My copy of this book is 342 pages, and I took my time to read it. I think the author, Marie Kiraly, skillfully and artistically creates a world and main characters that are vivid. I found it easy to visualize the people and surroundings, and the story does have palpable atmosphere. However, due to the length of it, some segments of the story felt tedious to me, and they were laborious to get through. For anyone who has yet to read this, I'm making an effort to not reveal too many details and ruin elements of surprise, but I was disappointed by how some events were not convincingly explained, specifically nearer to the end. It is as if several scenes were simplified, and at least a few "minor" characters were so one-dimensional that I, as a reader, unfortunately simply thought their behavior and motivations were illogical. Also, the story strongly focuses on Mina's internal world, especially the entries she makes in her journal, so a potential drawback to such a style is that a "typical" male would have NO interest in this book (like the "Twilight" series), except perhaps for the sexually explicit scenes. I've read other Amazon reviews of this book criticizing those scenes, but I did not find them offensive, nor pornographic. Yes, they are graphic, but I never thought them crude or vulgar. I've also read criticism elsewhere online about the cover art by Tony Mauro for the out-of-print edition (showing the neckline of a corseted woman), but I think it's beautifully and sensuously done. Tony Mauro has gorgeous artwork in other books and calendars, to name a few.
In summary, there is impressive ambiance, and often illustrative writing, in this story, but I was dissatisfied especially with the ending, which hit me in the face like a mediocre finale. It was very anti-climactic!