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Chance #2
A Good Chance
Harriet “Harry” and Desi Basantes spent sixteen years waiting to find each other again, and now they’re weeks away from a wedding and the baby they’ve planned since high school.
Desi’s sister Rachel Thompson is happy for them. Rachel might wish for her own grand love affair, but her attraction to Harry’s ex Serena Ladding doesn’t exactly spell happily ever after. She’s pretty sure Serena is still in love with Harry and isn’t prepared to take the chance on a broken heart. So then why can’t she stop thinking about Serena?
Angola State Penitentiary is one of the toughest prisons in the country, but when Desi’s ex-husband Byron Simoneaux sees the chance to run, he does with only one goal in to finish what he started and kill Desi, Rachel, and Harry, the women who stole his life.
Can you really outrun your past? For Harry, Desi, and Rachel, it’s a matter of life or death.
Desi’s sister Rachel Thompson is happy for them. Rachel might wish for her own grand love affair, but her attraction to Harry’s ex Serena Ladding doesn’t exactly spell happily ever after. She’s pretty sure Serena is still in love with Harry and isn’t prepared to take the chance on a broken heart. So then why can’t she stop thinking about Serena?
Angola State Penitentiary is one of the toughest prisons in the country, but when Desi’s ex-husband Byron Simoneaux sees the chance to run, he does with only one goal in to finish what he started and kill Desi, Rachel, and Harry, the women who stole his life.
Can you really outrun your past? For Harry, Desi, and Rachel, it’s a matter of life or death.
240 pages, Paperback
First published September 1, 2022
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About the author
Ali Vali
57 books460 followersAli Vali is the author of the long-running Cain Casey "Devil" series and the Genesis Clan "Forces" series, as well as numerous standalone romances including two Lambda Literary Award finalists, Calling the Dead and Love Match, and her 2017 release, Beauty and the Boss. Ali also has a novella in the collection Girls with Guns.
Originally from Cuba, Ali has retained much of her family's traditions and language and uses them frequently in her stories. Having her father read her stories and poetry before bed every night as a child infused her with a love of reading, which she carries till today. Ali currently lives outside New Orleans, Louisiana, and she has discovered that living in Louisiana provides plenty of material to draw from in creating her novels and short stories.
Originally from Cuba, Ali has retained much of her family's traditions and language and uses them frequently in her stories. Having her father read her stories and poetry before bed every night as a child infused her with a love of reading, which she carries till today. Ali currently lives outside New Orleans, Louisiana, and she has discovered that living in Louisiana provides plenty of material to draw from in creating her novels and short stories.
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August 28, 2022
This novel is the continuation of Harry and Desi’s life from the book One More Chance. Harry and Desi have been in love since grade school. Desi’s abusive father married her off to an even more abusive husband at an early age. They finally found each other years later and reconnected. Now they are getting married and expecting a baby.
There is a side story of Desi’s ex husband trying to track her down to make her his again and exact punishment to Harry for interfering. The subplot fell flat for me as a tension device. Inherently knowing he would not succeed because of the HEA tradition, removed any build up of tension for me.
Have you ever met a character that was just too much of everything? Too perfect in every way not to be a Disney character? Harry is this for me. I could not conceptualize her in my imagination because she does not represent a real person. Add this to the constant declarations of love and the repetitive reminders of finding each other again and I lost interest early on in the novel.
If you like your romance novels to be mostly fantasy then this one is definitely for you. I tend to like my romances to be a real possibility.
I received a free advance review copy from Bold Strokes Books through NetGalley. I am leaving this review voluntarily.
There is a side story of Desi’s ex husband trying to track her down to make her his again and exact punishment to Harry for interfering. The subplot fell flat for me as a tension device. Inherently knowing he would not succeed because of the HEA tradition, removed any build up of tension for me.
Have you ever met a character that was just too much of everything? Too perfect in every way not to be a Disney character? Harry is this for me. I could not conceptualize her in my imagination because she does not represent a real person. Add this to the constant declarations of love and the repetitive reminders of finding each other again and I lost interest early on in the novel.
If you like your romance novels to be mostly fantasy then this one is definitely for you. I tend to like my romances to be a real possibility.
I received a free advance review copy from Bold Strokes Books through NetGalley. I am leaving this review voluntarily.
August 29, 2022
3.25 stars. This book is a sequel to One More Chance, which I liked a lot, so I was looking forward to reading this. These books are best read in order as this book starts right where the first book ended. I enjoyed reading more about Harry and Desi, but this book is not one of my favorites by Vali.
Harry and Desi continue their life together and are floating on a big pink cloud as they are starting a family knowing that Desi’s ex-husband is safely locked up. He manages to escape though, derailing Harry and Desi’s life once more. There is also a little side story of Rachel and Serena (Harry’s ex) which I thought would be a more prominent storyline after reading the blurb, but it really is a secondary storyline.
I liked seeing Harry and Desi happy together and there was a nice surprise thrown in as well, which is all can say without spoilers. The first book focusses a lot on domestic abuse and was pretty raw at some points and I could really feel all the emotions, which is one of the things why I liked that book so much. This second book still focusses on domestic abuse, but has less of the rawness the first book had and unfortunately also less depth. It’s happier and more easygoing, which is fine with me, but at some point, it was all too perfect for me. Vali can write the best knights in shining armor and Harry was all that resulting in her being just too perfect and there were too many declarations of love for my liking. I’m sure there are others that will appreciate this better than I did though.
