Jisedai

by Daniel P. Riley

Gabriel is a killer for the mega-corporation that raised him, trained in the ancient arts of Bushido.

Hana was kidnapped, forced into a world of depravity and darkness.

When the two meet by chance on the grimy, rain-soaked streets of a frightening future Harajuku sector, it changes both their lives forever. For honor, Gabriel must now face the group of trained killers and soldiers that he swore loyalty to and bloody his white hare katana to protect the young girl and her strange pet.

Dark Angels and wicked assassins wage war in the ruins beyond the borders of oppressed Tokyo in Jisedai!

134 pages, Paperback

Published February 12, 2022

About the author

This author is also published under Daniel P. Riley.

Reviews

[jen · Rating 4 out of 5]

TW: This book may contain disturbing themes and inclusive of m-rder, sexual exploitation, and g-ry scenes

Reading this book made me feel like I entered a different dimension which is quite exemplary since I felt that way even just by starting with a few pages. I like how the names of the characters added depth to the story and how their names were also inclined with their actions and dialogues.

I liked how Gabriel and Hana's relationship was not explicitly represented in a romantic or sexual way. I think it just fits the entire plot of the book to not have them be connected to each other in a procreative way but rather as companions for each other.

I also felt sad for Michael and how his story with Su Mi has ended before it even started.

The book did not go into much detail about the characters but I liked it that way because it felt easier to read because you don't get tangled up with a lot of other subplots for this story which makes it more enjoyable to read.

Overall, this was a good read even if this is not my go-to genre. The writing style is also very straightforward which is purposive for this type of storyline.

[Amber · Rating 5 out of 5]

Review posted on my blog The Writer's Library.



