1.5 stars
I am extremely disappointed in this book. I won the first of the series in the Goodreads First Reads and really enjoyed it, giving it four stars. Also, I really look forward to reading the third book about Vivacious Vivian and Responsible Oliver. Taking all that into account, I was looking forward to reading this book, especially since I'd liked the excerpt I had read. Well, the excerpt was from chapter one and it all went downhill from there.
My biggest problem with the book was the heroine, Eve. She couldn't make up her mind about Fitz. She always made assumptions and jumped to conclusions, especially with regards to Fitz. She was high-handed, hypocritical, and thought she knew what was best for everyone. I hated what she participated in doing to Lily and Neville, although I blame Fitz for that mostly. Probably what made me hate her the most, besides the back and forth with Fitz, was that she waited so damn long to tell anyone about the threatening letters she was receiving! Who does that?! If you have someone who can help you--namely a studly guy--take the help! Ugh.
I hate that Eve and the author made me dislike Fitz. I loved him in the first book. But I honestly don't see how he could love Eve. She was horrible! What made me dislike him, though, was his plot to break up Lily and Neville. Really? Maybe you and The Bitch really do deserve each other, Bastard.
I actually enjoyed the secondary love story and the secondary characters. The romance between Lily and Neville was much more interesting than the one between Eve and Fitz. I wish that I could have seen more of it and maybe even gotten some of Lily's or Neville's point of view. Alas, it was not to be. I am just happy they were able to be together in the end. Vivian and Camellia are also characters I enjoy and I look forward to their romances in the next book. I, of course, love Oliver and only wish there could have been more of him in this book. Hell, I even enjoyed the Frenchman and Priscilla more than Fitz and Eve!
To say the least, this book was a bad experience for me. I have faith that the next book will be good as it is about Vivian and Oliver, so I hope that faith is not in vain.