Of course, there was also the threat of Desi’s ex, which was a fun subplot even though it’s obvious that he will not succeed in his evil plans. Family is another important topic in Vali’s books and there were plenty of good family moments and I was also happy to see that Rachel would get her own romance. Unfortunately, I couldn’t root for Rachel and Serena the way I rooted for Harry and Desi. When the book starts they have been dating for a while and hit a rough patch and at first I understood Rachel’s point in the situation, but later on I didn’t like her behavior and I didn’t feel a spark between them. Maybe that was also due to the absence of a POV of Serena since I had no idea what was going on in her head, so for me this romance was a bit underwhelming.
If you enjoyed the first book in the series, you’ll likely enjoy this one too, Harry and Desi are sweet and happy together in a perfect kind of way as you may expect from Vali.
I received an ARC from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Harry and Desi continue their life together and are floating on a big pink cloud as they are starting a family knowing that Desi’s ex-husband is safely locked up. He manages to escape though, derailing Harry and Desi’s life once more. There is also a little side story of Rachel and Serena (Harry’s ex) which I thought would be a more prominent storyline after reading the blurb, but it really is a secondary storyline.
I liked seeing Harry and Desi happy together and there was a nice surprise thrown in as well, which is all can say without spoilers. The first book focusses a lot on domestic abuse and was pretty raw at some points and I could really feel all the emotions, which is one of the things why I liked that book so much. This second book still focusses on domestic abuse, but has less of the rawness the first book had and unfortunately also less depth. It’s happier and more easygoing, which is fine with me, but at some point, it was all too perfect for me. Vali can write the best knights in shining armor and Harry was all that resulting in her being just too perfect and there were too many declarations of love for my liking. I’m sure there are others that will appreciate this better than I did though.
Of course, there was also the threat of Desi’s ex, which was a fun subplot even though it’s obvious that he will not succeed in his evil plans. Family is another important topic in Vali’s books and there were plenty of good family moments and I was also happy to see that Rachel would get her own romance. Unfortunately, I couldn’t root for Rachel and Serena the way I rooted for Harry and Desi. When the book starts they have been dating for a while and hit a rough patch and at first I understood Rachel’s point in the situation, but later on I didn’t like her behavior and I didn’t feel a spark between them. Maybe that was also due to the absence of a POV of Serena since I had no idea what was going on in her head, so for me this romance was a bit underwhelming.
If you enjoyed the first book in the series, you’ll likely enjoy this one too, Harry and Desi are sweet and happy together in a perfect kind of way as you may expect from Vali.
I received an ARC from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
February 21, 2023
Survivors once again.
This is the 2nd book of the Chance series, which cannot be read as a standalone, and my issues with it start with the blurb. The way the blurb is written gives the impression that Desi's sister, Rachel, and Harry's ex, Serena are the main characters in this second book, which is not the case. Rachel and Serena continue to be side characters alongside Harry and Desi and while I have nothing against them (I quite like them a lot, actually), I was also pretty interested in the other two women who seemed to get closer at the end of the first book though we get no details.
We don't get a lot of Rachel and Serena in the second book because of how Harry and Desi's story develops and I wish Ali Vali had devoted more effort towards developing their relationship because it was quite a mess. We are only told that they had their happy moments together but we don't get to see any of it at all. The two have issues with themselves and each other and they don't spend much time together because Serena often goes missing in action. And whenever she's around, Rachel deliberately gives her a hard time. Honestly, much as I would have liked to, it was hard to see how they can be a good match for each other.
I understand Harry and Desi's story. It's a continuation of the drama of the previous book but I don't really get the point of this side romance at all.
I received an ARC from Bold Strokes Books through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
This is the 2nd book of the Chance series, which cannot be read as a standalone, and my issues with it start with the blurb. The way the blurb is written gives the impression that Desi's sister, Rachel, and Harry's ex, Serena are the main characters in this second book, which is not the case. Rachel and Serena continue to be side characters alongside Harry and Desi and while I have nothing against them (I quite like them a lot, actually), I was also pretty interested in the other two women who seemed to get closer at the end of the first book though we get no details.
We don't get a lot of Rachel and Serena in the second book because of how Harry and Desi's story develops and I wish Ali Vali had devoted more effort towards developing their relationship because it was quite a mess. We are only told that they had their happy moments together but we don't get to see any of it at all. The two have issues with themselves and each other and they don't spend much time together because Serena often goes missing in action. And whenever she's around, Rachel deliberately gives her a hard time. Honestly, much as I would have liked to, it was hard to see how they can be a good match for each other.
I understand Harry and Desi's story. It's a continuation of the drama of the previous book but I don't really get the point of this side romance at all.
I received an ARC from Bold Strokes Books through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
August 23, 2022
This is the sequel to Vali’s One More Chance. You need to read that one before reading A Good Chance.
A Good Chance picks up where One More Chance ended. I won’t give away any story details invade it might spoil it for some. The trigger warning that was needed for the first book, aren’t as needed for the second. We get some references to the domestic abuse, retelling of abuse (not in detail) and of course we are still dealing with the aftermath.
Harry is this unbelievably nice and loving character, maybe a bit too good to be true, but I like it. It’s in line with a lot of Vali’s writing to have one character that is seemingly cool and aloof, but in fact is this super loving too good to be true character. And the other MC is the “damsel in distress”, although not in a way that is annoying to me. It’s more like Desi needs a bit of a confidence booster and Harry is happy to provide that and so much more.