I expect a lot from the books I read. I have become the type of reader who reads critically as well as for enjoyment and reading critically has led me to often find issues with whatever I consume. Even if I enjoy a story, if I feel a problem has detracted enough from that enjoyment, I start deducting stars from my final rating of the book I’m reading. This is why most of my ratings come out as four stars and not five. This simply means that I enjoyed it, but it didn’t wow me.
But you know what? For once, I’ve found something different, a good different. Because I must admit that I finally enjoyed something enough to say, this is it! I’ve finally found something that I enjoyed so much that I am giving it five stars!
This entire story hooked me from beginning to end!
As per the usual with me, we need to give this a summary before we go into more of me divulging my thoughts. Let’s do it!
Summary
We open in Shinjuku. Gabriel is a samurai with nanotech technology repairing him every time he goes into battle, rendering him an incredibly dangerous opponent who has sworn to work and kill for the Holy Eight. Hana is a young girl whose life has been a nightmare, and she will do anything to get out of the horrible situation she finds herself in. When she is given a chance to escape, she crosses paths with Gabriel, who knows that protecting the young girl will put him in direct conflict with his brothers of the Holy Eight.
Still, something about the young, innocent Hana makes Gabriel want to help her deep down. Will he be able to save her and protect her and himself from the Holy Eight?
Thoughts
This was a different experience for me than usual. Normally, I have major problems with books that deal with one conflict after the other moving at breakneck speed. I don’t have an issue with the action itself, I have an issue with there never being a chance to slow down, breathe, and build character.
But here’s the thing. I think we see who Gabriel is, who Hana is, through the action that does occur. Because Gabriel is always protecting Hana, it is what he has chosen to do. And Hana refuses to leave him and has grown to care about him and worry for him whenever something bad happens to him. There’s one scene in the story where Gabriel needed care from others. Hana never left his side through all of it. We can see that she is scared for him, but her compassion overpowers her fear.
As for Gabriel? There is one fight he gets into where his opponent repeatedly mocks his relationship with Hana. Gabriel, in response, completely goes all out in the fight that follows, showing no mercy. I think that that tells me more about him than I would know if Riley had just come outright and said, “Gabriel had grown to care about Hana.” He didn’t have to. I could see it through what the character did. And that is the biggest plus for me with this book – the way their relationship is shown and how it grows is the heart and soul of the story!
Characters
Gabriel
I admit, I had to warm up to Gabriel. He’s kind of cold in the beginning and a little too eager to jump into a fight. That said, once he and Hana meet, I saw a different side of him that I absolutely loved. Like I mentioned in the previous section, it becomes obvious that he grows to care about someone else.
I think that’s when I really started rooting for him. I also loved the small detail where the old man Hasegawa (more on him in a minute) compares Gabriel to the Archangel in front of Hana. I loved that scene especially, and I’ll talk more about it when I discuss Hasegawa.
I must talk about the Holy Eight before I close this section. I didn’t think about it until the end of the book, but it’s heartbreaking seeing Gabriel’s own brothers go to war with him. I like that Gabriel’s not afraid to stand up and protect Hana, but the fact that it’s against the only family he’s ever known is heartrending. He gives up all he has for this young girl and the impact it has on him is obvious. The fact that he admits that it’s no longer safe for either one of them going forward shows that he knows he’s crossed that line, and he can never go back to what was before.
Hasegawa
I liked Hasegawa a lot. The fact that he was willing to help Hana and Gabriel right off the bat by letting them stay at the old church was very nice, giving them food and allowing them to stay as long as they needed to. The compassion was a breath of fresh air after Gabriel and Hana running into conflict with literally everyone they met, because the Holy Eight had eyes everywhere.
I also really enjoyed that he indirectly helped Gabriel deal with the Holy Eight. Seeing him use his past military experience to protect both Gabriel and Hana without hesitation was amazing, and I loved that – even though he’d only known both a short time – he immediately jumped into action when he saw them in danger!
I mentioned earlier that there was a scene where Hasegawa compared Gabriel to the Archangel Gabriel in front of Hana. This was one of the few moments where the story got to slow down and show them truly bond. We know from the beginning of the story that all the Holy Eight members were given names related to the Archangels, but it was something that Hana was not aware of, so to see Hasegawa teach her something about her protector’s name and the significance behind it was incredibly heartwarming!
Structure
The structure of this story is interesting, and I’m trying to think about how to describe it. Riley opens the story by describing the world briefly, but not long after we’re introduced to Gabriel, he gets into a fight. This sets up his status as a killer, and we start to see hints of what the Holy Eight is and the power they have over Gabriel. All of this creates the tension that will carry the story.
I like that, interspersed between Hana and Gabriel running, we see the setup of what’s behind the Holy Eight. We get a scene with their leader learning about Gabriel and Hana having fled Shinjuku, and it sets up what follows perfectly. I knew right away when I read that scene that something big was coming. It conveyed exactly what it needed to, and because the brothers were always following Gabriel throughout the book, that scene was impossible to forget! Riley basically told us that what Gabriel had feared would happen if Hana stayed with him had already occurred, and the tension went up significantly.
I think the reason I like something like this so much is because often, when there’s a setup with a bigger threat behind a smaller threat, the bigger threat is not seen, or is kept hidden, until the very end. This is used to keep the suspense up, but I hate that setup, because we get no knowledge of who’s being faced and it’s more annoying than suspenseful. Because I saw the Old Man earlier in the book, the very last scene in the story has me curious and concerned. What’s going to happen next? What on earth is he planning?
Writing
I was thinking a lot about how I was going to approach this section. I’m not very good at describing someone’s writing. That said, I do have something to say about it, so bear with me. Because this book is so action-packed, I was actually thinking a bit about my favorite story of all time once I’d finished it, because said story got called out for the violence and people thought its intended audience were young children. Anyway, in this story, the author would approach a fight scene like a sports commentator, highlighting what the enemy is doing wrong and why the main character he’s following was able to get one up over on them.
The way Riley approaches a fight scene is different. He goes by every move that is significant and illustrates the cause of the effect he is aiming for. For example, if someone is crossing weapons with another character, he will describe the pressure coming from one side as one person works to overpower the other and then shows why it did or did not work and what resulted.
Moving on from the action, how he builds each setting is incredibly unique as well. The way he opens the first scene in Shinjuku sticks out to me as a really strong opening. He opens with a simple, striking sentence that introduces Gabriel as what he was before he met Hana, painting him as a dangerous individual. He goes on to paint this world of Shinjuku where no one is safe from the Holy Eight and why. It’s beautiful and sets up tension regarding the group. Even before we see them, they’re frightening and intimidating!
Conclusion
In the end, I really, really enjoyed this. It was gripping all the way through, and I loved every second of it! The characters, the story, the stakes, all of it stuck with me and made me care about what was happening. I can’t think of a single thing to criticize. I think the only thing I will say is that I hope Riley won’t leave this as a standalone. The last scene in the book hinted at something more, something bigger going on, and I hope it will be explored down the road.
So, I usually end my reviews with whom I would recommend what I’m reviewing to. I think this story would fit an audience that likes a story full of action, but also has heart to it that is sweet and leaves the reader with a message of hope despite bad situations that occur. At the heart of it, this is a story about a relationship between a young girl and her protector, and that’s where the heart of it is. I can’t recommend it enough!

