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Cynster #9
On a Wicked Dawn
Amelia Cynster hears these words from the handsome, enigmatic, sixth Viscount Calverton and is stunned. It's near dawn and she's risked scandal by lying in wait for him just outside his London house. But he a agrees to her outrageous marriage proposal -- just prior to passing out at her feet. Amelia's torn between astounded relief and indignant affront, then decides she doesn't care. She has always loved him -- no other man will do -- and, frankly, she's tired of waiting.Sometimes a young lady needs to take matters into her own hands.But matters of the heart are never that simple. The first hitch in Amelia's plans comes when he refuses to agree to a hasty wedding -- insists on properly wooing her... in public and private. Soon, she longs for those moments away from the watchful gaze of the ton , in which she can learn all about seduction from a master. But unbeknown known to Amelia, he has a very good reason for wooing her. Every wicked gentleman has his price.
448 pages, Paperback
First published April 28, 2002
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Stephanie Laurens
209 books5,572 followersStephanie Laurens was born in Sri Lanka, which was at the time the British colony of Ceylon. When she was 5, her family moved to Melbourne, Australia, where she was raised. After continuing through school and earning a Ph.D. in Biochemistry in Australia, Stephanie and her husband moved to Great Britain, taking one of the last true overland journeys from Katmandu to London.
Once in London, Stephanie and her husband both began work as research scientists in Kent. They lived in an area surrounded by history. Their own cottage was built in the 16th century, while next door were the protected ruins of an early Roman villa, and nearby was a 14th century castle.
After four years in England, Stephanie and her husband returned to Australia, where she continued to work in cancer research, eventually heading her own research laboratory. One evening Stephanie realized that she did not have any more of her favorite romance novels to read. After years of thinking about writing her own novel, during nights and weekends for the next several months, she began crafting her own story. That manuscript, Tangled Reins, was the first of her books to be published. After achieving a level of success with her novels, Stephanie "retired" from scientific research and became a full-time novelist. Her novels are primarily historical romances set in the Regency time period.
Stephanie and her husband live on peaceful acreage on the outskirts of Melbourne. If she isn't writing, she's reading, and if she's not reading, she's tending her garden.
Once in London, Stephanie and her husband both began work as research scientists in Kent. They lived in an area surrounded by history. Their own cottage was built in the 16th century, while next door were the protected ruins of an early Roman villa, and nearby was a 14th century castle.
After four years in England, Stephanie and her husband returned to Australia, where she continued to work in cancer research, eventually heading her own research laboratory. One evening Stephanie realized that she did not have any more of her favorite romance novels to read. After years of thinking about writing her own novel, during nights and weekends for the next several months, she began crafting her own story. That manuscript, Tangled Reins, was the first of her books to be published. After achieving a level of success with her novels, Stephanie "retired" from scientific research and became a full-time novelist. Her novels are primarily historical romances set in the Regency time period.
Stephanie and her husband live on peaceful acreage on the outskirts of Melbourne. If she isn't writing, she's reading, and if she's not reading, she's tending her garden.
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May 6, 2022
On a Wicked Dawn
2 Stars
Determined to marry the only man she has ever loved, Amelia Cynster finally works up the courage to propose to Luc Ashford under the pretense of a marriage of convenience. Astonished when he agrees, Amelia's preference is for an immediate wedding, but Luc has other ideas and insists on wooing his betrothed in public and in private.
Similar to the previous book about Amelia's twin, On a Wicked Dawn begins well, but ultimately falls apart mainly due to the fact that there is no actual plot.
The majority of the storyline focuses on Luc's repetitious, ridiculous and tedious internal angst. What is it with Laurens' heroes and their reluctance to admit loving their wives because they fear being manipulated? They really need to get over themselves!
In addition, the keeping secret trope is one of the more absurd in the genre. Luc refuses to tell Amelia the truth about his financial circumstances and leaves her to believe he is a pauper. He fears telling her he's as rich as Croesus and didn't marry her for her money. Seriously?!
The minor mystery is woefully underdeveloped and the culprit is obvious from the first moment. Moreover, the sex scenes are repetitive and mechanical and lose their charm very quickly. In fact, this is one big purple prose sex fest :(
All in all, a very disappointing installment and I can only hope that the next one is better.