I like that we get a bit more of Rachel, Desi’s sister, as well. I do find her slightly annoying, extremely temperamental, quick to judge and a horrible listener to anyone but Desi and Harry.
One thing that just doesn’t fly with me is the forgiveness that happens so easily in this book. There is one very big one, I can’t say anything about it because, you know, spoilers, but that just is too easy. I would have liked to see that play out differently. The other thing, also part of a secondary storyline is just a bit confusing I suppose. A lot of hot and cold and *poof* all is magically wonderful.
Anyway, this is an enjoyable sequel and I definitely wouldn’t mind to stick with these characters for another book or so.
*ARC provided by the publisher through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review*
A Good Chance picks up where One More Chance ended. I won’t give away any story details invade it might spoil it for some. The trigger warning that was needed for the first book, aren’t as needed for the second. We get some references to the domestic abuse, retelling of abuse (not in detail) and of course we are still dealing with the aftermath.
Harry is this unbelievably nice and loving character, maybe a bit too good to be true, but I like it. It’s in line with a lot of Vali’s writing to have one character that is seemingly cool and aloof, but in fact is this super loving too good to be true character. And the other MC is the “damsel in distress”, although not in a way that is annoying to me. It’s more like Desi needs a bit of a confidence booster and Harry is happy to provide that and so much more.
I like that we get a bit more of Rachel, Desi’s sister, as well. I do find her slightly annoying, extremely temperamental, quick to judge and a horrible listener to anyone but Desi and Harry.
One thing that just doesn’t fly with me is the forgiveness that happens so easily in this book. There is one very big one, I can’t say anything about it because, you know, spoilers, but that just is too easy. I would have liked to see that play out differently. The other thing, also part of a secondary storyline is just a bit confusing I suppose. A lot of hot and cold and *poof* all is magically wonderful.
Anyway, this is an enjoyable sequel and I definitely wouldn’t mind to stick with these characters for another book or so.
*ARC provided by the publisher through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review*
September 17, 2022
This was slightly better than the first book in the series. The over use of 'I love you' and 'I'm so lucky' got really sickening while reading the book that I had to skip a few pages just to get to the heart of the story. The whole thing was expressed in the first book of the series and it was just a waste of pages in this book.
The upside to the story was the little ones. Nico and Sydney at the very end. I honestly would not have bought this book had it been another author other than Vali, and the fact she’s donating proceeds to victims of domestic violence.
So there's that… buy/read at your own risk!
The upside to the story was the little ones. Nico and Sydney at the very end. I honestly would not have bought this book had it been another author other than Vali, and the fact she’s donating proceeds to victims of domestic violence.
So there's that… buy/read at your own risk!
December 19, 2022
This story continues the previous one called One More Chance within the Chance series, so this is #2 in the series and follows the story of Harry Basantes and Desi, now married and expecting their first child. This time, Rachel Thompson, Desi's sister, takes on a greater role. Her and her love affairs. First with Serena Ladding, who also appeared in the first book and also with Shelby Phillips, a Special Agent who will somehow help shake up Serena a bit, for Rachel's benefit.
But within all of Rachel's liaisons, the eternal honeymoon between Harry and Desi, the imminent birth, the book deals quite extensively with the escape of Desi's ex-husband and his relatives from the prison where they were serving time after what happened in the previous book.
And there's also a big surprise in the middle of all the stress, which I'm not going to reveal.
I valued the previous book quite moderately because I found that the situations were repeating themselves and it was a bit slow as a whole. I think this time things have not improved much in this regard.
But neither should we underestimate the fact that we can meet up with old characters and see how things are going for them.
So if only for that, the book is worth it.
Publisher Bold Strokes Books was kind enough to provide me with an advanced reading copy via Netgalley for my honest review
But within all of Rachel's liaisons, the eternal honeymoon between Harry and Desi, the imminent birth, the book deals quite extensively with the escape of Desi's ex-husband and his relatives from the prison where they were serving time after what happened in the previous book.
And there's also a big surprise in the middle of all the stress, which I'm not going to reveal.
I valued the previous book quite moderately because I found that the situations were repeating themselves and it was a bit slow as a whole. I think this time things have not improved much in this regard.
But neither should we underestimate the fact that we can meet up with old characters and see how things are going for them.
So if only for that, the book is worth it.
Publisher Bold Strokes Books was kind enough to provide me with an advanced reading copy via Netgalley for my honest review
September 2, 2022
A Good Chance is the sequel to ‘One more Chance’. It's a powerful read, detailed, and in parts, can be disturbing. If I'd have known ( nasty habit of not reading the blurb fully) that this was the sequel, I probably wouldn't have asked for a copy of this book.
I am a domestic abuse survivor. I'm disclosing this because this has resulted in my low rating, so I'm probably not the best person to trust with a review of this book.
2 stars
I am a domestic abuse survivor. I'm disclosing this because this has resulted in my low rating, so I'm probably not the best person to trust with a review of this book.
2 stars
September 19, 2022
This is a continuation of Vali’s book One More Chance. Here we have Harry and Desi living together and expecting their first child and engaged to be married. Desi’s sister Rachel is living with them. Rachel has started dating assistant district attorney, Serena. Who was Harry’s old girlfriend and the mom of adorable little boy Butch.