[S.S. · Rating 5 out of 5]

Jisedai was a great find! It’s short, intense and filled with imagination. The author skilfully plotted the descriptions of the surroundings in, making the urban settings come to live with characters. It was easy to dive into this world and experience both neon lights and the darkness of the streets. Fast-paced and action driven plot in the dystopian settings makes this book a perfect read for those looking for something different to read, however I would only recommend it for an older/adult audience because of a violence.

[Chris Maddix · Rating 4 out of 5]

The year is 2447, the setting is Tokyo. Wars and a healthy dose of anarchy have changed things. The Suzakushin organization, led by someone commonly referred to as Old Man, has trained a group of samurai/style killers, called the Holy 8 (named after Christian archangels). We are introduced to one of these killers, among the youngest of the group, named Gabriel, who is carrying out a targeted assassination. Gabriel quickly and easily dispatches his victim, as well as two others, but their armed guard, a man named Kuryo, announces that he will kill Gabriel. Gabriel survives, aided by a body augmentation he has called nanites, which are able to repair a deadly injury. Meanwhile, a young lady named Hana escapes from a brothel, encumbered by a guinea pig which she eventually names Heaven. Gabriel's samurai training instinct kicks in and he protects Hana from her pursuers. He decides to bring her to his place, but while accompanying her, Gabriel feels a strange emotion - compassion. He is aware that befriending this girl will have deadly consequences, but step by step he reconciles himself with that. This is behavior that the Old Man cannot tolerate. He unleashes assassins to kill Hana, and, if Gabriel will not permit that to happen, to kill Gabriel as well. Gabriel elects to leave the city and seek refuge in a church. Will Gabriel and Hana survive? Can Gabriel overcome his attachment to fellow warriors and remain loyal to Hana? How does an old man named Hasegawa assist? It's worth a look to find out.

Jisedai, by Daniel Riley, is a short, action packed, imaginative book. I can't be sure where Mr. Riley will go next with Gabriel and Hana, but this could easily evolve into a series.

[S. Pierzchala · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a short but intense read. There's a lot of violence, but the fight scenes are written in an engaging, artistic manner that reminded me a bit of the John Wick movies.

The dysptopian urban setting (a decayed future Japan) comes to life with a few deft strokes, but what really drew me in was the relationship between the nano-enhanced hero, the child he rescues, and the old man who gets caught up in their fight for survival.

These three characters form the memorable core of a quirky little action tale that I hope is the first of new series.

[Sarah Banks · Rating 5 out of 5]

Daniel P. Riley’s Jisedai is a rare example of genre fiction that negotiates its cyberpunk inheritance with surprising ethical and cultural nuance. At a glance, the narrative is a tightly-woven tale of high-stakes action, but closer reading reveals a richly hybridized world where futuristic Tokyo, Bushido traditions, and Christian spiritual motifs converge. This book is an inquiry into the legacies of violence and the possibility of moral rebirth in a world fragmented by corporate sovereignty.

From the outset, Jisedai immerses the reader in a reimagined Harajuku, transformed from a youth cultural hub into a dystopian sector controlled by mega-corporations and militarized factions. This choice of setting is symbolic of cyberpunk aesthetics; a future where technology amplifies inequality and where human identity is negotiated in an increasingly mechanized society. But what differentiates Riley’s depiction is its infusion of tradition: Gabriel, the protagonist, is a killer raised on Bushido, the ancient Japanese code of the samurai. The tension between Gabriel’s mechanized present and his spiritual past is the text’s most resonant conflict.

Gabriel functions as a narrative paradox. On one hand, he is a symbol of dehumanization: trained, conditioned, and emotionally detached. On the other, he becomes the embodiment of redemption when he breaks his ties with his corporate handlers to protect Hana, a young girl subjected to unspeakable exploitation. Their bond is portrayed with tenderness and restraint, allowing the reader to interpret their relationship not in romantic terms but as a recovery of humanity through shared vulnerability. Hana is not merely a plot device; she is the story’s emotional core. Her innocence, resilience, and quiet strength offer a counterpoint to the relentless brutality of the world around her.

