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Rainy Days - An Alternative Journey from Pride and Prejudice to Passion and Love
In Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice, Elizabeth Bennet's first impression and hasty judgment of Mr. Darcy, and that gentleman's pride and aloofness toward her loved ones took them on a long, difficult road to happiness. In "Rainy Days", Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy are caught in a rainstorm two days before the Netherfield ball, and they are forced to spend a few hours alone together where they talk, listen, and better understand each other's feelings. However, even when original pride and prejudice are overcome, new obstacles arise. The road to true love is never smooth, and surprises along the way enhance the passion of the journey. Rainy Days - an alternative journey from Pride and Prejudice to passion and love.
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August 18, 2015
This book has been on my Wish List for some time. Finally took the plunge and could not put it down.
The title is used as a cause for ODC to be forced to be together during a torrential rainstorm but also refers metaphorically to some bumps in the road during their courtship.
Although the author does away with Darcy's prejudices and pride early in the book it is not smooth sailing. He is so romantic in this book...can't keep his hands off Lizzy...but doesn't step over that final line until the wedding night. Every chance he gets he not only gives her sizzling looks, but has to brush against her arm, touch her hand, steal a kiss, etc. His restraint and honor are tested as Lizzy has not a clue about to where all these sensations and emotions can lead. And she is learning to love him where he has abandoned all resistance to that emotion at the onset. The reader is so drawn into being in that moment, knowing and sighing for that final union. The scenes are tender but are for mature readers.
The author does use a well known "snake" whom, although she has been warned, Elizabeth allows to unsettle her just enough to rock her calm, her trust. Elizabeth and Darcy have some lessons in complete openness and communication to learn and apply. I like the details in this journey; not only with the thought process but also with the daily lives and interactions with family, acquaintances and servants/staff.
Darcy's family plays a large role in this story. The story is set for the main part in London so we don't hear a lot from Mrs. Bennet. However, Lydia is as in canon, Jane is more developed as is Bingley's courtship of her, Mr. Bennet comes to know and appreciate Darcy as they interact more frequently. I loved Lady Ellen in this story. Not only does she give Elizabeth a chance upon first meeting her but she is so good at handling her husband, her son and members of the ton. She and Elizabeth reach an understanding early on. And as others have mentioned little Becky Gardiner is precocious. She makes us laugh along with those in her part of the tale.
This story is one that will be re-read. My only serious quibble is that there is no epilogue but it did have a satisfactory end note.
The title is used as a cause for ODC to be forced to be together during a torrential rainstorm but also refers metaphorically to some bumps in the road during their courtship.
Although the author does away with Darcy's prejudices and pride early in the book it is not smooth sailing. He is so romantic in this book...can't keep his hands off Lizzy...but doesn't step over that final line until the wedding night. Every chance he gets he not only gives her sizzling looks, but has to brush against her arm, touch her hand, steal a kiss, etc. His restraint and honor are tested as Lizzy has not a clue about to where all these sensations and emotions can lead. And she is learning to love him where he has abandoned all resistance to that emotion at the onset. The reader is so drawn into being in that moment, knowing and sighing for that final union. The scenes are tender but are for mature readers.
The author does use a well known "snake" whom, although she has been warned, Elizabeth allows to unsettle her just enough to rock her calm, her trust. Elizabeth and Darcy have some lessons in complete openness and communication to learn and apply. I like the details in this journey; not only with the thought process but also with the daily lives and interactions with family, acquaintances and servants/staff.
Darcy's family plays a large role in this story. The story is set for the main part in London so we don't hear a lot from Mrs. Bennet. However, Lydia is as in canon, Jane is more developed as is Bingley's courtship of her, Mr. Bennet comes to know and appreciate Darcy as they interact more frequently. I loved Lady Ellen in this story. Not only does she give Elizabeth a chance upon first meeting her but she is so good at handling her husband, her son and members of the ton. She and Elizabeth reach an understanding early on. And as others have mentioned little Becky Gardiner is precocious. She makes us laugh along with those in her part of the tale.
This story is one that will be re-read. My only serious quibble is that there is no epilogue but it did have a satisfactory end note.
June 14, 2016
This is a sentimental favorite of mine because it was one of the earliest variations of Pride and Prejudice I read. I just finished it for the fourth time. It's not without some faults, but it is a romance I just can't help reading without a lot of deep sighs. Darcy is at his swooniest, Elizabeth displays passionate innocence, and the combo makes for good reading.
The basic premise is that a sudden and violent storm arises while Elizabeth is walking far from Longbourn. Darcy is unseated from his horse when she prevents him from galloping into a stream in the driving rain. Both must take shelter in a nearby cottage maintained by Mr. Bennet. They are already drenched and, to prevent getting seriously ill, Elizabeth must remove her clothes to dry by the fire, so she's covered by only a blanket. The awkwardness of the situation as they wait out the storm gradually leads to clearing the air between them regarding Wickham as well as Darcy's true opinion of her. By the time they are able to return to Longbourn, the pair is much more comfortable together. Elizabeth trusts him, and Darcy determines to stop fighting his attraction to her.
Even though Elizabeth now understands that she shouldn't believe Wickham implicitly, he still manages to create difficulties. She continues to get suckered by Wickham's nasty insinuations, and she allows them to adversely affect her. That's one of my pet peeves about this book. It is a repetitive pattern throughout the story that whenever Wickham whispers some little innuendo about Darcy in her ear, Elizabeth gets upset and assumes the worst instead of either recognizing Wickham's deceit or just straight out asking Darcy for his side of the story. It irritates Darcy-- and me!
However, it does make for fervent reconciliations between ODC, and Darcy manages to find lots of opportunities for alone time with his beloved. They share many stolen kisses and embraces. In all honesty, there are too many to be strictly believable and sometimes their declarations of love become sickly sweet, but it's all nicely written.
The added characters add the perfect amount of spice to the story. Lady Ellen Matlock, Colonel Fitzwilliam's mother, becomes Elizabeth's formidable ally. It's impossible not to love the Gardiners' youngest daughter, Becky, an adorably precocious child who takes a shine to Mr. Darcy. There are the usual antagonists; Mr. Collins, Lady Catherine and Caroline Bingley join Wickham as irritants trying to split up the couple.
This is not the very best piece of JAFF, but I can't help but love it because of my personal attachment that goes back 4 years.
The basic premise is that a sudden and violent storm arises while Elizabeth is walking far from Longbourn. Darcy is unseated from his horse when she prevents him from galloping into a stream in the driving rain. Both must take shelter in a nearby cottage maintained by Mr. Bennet. They are already drenched and, to prevent getting seriously ill, Elizabeth must remove her clothes to dry by the fire, so she's covered by only a blanket. The awkwardness of the situation as they wait out the storm gradually leads to clearing the air between them regarding Wickham as well as Darcy's true opinion of her. By the time they are able to return to Longbourn, the pair is much more comfortable together. Elizabeth trusts him, and Darcy determines to stop fighting his attraction to her.
Even though Elizabeth now understands that she shouldn't believe Wickham implicitly, he still manages to create difficulties. She continues to get suckered by Wickham's nasty insinuations, and she allows them to adversely affect her. That's one of my pet peeves about this book. It is a repetitive pattern throughout the story that whenever Wickham whispers some little innuendo about Darcy in her ear, Elizabeth gets upset and assumes the worst instead of either recognizing Wickham's deceit or just straight out asking Darcy for his side of the story. It irritates Darcy-- and me!
However, it does make for fervent reconciliations between ODC, and Darcy manages to find lots of opportunities for alone time with his beloved. They share many stolen kisses and embraces. In all honesty, there are too many to be strictly believable and sometimes their declarations of love become sickly sweet, but it's all nicely written.
The added characters add the perfect amount of spice to the story. Lady Ellen Matlock, Colonel Fitzwilliam's mother, becomes Elizabeth's formidable ally. It's impossible not to love the Gardiners' youngest daughter, Becky, an adorably precocious child who takes a shine to Mr. Darcy. There are the usual antagonists; Mr. Collins, Lady Catherine and Caroline Bingley join Wickham as irritants trying to split up the couple.
This is not the very best piece of JAFF, but I can't help but love it because of my personal attachment that goes back 4 years.
April 25, 2022
One of the books I’ve read where Amazon made my review of the first edition go poof! I’ve read it at least twice and now finished this third edition. I think my original rating was four stars, but with fewer proofreading misses in this edition, I gave five stars. Needless to say, I love this favourite.
January 17, 2021
“I always like walking in the rain, so no one can see me crying.” –Charlie Chaplin
Rating MA: mature audience: 17-years-old: adult themes: our couple pushed the boundaries of propriety to the limit. Seriously? There was a descriptive sex scene [the wedding night] in the last chapter. However, their declarations throughout the story were so sweet and swoon-worthy. Angst level: medium:
Wickham: The SBRB [scum-bag-rat-bastard] and his little tartlet made their presence known and were quickly forgotten by everyone. However, he couldn’t leave the area without shooting a few of his poison arrows at Elizabeth thus planting seeds of doubt with accusations against Darcy? Seriously?? I mean … really … seriously? Elizabeth was a schmuck. Can I say that about a lady? When Darcy realized what was going on, he read her a new one and it was completely deserved. Why the heck would she even consider anything coming from the mouth of that low-life to have even a semblance of credibility? Really? I was even more frustrated than Darcy. Grrr!
Lady Catherine: What on earth was she thinking? She stormed Darcy House, only to find out its master was away and created a scene that sent Georgiana into a catatonic state requiring the doctor. Well, Elizabeth was certainly having none of that. She might not be mistress yet, but with Darcy gone, she took charge and proceeded to throw out the trash. Oh, what a scene. I loved it. Lady Catherine was not best pleased. LOL!
Lord and Lady Matlock: Oh, I simply adored her ladyship. Lady Matlock was a delightful powerhouse of the ton and no one, no one, dared to go against her. She was also quick with a powerful right hand and her youngest son, our dear Colonel, was on the receiving end of that shocker.
Caroline Bingley just fumed and fussed throughout the story and, in the end, sort of faded into the background. Charles ignored her [much to her consternation] and did what he jolly well pleased. Our Caro was beside herself as she slowly lost control of all her plans and schemes. The relationship between Charles and Jane was the backstory in this book. They were so cute. However, they didn’t hold a candle to D&E.