Desi’s ex husband Byron, his brother Mike and their dad have all been sentenced to life in prison for trying to kill Rachel in the first book. Byron and his brother and dad break out of prison and head toward New Orleans to kill Rachel and Harry.
This book was not as good of a read as the first in this series in my view. Too much reputation of Harry and Desi’s feelings for each other for my taste. My favorite parts were in regards to the bad guys breaking out of prison and evading the cops. And Rachel and Serena had no chemistry together. Rachel was cruel and nasty to Serena and completely over the top blaming her for their relationship nearly falling apart.
In One More Chance, Vali wrote a very gritty and emotional book showing the very ugly side of domestic physical abuse. And the love and devotion between Harry and Desi. To me this sequel lacked that intensity and I was disappointed with this second book. Vali is a great writer and I look forward to her next story.
ARC received for a voluntary and honest review via the publisher and NetGalley.
Desi’s ex husband Byron, his brother Mike and their dad have all been sentenced to life in prison for trying to kill Rachel in the first book. Byron and his brother and dad break out of prison and head toward New Orleans to kill Rachel and Harry.
This book was not as good of a read as the first in this series in my view. Too much reputation of Harry and Desi’s feelings for each other for my taste. My favorite parts were in regards to the bad guys breaking out of prison and evading the cops. And Rachel and Serena had no chemistry together. Rachel was cruel and nasty to Serena and completely over the top blaming her for their relationship nearly falling apart.
In One More Chance, Vali wrote a very gritty and emotional book showing the very ugly side of domestic physical abuse. And the love and devotion between Harry and Desi. To me this sequel lacked that intensity and I was disappointed with this second book. Vali is a great writer and I look forward to her next story.
ARC received for a voluntary and honest review via the publisher and NetGalley.
September 20, 2022
Ali Vali
A Good Chance
Bold Strokes Books
Arc
NetGalley
The story picks up where the first book left off, Harry loves Desi with her whole heart. They are on their way to the happy life they have always wanted , the family and feeling whole together at last.
There’s definitely some surprises I did not see coming, Harry’s family is so wonderful and loving towards Desi and Rachel.
There is a lot of family drama that keep the story entertaining and keeps you at the edge of your seat hoping and praying that Desi and Henry will have a happy ending that they so desperately deserved.
Then there is Rachel and Serena, their relationship was developed and moving right along until Serena disappeared on Rachel and cut off all contact. I felt like Rachel stood her ground and made up her mind about what kind of relationship she deserved and wanted from a partner.
Side note; I was really happy that the author brought the parents more into the story. You’re able to see that the family from both sides, constant gatherings in love and want what’s best for the main characters in the story.
I was actually very happy that the author did a book to to follow up on the story. To actually close a chapter, a happy one, for all of the characters involved. I loved book one.
I really enjoyed the story. It is definitely about overcoming obstacles, fear and enduring during some horrible experiences. The sympathy that the author showed for the main characters and others who had been involved in domestic violence, is really eye-opening to what’s going on to a lot of living in America. She let you see the pain, trauma and fear that a person experiences when they have someone who is an abuser as their partner. She raised some important issues that needs to be discussed more.
I would like to Thank Bold strokes books and NetGalley for the Arc. 4Stars . I highly recommend this book.
A Good Chance
Bold Strokes Books
Arc
NetGalley
The story picks up where the first book left off, Harry loves Desi with her whole heart. They are on their way to the happy life they have always wanted , the family and feeling whole together at last.
There’s definitely some surprises I did not see coming, Harry’s family is so wonderful and loving towards Desi and Rachel.
There is a lot of family drama that keep the story entertaining and keeps you at the edge of your seat hoping and praying that Desi and Henry will have a happy ending that they so desperately deserved.
Then there is Rachel and Serena, their relationship was developed and moving right along until Serena disappeared on Rachel and cut off all contact. I felt like Rachel stood her ground and made up her mind about what kind of relationship she deserved and wanted from a partner.
Side note; I was really happy that the author brought the parents more into the story. You’re able to see that the family from both sides, constant gatherings in love and want what’s best for the main characters in the story.
I was actually very happy that the author did a book to to follow up on the story. To actually close a chapter, a happy one, for all of the characters involved. I loved book one.
I really enjoyed the story. It is definitely about overcoming obstacles, fear and enduring during some horrible experiences. The sympathy that the author showed for the main characters and others who had been involved in domestic violence, is really eye-opening to what’s going on to a lot of living in America. She let you see the pain, trauma and fear that a person experiences when they have someone who is an abuser as their partner. She raised some important issues that needs to be discussed more.
I would like to Thank Bold strokes books and NetGalley for the Arc. 4Stars . I highly recommend this book.
April 7, 2023
Book 2 of this series continue the story of Harry and Desi after Desi's ex husband escapes from prison and poses a risk to their future. Desi's sister Rachel is also in the middle of some issues with her girlfriend Serena. Throw in a baby, long lost parents, a storm, and new job prospects all around and this book is chock full of drama.
I will say this book is best read if you've read the first book in this series. It definitely feels like it starts right after the first ends. I liked these two MCs as much as I liked them from the first, I was also happy to see a few other characters from Ali Vali's other series pop up, especially Sept and Keegan. The drama was pretty constant though and sometimes the scenes were hard to keep track of. There are also a few scenes where I felt like characters went from one extreme to another emotionally and it didn't seem as genuine as I think it was intended because of the quick changes. It wasn't my favorite book by Ali Vali but I still enjoyed it. It's definitely worth picking up if you liked the first one.