Thematically, the story is steeped in dualities; light versus darkness, loyalty versus betrayal, tradition versus modernity. These themes are not just metaphysical, but sociopolitical. Riley’s Tokyo is under the control of foreign conglomerates and the enigmatic “Holy Eight,” a term that evokes both religious and authoritarian connotations. Through these entities, Reilly explores the commodification of faith and the exploitation of belief systems in post-capitalist societies.

One of the novel’s most compelling figures is Michael, a morally ambiguous antagonist who reflects the tragic cost of unwavering loyalty. His confrontation with Gabriel is not merely physical but ideologically loaded; two men trapped in systems that demand the sacrifice of personal morality for institutional obedience. This is the kind of subtle world-building that lends Jisedai a gravitas often absent in short speculative fiction.

Riley’s prose is lean, cinematic, and evocative without excess. The combat scenes are choreographed with clarity, and the emotional beats; especially the subtle gestures between Gabriel and Hana are handled with restraint. The decision to keep the narrative short yet emotionally dense allows for a tight reading experience that still invites reflection.

While some critics may wish for greater length or more backstory, Jisedai’s strength lies in its focused delivery. The novel does not over-explain; it trusts the reader to infer, feel, and question. The fusion of Japanese cultural symbols, Christian allegory, and speculative futurism results in a text that feels at once familiar and original.

In sum, Jisedai is not simply a fast-paced cyberpunk story; it is a meditation on identity, memory, and the fragile possibility of ethical resistance in an era of moral ambiguity. A standout debut that merits serious critical attention.

[Malvin Kosy · Rating 5 out of 5]

Jisedai

In the pulsating world of "Jisedai," Daniel P. Reilly presents a masterful blend of cinematic action and emotional depth, effectively avoiding the peril of self-parody that often plague the genre. The narrative is short but intense, gripping readers from the very first page.

Reilly's storytelling strengths are evident in the way he constructs action sequences that feel both grand and personal. The emotional investment is quick and substantial, thanks to the strong motivations of Gabriel and Hanna. Gabriel, the stoic warrior, and Hanna, the empathetic survivor, provide a dynamic duo whose contrasting personalities enhance the story's emotional resonance.

The antagonists, drawn from foreign conglomerates and the Holy Eight, add a layer of complexity and darkness to the narrative. This unique world-building, coupled with Reilly's commendable prose and grammar, creates an immersive experience. Despite minor structural issues, such as uneven page and paragraph spacing, the overall presentation remains strong.

The fusion of sci-fi elements with Christian themes set against a future Japan backdrop is a standout aspect of "Jisedai." This combination results in a rich and intriguing setting that promises much for future installments. Reilly's vivid imagery and intense action sequences, alongside the exploration of faith and futuristic dystopia, make "Jisedai" a thrilling and thought-provoking read.

Highly recommended for fans of action-packed sci-fi adventures, "Jisedai" is a captivating start to what promises to be an exceptional series.

[Ethan Campbell · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Jisedai" by Daniel P. Reilly is a fast-paced cyberpunk thriller that keeps readers on the edge of their seats. The story is concise yet impactful, delivering a high-octane experience from start to finish. Reilly's ability to blend cinematic action with quick emotional engagement is remarkable.

Gabriel and Hanna, the central characters, might appear one-dimensional at first glance, but their backstories and motivations provide a solid foundation for future development. Gabriel's stoicism and Hanna's vulnerability create a compelling dynamic that draws readers into their journey. The antagonists, particularly those from the Holy Eight and foreign conglomerates, add a sinister edge to the narrative, enriching the world-building.

Reilly's prose is clear and effective, with only minor grammatical errors that do not detract from the overall reading experience. The uneven spacing of pages and paragraphs is a small distraction, but it does not overshadow the story's strengths.

The integration of sci-fi elements with Christian themes in a futuristic Japanese setting is unique and engaging. This fusion creates a distinctive atmosphere that sets "Jisedai" apart from typical sci-fi fare. Reilly's vivid descriptions and intense action sequences make for a thrilling read that leaves readers eager for the next installment.

For those who enjoy action-packed adventures with a touch of depth, "Jisedai" is a must-read. Its combination of fast-paced storytelling and rich thematic content promises an exciting and memorable journey.

