Law of Family

Four Laws #2

by David Burke

Protect and serve has become protect and rule.

There's a new sheriff in town and while Rob has survived the first few weeks
he still doesn't have any magic all his training has led to a new ability.
The prompts call it cultivation but no one seems to know anything about it.
So far he can use it to make himself stronger, faster, better but its a lot of work.

Now he has to juggle the many responsibilities of the sheriff as he tries to
make Yonderton a safe place for all the people looking to him.

Speaking of juggling, he has to sort out the bunny girl clerk, the foxkin deputy,
the secretive elven alchemist, and the would be father-in-law who is intent on
Rob marrying his orc daughter.

Just another day for the sheriff.

Genres: Harem, Fantasy, Litrpg

534 pages, Paperback

Published February 3, 2022

About the author

David Burke is a mild manner something who tries to enjoy each day a bit more than the last. It dawned upon him at some point that life was racing him by and he wasn’t nearly as young as he used to be.

So now he spends his nights and lunch hours and any other free time he can putting down on paper all the stories that have collected up over a life time.

Reviews

[Junior]

The opposite of OP

I get trying to have a more balanced MC, but when you have him not just losing, but losing badly every fight of consequence he has and then coming out for the better by forced, ridiculous improvements after the fact it just feels boring. Add in that this book is becoming way more harem and way less plot/action I think I'm done.

[Monty]

Very bad.
Bad to the point of laughter, like slapstick comedy.. but not.

Suffers from continuity errors in the story. Logic and basic common sense also takes a backseat for an inane plot. Even referring to it as taking a backseat is wrong its more like left behind in the parking lot with the author motoring away.
The whole story feels like a consistent ass pull.
Even the audio narration is poor. I found multiple misreads and mistakes by the narrators including editing errors where partial sentences are repeated.
I don't know really but listening to this made me think the author must have been drugged out of his mind while writing it.

[SaKen]

Just a shit read

You know I really tried cause the series had such potential.The Mc is so worried about the animals feelings he’s fucking that it literally ruins the story.No man in real life is this big a feel good about her feelings queer! Spewing vomit at this point reading about fucking feelings jesus.

[Steve]

Rating 3.5 stars

This falls into the category of could have been better. The MC continued his actions from the first book of trying to be a "great guy" based on his earth standards but it sort of makes him an asshole in this new world. He doesn't listen to what the women around him are telling him and thinks that his way is the right way. His internal monologue : "I can't possibly have sex with this super hot woman who clearly wants me to have sex with her because it wouldn't be right until we form an unbreakable bond. Oh but I am not ready to settle down and make a commitment and they aren't asking for one." The story is okay but not that great. It is too one sided. There are so many enemies and they are so much more powerful that the MC. His training with his deputy is over the top. She loves him so much she can't stand to see him hurt or die so her plan is to hurt him as much as possible and try to almost kill him that way he can grow stronger. You know, because she loves him so much. She says she can't believe how fast he is improving and yet almost kills him multiple times so that he will improve faster. There needs to be a better balance in the book. This is all or nothing. Good things and bad. It is either great things happening to the MC or terrible things. Overall I still am enjoying the series and hope that the MC gets his head out his ass a little more in the next couple of books.

[Marked Twaine]

Boring and too whiny

I enjoyed the 1st book very much and it was a vocal surprise to solve the books are there that deal with multiple partners and magic with this book was simply too boring to ignore. I really did not like all the long explanations about what was going on. I didn't like how he was being manipulated by the assassin girl who was teasing him with her body but at the same time with spying on him for someone else this was just too much... Manipulation going on for my liking. I don't know what the author is trying to do and I will probably read The 3rd book but.... I cannot recommend this book it's too boring

[Kiba Snowpaw]

LAW OF FAMILY — AN OVER-THE-EDGE KIBA SNOWPAW AUDIOBOOK REVIEW

Goodreads rating: ★★★★☆ — 4/5. Story: 3.5/5, rounded up. Rebecca Woods: 5/5. Daniel Wisniewski: 3.5/5.

Content note: Substantial spoilers; discussion of death, coercive institutions, arranged marriage, sexual power, pregnancy, grief, and emotional shutdown.