I will say this book is best read if you've read the first book in this series. It definitely feels like it starts right after the first ends. I liked these two MCs as much as I liked them from the first, I was also happy to see a few other characters from Ali Vali's other series pop up, especially Sept and Keegan. The drama was pretty constant though and sometimes the scenes were hard to keep track of. There are also a few scenes where I felt like characters went from one extreme to another emotionally and it didn't seem as genuine as I think it was intended because of the quick changes. It wasn't my favorite book by Ali Vali but I still enjoyed it. It's definitely worth picking up if you liked the first one.
August 20, 2022
Vali has a sort of recipe to her books I really appreciate. It usually involves a bad guy, and two MCs that are either in love, or quickly get there. I’m a bigger fan of less tension between the MCs and more tension coming from outside the relationship, but this can definitely be taken too far in the sweet/perfect relationship direction. This is a prime example of the overly sweet direction. When I say sweet, I mean there is a lot of expressions of love and zero tension. The amount of times they repeatedly express their love for each other is slightly nauseating. I think the MCs probably spend at least 50% of the book on the topic and it became redundant. Thankfully the MCs sister, Rachel had enough sass and drama to keep the book in play for me.
I liked it, just not as much as some of Vali’s others.
I liked it, just not as much as some of Vali’s others.
August 29, 2022
A Good Chance by Ali Vali is the sequel to One More Chance and definitely won’t make sense as a stand-alone. It seems to flow from one book to the other with minimal time passing between the two which works well and is a great way to continue this story.
Desi and Harry Basantes are expecting a baby, something they have craved as a couple since they were teenagers. Both have healed as best as one possibly can after the trauma of abuse at the hands of Desi’s ex-husband. Harry has been nothing but the ideal partner, allowing Desi everything she needs, and life is perfect (maybe too perfect?).
Racheal, Desi’s little sister is struggling through her relationship’s ups and downs, and a surprise from their past has the two sisters questioning their opinions. Life is thrown off track when Desi’s ex-husband escapes from jail, putting everyone back on alert and in danger.
Ali Vali continues this saga, letting readers delve into the complexities which are the Basantes family. A lot is going on, and the story cuts from one plot point to another at a pace that may cause a little confusion and doubt as to the sincerity of the MC’s actions. My curiosity in Vali’s Cain Casey series has been piqued, however, as she was mentioned throughout the story leaving me curious to discover who this woman is. I will reiterate, don’t skip One more Chance before picking up A Good Chance, they need to be read in order.
I received an ARC from Bold Strokes Books via NetGalley for my honest review.
Desi and Harry Basantes are expecting a baby, something they have craved as a couple since they were teenagers. Both have healed as best as one possibly can after the trauma of abuse at the hands of Desi’s ex-husband. Harry has been nothing but the ideal partner, allowing Desi everything she needs, and life is perfect (maybe too perfect?).
Racheal, Desi’s little sister is struggling through her relationship’s ups and downs, and a surprise from their past has the two sisters questioning their opinions. Life is thrown off track when Desi’s ex-husband escapes from jail, putting everyone back on alert and in danger.
Ali Vali continues this saga, letting readers delve into the complexities which are the Basantes family. A lot is going on, and the story cuts from one plot point to another at a pace that may cause a little confusion and doubt as to the sincerity of the MC’s actions. My curiosity in Vali’s Cain Casey series has been piqued, however, as she was mentioned throughout the story leaving me curious to discover who this woman is. I will reiterate, don’t skip One more Chance before picking up A Good Chance, they need to be read in order.
I received an ARC from Bold Strokes Books via NetGalley for my honest review.
August 26, 2022
Kickback and enjoy the sequel
This is the second part of the Harry&Desi saga which started for me decades back as fanfic and I am glad that I got to revisit this story. First off: For full enjoyment you should probably with reading the first part (One More Chance).
There are two major strands of this story: The very sweet and sappy sapphic romance between Harry and Desi where Harry reassures Desi the abuse survivor time and again of their love and as a counterpoint the prison escape and planned assault by Desi‘s former abusive husband. This is on the surface very black and white but showcases in my opinion the all to real threat which many abuse survivors have continuously to endure (without the help of a protector as Harry and a supportive environment!). It really drills home the dire situation so many women have to fear. And the seemingly repetitive love declarations between Harry and Desi reflect how much abuse survivors need a loving environment and constant reassurance.
So yes, it is black and white and nevertheless like all stories of Ali Vali it is well told and in the end oh so satisfying.
I loved to revisit so many characters of other books set in New Orleans and to see Cain Casey albeit unknowingly help the good cause. The unfolding romance between Rachel and Serena was much more thorny and in my opinion to easily resolved (which is also true for another potential conflict).
So kick back, get out your popcorn and enjoy the show.
Trigger warning: Graphic allusions to domestic violence which happened in the past.
This is the second part of the Harry&Desi saga which started for me decades back as fanfic and I am glad that I got to revisit this story. First off: For full enjoyment you should probably with reading the first part (One More Chance).
