I love John Grisham and when I read the write up I thought I would love the book. I am afraid I didn't. At one point I put it down read something else before coming back to it. The write up proudly boasts its vast number of sales, so I guess I stand in a minority.
It is complicated with an involved structure, bringing several strands together - Koenitz, Josette and Andrew Landry. In the Prologue we see Koenitz frozen, as the light slowly panned down the building. Then the action moves to a different character and we are left hanging, wondering what happens next. When we return to Koenitz it is to find him drowning a victim. We are not told how he escaped his earlier predicament. At the end of this scene the writer says “Then had come 911 and Iraq and that threat had been all but forgotten. It was time for a reminder.” This is great, it creates suspense that something is going to happen, but doesn't appear half finished. Again when Koenitz is wounded and making his way through the airport, at passport control the tension builds around whether he will make it through and then ends with “passport please” and moving onto anther character.
Josette is a career woman and mother, but this is the only sense I get of who she is as a person. The description of the building, the rubble the rescue effort are very good, technical and realistic.
Perhaps one of the greatest strengths of the novel is the political side. The way it deals with the lobbyists, garnering support for a cause and political machinations. The academic debate, which is interestingly set in Queens College, Oxford, outlines some of the arguments for gun control. It is interesting from the point of view that it is an American issue, debated in Britain, which allows some objectivity as we do not carry guns in Britain. The bill in the novel does not ban firearms, only restricts the owning of them and increases the penalty for those who unlawfully hold weapons. Therefore the academic debate on the right to carry arms is a little misleading. The novel appears to suggest this is a weak piece of legislation and in that sense will do nothing to change the outcome of the novel.
I am not inspired to read part two, the author does not need my criticism or my praise. I would only caution Indie Authors to be careful what you take from the writing.