ESSENTIAL

David Burke’s Law of Family, the second Four Laws novel, expands Rob Case’s life in Yonderton from a sheriff’s dangerous new job into a household, political office, and emerging dynasty. The audiobook combines cultivation, frontier law enforcement, explicit harem romance, and beastkin worldbuilding. Its conflicts are intimate, civic, magical, and deliberately uncomfortable to judge. Its essential question is harder than its title: does an unbreakable family become a chosen shelter or a permanent structure that swallows individual freedom? The novel often answers beautifully through loyalty, rescue, conversation, and shared work, then weakens that answer by joining employment, magical obligation, sex, marriage, and authority. I am Kiba Snowpaw, Alpha Ice Wolf of HowlStrom, and I use that identity seriously, as symbolic language for endurance, loyalty, inner winter, and the pack I protect. From HowlStrom, this book feels warm enough to thaw ice and dangerous enough to reveal what lies beneath it.

HOOK AND THESIS

Rob is strongest not when he survives burial or becomes a mana refinery, but when he refuses to count love as debt. Daria saves him, yet he rejects balancing rescues. Mursha is offered through custom, yet Rob asks what work would make her feel alive. These moments support my thesis: Law of Family works best when family means freely carrying one another through danger, and worst when family becomes a legal route through which control is renamed devotion. Burke wants Rob’s Earth values to collide with Olimero’s rules, but often resolves that collision through Rob’s decency without confronting the system. A Kiba Snowpaw line for this book would be: “Family is not the chain that keeps a wolf inside the den; it is the fire that gives him a reason to return.” An unbreakable bond comforts me only if everyone was free when it formed and remains safe inside it.

This thesis reached me because family is not an abstract word. I spent years helping care for my father, and in the hardest period love was not a speech; it was vigilance, errands, exhaustion, food, presence, and rising when grief drained my legs. That made Lina’s quiet labor more important than many erotic scenes. She cooks, organizes, heals, recruits, worries, and holds the household together while Rob receives titles and upgrades. I also understand why saying “I love you” can become harder because the feeling matters. When I was younger, fear and pressure could lock words behind an internal wall while thoughts circled faster and my body remained in the room. Silence was not emptiness, but others heard only what failed to emerge. Rob’s hesitation after Lina confesses feels honest; his failure to notice Josie feeling like a third wheel feels equally believable. Love may exist internally, but family is built from what others repeatedly experience.

BASIC PLOT SUMMARY

The story begins after Rob’s first victories, when Yonderton’s criminal order is wounded but not defeated. He investigates the Back Street Boys, raids operations, applies the Four Laws, and turns the sheriff’s office toward functioning government. At home, Lina says “love,” while Josie struggles with receiving only shared intimacy instead of time in which she is emotionally chosen for herself alone. Rob develops cultivation and alchemy, discovering his unusual ki can interact with mana. An experiment involving Rava’s raven cauldron becomes a violation disguised as discovery: energy mixes, Rob collapses, raven marks appear, and an incomplete soul bond forms. An ambush then drives him through streets and across rooftops into battles against mages and an earth elemental. Buried underground, he suffocates and dies while thinking of Lina and Josie. The Phoenix Elixir resurrects him through fire, converting failure into trauma, revelation, and advancement while confirming divine powers are studying him.

The second half enlarges household and threat. Daria, a hawkkin mage fleeing a father who would trade her into marriage, becomes Rob’s deputy through an oath heroic in purpose and disturbing in surrender. Mursha, an orc taught to regard her gravity magic and ambition as inferior, moves in as a prospective clerk while longing for forge or battlefield. Rob’s conversations with both are admirable because he separates their worth from sexual availability and defends their agency. Meanwhile, a stronger organization eliminates the Back Street Boys’ leadership with magical bombs that kill hundreds, turning apparent liberation into grief. Rob’s household increasingly operates as one force. In the climax Josie is poisoned and approaches death; Rob refines and returns her fire mana, joining her until a permanent soul bond forms and Sativa recognizes them as married. The ending turns to Lina, pregnancy, and Rob accepting that perfect safety may never arrive before life must be lived.

PRAISE AND CRITIQUE

Burke’s strongest improvement over Law of Strength is ensemble function. Book One often positioned women as rewards orbiting Rob; this sequel shows him surviving because others possess skills and judgment he lacks. Lina’s healing depletes her; Josie restrains his confidence; Daria changes battle through aerial perspective; Mursha’s gravity makes cultivation cooperative; Rava opens alchemy while remaining dangerous. Mana Refinery turns that structure itself into mechanics: Rob receives another person’s energy, refines it, and returns it stronger, an excellent metaphor for healthy family. The bombing aftermath deepens the idea. Ordinary wolfkin, cowkin, orcs, elves, and bunnykin rescue strangers, fight fires, treat wounds, and rebuild, briefly making Yonderton itself a pack. “The Alpha is not the wolf who eats first,” Kiba would say, “but the one still digging when another heartbeat is buried beneath the snow.” Here authority becomes service rather than appetite, and the title finally grows larger than Rob’s bed.