[Abigail Bassey · Rating 5 out of 5]

Daniel P. Reilly's "Jisedai" stands out in the crowded field of sci-fi with its unique blend of futuristic action and spiritual themes. The narrative is short but delivers a powerful punch, captivating readers with its vivid imagery and intense pace.

The characters, Gabriel and Hanna, provide a strong emotional core to the story. Gabriel's stoic demeanor and Hanna's empathetic nature create a balanced and engaging dynamic. While they may seem one-dimensional initially, their backstories hint at deeper layers waiting to be explored in future installments. The antagonists from the Holy Eight and foreign conglomerates add a dark, foreboding element to the plot, enhancing the story's tension.

Reilly's prose is polished, with a few minor grammatical errors that do not detract from the overall quality. The uneven page and paragraph spacing is a minor issue, occasionally disrupting the flow but not significantly impacting the reading experience.

The backdrop of a future Japan infused with Christian imagery and cyberpunk elements is brilliantly executed. This setting provides a fresh and intriguing environment that adds depth to the narrative. Reilly's skillful blending of these diverse elements results in a compelling and thought-provoking story.

"Jisedai" is a highly recommended read for those seeking a fast-paced, action-packed adventure with a unique thematic twist. Its combination of sci-fi action and spiritual exploration promises a memorable and engaging experience.

[Victoria Lynn · Rating 5 out of 5]

**Jisedai** is an intriguing exploration of a dystopian Tokyo, where the protagonist, a corporate assassin, embarks on a journey filled with danger and self-discovery. The book stands out for its meticulously described fight scenes and the author’s impressive grasp of Japanese culture and weaponry. These elements create an authentic and immersive experience for the reader. With **Jisedai**, the author hits the ground running, plunging readers into a world of future samurai intrigue and violence. The swift pace of the story was exactly what I was looking for, keeping me engaged from start to finish. While a more drawn-out version could have provided additional depth, the current format works well for those seeking an immediate thrill.

The brawl battles are particularly well-executed, showcasing the author’s ability to craft detailed and intense combat scenes. The hero’s journey is driven by his need to protect his surrogate daughter, a motive that gradually brings out his humanity. This shift from a detached, almost robotic killer to a more emotionally aware individual adds a significant layer to the story.

Jisedai is a fantastic action narrative about individuals overcoming their brokenness and becoming stronger together. The character development, while somewhat brief, is impactful and adds to the story’s overall appeal. The blend of action and emotional depth makes this a must-read, leaving readers eager for more.

[Delightsome Robinson · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Jisedai" by Daniel P. Riley is an engaging entry into the sci-fi genre, offering a mix of action, emotion, and thematic depth. The narrative is compact yet effective, pulling readers into its fast-paced world from the outset.

The main characters, Gabriel and Hanna, while initially appearing one-dimensional, have strong motivations that ground them emotionally. Gabriel's stoic toughness and Hanna's empathetic vulnerability create a dynamic duo with potential for significant growth in future installments. The antagonists, particularly those from the Holy Eight and foreign conglomerates, add a dark, intriguing layer to the story's world-building.

Reilly's prose is commendable, though minor grammatical errors and uneven page spacing slightly mar the reading experience. These structural issues, however, do not overshadow the story's strengths.

The fusion of sci-fi and Christian themes set against a futuristic Japan is a standout aspect of "Jisedai." This unique combination creates a rich, immersive setting that enhances the narrative's appeal. Reilly's vivid descriptions and intense action sequences keep readers engaged, while the thematic depth adds an extra layer of intrigue.

Overall, "Jisedai" is a promising start to a new series. Its blend of action, emotion, and unique thematic elements make it a captivating read. With some refinement in structural presentation, it has the potential to become a standout in the sci-fi genre.

[Kieran Stott · Rating 4 out of 5]

Jisedai is a world at the mercy of powerful corporations, waging an underground war while maintaining a hold over the many unsuspecting people that live their lives in what remains of a fallen Tokyo. Our protagonist is Gabriel but that name is more of a title than anything else. Gabriel serves a single-minded purpose. He is one of Suzakushin’s Holy Eight and one night while on a job he happens to run into a girl fleeing captivity. In an act that even he doesn’t fully comprehend the reasoning of until much later, he takes her in and in doing so sets himself against the people that see him as nothing more than a living weapon.