What I didn’t like: the story was way, way too long. D&E fought way too much… OK… throughout the entire story. Darcy apologized to everyone by the time the story concluded. He may have missed apologizing to His Highness, the Regent, but everyone else received his apology at least once. LA! That started getting on my nerves. The guy had no control and after he realized what he had done, he would then … yeah, apologize. Elizabeth was not much better since they couldn’t keep their hands off each other.
Early in their relationship, Darcy told her that if she wanted to know anything all she had to do was ask him. Did she? No, she would hear something [usually incorrectly or it was an outright lie] and instead of asking him, would sulk and turn away from him. She’d go days brooding, worrying, crying, furrowing her brow, wouldn’t look at him, and sulking like a petulant teenager who’d had their phone taken away. LA! You get the idea.
I borrowed this through the KU program [1-6-21]. A review was not stipulated as part of the Kindle Unlimited program. It was my choice and privilege to leave a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. I think this is a reissue from a previous print.
Rating MA: mature audience: 17-years-old: adult themes: our couple pushed the boundaries of propriety to the limit. Seriously? There was a descriptive sex scene [the wedding night] in the last chapter. However, their declarations throughout the story were so sweet and swoon-worthy. Angst level: medium:
Wickham: The SBRB [scum-bag-rat-bastard] and his little tartlet made their presence known and were quickly forgotten by everyone. However, he couldn’t leave the area without shooting a few of his poison arrows at Elizabeth thus planting seeds of doubt with accusations against Darcy? Seriously?? I mean … really … seriously? Elizabeth was a schmuck. Can I say that about a lady? When Darcy realized what was going on, he read her a new one and it was completely deserved. Why the heck would she even consider anything coming from the mouth of that low-life to have even a semblance of credibility? Really? I was even more frustrated than Darcy. Grrr!
Lady Catherine: What on earth was she thinking? She stormed Darcy House, only to find out its master was away and created a scene that sent Georgiana into a catatonic state requiring the doctor. Well, Elizabeth was certainly having none of that. She might not be mistress yet, but with Darcy gone, she took charge and proceeded to throw out the trash. Oh, what a scene. I loved it. Lady Catherine was not best pleased. LOL!
Lord and Lady Matlock: Oh, I simply adored her ladyship. Lady Matlock was a delightful powerhouse of the ton and no one, no one, dared to go against her. She was also quick with a powerful right hand and her youngest son, our dear Colonel, was on the receiving end of that shocker.
Caroline Bingley just fumed and fussed throughout the story and, in the end, sort of faded into the background. Charles ignored her [much to her consternation] and did what he jolly well pleased. Our Caro was beside herself as she slowly lost control of all her plans and schemes. The relationship between Charles and Jane was the backstory in this book. They were so cute. However, they didn’t hold a candle to D&E.
What I didn’t like: the story was way, way too long. D&E fought way too much… OK… throughout the entire story. Darcy apologized to everyone by the time the story concluded. He may have missed apologizing to His Highness, the Regent, but everyone else received his apology at least once. LA! That started getting on my nerves. The guy had no control and after he realized what he had done, he would then … yeah, apologize. Elizabeth was not much better since they couldn’t keep their hands off each other.
Early in their relationship, Darcy told her that if she wanted to know anything all she had to do was ask him. Did she? No, she would hear something [usually incorrectly or it was an outright lie] and instead of asking him, would sulk and turn away from him. She’d go days brooding, worrying, crying, furrowing her brow, wouldn’t look at him, and sulking like a petulant teenager who’d had their phone taken away. LA! You get the idea.
I borrowed this through the KU program [1-6-21]. A review was not stipulated as part of the Kindle Unlimited program. It was my choice and privilege to leave a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. I think this is a reissue from a previous print.
December 19, 2017
This book has been on my Wish List for some time. Finally took the plunge and could not put it down.
The title is used as a cause for ODC to be forced to be together during a torrential rainstorm but also refers metaphorically to some bumps in the road during their courtship.
Although the author does away with Darcy's prejudices and pride early in the book it is not smooth sailing. He is so romantic in this book...can't keep his hands off Lizzy...but doesn't step over that final line until the wedding night. Every chance he gets he not only gives her sizzling looks, but has to brush against her arm, touch her hand, steal a kiss, etc. His restraint and honor are tested as Lizzy has not a clue about to where all these sensations and emotions can lead. And she is learning to love him where he has abandoned all resistance that emotion at the onset. The reader is so drawn into being in that moment, knowing and sighing for that final union. The scenes are tender but are for mature readers.
The author does use a well known "snake" whom, although she has been warned, Elizabeth allows to unsettle her just enough to rock her calm, her trust. Elizabeth and Darcy have some lessons in complete openness and communication to learn and apply. I like the details in this journey; not only with the thought process but also with the daily lives and interactions with family, acquaintances and servants/staff.
Darcy's family plays a large role in this story. The story is set for the main part in London so we don't hear a lot from Mrs. Bennet. However, Lydia is as in canon, Jane is more developed as is Bingley's courtship of her, Mr. Bennet comes to know and appreciate Darcy as they interact more frequently. I loved Lady Ellen in this story. Not only does she give Elizabeth a chance upon first meeting her but she is so good at handling her husband, her son and members of the ton. She and Elizabeth reach an understanding early on. And as others have mentioned little Becky Gardiner is precocious. She makes us laugh along with those in her part of the tale.
This story is one that will be re-read. My only serious quibble is that there is no epilogue but it did have a satisfactory end note.
The title is used as a cause for ODC to be forced to be together during a torrential rainstorm but also refers metaphorically to some bumps in the road during their courtship.
Although the author does away with Darcy's prejudices and pride early in the book it is not smooth sailing. He is so romantic in this book...can't keep his hands off Lizzy...but doesn't step over that final line until the wedding night. Every chance he gets he not only gives her sizzling looks, but has to brush against her arm, touch her hand, steal a kiss, etc. His restraint and honor are tested as Lizzy has not a clue about to where all these sensations and emotions can lead. And she is learning to love him where he has abandoned all resistance that emotion at the onset. The reader is so drawn into being in that moment, knowing and sighing for that final union. The scenes are tender but are for mature readers.
The author does use a well known "snake" whom, although she has been warned, Elizabeth allows to unsettle her just enough to rock her calm, her trust. Elizabeth and Darcy have some lessons in complete openness and communication to learn and apply. I like the details in this journey; not only with the thought process but also with the daily lives and interactions with family, acquaintances and servants/staff.
Darcy's family plays a large role in this story. The story is set for the main part in London so we don't hear a lot from Mrs. Bennet. However, Lydia is as in canon, Jane is more developed as is Bingley's courtship of her, Mr. Bennet comes to know and appreciate Darcy as they interact more frequently. I loved Lady Ellen in this story. Not only does she give Elizabeth a chance upon first meeting her but she is so good at handling her husband, her son and members of the ton. She and Elizabeth reach an understanding early on. And as others have mentioned little Becky Gardiner is precocious. She makes us laugh along with those in her part of the tale.
This story is one that will be re-read. My only serious quibble is that there is no epilogue but it did have a satisfactory end note.
October 21, 2017
Oh, what a beautiful story! This story is an alternative to Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice. It explores what would have happened if Mr Darcy became aware of Lizzie’s opinion of him while still at Netherfield and then set about changing his behaviour in an attempt to woo Elizabeth right from the beginning.
My favourite things about this book –
- The romance, oh the romance! My progress through this book was very slow because I had to keep going back and reading passages over and over again because they were so romantic! And the romantic suspense in the story will have you reading way past your bedtime!
- Darcy features prominently throughout the book. He is a main character and is not absent from most of the story as he is in Pride & Prejudice.
- The story is written from both Darcy and Elizabeth’s perspectives, so you don't miss anything.
- The witty banter between Darcy and Elizabeth throughout the book is a delight to read.
- The characters from the original Pride & Prejudice are true to form. They have been faithfully portrayed in this story. But as the story develops the focus shifts to different characters and settings than in the original Pride & Prejudice and new characters are introduced. It was very refreshing. I loved seeing Darcy and Elizabeth interact with his family and household staff in London.
- Darcy, Darcy, Darcy. Read it – you’ll see what I mean!
Originally read: 24 Feb - 29 Feb 2012
Reread: 11 Jun 16 - dnf
Reread 14 Oct 17 -
My favourite things about this book –
- The romance, oh the romance! My progress through this book was very slow because I had to keep going back and reading passages over and over again because they were so romantic! And the romantic suspense in the story will have you reading way past your bedtime!
- Darcy features prominently throughout the book. He is a main character and is not absent from most of the story as he is in Pride & Prejudice.
- The story is written from both Darcy and Elizabeth’s perspectives, so you don't miss anything.
- The witty banter between Darcy and Elizabeth throughout the book is a delight to read.
- The characters from the original Pride & Prejudice are true to form. They have been faithfully portrayed in this story. But as the story develops the focus shifts to different characters and settings than in the original Pride & Prejudice and new characters are introduced. It was very refreshing. I loved seeing Darcy and Elizabeth interact with his family and household staff in London.
- Darcy, Darcy, Darcy. Read it – you’ll see what I mean!
Originally read: 24 Feb - 29 Feb 2012
Reread: 11 Jun 16 - dnf
Reread 14 Oct 17 -
June 15, 2020
Unputdownable!
I loved it!
It is a slow and at times painful way to HEA. Low angst but captivating non the less. Romantic and passionate. It made me laugh out loud several times and cry at one point... Loved little miss Beck, my favourite character in this novel.
Elizabeth frightened Mr Darcy's horse and he was unseated, they seek shelter in an old cottage from the heavy rain.
Forced together for several hours Lizzy starts to see a different side of Mr Darcy and Mr Darcy discover that Lizzy doesn't like him. This leads to ODC understanding each other earlier than canon but it's a slow process with a lot of misunderstandings still unsolved.
Wickham was at the Netherfield ball this time and he was as mean as ever. Caroline and Lady C are no better...
A lot of the book takes place in London away from the Bennet family and there are no Hunsford or Pemberley.