2 Stars
Determined to marry the only man she has ever loved, Amelia Cynster finally works up the courage to propose to Luc Ashford under the pretense of a marriage of convenience. Astonished when he agrees, Amelia's preference is for an immediate wedding, but Luc has other ideas and insists on wooing his betrothed in public and in private.
Similar to the previous book about Amelia's twin, On a Wicked Dawn begins well, but ultimately falls apart mainly due to the fact that there is no actual plot.
The majority of the storyline focuses on Luc's repetitious, ridiculous and tedious internal angst. What is it with Laurens' heroes and their reluctance to admit loving their wives because they fear being manipulated? They really need to get over themselves!
In addition, the keeping secret trope is one of the more absurd in the genre. Luc refuses to tell Amelia the truth about his financial circumstances and leaves her to believe he is a pauper. He fears telling her he's as rich as Croesus and didn't marry her for her money. Seriously?!
The minor mystery is woefully underdeveloped and the culprit is obvious from the first moment. Moreover, the sex scenes are repetitive and mechanical and lose their charm very quickly. In fact, this is one big purple prose sex fest :(
All in all, a very disappointing installment and I can only hope that the next one is better.
September 24, 2012
So, so awful. After the amazingness of On a Wild Night, this was so incredibly bad. I'm not sure who I hated more, Luc or Amelia.
Amelia was so completely opposite of her sister that I found it hard to believe they were twins, and that she was the same person that was in the previous book. And Luc was a detestable "hero". He was awful to Amelia throughout most of the book. I would honestly consider some of his behavior towards her emotionally abusive. And it killed me every time she allowed it to happen.
The "mystery" thrown into this one felt the most disjointed of all the Cynster books to date and completely seemed like something the author threw in after the fact. It most definitely did not add anything to the story. The resolution of one of the main conflicts of the book occurred within the span of a few paragraphs. "Oh, I've lied to you this whole time, but now you will not only forgive me but make it seem as though it was all your fault." "Oh yes my love, it has to be my fault, after all you're so perfect and I'm but a lowly female." "Good, now get naked and let me have more sex with you."
The sex was definitely plentiful, but so, so, boring. No matter what horrible thing Luc said to her or how awful he made her feel about things, all it took was one stab of his tongue into her cavernous honeypot of a mouth and she opened her legs to him and all was forgiven. I've had some good sex in my life, but no man would ever get away with treating me the way he treats her by simply giving me an orgasm or two.
I skimmed a good 50% of this book and from reading other reviews, I'm apparently not missing anything.
Amelia was so completely opposite of her sister that I found it hard to believe they were twins, and that she was the same person that was in the previous book. And Luc was a detestable "hero". He was awful to Amelia throughout most of the book. I would honestly consider some of his behavior towards her emotionally abusive. And it killed me every time she allowed it to happen.
The "mystery" thrown into this one felt the most disjointed of all the Cynster books to date and completely seemed like something the author threw in after the fact. It most definitely did not add anything to the story. The resolution of one of the main conflicts of the book occurred within the span of a few paragraphs. "Oh, I've lied to you this whole time, but now you will not only forgive me but make it seem as though it was all your fault." "Oh yes my love, it has to be my fault, after all you're so perfect and I'm but a lowly female." "Good, now get naked and let me have more sex with you."
The sex was definitely plentiful, but so, so, boring. No matter what horrible thing Luc said to her or how awful he made her feel about things, all it took was one stab of his tongue into her cavernous honeypot of a mouth and she opened her legs to him and all was forgiven. I've had some good sex in my life, but no man would ever get away with treating me the way he treats her by simply giving me an orgasm or two.
I skimmed a good 50% of this book and from reading other reviews, I'm apparently not missing anything.
November 26, 2018
Amelia Cynster has a plan to make Lucien Ashford her husband. I can only hope that she will be as manipulative as her twin Amanda.
This story had great potential but lacked something that I can't place my finger on. The sex was hot and the hero was very dominant and possessive without all the BDSM. There was a bit of angst, but no spice. I was more interested in the mystery of the thief than Lucien's confession of love.
Don't be fooled by the 3 star rating. There were wonderful elements thought this book and I loved all the cameos from previous couples. The Cynters have been wonderfully entertaining and this loving family Stephanie Laurens created ranks as one of my favorites.
This story had great potential but lacked something that I can't place my finger on. The sex was hot and the hero was very dominant and possessive without all the BDSM. There was a bit of angst, but no spice. I was more interested in the mystery of the thief than Lucien's confession of love.
