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by Allisha McAdoo

*Warning* This story contains graphic materials that some may not find suitable. It is an extreme horror story with some supernatural elements to it. Read at your own risk!Abby has a dark deadly secret She made a deal with the infamous Mr. Rumple to take revenge over her broken past, fooling everyone. Her last revenge is on a pedophile named Jason who played a big part in hurting her. Abby decides that Jason is the end of her contract, but quickly finds out there is no end. Her dear husband decides to make a deal of his own and suddenly Abby is thrown into a world of darkness and hell. As she races to keep punishing those who deserve it, she tries to find a way to free herself. Everything comes with a price, but sometimes the price is too high. Will darkness consume Abby or will the price of freedom be too high?

192 pages, Paperback

Published September 7, 2020

Reviews

[Sea Caummisar · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 stars rounded up to 4.
This is another tale about Mr. Rumple. He is one twisted character with an appetite for destruction. He is the focal point of many of McAdoo' s stories. And I have to admit that he is growing on me. The torture scenes in this book are amazing. And that's basically what I love about this author.
Once again, the formatting and editing wasn't perfect, but maybe I'm getting used to that also

[Joe X Young]

You'll have to make your own mind up about this one. I read the whole thing out of a sense of duty, but didn't like it. I'll try again with something else from this author though just in case this slipped through the net.

[River Dixon · Rating 4 out of 5]

I enjoyed the story. It kept me engaged and moved right along. Some extreme scenes, which I always appreciate. My only criticism would be that it could use a bit of editing, but I have a high tolerance for that sort of thing, so it didn't take away from the story for me. I will definitely check out some of this author's other works.

[Daniel Volpe · Rating 2 out of 5]

This one kind of fell short for me. I really loved the premise of this and thought it was a great idea. The author did a great job of showing the MCs trauma and made her actions justifiable. The scenes of torture were well done and descriptive, plus very inventive (the toothpicks were horrendous lol).

One major issue I had was the formatting. I'm not sure if this was my ereader's issue or the book, but the paragraph structure made reading difficult. The dialogue jumped around in one paragraph making it confusing on who was speaking. There was some basic grammar issues too, which bogged down the reading.

This story has promise and with a reformat and edit, this could be a 4 star story in my opinion.

[Russell Holbrook · Rating 3 out of 5]

Revenge! Revenge!
This book was short and to the point, telling a tale of a woman whose quest for vengeance isn't as straight a path as she may have assumed it would be. There are odd surprises that I didn't see coming, offbeat characters, as well as some totally reprehensible characters who get theirs in spectacularly awful ways. There's also a weird supernatural element, at least I think so? It was strange and interesting read for me. If you dare to find out more, that is up to you! :D

[Jennifer Shepard · Rating 5 out of 5]

I enjoyed the story. this is the first book I read from this autor and let me tell you that I loved it! Such a good book with great characters that keeps you obsessed with every page since the first one. It kept me engaged and moved right along. Some extreme scenes i liked it. I just didn´t expect it! Can´t wait for book 2! Amazing job! definitely a must read!