I’ve had The Heart Listens by Carolyn McSparren, which was published in 2011, on my bookshelf for quite some time. It’s a Harlequin Heartwarming category romance that I’m pretty sure I picked up at a used book sale. It has a cute corgi dog on the cover and the synopsis describes it as a relationship between a talented but brusque veterinary surgeon and a single mother who is also deaf. For those reasons, I expected the story to be touching but also tender and charming.
Well, this book is not really that. There are additional plot points that change the tone and emphasis of the story. The heroine, Kit Lockhart, is a former police officer who was injured on duty and is now on disability. As the story opens, she’s been deaf for about a year. She’s divorced from her husband, who is also a cop, and with whom she has a contentious relationship. In addition, Kit’s former mother-in-law blames her for the break-up of the marriage, and so things aren’t hunky-dory with her either. However, Kit’s parents are supportive. Still, Kit is struggling. Her husband isn’t always on time with child support and Kit’s 10 year old daughter is having a hard time adjusting to her mother’s disability.
One day, Kit ends up at the veterinary clinic with her hearing support dog, Kevlar. The vet, Dr. Mac Thorn, not knowing Kit’s circumstances, blames her for not bringing in the dog soon enough leading to a much serious situation. When he does learn that Kit is disabled, He feels contrite and, before long, he offers Kit a entry level position at the clinic, cleaning up and watching over the animals that have gone through surgeries. Kit accepts since it works with the time she needs to take care of her daughter. We then come to know a bit about Mac and the various staff who work at the clinic, including their work with the local zoo, local farm animals, and even animal rescue due to natural disasters. It gets to be a lot.
Because there’s so much going on in this — not so short, 365 page - category romance, I feel the hero’s story gets short changed. Kit, her problems, and her family are featured more. The second biggest part of the plot seemed to revolve around the work of the clinic. Mac is an important part of that work but he remains a bit of an enigma. He’s attracted to Kit, a lonely man, and devoted to his work, but that’s all we know. It’s only late in the story that we learn more about Mac’s troubled background and his issues with his family, which seemed to get quickly resolved. I really felt the author could’ve given us more about Mac sooner and less detail about the clinic — especially the care and feeding of a zoo animal they take on. I honestly wasn’t sure where this story was going as there were so many odd plot points thrown in — not all of which really mattered to the central plot.
For those who care, this is a non-explicit romance, with a few fairly innocent kisses exchanged here and there. That being said, Mac was effectively Kit’s boss — or one of her bosses — through most of the book, so even those kisses shouldn’t have happened. However, in so many more explicit romances, a lot worse happens between boss and employee.
Anyway, this was an okay read. I just wasn’t as engaged as I hoped to be and even the resolution, at the end, involving Kit’s hearing, didn’t effect me much because it seemed to be more convenient than realistic. I’d give the story a B-.