Don't be fooled by the 3 star rating. There were wonderful elements thought this book and I loved all the cameos from previous couples. The Cynters have been wonderfully entertaining and this loving family Stephanie Laurens created ranks as one of my favorites.
October 19, 2019
Stephanie Laurens is back with the next instalment in the Cynster series, and it’s a good one!
In book number 9 we get to know the other half of the twin set, Amelia. Having already learnt Amanda’s story in book 8, Amelia comes to the forefront. This is a story about love, trust and honesty. Amelia is a lovely well rounded character who’s journey into seduction and being seduced by the handsomely masculine Luc is a pleasantly succulent read.
One thing that stands out in this book is that you get to see the characters after they (this really shouldn’t be a spoiler) get married. Generally in this series the marriage is the end, the story is how they get to that point, mostly ending when the male realises he’s in love. However this story is different, we get the story of adjusting into marriage and it really is a welcoming change. There is of course a little bit of mystery sprinkled throughout, but it is not overwhelming and does not takes away the essence of the romance. The trouble with writing a romance series is that by the ninth book it can all get a bit samey. This does not seem to be the case with these pesky Cynsters, Laurens continually brings her stories to the table and I am loving each one more than the last.
This novel is romance in the finest form, the whole series is a masterpiece of regency fluffy love. Each book in the series has a game of lust running throughout, you know what will happen in the end, marriage, however it is the journey Laurens takes you on to get there. The only downfall of this book was the dishonesty section, I was expecting a more explosive passionate argument, but it was not to be. I suppose that regency vibe keeps those ladies in check!
Overall it is a lovely series to read and book 9 is a wonderful compliment to the series. I wonder who is up next!
In book number 9 we get to know the other half of the twin set, Amelia. Having already learnt Amanda’s story in book 8, Amelia comes to the forefront. This is a story about love, trust and honesty. Amelia is a lovely well rounded character who’s journey into seduction and being seduced by the handsomely masculine Luc is a pleasantly succulent read.
One thing that stands out in this book is that you get to see the characters after they (this really shouldn’t be a spoiler) get married. Generally in this series the marriage is the end, the story is how they get to that point, mostly ending when the male realises he’s in love. However this story is different, we get the story of adjusting into marriage and it really is a welcoming change. There is of course a little bit of mystery sprinkled throughout, but it is not overwhelming and does not takes away the essence of the romance. The trouble with writing a romance series is that by the ninth book it can all get a bit samey. This does not seem to be the case with these pesky Cynsters, Laurens continually brings her stories to the table and I am loving each one more than the last.
This novel is romance in the finest form, the whole series is a masterpiece of regency fluffy love. Each book in the series has a game of lust running throughout, you know what will happen in the end, marriage, however it is the journey Laurens takes you on to get there. The only downfall of this book was the dishonesty section, I was expecting a more explosive passionate argument, but it was not to be. I suppose that regency vibe keeps those ladies in check!
Overall it is a lovely series to read and book 9 is a wonderful compliment to the series. I wonder who is up next!
July 29, 2016
I know I've said this quite a few times while reading this series
BUT
THIS IS SERIOUSLY one of the best historicals I've ever read.
I have to point out that Stephanie Laurens is the queen of kissing scenes. Like the actual goddess. Most of her books have such detailed make- out sessions that they will leave you hot and bothered. And most of the book was them doing some sort of tongue duel or rubbing all over or sexing each other!(no complaints- it was super hot!)
This book was no exception to the Cynster awesomeness.
Amelia has been in love with Luc for the longest time. When she learns that he is "destitute", she finally gears up courage and decides to offer herself and her dowry for his hand in marriage.
Surprisingly, he agrees.
The attraction is mutual.
The chemistry is SCORCHING.
The love making scenes and the kisses are insanely hot.
I loved the interaction between the main couple and that the plot focused on them. Luc always thought he had things in control, but Amelia was always one step ahead and left him breathless- and that is refreshing to read in a book!
This series has given me so many favorite books- this is another feather in that hat.
Sexy, Safe read.
5/5
BUT
THIS IS SERIOUSLY one of the best historicals I've ever read.
I have to point out that Stephanie Laurens is the queen of kissing scenes. Like the actual goddess. Most of her books have such detailed make- out sessions that they will leave you hot and bothered. And most of the book was them doing some sort of tongue duel or rubbing all over or sexing each other!(no complaints- it was super hot!)