All in all, Jisedai is a fun read though probably not for those who have a dislike for gruesome violence. Gabriel does not pull his punches but neither does his brothers. The world is immersive but doesn’t distract from the stakes and Gabriel’s struggle to protect Hana as the might of Suzukushin comes down upon him. I would recommend this book to those who like cyberpunk and more action-focused stories.

For a more detailed review with some spoilers, you can find a slightly more in-depth look at the story here

[Michael Munoz · Rating 5 out of 5]

In "Jisedai" by Daniel Riley, the dystopian future of Tokyo serves as a haunting backdrop to Gabriel's journey from cold-blooded assassin to reluctant protector. As a member of Suzakushin's Holy Eight, Gabriel is a finely honed weapon in a world where corporations hold sway over every facet of life. When he crosses paths with Hana, a symbol of innocence amidst the chaos, Gabriel's rigid worldview begins to unravel.

Riley crafts a narrative that blends cyberpunk elements with profound moral introspection. Gabriel's internal struggle between duty and compassion drives the story forward, drawing readers into a gripping exploration of identity and redemption. The world-building is rich and immersive, offering a chilling glimpse into a future where humanity is commodified and violence lurks around every corner.

"Jisedai" is not for the faint of heart; Riley doesn't shy away from depicting the brutal realities of Gabriel's existence. Yet amidst the bloodshed and betrayals, there's a poignant message about the power of empathy and the resilience of the human spirit. Fans of gritty, action-packed tales with complex characters and thought-provoking themes will find "Jisedai" a captivating read that lingers in the mind long after the final page.

[Ema Raka · Rating 5 out of 5]

Daniel Riley's "Jisedai" dives headfirst into a futuristic Tokyo where corporate power reigns supreme and violence is currency. Gabriel, a lethal operative of Suzakushin's Holy Eight, embodies the cold efficiency of his organization until a chance encounter with Hana, a fugitive seeking refuge, shatters his detachment.

The novel pulsates with relentless action and a cyberpunk aesthetic that enhances its gritty atmosphere. Riley deftly explores Gabriel's transformation from enforcer to protector, navigating moral ambiguities and existential dilemmas with skillful prose. As Gabriel's bond with Hana deepens amidst the chaos, Riley weaves a narrative that is both heart-pounding and introspective.

"Jisedai" is a gripping read for fans of cyberpunk and dystopian fiction, offering a visceral exploration of loyalty, redemption, and the price of defiance in a world where survival demands more than just skill—it demands humanity. Riley's ability to blend high-octane action with profound character development makes "Jisedai" a standout in its genre, promising readers an exhilarating journey through a dark and dangerous future.

[Sue Jackson · Rating 5 out of 5]

Jisedai offers an action-packed glimpse into a future where corporate assassins operate in a bustling Tokyo. The protagonist’s journey, disrupted by an unexpected companion, takes readers on a rollercoaster of action, self-discovery, and heartwarming moments. The author’s proficiency in describing fight scenes and Japanese culture stands out, making the book a delightful read for fans of samurai and action-packed stories.

This story remains one of my favorites due to its exhilarating action sequences and cultural richness. The author’s knowledge of Japanese weaponry is evident in the detailed and realistic fight scenes. These elements create an engaging and immersive experience, even if the characters are somewhat underdeveloped.

In summary, Jisedai is a great quick read that could have been truly amazing with more character development. The promise of a sequel gives hope that the characters’ stories will be further explored. Until then, fans can delve into the author’s other works to satisfy their appetite for more of this exciting world.

[Joy Adim · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Jisedai" by Daniel P. Reilly is a high-octane and pulse-pounding thrill ride through a dystopian Tokyo where corporations hold absolute power and danger lurks around every corner. The story centers on Gabriel, a formidable member of the Holy Eight, whose encounter with Hana, a young fugitive, sets off a chain of events that challenges his allegiance and humanity.

Reilly's writing is crisp and immersive, plunging readers into a world where action unfolds with cinematic intensity. Gabriel's transformation from a stoic assassin to a protector driven by compassion adds depth to the narrative, while the futuristic elements and moral dilemmas provide ample food for thought.

"Jisedai" excels in blending heart-pounding action with poignant moments of introspection, making it a compelling read for fans of cyberpunk and dystopian fiction alike. With its well-crafted characters and intricate world-building, Reilly delivers a gripping tale that leaves readers eagerly anticipating what comes next in this promising series.