Heartily recommend this Unputdownable novel.
I loved it!
It is a slow and at times painful way to HEA. Low angst but captivating non the less. Romantic and passionate. It made me laugh out loud several times and cry at one point... Loved little miss Beck, my favourite character in this novel.
Elizabeth frightened Mr Darcy's horse and he was unseated, they seek shelter in an old cottage from the heavy rain.
Forced together for several hours Lizzy starts to see a different side of Mr Darcy and Mr Darcy discover that Lizzy doesn't like him. This leads to ODC understanding each other earlier than canon but it's a slow process with a lot of misunderstandings still unsolved.
Wickham was at the Netherfield ball this time and he was as mean as ever. Caroline and Lady C are no better...
A lot of the book takes place in London away from the Bennet family and there are no Hunsford or Pemberley.
Heartily recommend this Unputdownable novel.
August 12, 2016
Ummm yeah this book is under 400 pages but it was a slow slow read. While the opening premise was good I found the behaviors of Darcy and Lizzy both like a one dimensional caricature of these beloved characters.
The first 1/3 of the book is new and unique with Darcy & Lizzy being trapped for several hours in a small cottage, Wickham attending the ball at Netherfield and Jane and Lizzy traveling to London after Christmas.
Immediately after they arrive Darcy & Bingley pay a call at Gracechurch st. and the remainder of the story is compressed.
Unfortunately the author seems to have deemed Lizzy to be unstable and angry. Whenever she interacts with Darcy she immediately either fights, weeps or fumes. Darcy is imperious constantly setting down edicts for one and all and then learning he was 'wrong' when Lizzy either crys, fights or glares. Lizzy is constantly questioning herself, believing the worst of Darcy and being neurotic. And all of these issues are resolved by kissing. Detailed descriptions of kissing and moaning and moaning and tingling and ewwwwwww.
I find myself making the following point in many reviews but in the source material from April until July Lizzy and Darcy did not see each other, could not communicate and were unaware of the others actions. When you place them in daily contact and engaged there is no reason they couldn't talk. It is absurd to expect an engaged couple to treat each other with the same reserved politeness as a non engaged couple.
The way this Darcy is presented you would almost think he was an abuser and it far from loveable. And if he and Lizzy spent more time talking and less time kissing there would be a basis for their relationship that seems reasonable.
A good character from this book is a strong, brilliant Lady Matlock.
The first 1/3 of the book is new and unique with Darcy & Lizzy being trapped for several hours in a small cottage, Wickham attending the ball at Netherfield and Jane and Lizzy traveling to London after Christmas.
Immediately after they arrive Darcy & Bingley pay a call at Gracechurch st. and the remainder of the story is compressed.
Unfortunately the author seems to have deemed Lizzy to be unstable and angry. Whenever she interacts with Darcy she immediately either fights, weeps or fumes. Darcy is imperious constantly setting down edicts for one and all and then learning he was 'wrong' when Lizzy either crys, fights or glares. Lizzy is constantly questioning herself, believing the worst of Darcy and being neurotic. And all of these issues are resolved by kissing. Detailed descriptions of kissing and moaning and moaning and tingling and ewwwwwww.
I find myself making the following point in many reviews but in the source material from April until July Lizzy and Darcy did not see each other, could not communicate and were unaware of the others actions. When you place them in daily contact and engaged there is no reason they couldn't talk. It is absurd to expect an engaged couple to treat each other with the same reserved politeness as a non engaged couple.
The way this Darcy is presented you would almost think he was an abuser and it far from loveable. And if he and Lizzy spent more time talking and less time kissing there would be a basis for their relationship that seems reasonable.
A good character from this book is a strong, brilliant Lady Matlock.
March 25, 2020
I lost count as to how many times I have read this book. Maybe 20? I don't know. Still one of the best to me. I read it to get ready for The Rainbow Promise sequel.
Reread again! I would love to know what Mr W did to Darcy's aunt. I don't think we ever find that out in the next book.
Reread: Love it!
Reread again! I would love to know what Mr W did to Darcy's aunt. I don't think we ever find that out in the next book.
Reread: Love it!
October 20, 2020
4.5 stars
June 25, 2012
Two days before the Netherfield Ball, both Darcy and Elizabeth, taking advantage of the momentary lapse in rain, escape outdoors for a bit of fresh air (Darcy on horseback, Lizzy on foot). But because it is only a momentary lapse, they end up getting caught in a torrential downpour miles away from their respective dwellings. Fortunately, they are nearby an old fishing cottage and decide to seek shelter there together. Although they are protected from the rain and damp, this decision places both their hearts and reputations at perilous risk....
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, all of the realizations Darcy and Elizabeth make in volumes two and three of Jane Austen's novel, occur in the span of a couple hours.
- Darcy realizes that Elizabeth has not been flirting with him
- Elizabeth realizes that Darcy does have some common courtesy and a sense of humor
- Darcy realizes he must listen to his heart
- Elizabeth realizes that Wickham's conversation was too personal for so slight an acquaintance
With Darcy and Elizabeth losing some of their pride and prejudices in the first forty pages, one might wonder what other obstacles and conflicts can Ms. Lilian create to keep the reader engaged for three hundred more pages. Do not worry, dear reader, Darcy and Elizabeth still have their misunderstandings (they're not pictures of perfection you know), and with Caroline Bingley, George Wickham, and Lady Catherine de Bourgh instigating conflicts and voicing their displeasure, Darcy and Elizabeth's battles are far from over!
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In this Pride and Prejudice variation, all of the realizations Darcy and Elizabeth make in volumes two and three of Jane Austen's novel, occur in the span of a couple hours.
- Darcy realizes that Elizabeth has not been flirting with him
- Elizabeth realizes that Darcy does have some common courtesy and a sense of humor
- Darcy realizes he must listen to his heart
- Elizabeth realizes that Wickham's conversation was too personal for so slight an acquaintance
With Darcy and Elizabeth losing some of their pride and prejudices in the first forty pages, one might wonder what other obstacles and conflicts can Ms. Lilian create to keep the reader engaged for three hundred more pages. Do not worry, dear reader, Darcy and Elizabeth still have their misunderstandings (they're not pictures of perfection you know), and with Caroline Bingley, George Wickham, and Lady Catherine de Bourgh instigating conflicts and voicing their displeasure, Darcy and Elizabeth's battles are far from over!
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October 6, 2015
Rainy Days: From Praise and Enjoyment to Frustration and Disappointment
Rainy Days by Lory Lilian is an alternate version of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice, or put differently, a what-if story. I give this book 5 stars for the first half and 2 stars for the second half. I should have realized what to expect with the word "passion" being in the subtitle.
The basic premise of the story is that Elizabeth and Darcy are given a do-over. This tale picks up after the Merryton assembly in P&P and before the Netherfield ball. Elizabeth and Darcy are both caught outside in a terrible rainstorm, and they seek sanctuary in a fishing lodge Mr. Bennet had built a number of years ago. They have the opportunity to get to know each other there, resulting in each one having a different perspective of the other than in the original P&P, which changes the course of events that were in Jane Austen's story.
What I liked:
*I loved the story line with Georgianna and how she and Elizabeth were able to become good friends. Georgianna was a character I really wanted to know better in P&P.
*Lilian does a great job with Darcy and Elizabeth's playful banter, in keeping with Elizabeth's personality in P&P. I have read many P&P alternate stories and sequels in which Elizabeth does not retain her clever dialogue.
*Lady Matlock is very well done and an awesome addition to the story, and Mr. Bennet's increased prominence is extremely enjoyable.
What I disliked:
*There was some head-hopping in the story where the reader is briefly transported into the mind of someone other than Darcy or Elizabeth.
*I was pretty unhappy with many, many, many kissing scenes in the second half which became more and more physically involved. The end scene shows the marriage being consummated. I ended up going from praise and enjoyment of this book to frustration and disappointment.
There were lots of moans in the second half of this book, and I felt that the strength of the story was severely watered down by all these scenes. It's difficult for me not to finish a book, especially when I'm more than halfway through, but I probably should have returned this one to the Kindle library rather than completing it.
Heavy physical components to a historical romance is a "dislike" for me because I enjoy sweet/clean historical romances, frequently Christian ones. I spend a lot of time reading reviews on the books of untested authors to screen them. Apparently, I did't read enough reviews to catch the abundance of touching in this one. Lory Lilian's writing is well done, but I wish she had limited the physical aspect of the romance to about three kisses and focused more on plot in the second half of the book.
I'd recommend this book to adults who like Jane Austen fan fiction and bodice-rippers.
Rainy Days by Lory Lilian is an alternate version of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice, or put differently, a what-if story. I give this book 5 stars for the first half and 2 stars for the second half. I should have realized what to expect with the word "passion" being in the subtitle.
The basic premise of the story is that Elizabeth and Darcy are given a do-over. This tale picks up after the Merryton assembly in P&P and before the Netherfield ball. Elizabeth and Darcy are both caught outside in a terrible rainstorm, and they seek sanctuary in a fishing lodge Mr. Bennet had built a number of years ago. They have the opportunity to get to know each other there, resulting in each one having a different perspective of the other than in the original P&P, which changes the course of events that were in Jane Austen's story.
What I liked:
*I loved the story line with Georgianna and how she and Elizabeth were able to become good friends. Georgianna was a character I really wanted to know better in P&P.
*Lilian does a great job with Darcy and Elizabeth's playful banter, in keeping with Elizabeth's personality in P&P. I have read many P&P alternate stories and sequels in which Elizabeth does not retain her clever dialogue.
*Lady Matlock is very well done and an awesome addition to the story, and Mr. Bennet's increased prominence is extremely enjoyable.
What I disliked:
*There was some head-hopping in the story where the reader is briefly transported into the mind of someone other than Darcy or Elizabeth.
*I was pretty unhappy with many, many, many kissing scenes in the second half which became more and more physically involved. The end scene shows the marriage being consummated. I ended up going from praise and enjoyment of this book to frustration and disappointment.
There were lots of moans in the second half of this book, and I felt that the strength of the story was severely watered down by all these scenes. It's difficult for me not to finish a book, especially when I'm more than halfway through, but I probably should have returned this one to the Kindle library rather than completing it.
