2.5 stars
I wanted to really like this so much - the set-up, the character backgrounds and attitudes, the plot, and the potential heat all are right up my alley. The writing, however, just didn't work for me, especially the dialog between the characters and even more the "inner-dialog" of the protagonists' reactions. I'm not a huge fan of insta-love, but can swallow it o.k. when it's done well, but often times (including this story) it just comes across as too manufactured.
Caden (the werekin) especially seemed all over the place to me: captured in a dog pound, but manipulating the kennel keepers to be treated royally; resentful of being treated like a puppy, yet quickly forgiving those slights and sometimes reveling in it; extremely desirous of escaping, but quickly overwhelmed by vampire heat; sometimes acting like a scared pup, sometimes acting like a spoiled, entitled pup, and sometimes acting like an over-protective alpha mate. Valor wasn't quite so inconsistent, but still was a bit overly contradictory as he is an uber-scary and harsh vampire Lord, a feared leader, a despised leader, as well as a sometimes gentle/sometimes firm/sometimes harsh lover and master. All of those conflicting threads make the characters potentially very interesting, but the prose and flow was just too choppy that the wide range in each protagonist seemed to me to be just plain inconsistent and contrived than interesting and nuanced.
Still, I can't resist a vampire and pup story, especially with some sizzle, so that theme elevates it to be a bit on the positive side "just o.k." for me.