There are two major strands of this story: The very sweet and sappy sapphic romance between Harry and Desi where Harry reassures Desi the abuse survivor time and again of their love and as a counterpoint the prison escape and planned assault by Desi‘s former abusive husband. This is on the surface very black and white but showcases in my opinion the all to real threat which many abuse survivors have continuously to endure (without the help of a protector as Harry and a supportive environment!). It really drills home the dire situation so many women have to fear. And the seemingly repetitive love declarations between Harry and Desi reflect how much abuse survivors need a loving environment and constant reassurance.
So yes, it is black and white and nevertheless like all stories of Ali Vali it is well told and in the end oh so satisfying.
I loved to revisit so many characters of other books set in New Orleans and to see Cain Casey albeit unknowingly help the good cause. The unfolding romance between Rachel and Serena was much more thorny and in my opinion to easily resolved (which is also true for another potential conflict).
So kick back, get out your popcorn and enjoy the show.
Trigger warning: Graphic allusions to domestic violence which happened in the past.
August 27, 2022
This is one where I’m going to say it’s me not Vali. I didn’t realize this was a sequel to the author's “One More Chance”. If I’d read that I’d probably be thrilled with this new novel. I caught up with the characters in the recapping that is given but that isn’t the same as being connected. The main characters, Harry and Desi, are already in a perfect relationship and expanding their family. I thought there would be more of a focus on Desi’s sister Rachel and her romance with prosecutor Serena. But that is overshadowed by all the good things happening for Harry and Desi. Of course there is a big threat out there but you know that will be near the end so doesn’t increase the tension. There are additional characters introduced but again it is part of the good new life for the MCs. It’s like reading a long HEA epilogue but not a full new story. I’d recommend reading One More Chance first so you’ll enjoy this one more than I did. Thank you to NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
August 21, 2022
Thanks to NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for the ARC in exchange for this review.
A Good Chance is a sequel to Ali Vali’s One More Chance, bringing us back to New Orleans and into the lives of Harry and Desi and their family and friends about a year after the events of the first book. I have mixed feelings with this installment. The only thing I didn’t like about this was how rushed and forced some of the events and relationships felt. It seemed as if a lot of important things took place ‘off screen’ so to speak and a few of the newer characters felt like they could have been fleshed out a bit more. Besides this I loved being reintroduced to these characters, seeing the healing process and their steps to make the life that was stolen from them so long ago. The introduction of new characters, one of which is a tie in to the Cain Casey series that made me happy, helped to continue to grow this world. Overall I loved the overarching message that no matter how dark and deep the past’s scars, you can move on and find happiness, and find your strength again.
A Good Chance is a sequel to Ali Vali’s One More Chance, bringing us back to New Orleans and into the lives of Harry and Desi and their family and friends about a year after the events of the first book. I have mixed feelings with this installment. The only thing I didn’t like about this was how rushed and forced some of the events and relationships felt. It seemed as if a lot of important things took place ‘off screen’ so to speak and a few of the newer characters felt like they could have been fleshed out a bit more. Besides this I loved being reintroduced to these characters, seeing the healing process and their steps to make the life that was stolen from them so long ago. The introduction of new characters, one of which is a tie in to the Cain Casey series that made me happy, helped to continue to grow this world. Overall I loved the overarching message that no matter how dark and deep the past’s scars, you can move on and find happiness, and find your strength again.
September 20, 2022
This read is a follow-up to One more chance. The reader is graced with Harriet "Harry" Basantes, orthopedic surgeon and Desiree "Desi" Thompson, talented pottery maker. Both women are embracing what is next in their lives. This is a grandiose love affair. At times you may feel the need to go the dentist with all the perfect awesomeness and sweetness. Then at other times, you may wish you were Desi or Harry. Then trouble strikes. The Simoneauxs "break" out of prison with plans to create havoc. Byron is intent on killing the three women who he blames for ruining his life. Yeah right.
Quite a bit of the story involves Rachel and her on again off again relationship with Serena and her son Butch. Will they or won't they make a commitment to each other. In general, this was an enjoyable read with interesting characters, some from the first book and some new ones that provided an interesting twist. There was also an appearance by a character from the Devil Series. Really enjoyed that addition.
ARC provided by Bold Strokes Books, Inc. via NetGalley
Quite a bit of the story involves Rachel and her on again off again relationship with Serena and her son Butch. Will they or won't they make a commitment to each other. In general, this was an enjoyable read with interesting characters, some from the first book and some new ones that provided an interesting twist. There was also an appearance by a character from the Devil Series. Really enjoyed that addition.
ARC provided by Bold Strokes Books, Inc. via NetGalley
September 4, 2022
I have been looking forward to reading A Good Chance by Ali Vali ever since I heard there would be a sequel to the first book in the “Chance” series. I pretty much adored everything about One More Chance, the first novel in the series. I fell in love with Desi, Harry, Rachel, and Serena in that first narrative, and became totally invested in their stories. Hearing that I could continue reading about their lives made me a very happy reader.
The second book starts off on the same day that the first book ends. Desi’s abusive ex, Byron along with his father and brother are in Angola Prison where they will hopefully stay for years to come. Desi and Harry are expecting a baby in a few weeks’ time and Harry has just asked Desi to marry her. Rachel and Serena are still in an on-again, off-again flirtatious relationship, though it seems to be more off again at the beginning of this tale. Overall, things are looking great for these ladies with the upcoming wedding and future parenthood…until they suddenly don’t.
