major plot spoilers
I didn’t really connect with the story, but I resigned myself to being open. It was when she was attacked by the vampire at the party, and they just got bored and let her go, that I couldn’t buy it. A household of vampires decided to let a hunter of their kind walk free out the doors to kill more of their kind and try to kill them in the future because they “got bored.” That sounds like lazy writing on the author’s part. It would have been more plausible that she escaped.
Sarah’s personality immediately chafed. Her hated of vampires and inability to see the good in uniting vampires, hunters, humans and all that was really annoying. I knew it was going to be a problem further down the road, and it was going to cause problems between her and Caryn.
I did like Christopher, and I liked when he drew a sketch of her leaning over her desk writing notes on the first day of class and slipped it into her locker. And then another day he put a vase full of roses into her locker, wrote a poem about her, and drew a picture of her hand, which was a little weird, but I just overlooked that.
I really liked this poem the best:
Skin like ivory, perfect; A goddess, she
must be.
Slender fingers, unadorned; beautiful
simplicity.
A single teardrop; when did it fall?
Could this goddess be mortal, after all?
It was beautifully written, and really deep.
When Christopher gave her yet another poem I started getting a little bored with it. I mean how many poems and drawings can you have him make? If you keep doing the same things, it’s gonna lose impact until the readers just don’t care for it anymore. It would’ve been better had he known Sarah a little better before he just started doing all of this.
The plot was based on this secret, that Sarah is a witch and hunts vampires, and so to keep the plot going the secret is just dragged out continuously, even when it makes no sense to do so. She knows she needs to tell them what she is, and at first she wanted to just so they would stop hanging out with her, but she kept putting it off. She finally decides to do it, and knows she needs to do it privately, so she goes to their home, to find they’re having a vampire bash. She sees Nissa feeding off a human, and they end up telling Sarah their story, and Sarah says she can’t tell them because it would betray their trust in her.
Well what do you think it’s gonna do to them when they find out you’re a witch after all this time has gone by? That’s gonna be even more of a betrayal. I hate when authors use these flimsy reasons why characters can’t do something.
The book did start getting a little better when Christopher started getting hurt and frosty that Sarah rejected him. I actually wanted to pick the book up and read it without it feeling like a chore. The plot started picking up when Sarah found out that Robert was acting to mean because he thought she was a vampire, and it turned out that his sister had been hurt by one.
The author had this strange habit of switching the names back and forth. Christopher's name used to be spelled like Kristopher, and Nikolas used to be spelled like Nicholas, and they changed it for some obscure reason, like after they killed the witch they wanted new identities or something like that, and so changed a couple letters. That in itself wouldn't have been that bad, but the author just switched it up and had the characters address each other with both of those spellings. Initially I thought the author had made a spelling error and forgot how she was spelling the name. Really confusing.
I absolutely hated that Christopher liked someone else. He had “adored” Christine, this girl from his human life, and dressed nice to impress her, and asked her to dance, but was rejected. I wondered what girl had rejected him, because when Sarah broke off their dance at the Halloween dance, he said it wouldn’t be the first time he’d been rejected. I really hate hearing about guys liking someone else.
I was even more pissed off when Sarah noticed that this girl had the marks of Kristopher and a tear drop on her skin, meaning Christopher had marked her as his and they had shared a blood bond.
The book was pretty enjoyable, especially when it came to trying to kill Nikolas, and the conflict that choice gave Sarah. It got even better when Christopher faced the choice whether to feed from her or not. He ended up feeding from her, and forcing her to feed from him, which I didn’t like, but it led to the decision to make her a vampire. I liked all of the conflict that everyone faced. When Christopher said he loved her though, it was definitely premature for that. They hadn’t even spent any time together, and didn’t really even know each other.
The ending was completely messed up. Adianna hoped she wouldn’t ever see Sarah, just because she was a vampire. Previously, she didn’t mind Sarah getting disowned, because it meant that she would be alive. But what was more upsetting was that Sarah never loved Christopher, and never even had one ounce of attraction to him. Wtf?
And at the end they kiss, and she said it was expertly done. And that was it. There were no feelings on her part, no comments about his looks, what the kiss meant to her, nothing, like the option of love for her was just not possible. She said she couldn’t stay with them, because she wanted to learn things on her own. And then there was some crap about SingleEarth helping her. Wth kind of ending is that? Who wants to read a freakin book where the characters don’t even end up together? That’s what I call a waste of time. A bad ending ruins the entire book. Hello.
Who sets up love, and then does nothing with it? That’s dumb, pointless, disappointing, and it’s a big let-down once we’ve read the entire book. Everyone wants love in a book, and we sure as heck want the characters to get together at the end, or else we feel like we’ve wasted our time with a piece of crap. There’s something about this author that she just cannot do a good love story.