Heavy physical components to a historical romance is a "dislike" for me because I enjoy sweet/clean historical romances, frequently Christian ones. I spend a lot of time reading reviews on the books of untested authors to screen them. Apparently, I did't read enough reviews to catch the abundance of touching in this one. Lory Lilian's writing is well done, but I wish she had limited the physical aspect of the romance to about three kisses and focused more on plot in the second half of the book.
I'd recommend this book to adults who like Jane Austen fan fiction and bodice-rippers.
July 11, 2021
4.5 stars rounded to 5 stars.
I wish we had a half star system on Goodreads.
I really enjoyed this book so much. I laughed out loud and was crying in a couple of places. Always a good sign.
Moments/characters I enjoyed most:
Lady Ellen Matlock - she’s like a fairy godmother but with sharp nails and sharp wit.
Darcy and Mr Bennet getting to know each other better.
Darcy crazy in love with Elizabeth - very touching and touchy all at the same time.
Becky!
Jane and Bingley
The engagement ball
Meh:
Elizabeth’s doubt of Darcy’s devotion at times. Jealous of prior girlfriends & infatuations (whether real or imagined).
I wish we had a half star system on Goodreads.
I really enjoyed this book so much. I laughed out loud and was crying in a couple of places. Always a good sign.
Moments/characters I enjoyed most:
Lady Ellen Matlock - she’s like a fairy godmother but with sharp nails and sharp wit.
Darcy and Mr Bennet getting to know each other better.
Darcy crazy in love with Elizabeth - very touching and touchy all at the same time.
Becky!
Jane and Bingley
The engagement ball
Meh:
Elizabeth’s doubt of Darcy’s devotion at times. Jealous of prior girlfriends & infatuations (whether real or imagined).
July 20, 2020
Wonderful Pride and Prejudice Variation!
Such a good story! I loved the introduction of Lady Ellen Matlock and sweet little Becky Gardiner! Would love to see more stories with these characters! A certain quote from the book that I found to be profound: “Now that you have shared your sadness with me, I have taken half of it, and it will be easier for you to bear.” ❤️
Such a good story! I loved the introduction of Lady Ellen Matlock and sweet little Becky Gardiner! Would love to see more stories with these characters! A certain quote from the book that I found to be profound: “Now that you have shared your sadness with me, I have taken half of it, and it will be easier for you to bear.” ❤️
October 21, 2023
I like the premise. I loved lady Matlock and cousin Becky. The story of Elizabeth and Darcy was mostly about them learning to trust each other and their desperation to be together.
March 14, 2016
This book started out on the right foot, but somewhere in the middle things went off track for me. I'd rate the first half 4 stars and the second half 1-2 stars, so I averaged it out at 2.5 and rounded up to 3 stars, even though I'm not sure I'd ultimately recommend it--which makes me sad, because there were things I did like. By the time I got to the last 20%, though, I started skimming and wishing I was done.
The good:
-The point of variation, where Elizabeth and Darcy get caught in a storm and seek refuge in a cabin together, was nice. And though I genuinely love forced marriage stories, it was a refreshing thing that all involved agreed they could just keep the circumstances secret and not do anything rash.
-Bingley had some truly spirited moments, and I think my favorite was when
-I loved little Becky Gardiner. Often precocious little children in stories are obnoxious, but I couldn't help but be charmed right along with Darcy.
-I liked the new reason for Bingley and Darcy leaving Hertfordshire.
-I liked that Lord and Lady Matlock
The bad:
-The last 20-30% of the story draaaaagged. There were plenty of things happening, but the main storyline was really done already. All of the meaningful conflict was done, so it felt like meaningless (and largely uninteresting) random events. There were tons of details about the ball and wedding plans and other miscellaneous things, but none of it mattered.
-Once Elizabeth and Darcy finally admitted they loved each other, the scenes where the two of them found time alone became more and more frequent, more and more improper, and more and more soppy. They went on and on about how much they were in love, how their souls were intertwined and crap. *barf* I could have lived with it if they weren't so LONG. But at least there was no premarital sex. I do have to give the author credit for that, even if I think many of the scenes were still pushing the bounds of propriety a bit more than I could believe for Elizabeth and Darcy.
-This probably relates to the end of the story dragging, but after awhile the misunderstandings and arguments that Elizabeth and Darcy were having became repetitive and silly. I started to lose respect for both of them because they weren't learning the lessons taught from the last misunderstanding they had. By the time I got to Darcy's story about , I no longer cared.
The good:
-The point of variation, where Elizabeth and Darcy get caught in a storm and seek refuge in a cabin together, was nice. And though I genuinely love forced marriage stories, it was a refreshing thing that all involved agreed they could just keep the circumstances secret and not do anything rash.
-Bingley had some truly spirited moments, and I think my favorite was when
-I loved little Becky Gardiner. Often precocious little children in stories are obnoxious, but I couldn't help but be charmed right along with Darcy.
-I liked the new reason for Bingley and Darcy leaving Hertfordshire.
-I liked that Lord and Lady Matlock
The bad:
-The last 20-30% of the story draaaaagged. There were plenty of things happening, but the main storyline was really done already. All of the meaningful conflict was done, so it felt like meaningless (and largely uninteresting) random events. There were tons of details about the ball and wedding plans and other miscellaneous things, but none of it mattered.
-Once Elizabeth and Darcy finally admitted they loved each other, the scenes where the two of them found time alone became more and more frequent, more and more improper, and more and more soppy. They went on and on about how much they were in love, how their souls were intertwined and crap. *barf* I could have lived with it if they weren't so LONG. But at least there was no premarital sex. I do have to give the author credit for that, even if I think many of the scenes were still pushing the bounds of propriety a bit more than I could believe for Elizabeth and Darcy.
-This probably relates to the end of the story dragging, but after awhile the misunderstandings and arguments that Elizabeth and Darcy were having became repetitive and silly. I started to lose respect for both of them because they weren't learning the lessons taught from the last misunderstanding they had. By the time I got to Darcy's story about , I no longer cared.
June 7, 2016
Rainy Days
What could be more perfect? Being stuck in a rising cabin during a rain storm with Fitzwilliam Darcy, oh my! Couldn't get any better especially if he looked like Colin Firth. During the time in the cabin, most misunderstandings between Darcy and Elizabeth were resolved. Embittered Caroline Bingley and irate Lady Catherine de Bourgh were as they normally react. The Matlocks, especially his Aunt Lady Ellen accepted Elizabeth right away as well as her two sons. Her older son's wife, Lady Beatrice, didn't want to accept her at all, and together with Caroline Bingley continued to jealously speak against Elizabeth. Luckily most men and some women in the Ton looked upon Elizabeth with admiration. She was beautiful, dress was gorgeous made better than most women's dresses amongst the Ton, and with her lovely smile and brightly luminous eyes won many to admire her despite that she ruined their chances to win Darcy's affection. Like they ever had a chance, since too many were worse than Caroline Bingley. Once again before the engagement ball, Wickham lies to Elizabeth about Darcy's interest in the actress, Miss Alton now Lady Hothfield, and their romantic relationship. Another misunderstanding between Darcy and Elizabeth occurs over this lie ending when Darcy explains the relationship. Elizabeth feels sad and apologizes once more about listening to Wickham. Six weeks before their wedding, Elizabeth and Jane return to Longbourn followed closely by Darcy and Bingley. The six weeks fly by quickly, wee not according to Darcy, when at last their wedding day is upon them. Enough time has passed so that the neighbors realize that Elizabeth didn't have to get married like they thought. They two travel to London, then on to Pemberley, to return for Bingley and Jane's wedding. All ends well for both couples in love.
What could be more perfect? Being stuck in a rising cabin during a rain storm with Fitzwilliam Darcy, oh my! Couldn't get any better especially if he looked like Colin Firth. During the time in the cabin, most misunderstandings between Darcy and Elizabeth were resolved. Embittered Caroline Bingley and irate Lady Catherine de Bourgh were as they normally react. The Matlocks, especially his Aunt Lady Ellen accepted Elizabeth right away as well as her two sons. Her older son's wife, Lady Beatrice, didn't want to accept her at all, and together with Caroline Bingley continued to jealously speak against Elizabeth. Luckily most men and some women in the Ton looked upon Elizabeth with admiration. She was beautiful, dress was gorgeous made better than most women's dresses amongst the Ton, and with her lovely smile and brightly luminous eyes won many to admire her despite that she ruined their chances to win Darcy's affection. Like they ever had a chance, since too many were worse than Caroline Bingley. Once again before the engagement ball, Wickham lies to Elizabeth about Darcy's interest in the actress, Miss Alton now Lady Hothfield, and their romantic relationship. Another misunderstanding between Darcy and Elizabeth occurs over this lie ending when Darcy explains the relationship. Elizabeth feels sad and apologizes once more about listening to Wickham. Six weeks before their wedding, Elizabeth and Jane return to Longbourn followed closely by Darcy and Bingley. The six weeks fly by quickly, wee not according to Darcy, when at last their wedding day is upon them. Enough time has passed so that the neighbors realize that Elizabeth didn't have to get married like they thought. They two travel to London, then on to Pemberley, to return for Bingley and Jane's wedding. All ends well for both couples in love.
February 14, 2019
Rainy Days indeed!
I love this book.
Lizzy is out walking and a rain storm rolls in. On her way to a fishing cabin belonging to her father she meets Darcy and they both go into the cabin to get warm and wait out the storm. They talk for some hours and both have a better understanding of the other AND of themselves.
The rest of the book continues from the fortuitous meeting. A beautiful love story follows with new characters added.i can’t imagine anyone not enjoying this book. Shoot, it would make a great Netflix series.
I recommend this book highly.
I love this book.
Lizzy is out walking and a rain storm rolls in. On her way to a fishing cabin belonging to her father she meets Darcy and they both go into the cabin to get warm and wait out the storm. They talk for some hours and both have a better understanding of the other AND of themselves.
The rest of the book continues from the fortuitous meeting. A beautiful love story follows with new characters added.i can’t imagine anyone not enjoying this book. Shoot, it would make a great Netflix series.
I recommend this book highly.