Being totally enchanted with the first novel, I had no trouble immersing myself completely into this second one. Ms. Vali has a way of making her characters seem real. It’s very easy to fall in love with her heroines and hate the bad guys, and this is true for the characters in this narrative. If you have read any of the author’s other novels, you will quickly realize that this book is set in the same universe as several of her other books including the “Cain Casey” and “Calling the Dead” series. I really enjoyed seeing some of the characters from those other stories as well as some familiar places in New Orleans that Ms. Vali has introduced her readers to. The tale in this newest book is exciting, romantic, and at times terrifying. I thoroughly enjoyed reading more of Harry and Desi’s story.
A Good Chance is not a standalone novel. These two books tell one story and if you try to read the second one alone, you will miss out on too much. I recommend you get both novels and read them in order. They are both excellent and well worth getting and reading.
I received an ARC from NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for an honest review.
The second book starts off on the same day that the first book ends. Desi’s abusive ex, Byron along with his father and brother are in Angola Prison where they will hopefully stay for years to come. Desi and Harry are expecting a baby in a few weeks’ time and Harry has just asked Desi to marry her. Rachel and Serena are still in an on-again, off-again flirtatious relationship, though it seems to be more off again at the beginning of this tale. Overall, things are looking great for these ladies with the upcoming wedding and future parenthood…until they suddenly don’t.
Being totally enchanted with the first novel, I had no trouble immersing myself completely into this second one. Ms. Vali has a way of making her characters seem real. It’s very easy to fall in love with her heroines and hate the bad guys, and this is true for the characters in this narrative. If you have read any of the author’s other novels, you will quickly realize that this book is set in the same universe as several of her other books including the “Cain Casey” and “Calling the Dead” series. I really enjoyed seeing some of the characters from those other stories as well as some familiar places in New Orleans that Ms. Vali has introduced her readers to. The tale in this newest book is exciting, romantic, and at times terrifying. I thoroughly enjoyed reading more of Harry and Desi’s story.
A Good Chance is not a standalone novel. These two books tell one story and if you try to read the second one alone, you will miss out on too much. I recommend you get both novels and read them in order. They are both excellent and well worth getting and reading.
I received an ARC from NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for an honest review.
September 2, 2022
When Harry asks Desi, her pregnant girlfriend, to marry her, both women feel their lives are perfect. Later that night they’re informed that Desi’s ex-husband, his brother, and his father have escaped from prison and there is a manhunt on to find them. Harry and Desi both know that Byron will come after them for having escaped from once and for being responsible for his conviction and incarceration. Harry knows that the only way they can ever be free of Bryon is if he’s dead.
Vali increases the tension in the as soon as she tells her readers about Bryon’s escape from prison, and she is very good at that. Readers may have to take breaks from reading the book to let their blood pressure settle back to normal.
The book, while well written in general, has flaws. Vali at times seemed to have forgotten that not every reader will have read the first book in this series, “One More Chance.” There are characters dropped into the story without an adequate introduction, which takes readers out of the story while they try to figure who that character is.
If you’re a Vali fan, you will undoubtedly like this book. If you’re new to the author, you’d be better off starting with one Vali’s earlier books.
My thanks to Bold Strokes Books for an eARC.
Vali increases the tension in the as soon as she tells her readers about Bryon’s escape from prison, and she is very good at that. Readers may have to take breaks from reading the book to let their blood pressure settle back to normal.
The book, while well written in general, has flaws. Vali at times seemed to have forgotten that not every reader will have read the first book in this series, “One More Chance.” There are characters dropped into the story without an adequate introduction, which takes readers out of the story while they try to figure who that character is.
If you’re a Vali fan, you will undoubtedly like this book. If you’re new to the author, you’d be better off starting with one Vali’s earlier books.
My thanks to Bold Strokes Books for an eARC.
August 28, 2022
Thank you to NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for a copy of this book.
This is the sequel to Vali's One More Chance.
After waiting 16 years for each other, Harry and Desi are weeks away from their wedding and the birth of their first child.
Desi's sister Rachel is thrilled for them but wishes she could have a her own grand love affair; she's interested in Harry's ex, Serena but Rachel thinks Serena's not yet over Harry. Is there any chance for them?
Desi's abusive ex-husband, along with his father and brother manage to escape from Angola prison; Byron has one goal, to kill Desi, Harry and Rachel.
Another very unexpected face from Desi and Rachel's past makes an appearance.
Similar to the first book in the series, this is not a simple, lighthearted romance, while we have sweet, romantic and sometimes steamy scenes, we also deal with serious issues, this book is very action packed for a book it's size.
Throughly enjoyed it, looking forward to more of Vali's work.
This is the sequel to Vali's One More Chance.
After waiting 16 years for each other, Harry and Desi are weeks away from their wedding and the birth of their first child.
Desi's sister Rachel is thrilled for them but wishes she could have a her own grand love affair; she's interested in Harry's ex, Serena but Rachel thinks Serena's not yet over Harry. Is there any chance for them?
Desi's abusive ex-husband, along with his father and brother manage to escape from Angola prison; Byron has one goal, to kill Desi, Harry and Rachel.
Another very unexpected face from Desi and Rachel's past makes an appearance.
Similar to the first book in the series, this is not a simple, lighthearted romance, while we have sweet, romantic and sometimes steamy scenes, we also deal with serious issues, this book is very action packed for a book it's size.
Throughly enjoyed it, looking forward to more of Vali's work.