The supporting cast pushes against stereotypes. Mactosh is honorable and loving, yet teaches Mursha that her gift matters less than the role he understands; this contradiction makes him human. Daria’s hunting pride coexists with shame over her father, while Lina’s sexuality coexists with insecurity, competence, and longing for children. Josie’s complaint about being included only in group intimacy is especially sharp: equality is not achieved by claiming everyone is loved equally when one receives less attention. Rava remains compelling because her interest mixes attraction, alchemical hunger, ambition, and perhaps care. Community reviewers praising the larger world, inventive combat, development, and honorable orcs are right. Readers who felt the harem displaced plot are also right. The women have jobs, magic, friendships, and conflicts, but nearly every connection is redirected toward Rob’s household and body. Complexity survives, although the erotic structure keeps trying to consume it. That friction is the novel’s real achievement.

CRITICISM

Rava is the clearest test the book fails to grade severely enough. Her cauldron experiment creates an intimate, possibly permanent soul bond without informed consent. She knows more about the raven tradition, withholds information, and treats the result as a prize to complete sexually. Rob senses her agenda and refuses formal inclusion without Lina and Josie’s approval, yet the scene congratulates him for keeping his pants on while allowing nearly every other act. That is legalism masquerading as a boundary. If family members do not act unilaterally, the issue is whether his partners agreed before an encounter with a prospective employee already joined to him by an unwanted bond. One supplied reviewer called Rava transactional and manipulative; the wording was harsher than mine, but the objection is valid. She values the alchemical opportunity Rob represents. Mixed motives do not make affection false, but demand slower trust. Instead, arousal, magical feedback, and future status hurry past the breach.

Daria and Mursha reveal a wider problem. Rob says deputy work requires neither sex nor forced marriage. Her oath nevertheless binds her until death or dismissal, places his life above hers, requires obedience “in all things,” and offers her body for “all services.” Immediately afterward he kisses and gropes his new subordinate. Daria wants him, but desire does not erase the imbalance between sheriff and divinely bound servant, especially when betrayal carries a curse. Mursha’s case is gentler but revealing. Rob gives her a route from her father’s control, yet it means moving from one male-headed household into another, perhaps marrying a man she admits she does not love so she may become a blacksmith. He uses benevolent patriarchy to rescue women from harsher patriarchy. That may fit Olimero, but it is no complete moral solution. A free woman would not need to join a powerful man’s family before her talent became her own.

The Law of Family deserves more suspicion. “Bonds of family may never be broken” sounds noble when protecting children or forbidding abandonment, but permanence can protect abusers, trap partners, and sanctify parental control. Rob realizes Sativa values the unit over the individual, then accepts this because he loves Lina and wants children. That answer moves me emotionally but fails politically. A law must be judged not only in its happiest home but in the worst household where it operates. Rob has seen fathers bargain with daughters, male entitlement treated as nature, and public office combine work with sexual expectation. He should ask who may leave, who defines betrayal, and whether “unbreakable” preserves people or structure. The novel approaches these questions through Daria and Mursha, then retreats into reassurance. Lina becoming Mistress of the Sheets grants administrative power, yet she schedules access around a male center. That may create harmony among consenting adults; it is not automatically equality.

The progression plot has a parallel weakness: consequences become upgrades. Rob rushes into danger, is buried, suffocates, dies, and returns through the Phoenix Elixir stronger. Later Josie burns him during training until his flesh is destroyed, after which healing produces gains. The death sequence is excellent—the narrowing air, thoughts of Lina and Josie, and Josie’s response when their link disappears give the audiobook horror—but resurrection converts grief into mechanics. A community complaint described Rob losing major fights and receiving forced improvement; reductive, yet it catches the rhythm. If catastrophic errors unlock tiers, recklessness resembles strategy. The criminal plot suffers similarly. The Back Street Boys investigation sprawls through raids, only for a greater organization to destroy that hierarchy and announce the next threat. The bombing aftermath is strong, but procedural resolution is replaced rather than earned. More space goes to negotiating beds than allowing Yonderton to mourn hundreds of dead.

