This is the conclusion to the story of Apion, the strategos of Chaldia Thema. The prologue shows us a somewhat older and battle-scarred Apion on the threshold of the Battle of Manzikert [1071], then with Chapter 1 the story conveys us to events two years earlier. The novel builds little by little to the big climax at Manzikert, one of the big turning points in history. Manzikert ushered in the beginning of the Byzantine Empire's decline. The last few chapters and epilogue were marvelous--bittersweet but perfect!! I had tears in my eyes at Apion's final confrontation and conversation with his son, Taylan, a bey in the Seljuk army and the touching reunion and time with his lifelong love, Maria. The meetings of Apion and of Emperor Romanos Diogenes, with Alp Arslan, the Seljuk sultan, after the battle showed the civility of all three peace-loving men. Alp Arslan was a complex Saladin-like figure in Doherty's portrayal.
I forced myself to read this novel slowly so I was able to savor it. I can see where this would be a page-turner, though. The author's writing has improved and is more mature. For the most part his choice of expressions and turns of phrase have become more sophisticated. Two word choices irritated me no end; over and over the author used the word 'grapple' where I think he meant 'grasp' or 'grip' and ' bar' for 'except' or 'except for'. He has kept history and fiction nicely balanced: political maneuvering, danger, treachery, exciting battles and a bit of non-maudlin romance. All the main characters, and even some of the minor ones, such as Kaspax the young soldier, are real flesh-and-blood people, with hopes and fears. We see loyalty and devotion in Apion's three soldier-colleagues. Well, the villains' evil was a bit exaggerated, as intended, by the author. I wondered at how a 15-year-old kid [Taylan] could become a high-ranking officer at such a young age; that didn't seem realistic although his authority and his hatred moved the plot along. I felt as though I were a part of the quieter scenes, such as in the hospital, off-duty with Apion and his comrades, or Apion's quiet personal conversation with Kaspax. The hippodrome scene with its attendant sabotage and the attempted assassination of Apion in the city of Trebizond were heart stopping. I also enjoyed observing the training in the Seljuk military camp and the battle in the gorge with Greek fire.
This whole trilogy has the potential to become a genre classic if Mr. Doherty would double check for the minimal proofing errors in in this Book and for those in the more immature but earnestly written Books I and II. He could revise layout in Book I, doing away with modernisms, modern slang, proofreading errors and tightening up somewhat in each. I was glad the author didn't rush his novel to publication, and was thoughtful in his writing. His historical research was impeccable. The supplementary material was a very happy addition; the cover art of all three volumes was extremely striking.
I thank Mr. Doherty for sending me a copy of this book; it was a fantastic reading experience!