Where di I start? one of the best reviews of this book I read sums up one of the worst parts of this books well. Everyone has paragraph upon paragraph of dialog without moving conversations in ANY direction. This book has horrible dialog, barely likable characters, sex scenes that lack fun. The MC makes choices that don't make sense. At one point, the MC decides he will face a deadly situation. He can do something that will make him far more powerful, by doing the thing that powers up MC's in haremlit books everywhere, but NO, I wont do that till I solve the problem without powering up.....what? Not to mention, he literally decides to face "monsters" that he claims he is faster and stronger than (though he is human) and he says something like "leave us alone or else". Spoiler alert, they don't leave him and his girls alone, so he goes back and says something like "leave us alone or else". The Monsters literally need to force him to act. This story feels like its forced to move forward to the end instead of being driven forward. It was one of the hardest books for me to finish.