In this book Jumping the Nail by Eve Bunting, teenagers start jumping off a 90 feet deep cliff. One teenager-Elisa jumps off with her boyfriend-Scooter. Unaware of the events that will occur next. The narrator-Dru. Tries to help Elisa with her problems, both in her relationship and problems that were caused from the nail, however she refuses help.
I gave this book 2 stars for multiple reasons. The books plot was overall, okay. However the way that events were told, the waiting for exciting things to arise, and MANY other things, made me extremely dislike this book. Some examples in this book that I thought the author could do so much better were, when Elisa told Dru what had happened in the nail. Yes- she did seem in shock, however it seemed like a lazy way to tell what she had experienced, the author could have used a different setting, and used literary techniques to make the environment much scarier. It felt as though there was no rising action. More if you stayed in the resolution double the time and then suddenly popped into the climax, one that you didn't know existed. The plot of this book is, in my opinion, amazing. Which is one of the only things that I believe make this book a 2 star instead of 1. The overall idea of Jumping the Nail is very creative.
The other reason why this book got a 2 instead of a 1, is the fact that the characters act like real people. Elisa is obviously in a abusive relationship, and she acts like someone who would be in a abusive relationship. She denies it several times, even though Scooter controls her every move. Scooter denies that he is bad for her. He even tells Dru that he "fixed her." However, overall this book was in my opinion-done very poorly.