December 29, 2015
Wonderful P&P Variation!!
Darcy and Elizabeth were true to their characters and fell in love pretty quickly... Their love story is intimate and long... In a memorable way...I smiled a lot as I read and even cried a little... Great story!!!!!
Darcy and Elizabeth were true to their characters and fell in love pretty quickly... Their love story is intimate and long... In a memorable way...I smiled a lot as I read and even cried a little... Great story!!!!!
March 9, 2017
Another lovely Austen variation by Lory Lilian--I have thoroughly enjoyed all of her "alternative journeys" through the events of Pride and Prejudice.
A few days before the Netherfield Ball, Elizabeth, hoping to escape the unwanted attentions of Mr. Collins, takes a long walk. An unexpected rainstorm causes her to seek shelter in a modest fishing cabin built and used by Mr. Bennet and Mr. Gardiner. On her way there, a galloping horse and its rider are heading directly for a dangerous stream, and Elizabeth yells to stop him. The horse unseats its rider and runs off, leaving an angry Mr. Darcy behind. They seek the cabin together, and during this time, Mr. Darcy reveals his admiration for Miss Elizabeth while she learns far more about Mr. Darcy--the man behind the hauteur.
After the rain stops, they are able to return to Longbourn with an excuse of finding each other on the trail on the way home, with only Mr. Bennet (to whom Mr. Darcy confesses) knowing the truth of their unchaperoned hours in the cabin. Mr. Bennet is satisfied with Darcy's promise to marry Elizabeth should the story get out. And from thence goes our story of Elizabeth and Darcy's romance....
A wonderful and memorable variation of Austen's Pride and Prejudice, Rainy Days is the third P&P variation by Lory Lilian that I've read this month. I don't think that I can pick a favorite, but all three are excellent, and I heartily recommend all three.
A few days before the Netherfield Ball, Elizabeth, hoping to escape the unwanted attentions of Mr. Collins, takes a long walk. An unexpected rainstorm causes her to seek shelter in a modest fishing cabin built and used by Mr. Bennet and Mr. Gardiner. On her way there, a galloping horse and its rider are heading directly for a dangerous stream, and Elizabeth yells to stop him. The horse unseats its rider and runs off, leaving an angry Mr. Darcy behind. They seek the cabin together, and during this time, Mr. Darcy reveals his admiration for Miss Elizabeth while she learns far more about Mr. Darcy--the man behind the hauteur.
After the rain stops, they are able to return to Longbourn with an excuse of finding each other on the trail on the way home, with only Mr. Bennet (to whom Mr. Darcy confesses) knowing the truth of their unchaperoned hours in the cabin. Mr. Bennet is satisfied with Darcy's promise to marry Elizabeth should the story get out. And from thence goes our story of Elizabeth and Darcy's romance....
A wonderful and memorable variation of Austen's Pride and Prejudice, Rainy Days is the third P&P variation by Lory Lilian that I've read this month. I don't think that I can pick a favorite, but all three are excellent, and I heartily recommend all three.
May 11, 2024
This book is one that I have started and put down several times. There are things that I love but I don't even know why it's been so hard to finish.
Edit: I have finally finished reading it and it's a bit hard to review, having spent so much time on this. Not sure I remember everything clearly from the beginning. There was a cabin scene and a kind of a forced engagement but it becomes a sweet courtship with some resistance from Darcy's family. Towards the end Elizabeth falls into a jealous fit but Darcy defuses it fast with a long and convoluted monologue about another lady's former predicaments. This seemed a bit wordy and overly detailed considering the woman and her life did not turn out to be at all important to ODC, except as another thing that Elizabeth could briefly get wrong about Darcy.
Steam level: Some breathless premarital caresses and scenes of wedded love in the end.
Somewhat related pet peeve:
For some reason the different editions of this author's books with different covers on Amazon or here on Goodreads don't stack together so if I have bought an older version their site doesn't show me that I already have this book and would let me buy the same book all over again. I am sure there must be some way to tie the different covers to the same book so the reader won't buy the same thing twice.
Edit: I have finally finished reading it and it's a bit hard to review, having spent so much time on this. Not sure I remember everything clearly from the beginning. There was a cabin scene and a kind of a forced engagement but it becomes a sweet courtship with some resistance from Darcy's family. Towards the end Elizabeth falls into a jealous fit but Darcy defuses it fast with a long and convoluted monologue about another lady's former predicaments. This seemed a bit wordy and overly detailed considering the woman and her life did not turn out to be at all important to ODC, except as another thing that Elizabeth could briefly get wrong about Darcy.
Steam level: Some breathless premarital caresses and scenes of wedded love in the end.
Somewhat related pet peeve:
For some reason the different editions of this author's books with different covers on Amazon or here on Goodreads don't stack together so if I have bought an older version their site doesn't show me that I already have this book and would let me buy the same book all over again. I am sure there must be some way to tie the different covers to the same book so the reader won't buy the same thing twice.
June 10, 2019
Elizabeth explores her vulnerability.
This is a solid story with varying degrees of believability (unbelievable: lack of class consciousness on the part of Lady Matlock, and it’s ripple effect.). Elizabeth vacillates between vulnerability and defensiveness as she matures with the experience of falling in love. When she finally admits her vulnerability to Darcy, most of the tension in the story is resolved. Not a particularly clever plot, nor do the characters reveal anything unique to this tale. An enjoyable, if a bit repetitive, read.
This is a solid story with varying degrees of believability (unbelievable: lack of class consciousness on the part of Lady Matlock, and it’s ripple effect.). Elizabeth vacillates between vulnerability and defensiveness as she matures with the experience of falling in love. When she finally admits her vulnerability to Darcy, most of the tension in the story is resolved. Not a particularly clever plot, nor do the characters reveal anything unique to this tale. An enjoyable, if a bit repetitive, read.
October 29, 2020
Elizabeth's personality is terrible
Elizabeth is whiny and insecure the ENTIRE book. It made the book extremely hard to enjoy and get through. I don't recommend this book.
Elizabeth is whiny and insecure the ENTIRE book. It made the book extremely hard to enjoy and get through. I don't recommend this book.
September 9, 2014
Before I go into any details, I have one thing to say - read this book! If you love 'what if' variations full of romance, humour, drama and an array of brilliant characters, old and new, then this is the book for you as this had it all!
This book has been one of the best written ones I have read. It flowed very well and the writing was just brilliant. The language was very appropriate to the era (ok, I did notice the odd 'couch' slipping in towards the end, but I'm English, so I always notice it! And it wasn't very often!) and the description throughout was great, but what got me the most was how well the author could portray the emotions felt by a variety of characters, and so powerfully. I was completely drawn into this story, which was helped by the fact that it was such a long and well written book. But more on that later!
I mentioned the author’s talent for description; it was lovely getting to see into the thoughts of Darcy and Elizabeth. You really feel you get to know them in this story - and you may think you already know them, but some of the insights into their views on certain events we know from canon, as well as others which have been affected by different circumstances and the fact that Lizzy and Darcy start to understand each other sooner, was really fascinating and it really made me think! As well as strong descriptions of inner thoughts, and brilliant emotional descriptions, there was some great dialogue - particularly between Darcy and Lizzy! The balance between narrative and dialogue was good, and the length of the novel meant things really had time to develop slowly. You really got to know all the characters very well indeed!
One of this author's particular talents in the area of description was with the romance; subtle but romantic gestures and the looks and slight touches, but also the more passionate moments which are so well written and full of emotion - it really isn't just kissing for the sake of it. My romantic sensibilities were going wild throughout this book. The powerful descriptions of the little things was amazing, such as the touching or kissing of the hand. (*warning*: as it says at the bottom of the blurb, this story isn't without its more intimate scenes, but there is nothing overly graphic or explicit. I didn't mind it even though my preference is clean stories. For the emotional journey Darcy and Lizzy experience I can completely understand why, and agree with in fact, such scenes were included.)
This story had been on my wish list for a long time as the idea of Darcy and Lizzy being forced into a rather confined space in such unusual circumstances - sheltering from a storm - and consequently being forced to talk and confront the problems between them sounded intriguing! I liked the idea of Lizzy coming to understand Darcy a little better much sooner, before things get too out of hand! The meeting in the rain and the time spent together sheltering was one of the best scenes! It was filled with some wonderfully funny and sweet but also awkward moments! The real Darcy begins to shine through much earlier on. What was very interesting was seeing how this meeting affects not only their own relationship, but also other situations we know from canon, which still occur in this story, but with this changed relationship between Darcy and Lizzy; the Wickham problem for example, and another favourite was the Netherfield Ball - and the 'event' (/business transaction!) which is supposed to happen afterwards involving a certain clergyman! And many more but I don't want to give away all the fun!
Elizabeth is just as we expect; the witty, teasing, challenging and impertinent young lady we all love her to be! She experiences a lot through this story, and although in canon she goes through a time of complete bewilderment and confusion about Darcy, so does she in this story, however it happens much sooner. It is great that she and Darcy start to get on sooner as her own personality, as well as his, shines through in her teasing of, and sometimes flirting with, Darcy.
Ok, no surprises here, Darcy and Lizzy get together - shocker! (I should have said *spoiler* I suppose, but come on, we all know it is going to happen!) They actually engage about half way through the story, which meant the reader gets to follow Elizabeth on her journey as she comes to terms with the idea of becoming Mrs Darcy. This was really interesting to see as we don't see this in canon; seeing Elizabeth beginning to learn the role of housekeeper and watching her cope with Darcy's relatives as well as a ball where she is exposed to the gossipy world of the ton.
I think part of the reason I so enjoy reading fan fiction is because I just want to be able to learn more and more about my favourite character, Mr Darcy. I find it fascinating to see him put into a variety of different situations and seeing how he reacts and copes. Therefore, I always love a story which gives us proper insight into his mind and thoughts, just like this story. Due to the unusual circumstances and unexpected meeting with Lizzy, we begin to see the true Darcy much sooner in the story when he learns of Lizzy's not-as-great-as-he-thought opinion of him and works to rectify. I have read a lot of variations now but I have to say this Darcy has shot very high up my list of Darcy interpretations! This Darcy is just so loveable and adorable - but in a manly way! He is charming and flirty, and yet caring and sometimes very shy. I completely fell for him - I think even non-Darcy fans would love this interpretation! (Oh, and we also get to see the aggressive and powerful side of Darcy which was fun, and not to mention the romantic and passionate streaks to Darcy's nature!)