August 24, 2022
A worthy sequel, you probably need to read the first book to appreciate this one. We see Harry and Desi, building their new life together, as they await the birth of their baby. Until news that Desi's abusive ex-husband has escaped prison, puts everyone on edge, including the reader. The exploration of the ex-husband's twisted psyche was interesting, adding to the tension, on wondering what was going to happen at the end of the book. For those who like to follow a relationship developing, you may enjoy what happens with Desi's sister Rachel. A good story, told well, although I was left wondering what happened to Tyrell. I enjoyed the link to the Casey Cain books and wondering if she would swoop in and save the day!
With thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
With thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
August 7, 2023
This is the sequel to One More Chance, which I haven’t read. Fortunately, I didn’t need it. It was easy to follow the story. There is enough backstory to figure who is who and what they did or didn’t do. Harry and Desi are living together and expecting a baby. Harry’s family is around, as is Rachel, Desi’s sister. Harry is too good to be true. She doesn’t ever complain and she’s generous with her time, money, and love. The younger Byron (Desi’s ex-husband) comes across as a psychopath. There are some stereotypes, like the convict with the heart of gold, for example, and Harry generally being a larger-than-life knight and protector. I’ve been DNFing books lately, but I finished this one. I wanted to see how the story would develop and work out.
September 8, 2022
This story is ok, but for me it gets a bit repetitive as the abusive husband gradually makes his way to confront his ex wife, and Serena and Rachel keep going over the same old ground. Sadly Harry started to grate a bit too. It’s not a bad book, indeed there is plenty to like in terms of recovery and respect, it just becomes a tad sermonising and lacks the menace it needs for a thriller. Having said that, I liked the redemption aspect of two of the male characters and it is atmospheric in places. It’s a sequel that you could read on its own, but it would make more sense if you read the first book - One More Chance.
November 4, 2022
This book is a sequel and although it might be possible to read it without reading book #1, I did notice that I missed some background on the characters.
Desi and Harry are building their life together when Desi's abusive ex-husband escapes prison. Overall I liked how the writer built up the story and handled the twists but there was a bit too much of we are so lucky to be together at last for me. The story with the sister and the ex was also not developed enough for me to really care if they end up together or not but maybe that's adressed in the first book.
An ARC was provided to me via Netgalley in return of an honest review.
Desi and Harry are building their life together when Desi's abusive ex-husband escapes prison. Overall I liked how the writer built up the story and handled the twists but there was a bit too much of we are so lucky to be together at last for me. The story with the sister and the ex was also not developed enough for me to really care if they end up together or not but maybe that's adressed in the first book.
An ARC was provided to me via Netgalley in return of an honest review.
September 17, 2022
A continuation of “One More Chance.” Harry and Desi are awaiting the birth of their first child and planning their wedding. Everything seems fine until Desi’s abusive ex escapes from prison. A good story, exciting in places, tells of the prison escape and intersperses the main storyline of Harry and Desi with what is happening to the escapees and also about Desi’s sister Rachel’s off again on again romance with Serena.
Good to see included characters from some of her other novels.
Good to see included characters from some of her other novels.
September 8, 2022
4.25 Good sequel
November 20, 2023
Same as the first. Cheesy and unbelievable but still entertaining.
April 18, 2023
Enter the world of New Orleans as seen through the eyes of Desi, a woman who is lucky to have survived the physical, emotional and sexual abuse of her ex-husband. When her ex escapes from prison with a number of other highly dangerous men, Desi and her sister are forced to relive the fear, whilst also trying to stay focused on the future.
This novel is a beautiful example of the poetry that runs through the authors novels - both a love affair of people, language and culture.
This novel is a beautiful example of the poetry that runs through the authors novels - both a love affair of people, language and culture.
September 24, 2022
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Wow, you’re stories are never short of amazing. I was truly hooked and when you added others from your other amazing stories it blew me away. My heart was pounding ten fold when I was anticipated a cameo fro a Casey Cain in this story but would have rob these other wonderful characters that I hope to hear from again. Maybe with Casey wink wink😏
Wow, you’re stories are never short of amazing. I was truly hooked and when you added others from your other amazing stories it blew me away. My heart was pounding ten fold when I was anticipated a cameo fro a Casey Cain in this story but would have rob these other wonderful characters that I hope to hear from again. Maybe with Casey wink wink😏
November 2, 2022
Read Both versions
This is a great story. I have read both versions and a lot of the changes were very good. It doesn't flow at the end like a Aliv Vali book normally does. I will read this book many times. Rachel and Serena deserve their own story. Both women are very strong and loveable. This book is still a home run.
This is a great story. I have read both versions and a lot of the changes were very good. It doesn't flow at the end like a Aliv Vali book normally does. I will read this book many times. Rachel and Serena deserve their own story. Both women are very strong and loveable. This book is still a home run.
December 5, 2022
Outstanding. A must read!!
Absolutely loved this sequel. Paced very well. Characters were true to life. It was great the way Ali pulled several of the characters from other stories into the mix ( Carly's Sound, Answering the Call, and the Cain Casey series). A definite page turner. Loved the way she addressed the issue of domestic violence/abuse. A must read!!
Absolutely loved this sequel. Paced very well. Characters were true to life. It was great the way Ali pulled several of the characters from other stories into the mix ( Carly's Sound, Answering the Call, and the Cain Casey series). A definite page turner. Loved the way she addressed the issue of domestic violence/abuse. A must read!!
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