[Hanson · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Jisedai" offers an intense and swift journey through a cyberpunk world rife with corporate warfare and nano-tech assassins. Gabriel, who is enhanced and reclusive, disrupts his life to rescue a girl from the clutches of slavery, setting off a chain of high-octane events. This book offers a concise yet powerful story, skillfully avoiding self-parody. The characters are authentically developed, with Michael's actions leaving a lasting impression. This book is a solid, enjoyable read and well worth all your time and money.
The narrative's action-movie pacing ensures continuous thrills but occasionally constrains character exploration. Still, the novel shines with its vibrant characters and rich Neo-Asian setting. Perfect for readers seeking a quick, morally driven action thriller with anime and Jack reacher vibes, "Jisedai" is an engaging and exciting read. I give this book a 5 out of 5 star rating.

[Eunice Mirky · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Jisedai" is a brisk, action-packed novel set in a future where mega-corporations rule and assassins wield advanced nano-technology. Gabriel, an augmented loner, breaks his solitary existence to save a girl escaping slavery, unleashing a torrent of action. The book's pacing mirrors an action film, providing non-stop excitement but occasionally limiting character depth. "Jisedai" may be short, but it is undeniably intense and avoids self-parody with its believable characters. Michael, in particular, steals the show through his well-drawn actions. Overall, this book is a solid, impactful read and well worth the cover price. "Jisedai" captivates with its compelling characters and meticulously detailed japanese setting. For lovers of fast-paced, anime-influenced thrillers with strong moral themes, this novel delivers an electrifying experience.

[gizelle ♡ · Rating 5 out of 5]

One thing that surprised me about this novel is that this was rather grotesque, with vivid descriptions of blood, gore, and murder. Definitely not for the faint of heart. The book cover is interesting and with a striking word building. The story is set in the Japan, year 2447.


In the first chapters we meet Gabriel, an assassin with his White Hare sword, and Hana, a pigtailed girl who's a victim of Japan's red light district. Modern and traditional Japanese culture were woven seamlessly into a thrilling fantasy. This is a story of hope and freedom between a child and one of the best assassins who's part of the Holy Eight of the Suzakushin. This is a short read, but expect to be swept away by the chapters.

[Elina · Rating 4 out of 5]

What a wild ride that was! For only being a hundred pages, Jisedai really packs an emotional punch, and leaves you on the edge of your seat the whole time. I loved the world-building in this book, the intricate descriptions made me feel like I was actually there in this futuristic dystopian version of Tokyo. I also liked that the more futuristic scientific aspects of the society were explained in a way that I was able to understand, and didn’t feel like one big massive info dump. Gabriel and Hana’s respective emotional journeys that make them confront their internal turmoil and the turmoil around them was my favorite part of the book. They are so different in personality, but ultimately seek the same thing: freedom and someone to anchor them. Overall, a great and imaginative read!

[Kaitlyn Webster · Rating 5 out of 5]

What surprised me most about Jisedai was how emotionally invested I became in such a short span. Gabriel’s arc; from a man defined by violence to someone rediscovering purpose through protecting Hana is beautifully handled, and their bond feels authentic despite the chaos around them. The action sequences are a highlight, choreographed with a precision that makes every clash of blades leap off the page. Riley weaves in subtle Christian undertones that enrich Gabriel’s redemption without overwhelming the story, which I appreciated. My main critique is that the world, especially the shadowy Holy Eight, feels underexplored, I wanted more history, more context. Even so, this is a gripping, soulful tale that punches above its weight. Great work by the author. Big ups to you!

[Lauren Anderson · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Jisedai" is an exhilarating, action-filled story set in a dystopian future where mega-corporations employ advanced assassins. Gabriel, enhanced with cutting-edge nano-tech, breaks his solitary code to save a young girl from slavery, igniting a fast-paced adventure. The novel’s breakneck speed, reminiscent of a high-energy action film, ensures continuous excitement but sometimes compresses character development. Nonetheless, the engaging characters and meticulously crafted Neo-Asian setting make for an enjoyable read. Those looking for a quick, action-heavy cyberpunk thriller with a moral backbone will find "Jisedai" to be a compelling choice.

[Cobham · Rating 5 out of 5]

Jisedai" is a short, adrenaline-fueled read set in a dystopian world dominated by corporate assassins. Gabriel, enhanced with nano-tech, steps out of his isolated life to rescue a girl from slavery, triggering a series of intense action sequences. The narrative's rapid pace is akin to an action movie, ensuring constant thrills but sometimes at the expense of character depth. Nonetheless, the book excels in creating an engaging Neo-Asian setting and a cast of compelling characters. Fans of anime-inspired, action-heavy stories with strong ethical undertones will find "Jisedai" a highly entertaining read.