COMPARISON

Compared with Law of Strength, this sequel is emotionally fuller, mechanically inventive, and morally exposed. Book One introduced a lawman preserving Earth ethics where divine rules reward power; Book Two shows affection becoming governance when the sheriff’s home, office, party, and bloodline are one institution. Western elements remain in raids, rackets, gangs, and “protect and serve” instincts, but the novel increasingly resembles a cultivation-family saga interrupted by police work. Compared with conventional harem progression, Burke gives women jobs, magic, friendships, disagreements, and agendas beyond attraction. Compared with serious found-family fiction, however, the erotic economy dominates: nearly every talented unattached woman becomes a possible partner, while culture makes consent convenient for the hero. The sharpest contrast is between kitchen table and oath. At the table, family means speaking, sharing, noticing hurt, and redistributing responsibility. In the oath, service means hierarchy, bodily obligation, and permanence. The novel wants the warmth of the first without dismantling the second.

IMPACT AND EVALUATION

The book affected me most when care continued after action. During the hardest period of caring for my father, love meant doing the next task because opening every emotion could make functioning impossible. Lina sleeping near Rob after healing him, the household keeping watch, and townspeople carrying strangers from fire struck deeper than ownership. When Rob orders an exhausted Lina not to cook and accepts dry rations, the gesture is correct: care must return to the caregiver. I wish the novel stayed there longer. Healing magic makes invisible labor spectacular, yet lets the story reset bodies and return to training or sex. Real caregiving leaves residue—fatigue, numbness, fear of another emergency, and grief arriving after the schedule becomes quiet. “A pack is not measured by how loudly it howls at battle,” Kiba would say, “but by who keeps watch when the wounded sleep.” That is the family law I trust.

Rob’s difficulty speaking love and Mursha’s learned inferiority touched old scars. I know how repetition turns another person’s judgment into an inner voice sounding like one’s own. Mursha has strength, tenderness, gravity magic, and attraction to forge work, yet looks down, speaks as a servant, and assumes wanting a life is dishonorable. Rob recognizes the conditioning, which I appreciated. Yet freedom cannot be granted once by a powerful man and considered complete. She needs time to practice choosing, fail without losing shelter, disagree without fearing rejection, and discover whether service is desire or the safest identity she knows. HowlStrom exists because ordinary language could not hold what I carried. Kiba’s claws became boundaries; ice became numbness preserving rather than erasing feeling; the clan became my refusal to accept that endurance requires isolation. The novel understands hunger for belonging, but only partly understands that a pack must leave every wolf a separate will.

AUDIOBOOK EVALUATION

Rebecca Woods remains the production’s strongest force. Her women are distinct without exaggerated species voices: Lina carries warmth and buried hurt, Josie combines steel with vulnerability, Rava sounds controlled when desire fractures it, Daria has intensity, and Mursha’s low confidence is audible before the prose explains it. Woods makes Josie’s belief that Rob died and Lina’s exhausting healing the resurrection’s emotional center. Daniel Wisniewski gives Rob energy, humor, anger, and momentum, but his delivery leans into heroic certainty, making questionable choices sound more settled than their context deserves. That was my reservation in Law of Strength, and denser monologues make it clearer. A supplied community review reports misreads and repeated partial sentences, suggesting editing problems as much as performance problems; the warning is worth sharing even though the emotional impact survived. At approximately eleven hours and forty-nine minutes, the audiobook stays energetic, but prose and post-production needed a stricter pass.

CONCLUSION

Law of Family earns four Goodreads stars because ambition, action, growth, and warmth outweigh its contradictions, but cannot silence them. It turns cultivation into interdependence, deepens Lina and Josie, gives Daria and Mursha meaningful conflicts, complicates Rava, expands divine intrigue, and makes Yonderton capable of terror and solidarity. Its best action—the burial, Phoenix rebirth, bombing aftermath, and rescue of poisoned Josie—carries physical and emotional force. Its weakest choices treat a pants-on encounter as restraint, place bodily service inside a cursed lifetime oath, use Rob’s household as the route to female freedom, and accept an unbreakable law without examining homes where breaking a bond may be necessary. The book is not mindless wish fulfillment; it recognizes its problems. My frustration comes from watching it raise difficult questions, allow Rob one decent answer, then move toward pleasure before that answer is tested. Good intention is the beginning of ethics, not its completion.