If I was to say Darcy and Lizzy and their relationship were my favourite thing in this story you would probably say "well yes, of course they would be!" but in some variations I have really enjoyed the new characters or the exploration of lesser seen secondary characters. However, in this story, the best part and my favourite was, without a doubt, Darcy and Lizzy's relationship. The length of this story meant that the growth of the friendship, trust and eventual love between them was in no way rushed. It developed slowly which, as well as being so wonderful a journey to be a part of, also made it feel very realistic. Watching how their relationship changes with that accidental meeting and how Lizzy comes to know the real Darcy and how perhaps her first impressions weren't quite correct - about him and another certain gentleman who's names begins with W - was brilliant.
We see their fun and teasing conversations and verbal duels as Lizzy comes to understand and get to know Darcy - and begins to fall for him - and we watch as they both become more and more enamoured of each other. It is such a slow, but steady, development as each begins to become more open with the other, and also more forward and brave with their flirty remarks. It really is such a brilliant relationship that builds up between them! While things do start heading in a much more promising direction much sooner than in canon, the path to true love isn't easy and they face many problems from many other areas as they have to deal with the disparity in their stations, but at least they can face it together - we get to see a caring side and protective side to both Lizzy and Darcy as a result of this.
As I already mentioned, they engage well before the end of the book and it was really interesting to see how the relationship changed between Darcy and Lizzy from their courtship to the engagement (and, eventually, onto marriage.). They slowly become more and more loving and trusting of each other - and each stolen kiss becomes more and more passionate each time! Honestly, they are just adorable together and you can't help but love them and smile when they are together! Again, thanks to the length, the journey to their happy ending just seems so much more... powerful, and it is very satisfying but emotional as a reader to have watched it develop and to see their shared passion and love grow slowly but steadily over such a long period of time. Ok I will stop going on about it and you just go and read it for yourself!
Another aspect I love about fan fiction is the chance to get to see different characters interacting with each other.
A few favourites in this particular story would be the relationship between Darcy and Mr Bennet. They build up a great friendship, which is sometimes father-son like! Darcy has a great friendship with Bingley, as we know, but we get to see more of them and their almost brotherly relationship, with their friendly banter and teasing of each other. Similarly there are some great scenes between Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam!
However, I have to say some of my favourite scenes were the ones when both Mr Darcy and Mr Collins were present! I don't want to ruin it, but the way Darcy deals with Collins is just brilliant, and very, very funny!
We also see Elizabeth with some other characters more, such as Georgiana, which I always enjoy seeing as I always imagined they would get along very well as future sisters! Georgiana has a slightly different story in this variation and the effect this has on the relationship between her and Lizzy was very sweet. There were many brilliant scenes between these two! We also see some more of Elizabeth and Mrs Gardiner together which is nice as their strong bond was clear in canon.
This is becoming one of my longest reviews! (Can you tell yet that I loved this book?) But before I finish I must say a little something about the characters other than Darcy and Lizzy!
If you are a fan of Jane and Bingley you will enjoy this as we get some more glimpses into their relationship - and they are just as adorable as ever! Similarly, we get to see more to Mr Bennet and a rather different side to him which made a nice change! I have already mentioned Mrs Gardiner, but getting to spend more time with both Mr and Mrs Gardiner was great, as they were always favourites of mine (it was also interesting to see them interacting with Darcy more.) Colonel Fitzwilliam, another favourite secondary character, makes more of an appearance which always pleases me! I have mentioned Georgiana but the further insight into her character and thoughts - particularly regarding the whole Wickham affair - was fascinating.
Speaking of Wickham, he is just as annoying as ever and I wanted to strangle him many times through the story, which is as it should be! (There are some great scenes when he gets rather put in his place though!) Whilst in this area Caroline is even worse in this story, if you can imagine that! Funny worse though, or even pitiable worse! She also is subject to a few humiliating - for her - and hilarious - for us - put downs from a variety of people! (I felt no pity for her whatsoever!) Lady Catherine also still comes along to throw her spanner in the works, so to speak, but she also receives her due, and again it is highly amusing!
There were some fantastic new characters in this story; Becky, one of the Gardiner children, and Lord and Lady Matlock, Colonel Fitzwilliam's parents.
Becky was a brilliant character and caused some of the funniest conversations of the book thanks to her childish innocence. Due to her age, her honesty and habit of saying exactly what she wants was classic!
Also her inquisitiveness and consequential constant questioning was just perfect - particularly when poor Darcy was the target for all her either difficult to answer or improper questions! She was just brilliant. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant!
Onto Lord and Lady Matlock; it was interesting to see some more of Darcy's relations as he has so few, but who was the most intriguing was Lady Matlock. We see her come to terms with her nephew’s choice of wife - someone highly inappropriate for someone of his station! The relationship between her and Elizabeth was fascinating. We see Lady Matlock interrogating poor Lizzy about her intentions regarding Darcy - a.k.a. trying to discern whether she is a fortune hunter! But we also see her come to admire Lizzy and the effect she has on the Darcys - both Mr and Miss! Their relationship was one of the most interesting in fact!
I could rant and rave about this book for ages but I know I will have bored you all to sleep by now! But if you have managed to make it this far, I think what you should take away from my review - even just from the length of it! - is that you should read this book! It is a superbly written book with an inventive story which is full of humour and wit, breath-taking romance, wonderful characters and great drama to keep you turning the pages and racing to the end! I enjoyed every single second of this book. Just read it!
This book has been one of the best written ones I have read. It flowed very well and the writing was just brilliant. The language was very appropriate to the era (ok, I did notice the odd 'couch' slipping in towards the end, but I'm English, so I always notice it! And it wasn't very often!) and the description throughout was great, but what got me the most was how well the author could portray the emotions felt by a variety of characters, and so powerfully. I was completely drawn into this story, which was helped by the fact that it was such a long and well written book. But more on that later!
I mentioned the author’s talent for description; it was lovely getting to see into the thoughts of Darcy and Elizabeth. You really feel you get to know them in this story - and you may think you already know them, but some of the insights into their views on certain events we know from canon, as well as others which have been affected by different circumstances and the fact that Lizzy and Darcy start to understand each other sooner, was really fascinating and it really made me think! As well as strong descriptions of inner thoughts, and brilliant emotional descriptions, there was some great dialogue - particularly between Darcy and Lizzy! The balance between narrative and dialogue was good, and the length of the novel meant things really had time to develop slowly. You really got to know all the characters very well indeed!
One of this author's particular talents in the area of description was with the romance; subtle but romantic gestures and the looks and slight touches, but also the more passionate moments which are so well written and full of emotion - it really isn't just kissing for the sake of it. My romantic sensibilities were going wild throughout this book. The powerful descriptions of the little things was amazing, such as the touching or kissing of the hand. (*warning*: as it says at the bottom of the blurb, this story isn't without its more intimate scenes, but there is nothing overly graphic or explicit. I didn't mind it even though my preference is clean stories. For the emotional journey Darcy and Lizzy experience I can completely understand why, and agree with in fact, such scenes were included.)
This story had been on my wish list for a long time as the idea of Darcy and Lizzy being forced into a rather confined space in such unusual circumstances - sheltering from a storm - and consequently being forced to talk and confront the problems between them sounded intriguing! I liked the idea of Lizzy coming to understand Darcy a little better much sooner, before things get too out of hand! The meeting in the rain and the time spent together sheltering was one of the best scenes! It was filled with some wonderfully funny and sweet but also awkward moments! The real Darcy begins to shine through much earlier on. What was very interesting was seeing how this meeting affects not only their own relationship, but also other situations we know from canon, which still occur in this story, but with this changed relationship between Darcy and Lizzy; the Wickham problem for example, and another favourite was the Netherfield Ball - and the 'event' (/business transaction!) which is supposed to happen afterwards involving a certain clergyman! And many more but I don't want to give away all the fun!
Elizabeth is just as we expect; the witty, teasing, challenging and impertinent young lady we all love her to be! She experiences a lot through this story, and although in canon she goes through a time of complete bewilderment and confusion about Darcy, so does she in this story, however it happens much sooner. It is great that she and Darcy start to get on sooner as her own personality, as well as his, shines through in her teasing of, and sometimes flirting with, Darcy.
Ok, no surprises here, Darcy and Lizzy get together - shocker! (I should have said *spoiler* I suppose, but come on, we all know it is going to happen!) They actually engage about half way through the story, which meant the reader gets to follow Elizabeth on her journey as she comes to terms with the idea of becoming Mrs Darcy. This was really interesting to see as we don't see this in canon; seeing Elizabeth beginning to learn the role of housekeeper and watching her cope with Darcy's relatives as well as a ball where she is exposed to the gossipy world of the ton.
I think part of the reason I so enjoy reading fan fiction is because I just want to be able to learn more and more about my favourite character, Mr Darcy. I find it fascinating to see him put into a variety of different situations and seeing how he reacts and copes. Therefore, I always love a story which gives us proper insight into his mind and thoughts, just like this story. Due to the unusual circumstances and unexpected meeting with Lizzy, we begin to see the true Darcy much sooner in the story when he learns of Lizzy's not-as-great-as-he-thought opinion of him and works to rectify. I have read a lot of variations now but I have to say this Darcy has shot very high up my list of Darcy interpretations! This Darcy is just so loveable and adorable - but in a manly way! He is charming and flirty, and yet caring and sometimes very shy. I completely fell for him - I think even non-Darcy fans would love this interpretation! (Oh, and we also get to see the aggressive and powerful side of Darcy which was fun, and not to mention the romantic and passionate streaks to Darcy's nature!)
If I was to say Darcy and Lizzy and their relationship were my favourite thing in this story you would probably say "well yes, of course they would be!" but in some variations I have really enjoyed the new characters or the exploration of lesser seen secondary characters. However, in this story, the best part and my favourite was, without a doubt, Darcy and Lizzy's relationship. The length of this story meant that the growth of the friendship, trust and eventual love between them was in no way rushed. It developed slowly which, as well as being so wonderful a journey to be a part of, also made it feel very realistic. Watching how their relationship changes with that accidental meeting and how Lizzy comes to know the real Darcy and how perhaps her first impressions weren't quite correct - about him and another certain gentleman who's names begins with W - was brilliant.
