I took up THE COLLECTED STORIES OF EVAN S. CONNELL because of my abiding admiration for his novels MRS. BRIDGE and MR. BRIDGE.To say that I was disappointed would be an understatement: I was occasionally appalled.
In the first story in the collection, a little boy and his sister imagine that a fierce wind is caused by a ghost: “It is a terrible sound, and upon hearing it Otto shivers so deliciously that his little sister must also shiver.” That delicious sort of detail is far from the limited, repetitive range of Connell’s concern and attention in story after story as the collection continues.
To be sure, Connell knows how to pull a reader in, but he too often fails to deliver. You reach the end of a story and find yourself saying “What?”
Readers who are not as cold as Connell are likely to have trouble with the distance he maintains from his sometimes near-cardboard characters, particularly when some of them who were tiresome enough on first encounter show up again in later stories — as with insurance worker Karl Muhbach, playboys Leon and Bébert, and frustrated author William Koemer.
The first of the Leon and Bébert stories brings Ring Lardner to mind, except that Lardner would have cut the story by half and made the dialogue sharper.
You do have to give a chuckle of concurrence to some of Muhbach’s mordant observations, as when in “Otto and the Magi” we get this: “Times change. Language deteriorates. The absence of culture becomes a culture.”
Some of the earliest stories, such as his 1949 “Filbert’s Wife,” seem embarrassingly like overwritten and derivative undergraduate work. Others such as “Death and the Wife of John Henry” come off as experiments that didn’t pan out and should have ended up in the wastebasket.
Despite the shortcomings, it has to be said that Connell’s descriptive powers at their best are nearly unlimited, as in “The Yellow Raft” — three pages of sustained description that makes fully engaging reading, marred only by a rather strained simile near the end.
Here’s the finely etched way “The Fisherman from Chihuahua” opens:
“Santa Cruz is at the top of Monterrey Bay., which is about a hundred miles below San Francisco, and in the winter there are not many people in Santa Cruz. The boardwalk concessions are shuttered except for one counter-and-booth restaurant, the Ferris-wheel seats are hooded with olive green canvas and the powerhouse padlocked, and the rococo doors of the carousel are boarded over and if one peers through a knothole into its gloom the horses which buck and plunge through summer prosperity seem like animals touched by a magic wand that they may never move again. Dust dims the gilt of their saddles and sifts through cracks into their bold nostrils. About the only sounds to be heard around the waterfront in Santa Cruz during winter are the voices of Italian fishermen hidden by mist as they work against the long pier, and the slap of waves against the pilings of the cement dance pavilion when tide runs high, or the squawk of a gull, or once in a long time bootsteps on the slippery boards as some person comes quite alone and usually slowly to the edge of the gray and fogbound ocean.”
Perhaps the problem with the collection is simply that Connell is too limited a writer to hold up through 675 pages. A judicious smaller selection of his stories might be assembled and be well worth a reader’s time. I would want that volume to include “Mrs. Proctor Bemis” and “The Walls of Avila.”