was thinking it was an easy five stars. They slowly got closer and closer, the sex got more and more intimate, their walls started breaking down. But soon, I started wondering why they were pushing so hard to keep it casual. In some works, like the movie Trainwreck, monogamy-averse characters have major reasons why they don't want to settle down with someone. But in this book, Cardic and Olivia's small reasons (a rigid work schedule, a philandering father) just seemed too flimsy to keep them apart, even though they had such a good time together.
I needed some more goodness in the final third of the book. I wanted to see those layers peeled back a little more, their walls come down a little harder. I needed a final big gesture before they got back together. But it ended...not with a fizzle, but certainly not with a bang. I just needed more, because they are such good characters who deserved a meatier story.
I'll definitely be reading more of Jane Hardee's works. She creates awesome, believable female characters with awesome chemistry. The story structure just needed a little bit of tweaking for it to be perfect.