We see their fun and teasing conversations and verbal duels as Lizzy comes to understand and get to know Darcy - and begins to fall for him - and we watch as they both become more and more enamoured of each other. It is such a slow, but steady, development as each begins to become more open with the other, and also more forward and brave with their flirty remarks. It really is such a brilliant relationship that builds up between them! While things do start heading in a much more promising direction much sooner than in canon, the path to true love isn't easy and they face many problems from many other areas as they have to deal with the disparity in their stations, but at least they can face it together - we get to see a caring side and protective side to both Lizzy and Darcy as a result of this.
As I already mentioned, they engage well before the end of the book and it was really interesting to see how the relationship changed between Darcy and Lizzy from their courtship to the engagement (and, eventually, onto marriage.). They slowly become more and more loving and trusting of each other - and each stolen kiss becomes more and more passionate each time! Honestly, they are just adorable together and you can't help but love them and smile when they are together! Again, thanks to the length, the journey to their happy ending just seems so much more... powerful, and it is very satisfying but emotional as a reader to have watched it develop and to see their shared passion and love grow slowly but steadily over such a long period of time. Ok I will stop going on about it and you just go and read it for yourself!
Another aspect I love about fan fiction is the chance to get to see different characters interacting with each other.
A few favourites in this particular story would be the relationship between Darcy and Mr Bennet. They build up a great friendship, which is sometimes father-son like! Darcy has a great friendship with Bingley, as we know, but we get to see more of them and their almost brotherly relationship, with their friendly banter and teasing of each other. Similarly there are some great scenes between Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam!
However, I have to say some of my favourite scenes were the ones when both Mr Darcy and Mr Collins were present! I don't want to ruin it, but the way Darcy deals with Collins is just brilliant, and very, very funny!
We also see Elizabeth with some other characters more, such as Georgiana, which I always enjoy seeing as I always imagined they would get along very well as future sisters! Georgiana has a slightly different story in this variation and the effect this has on the relationship between her and Lizzy was very sweet. There were many brilliant scenes between these two! We also see some more of Elizabeth and Mrs Gardiner together which is nice as their strong bond was clear in canon.
This is becoming one of my longest reviews! (Can you tell yet that I loved this book?) But before I finish I must say a little something about the characters other than Darcy and Lizzy!
If you are a fan of Jane and Bingley you will enjoy this as we get some more glimpses into their relationship - and they are just as adorable as ever! Similarly, we get to see more to Mr Bennet and a rather different side to him which made a nice change! I have already mentioned Mrs Gardiner, but getting to spend more time with both Mr and Mrs Gardiner was great, as they were always favourites of mine (it was also interesting to see them interacting with Darcy more.) Colonel Fitzwilliam, another favourite secondary character, makes more of an appearance which always pleases me! I have mentioned Georgiana but the further insight into her character and thoughts - particularly regarding the whole Wickham affair - was fascinating.
Speaking of Wickham, he is just as annoying as ever and I wanted to strangle him many times through the story, which is as it should be! (There are some great scenes when he gets rather put in his place though!) Whilst in this area Caroline is even worse in this story, if you can imagine that! Funny worse though, or even pitiable worse! She also is subject to a few humiliating - for her - and hilarious - for us - put downs from a variety of people! (I felt no pity for her whatsoever!) Lady Catherine also still comes along to throw her spanner in the works, so to speak, but she also receives her due, and again it is highly amusing!
There were some fantastic new characters in this story; Becky, one of the Gardiner children, and Lord and Lady Matlock, Colonel Fitzwilliam's parents.
Becky was a brilliant character and caused some of the funniest conversations of the book thanks to her childish innocence. Due to her age, her honesty and habit of saying exactly what she wants was classic!
Also her inquisitiveness and consequential constant questioning was just perfect - particularly when poor Darcy was the target for all her either difficult to answer or improper questions! She was just brilliant. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant!
Onto Lord and Lady Matlock; it was interesting to see some more of Darcy's relations as he has so few, but who was the most intriguing was Lady Matlock. We see her come to terms with her nephew’s choice of wife - someone highly inappropriate for someone of his station! The relationship between her and Elizabeth was fascinating. We see Lady Matlock interrogating poor Lizzy about her intentions regarding Darcy - a.k.a. trying to discern whether she is a fortune hunter! But we also see her come to admire Lizzy and the effect she has on the Darcys - both Mr and Miss! Their relationship was one of the most interesting in fact!
I could rant and rave about this book for ages but I know I will have bored you all to sleep by now! But if you have managed to make it this far, I think what you should take away from my review - even just from the length of it! - is that you should read this book! It is a superbly written book with an inventive story which is full of humour and wit, breath-taking romance, wonderful characters and great drama to keep you turning the pages and racing to the end! I enjoyed every single second of this book. Just read it!
August 12, 2018
The P&P variation inserts an unexpected downpour which has Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth spend some time in an abandoned cottage taking refuge from the rain. This offers opportunity to get to know eachother a little better and straight-forwardly initiate a romance between the main characters. Since they both like eachother, new issues arise to stretch and justify the length of the story. The narration is very romantic and enthusiastic, quite true to the original style, considering the new additions to the plot. It rings to me like good quality, thoroughly written, old-school fanfiction, which is not a bad thing at all !
Recommend, specially for fans of the original in search for a satisfying read (I love to read a good detailed courtship myself).
Recommend, specially for fans of the original in search for a satisfying read (I love to read a good detailed courtship myself).
June 15, 2016
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Rainy days was released in October 2009, so I am probably one of the few people who have only read it this year. I don’t know how this happened, but the first book I’ve read from Lory Lilian was not rainy Days but Sketching Mr. Darcy, and after reading that one I could not wait to read more books of this author, so Remembrance of the Past followed, and now, at last, Rainy Days.
It is curious how one rainy morning can change an entire story.
In this book Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth are out of doors when a storm hits the area and they are forced to take shelter in a cottage in the woods. The time they spend together is enough for Elizabeth to start questioning Mr. Wickham’s attitudes and Mr. Darcy’s character, and we all know how this can change everything:)
When we think of this couple stranded in a cabin in the middle of the woods, we immediately think of what may happen there, and I have to say that I loved that Lory Lilian managed to get our characters to always respect propriety. Their scenes together were intense but clean, and that is exactly how I like them.
The characters remained true to themselves and their arguments were believable and a joy to read. I particularly liked seeing Mr. Darcy’s temper as many times we are presented with a perfect Mr. Darcy, when in fact he is not perfect. For me, his imperfections are what make him perfect, so I loved to see that he kept them in the beginning of the book.
However, the arguments and angst do not take a great part of the book and Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth come to an understanding early in the story. From that moment on, we will see Mr. Darcy as the perfect gentleman courting his fiancée. I love books with lots of Darcy and Elizabeth moments and this book certainly has them, but being an angst addict, I would prefer to have seen more angst and conflict in the remaining of book. Readers who love romance and lots of Darcy/Elizabeth moments will certainly love this book though!
Of course that given my tastes in JAFF, one of my favorite moments of the book was their fight after Wickham’s remarks. I believe Lory Lilian did an exceptional job in this scene because it is very real, and it reflects much of our behaviors with our loved ones. Most of the times we just need reassurances that the other person loves us, but somehow they cannot give them, as they also need that from our side; instead we hurt each other with remarks that are only said out of pain. I believe Lory Lilian was very good at transposing that into this specific scene and that was something that captivated me.
I’ve mentioned a lot of romance but the book is not just about that, it has several funny moments. I personally adore reading “dimples is good” coming out of Becky’s mouth and consider the way Caroline Bingley discovered about Mr. Darcy’s engagement absolutely hilarious!
I’ve read this book with a 7 year delay, but I will not commit the same error with the recently released sequel The Rainbow Promise, that one I will read as soon as I can, as this is definitely a story and a group of characters whose story we need to follow up.
Rainy days was released in October 2009, so I am probably one of the few people who have only read it this year. I don’t know how this happened, but the first book I’ve read from Lory Lilian was not rainy Days but Sketching Mr. Darcy, and after reading that one I could not wait to read more books of this author, so Remembrance of the Past followed, and now, at last, Rainy Days.
It is curious how one rainy morning can change an entire story.
In this book Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth are out of doors when a storm hits the area and they are forced to take shelter in a cottage in the woods. The time they spend together is enough for Elizabeth to start questioning Mr. Wickham’s attitudes and Mr. Darcy’s character, and we all know how this can change everything:)
When we think of this couple stranded in a cabin in the middle of the woods, we immediately think of what may happen there, and I have to say that I loved that Lory Lilian managed to get our characters to always respect propriety. Their scenes together were intense but clean, and that is exactly how I like them.
The characters remained true to themselves and their arguments were believable and a joy to read. I particularly liked seeing Mr. Darcy’s temper as many times we are presented with a perfect Mr. Darcy, when in fact he is not perfect. For me, his imperfections are what make him perfect, so I loved to see that he kept them in the beginning of the book.
However, the arguments and angst do not take a great part of the book and Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth come to an understanding early in the story. From that moment on, we will see Mr. Darcy as the perfect gentleman courting his fiancée. I love books with lots of Darcy and Elizabeth moments and this book certainly has them, but being an angst addict, I would prefer to have seen more angst and conflict in the remaining of book. Readers who love romance and lots of Darcy/Elizabeth moments will certainly love this book though!
Of course that given my tastes in JAFF, one of my favorite moments of the book was their fight after Wickham’s remarks. I believe Lory Lilian did an exceptional job in this scene because it is very real, and it reflects much of our behaviors with our loved ones. Most of the times we just need reassurances that the other person loves us, but somehow they cannot give them, as they also need that from our side; instead we hurt each other with remarks that are only said out of pain. I believe Lory Lilian was very good at transposing that into this specific scene and that was something that captivated me.