I recommend the audiobook to adults who enjoy explicit harem fantasy, beastkin, cultivation, frontier justice, and dual narration. Begin with Law of Strength, because these commitments depend on what formed there. Listeners sensitive to coercion should know Olimero blends romance with employment, divine law, fertility, and permanent obligation, presenting that mixture more enthusiastically than critically. The novel became personal because family can be the greatest warmth and heaviest duty a person carries. I kept moving when grief made the world frozen, and built Kiba Snowpaw not as invulnerability but as the part guarding the path home. In HowlStrom, the Alpha does not own the Ice Wolf Clan; the Alpha answers for every wolf beside the fire. My final Kiba Snowpaw line is: “Blood may name a family, law may bind it, and winter may test it, but only freely renewed loyalty makes it a pack.” Four stars: powerful, provocative, and more complicated than it understands.

[Cody Hatch]

So the setup here is the protagonist is underpowered compared to many of the people and threats around him. He needs to get stronger faster, and while he is a cultivator, he doesn't understand anything about being a cultivator or how to use it to become stronger.

As a consequence of this, he keeps making arguably dumb decisions, putting himself in a lot of danger, and then somehow surviving due to well...in theory some combination of being a cultivator and blind luck, but really it's just plot armour. Over and over the protagonist gets some notification hinting he needs to do something, ignores it, jumps into danger, should realistically have died, and then doesn't, and somehow comes out stronger and with some new notifications giving him hints he'll ignore.

And I really dislike the "protagonist makes dumb decisions, ends up in danger, survives due to plot armour" trope! Make fewer dumb decisions! The entire premise is "protagonist must get stronger ASAP or die, and has a unique path to get stronger", and then he keeps opting not to focus on this path and hits the inevitable consequences of his actions, and then somehow doesn't have to suffer through them.

Feh. Because other than that, this continues to be a perfectly servicable book. Decent protagonist, decent supporting characters, decent world, decent litrpg system. Nothing particularly unique or rising to greatness, but nothing bad either!

[John]

Another fun read. A bit heavy on emotional content

So another good book in the new series. I certainly enjoy the promise and it's a lot of fun to watch the MC grow. Learning to cultivate without Immanuel must be Challenging. That said pain is a fine teacher it seems. The harem aspect Is slow and rewarding. Though I find the early and continual emotional or bit distracting. But overall they're still plenty of story. This particular book didn't move the story line a lot but allowed Rob to learn some new abilities and train himself more since obviously he is the weakest link so far. It seems that his being a play thing of the gods is getting even more so. I assume by the end everybody(gods) wanna piece of the action(Rob). However with a building full of hot ladies I doubt he'll be complaining. Bring on the next book.

[Charles Daniel]

Rob Case's Olimeran Family Grows

Rob Case came to Olimera to be the Sheriff of a frontier town. He thought he knew what that meant — even if there was magic and races of people who were nothing more than myths on his home world. He soon learns that he knew nothing, but he's learning quickly. He has learned the Law of Strength and now turns his attention to learning what the Law of Family means on his adopted world.

This novel, and the series of which it is a part, fits into the LitRPG, Body Cultivator, Harem, Erotica and Isekai genres; however it may interest readers of the wider Fantasy genre and those who enjoy playing RPGs.

[Steve]

My first impression was that the MC had got over a lot of his Earth hang-ups in the face of overwhelming evidence that he IS IN A DIFFERENT PLACE WITH A DIFFERENT CULTURE. He made some progress, but not enough.

There is some rationale for his reticence to bag all of the unattached women who want him, but with all the bullshit he puts the elf alchemist through, he's lucky to not be finding out what an alchemist scorned is capable of. Not annoying enough for me to not read the next one, but we're getting there.

[Tim Nielsen]

The exciting story continues

In this continuation of the story we learn more about Rob and the women in his life very strong the women are. There's also new criminal elements that are entered as well as challenges that he must overcome. The personalities of everybody are distinct and different and I like the way they interact with each other. There's lots of action fighting and loving and I can't wait to see what happens next in the political maneuvers of both mundane and the gods.

[Jon Svenson]

We're on book 2 now, and I felt the series declined versus book 1. Yes, Rob is still training to get stronger with some very light cultivation going on, but the harem aspects take precedence which wasn't what I was looking for.

On top of that, the action elements decline. Another gang moves into town, taking out the old one, but it's just a little too easy for the sheriff and deputies.

I think this will be my last book in the series. I gave up on harem novels a long time ago (with the exception of Hondo, who still writes decent stories), and I'm not interested in reading them again, especially since they're all variations on the same theme.