[Shawn Reuter · Rating 5 out of 5]

I thoroughly enjoyed reading Jisedai 1 The Angel's War. The way Riley bounces around through different characters minds is seamless. He always describes things from a character's point of view that will make the most impact to the reader.

I love the way the author seamlessly goes from the memory of the creature to a childhood memory. Then the naming of the creature triggers another memory. Integrating memories from the past in this way is great so we learn more about the character Gabriel.

Seeing different perspectives was a breath of fresh air, not that the main character was dull by any means but each perspective builds on the first one, building out the worldbuilding and story to a new level.

If you enjoy well thought out battle scenes and following an emotional journey with a girl, her furry creature and a samurai. Then Jisedai is for you.

[Izzy | _bookstage_ · Rating 4 out of 5]

Definitely a quick and interesting read for those days when you don't have much time to read.

I sincerely recommend it, it is also a great book for those who are starting to read in another language, in this case in English.

The characters are quite curious and although in a short time they have a good development.

I think it's the perfect book for anyone who likes action and Japanese culture, and I even remembered some anime like Naruto while reading it!!

So yeah, read it, I think you'll like it if it's your genre!!

[Milton Lane · Rating 5 out of 5]

Like others have said, the book is short but intense. There is a chance for stories like this to fall into self parody but this book doesn't do so. The characters are well fleshed out and believable. For me the standout was Michael who's characterization through his actions stole the scenes he was in.

Overall a solid read and well worth the cover price.

[Christian Magrum · Rating 5 out of 5]

Jisedai Review
A Story of Courage and Liberation


Cinematic action packed storytelling at its finest. short, punchy, and almost ready, made to be turned into film. Daniel P Reilly has succinctly delivered. An emotionally focused story with more cool factor than I ever expected. Tropes that have been made boring by overuse and excessive explanation are used to tremendous effect here. This story makes a strong introduction and ends suddenly leaving me wanting more.

Strong points
Great cinematic action
Quick emotional investment
Sharp focused storytelling

Weak points
Emotionally underdeveloped MC
Unknown physical limits

Story
The story is simple at first which serves whole heartedly to engage you in the action allowing the simple strong motivations of the main characters to emotionally ground you throughout this fast paced narrative. It has sufficient down time that the action doesn’t overwhelm the reader. I hope for and anticipate deepening of certain relationships and would love to learn more about the world.

Characters
Gabriel and Hanna on their own could be found lacking as the sole MC in their own book, but I feel that was the foundation of this story. My hope is that in the future that each character will be explored more individually and grow together.

Gabriel is the stoic BA character done right. It becomes apparent fairly early on that he is much deeper character then he at first appears when he gives up the only life he has ever known to take care of a complete stranger.

Hanna is very young and still is an empathetic good person despite her horrible abusive early life. She has shown beautiful development in a very short page count.

The baddies in this story are formidable and unique both from foreign conglomerates and from the Holy eight. Of these Michael stands out the most and is easily the most tragic amongst the antagonists. He is a good man forced into conflict with our MCs by his lifelong duty to his master.
Mr. Hasegawa was a character I likely wouldn’t have considered if I were writing this story myself. Daniel has created something really special with his character. Here really helped solidify the themes of found family in the context of the story.

Prose/grammar
The language is well thought out, not beyond your average reader but not simple either. It immerses you in the world and makes you feel like you’re there with the characters. very effective storytelling as a consequence. Only one spelling mistake that I could find and overall tremendous grammar and word usage.


Personal taste
Well, I have never been there. I have been fascinated with the country of Japan for a long time. Jisedai is the epitome of swordplay and action done properly. Combining sci-fi elements with heavy Christian themes of belief. The story delivers something really special, and I am beyond excited for the sequel.


Overal score
With my scoring system, I use a 10 points system based on my taste, and the overall quality of the book with five out of 10 to being a true average so eight book below that will be slightly below average a two or three is pretty bad day one I won’t even bother posting about. So, based off of the story quality how it affected me the overall quality of the writing I give Jisedai book one a 8.3 with tremendous hope for the future of this story
8.3
Thank you Daniel for writing this wonderful book