I’ve mentioned a lot of romance but the book is not just about that, it has several funny moments. I personally adore reading “dimples is good” coming out of Becky’s mouth and consider the way Caroline Bingley discovered about Mr. Darcy’s engagement absolutely hilarious!
I’ve read this book with a 7 year delay, but I will not commit the same error with the recently released sequel The Rainbow Promise, that one I will read as soon as I can, as this is definitely a story and a group of characters whose story we need to follow up.
October 11, 2012
Okay, so I'm a bit embarrassed for reading this Pride and Prejudice parallel story, but I needed something mindless after Sarah's Keys. Well, I have to say Ms. Lilian is a better writer than most of the P & P sequel writers; however, the plot is horrible and no research was done to provide the necessary details of everyday conversation. After the first 150 pages, I just couldn't stand another glance, another stolen caress or another confession of love. I mean you can only take the mush so far before even the most faithful romantics get tired. Nothing significant happened in this novel .... the book just goes on and on as if it was a diary. I can't remember who said this, maybe it was my son Patrick, but a book should never include a sentence or a character which does not advance the plot. I believe Ms. Lilian failed in this respect, although she does have a potential of being a good writer.
August 7, 2015
Really 2 1/2. Rather dull. There is a reason P&P is a classic. This "retelling" does not improve it. Some of it does not make much sense and and the first half of the book is dull. Not much happens until about 25% in. And a lot of the Darcy and Elizabeth happenings would never have been allowed. Private time in his house?? One of the bedrooms? Her naked, wrapped in blankets, in a cottage?? No way. They would have been ruined.
June 8, 2016
In this variation of Pride and Prejudice, just days before the Netherfield Ball Elizabeth and Darcy are caught in a storm and retreat to a fisherman's cottage on the Longbourn Estate where they begin to understand each other. But the path to ultimately understanding each other is never smooth.
An enjoyable read.
An enjoyable read.
May 16, 2021
Mediocre incarnate; the plot isn't anything to write home about, and quickly grows boring, the dialogue is weak, and you will forget about the whole story the moment you put it down.
Still, tis not all bad, some cute moments are thereabouts, so if you've got the time give it a go.
Synopsis:
Remember those three arduous days of rain before the Netherfield ball that kept the residents of Longbourn bored indoors?
Well that's were we start our story; Lizzy is cooped up and getting 'Cabin Fever' with Mr Collins incessant courting, so when she sees the slightest weather reprieve she eagerly rushed out for a walk.
Mr Darcy also is itching for an escape from Netherfield; Caroline machinations to be the next Mrs Darcy are pushing him over the edge,
and he has a daunting pair of fine eyes haunting his psyche that aren't suitable for marriage. He needs a hard ride on his steed.
Lizzy is walking near the stream her father and uncle often fish, so much so that they have built a very plot convenient little cabin in case they need to rest or are caught in weather. The rain starts up again with a vengeance and she is making her way to that cabin when she sees a rider who is in danger of galloping into the stream, she waves her hands and startles his horse to a stop in time though he does fall of his horse, no injury done.
Thus Darcy and Lizzy make it to the cabin and a different type of 'Cabin Fever' ensues. Settle down, nothing untoward happens, but sparks fly as conversation flows and misunderstandings are set to rights. Darcy acts a perfect gentlemen and is courteous and verbose and Lizzy is impressed.
Darcy realizes he will pursue Lizzy, unsuitable connections and all.
Lizzy realizes she has misjudged him and a 'tendre' for him is born in her bosom.
The main obstacle comes early on via a misunderstanding of Miss Bingley's making that affect both Jane and Bingley and ODC, but I would say that the only challenge, aside from the usual Wickham and Lady Catherine shenanigans. Honestly there are no significant challenges or plot points.
Darcy and Lizzy constantly skirt the line of propriety.
Actually that's to put it mildly; they flaunt it, they jump rope with it;
But honestly I'm all for it, and no vows are anticipated.
What I enjoyed:
-Little Becky was Lizzy's adorable clever niece;
Clever girl! She passes Bingley over in order to get Mr Darcy to carry her! It's a slick gambit and who can blame her?
✿Lizzy and Georgiana friendship
✿Darcy’s mother gift from the grave to Lizzy, and the scene where he presents it to her.
✿This quote that summarizes one of the aspects that makes ODC one of the greatest couples of all time;
What Displeased Me:
✗Dialogue falls flat
✗ODC are supposedly always on the same page; it is constantly mentioned that they instantly can read each other.
✗How are Wickham, lady Catherine and Caroline constantly allowed to barge in unannounced into everyones homes? Hell even Mr Collins gets in! Whats with the lax security of these rich homes? The butler needs to be fired;
✗I lost count of talk of 'souls' but thanks to kindle I found out it was 25 times.
Obviously I love romance! I read a criminal amount of JAFF but JAFF when it's this type of psycho love obsession becomes uncomfortable. I want the realistic love story of a proud taciturn man who has his faults but is forgiven by a vibrant but level headed lady. Not this everlasting longing BS. It's out of character.
✗Inordinate amount of awkward metaphors scattered about that just are cheezy
✗Too many people call Lizzy Miss Elizabeth when Jane isn't around, doctors, servants, Darcy's family when first introduced, she'd be Miss Bennet. This seemed a significant oversight to me.
✗It gets pretty boring due to lack of conflict, at 80% on kindle thing I started impatiently looking how much longer, and whipped out the merlot to spice it up.
✗There is a mature scene of the wedding night at the very end, and at that point is seems superfluous, the story is over.
Verdict:
It is evident in the writing that this is an early Lory Lilian work. Ms Lilian is so much improved in her other works, especially TORN: A Pride and Prejudice Variation which is just JAFF perfection incarnate.
Therefore I withhold my strong criticism, she has grown as an author since, and I can only think of this story fondly as a stepping stone to greatness. But yeah this wasn't great.
Still, tis not all bad, some cute moments are thereabouts, so if you've got the time give it a go.
Synopsis:
Remember those three arduous days of rain before the Netherfield ball that kept the residents of Longbourn bored indoors?
Well that's were we start our story; Lizzy is cooped up and getting 'Cabin Fever' with Mr Collins incessant courting, so when she sees the slightest weather reprieve she eagerly rushed out for a walk.
Mr Darcy also is itching for an escape from Netherfield; Caroline machinations to be the next Mrs Darcy are pushing him over the edge,
and he has a daunting pair of fine eyes haunting his psyche that aren't suitable for marriage. He needs a hard ride on his steed.
Lizzy is walking near the stream her father and uncle often fish, so much so that they have built a very plot convenient little cabin in case they need to rest or are caught in weather. The rain starts up again with a vengeance and she is making her way to that cabin when she sees a rider who is in danger of galloping into the stream, she waves her hands and startles his horse to a stop in time though he does fall of his horse, no injury done.
Thus Darcy and Lizzy make it to the cabin and a different type of 'Cabin Fever' ensues. Settle down, nothing untoward happens, but sparks fly as conversation flows and misunderstandings are set to rights. Darcy acts a perfect gentlemen and is courteous and verbose and Lizzy is impressed.
Darcy realizes he will pursue Lizzy, unsuitable connections and all.
Lizzy realizes she has misjudged him and a 'tendre' for him is born in her bosom.
The main obstacle comes early on via a misunderstanding of Miss Bingley's making that affect both Jane and Bingley and ODC, but I would say that the only challenge, aside from the usual Wickham and Lady Catherine shenanigans. Honestly there are no significant challenges or plot points.
Darcy and Lizzy constantly skirt the line of propriety.
Actually that's to put it mildly; they flaunt it, they jump rope with it;
But honestly I'm all for it, and no vows are anticipated.
What I enjoyed:
-Little Becky was Lizzy's adorable clever niece;
“Miss Rebecca, if you will agree, I shall carry you,” offered Mr. Bingley, but the girl shook her head.
“Please, Lizzy?”
“Sweetie, I cannot carry you. You are a big girl now, and you are too heavy to be carried.” Becky wiped her tears with her sleeve and took a few steps, obviously upset, and then suddenly she turned and addressed Mr. Darcy.
“Can you carry me, please? You look much stronger than Lizzy.”
Clever girl! She passes Bingley over in order to get Mr Darcy to carry her! It's a slick gambit and who can blame her?
✿Lizzy and Georgiana friendship
✿Darcy’s mother gift from the grave to Lizzy, and the scene where he presents it to her.
✿This quote that summarizes one of the aspects that makes ODC one of the greatest couples of all time;
“Never apologise out of civility. I do not want you to be polite with me.”
What Displeased Me:
✗Dialogue falls flat
✗ODC are supposedly always on the same page; it is constantly mentioned that they instantly can read each other.
✗How are Wickham, lady Catherine and Caroline constantly allowed to barge in unannounced into everyones homes? Hell even Mr Collins gets in! Whats with the lax security of these rich homes? The butler needs to be fired;
✗I lost count of talk of 'souls' but thanks to kindle I found out it was 25 times.
Obviously I love romance! I read a criminal amount of JAFF but JAFF when it's this type of psycho love obsession becomes uncomfortable. I want the realistic love story of a proud taciturn man who has his faults but is forgiven by a vibrant but level headed lady. Not this everlasting longing BS. It's out of character.
“…his eyes were fixed on Elizabeth’s lips as she licked them, pleased with the taste of her food. This simple, natural gesture made his own lips dry, though he thirsted not for water but for her.”
✗Inordinate amount of awkward metaphors scattered about that just are cheezy
✗Too many people call Lizzy Miss Elizabeth when Jane isn't around, doctors, servants, Darcy's family when first introduced, she'd be Miss Bennet. This seemed a significant oversight to me.
✗It gets pretty boring due to lack of conflict, at 80% on kindle thing I started impatiently looking how much longer, and whipped out the merlot to spice it up.
✗There is a mature scene of the wedding night at the very end, and at that point is seems superfluous, the story is over.
Verdict:
It is evident in the writing that this is an early Lory Lilian work. Ms Lilian is so much improved in her other works, especially TORN: A Pride and Prejudice Variation which is just JAFF perfection incarnate.
Therefore I withhold my strong criticism, she has grown as an author since, and I can only think of this story fondly as a stepping stone to greatness. But yeah this wasn't great.
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