4/5* I hoped for better.

[Kevin]

I can't keep a straight face when all these gangs are named after boy bands. Then they drop song names here and there.

I just realised that a lot of the books I've been reading were full of furries.. It really says something that people aren't making lists and putting in all the pro-furry books, so people can avoid. Years ago, it would have been so.

I could do more with the Sheriff thinking to use his abilities first, but he has only been in that new world a few weeks, so it will take time.

I will pick up the sequel.

3/5 Stars

[Jamie Ross]

Fantastic blend of fantasy and cultivation!

Reading the first book in this series was more a curiosity, only to find myself drawn into the unique world David Burke has created.

And this, the second book pulls you further into the chaotic life of Rob as he learns all about cultivation in a world where Magic and Mana makes him the odd one out.

Plots are further developed whilst still keeping you just in the Darke bought that you want to know more!

Looking forward to book 3!

[Philippe]

Convoluted plot

The whole ki/cultivator series of explanation is so much wasted space to me and I generally speed read through this material. The character development is fair, the MC is an idiot in his behaviour at times so the secondary characters save the day by being fairly interesting. This type of etory probably appeals to the younger crowd, but I'm reading to see where the subplots coalesce and figure out the villains. 5 stars for entertainment.

[Daniel T.]

Excellent Series

Rob is improving his stats while gathering an excellent group of strong women around him. His alchemy skills are increasing forming soul bonds with remarkable women. Other forces are gathering trying to make Rob a pawn on their chess board. Book three will be amazing!

[Michael Jackson]

Fantastic

The series just keeps getting better forget the harem and different races etc the story is engrossing and like few others its not about sex with the protagonist then onto the next, at least a large slice of life with good fights and interesting charcters that so few in the genre are good at.

[Alan K]

Good for a book 2

Enjoying the continuing progression of the MC and his battle to stay alive. He is slowly increasing his relationships and the number of women wanting to be his Clerks or Deputies. An enjoyable read if you are interested in a Swords and Magic Progression/Cultivation isekai story with a harem relationship aspect and not fade to black sex scenes.

[Tracy S McCoy]

An awesome second book!!!

This is yet another great story!!! The world building is so good you feel yourself walking the dusty streets with the characters!!! Great adult fantasy fun, A progressive MC and entertaining character interactions!!!!

[Eric Bertone]

A great new installment

Definitely a little slower growth than the first book, but it can't always be 100mph or it would undervalue what is achieved. Like how it has gone and can't wait to see where it goes.

[Marlon]

Great

This is a deep dive into cultivation with an interesting western twist. The humor is perfectly timed, same with the exciting action pieces. I look forward to the rest of this story!

[Martin]

Excellent!

I’m just sad that it’s over and I have to wait almost three months before I get the next book in the series. I’m very curious about what adventures Rob will get into next

[Al Parks]

Badassery!!

Just wanted to say this second book in series had all kinds of greatness. Rob is really advancing in his cultivation skills, and his comfort in his new duties as Sheriff is pretty cool. Can't wait to read Law of Freedom.

[Alan]

The future of Yonderton awaits for a brighter new beginning

The town of Yonderton got a new sheriff he started trying to end the corruption in the town an make the town a peaceful place to raise families an have children as well .

[J Duehring]

Wow

First of your books, second counting episode one that I have read. Bloody marvelous, some editing over sites and disconnected sentences here and there but cracking good tale, waiting for #3. Thanks!!!

[Paul Hefka]

Fun.

I really enjoyed reading this book. It was fun and entertaining. The story and characters were interesting and engaging. I never wanted to stop reading. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. This book is definitely worth reading.

[Beau]

Love this series

One of the best series out there! Lots of action and a few new characters added in. The world to the East is fleshed out a bit as well as other players gunning for Rob. Plus all the gangs are named after boy bands!?!!!?! Hilarious!!! I love it!

[Irizumi]

Great read

Second time reading through this book and have to say that it was even better the second time. Especially when you are reading the books back to back, instead of months later. Looking forward to the next one.

[Carl]

Some of the dialogue and actions of some of the characters seemed a bit off at times to me. Like it almost felt like that's not the way a person would really react. That was a little bit distracting. But the story was fine.

Lena sure is annoying though, not sure why she is MC's #1 girl.

[Bobby Nichols]

Enjoyable!

I like the way the story is developing. Yes, it has the problem most harem lot had, but at least the characters are interesting and developed. I am looking forward to seeing how the characters develop as the series continues.