This book was no exception to the Cynster awesomeness.
Amelia has been in love with Luc for the longest time. When she learns that he is "destitute", she finally gears up courage and decides to offer herself and her dowry for his hand in marriage.
Surprisingly, he agrees.
The attraction is mutual.
The chemistry is SCORCHING.
The love making scenes and the kisses are insanely hot.
I loved the interaction between the main couple and that the plot focused on them. Luc always thought he had things in control, but Amelia was always one step ahead and left him breathless- and that is refreshing to read in a book!
This series has given me so many favorite books- this is another feather in that hat.
Sexy, Safe read.
5/5
October 2, 2016
I worked hard at typing a review for this and the stupid internet connection went off on me and I lost it all. I am not going to rewrite a whole 300 word review for something that got so very much on my nerves, that they are now all squished into two dimensional stuff floating around in my body.
A domineering and boorish hero and a subservient but shrewd and manipulative heroine. Not a great combination. Not at all.
A domineering and boorish hero and a subservient but shrewd and manipulative heroine. Not a great combination. Not at all.
October 20, 2021
If your like a little, very, very little, plot along with your sex, this is the book for you. I happen to like a book that has more plot than sex, so I'm not very keen on this one. So, this is the plot that is inserted between the sex scenes. Actually, the last third of the book was pretty good with the little mystery that Stephanie Laurens is known for inserting in her books takes the forefront.
Amelia Cynster is feeling a little lonely now that her twin sister is happily married. She is ready to implement her own plan to secure her own HEA. Her chosen husband to be is Lucien Ashford, 6th Viscount Calverton and a notorious London rake. His family is also close friends with her's and that makes him perfect, especially since Amelia thinks he can be bought with her large dowry. She wants him and she wants him now. The sooner the better. For reasons of his own, Luc agrees to the marriage, but insists they wait a reasonable amount of time so the ton doesn't take a dim view this match.
This wait is not to Amelia's liking, but she figures she can take this as an opportunity to get to know Luc much better and, between their sexual trysts, I guess she does. But, Luc has a secret and so does Amelia. Watch out when these two get down to being honest with each other.
Amelia Cynster is feeling a little lonely now that her twin sister is happily married. She is ready to implement her own plan to secure her own HEA. Her chosen husband to be is Lucien Ashford, 6th Viscount Calverton and a notorious London rake. His family is also close friends with her's and that makes him perfect, especially since Amelia thinks he can be bought with her large dowry. She wants him and she wants him now. The sooner the better. For reasons of his own, Luc agrees to the marriage, but insists they wait a reasonable amount of time so the ton doesn't take a dim view this match.
This wait is not to Amelia's liking, but she figures she can take this as an opportunity to get to know Luc much better and, between their sexual trysts, I guess she does. But, Luc has a secret and so does Amelia. Watch out when these two get down to being honest with each other.
January 23, 2016
Pretty standard Stephanie Laurens. This one is about Amelia, one of the twins.
I really liked the backstory for Amelia and Luc. She's preferred him as husband material all her life but eliminated all possible other choices before springing her offer on him.
The second twin, Amelia, sets out to marry Luc. For the most part, I enjoyed the story and I love the brief glimpses of how earlier characters are faring.
Amelia and Lucien are so wonderful together. He is a man most suitable for the Cynster side - he has the same qualities of honor, duty and daredevil courage.
Well lets say everything going according to plans. Amelia's happy but in denial.
And Luc is happy but fill with indecision. He wants to tell Amelia that he isn't really poor but without telling her his marrying her because he loves her.
He's trying to keep it for her till the last moment. Can love really be base in lies.
His very starting a life with someone and his already lying to her. Like his mom and Demon told him that it's only get worse.
But I get him, his scared that she'll decide to not to marry him. At least for a little while she's gong to get mad but it will pass if she does love him right.
The plot seems very classic: an offer for a marriage of convenience to which both parties agree both convinced from the first place that convenience is not on their agenda and they expect more from the deal. However classic and light, I really liked this one.
I loved this edition in the Cynster series but I do feel that Laurens's novels can get a bit repetitive and she could do with a different tack in some of them, but I do really like the background mysteries that bring the couples together. I found this book a very satisfying "read" of historical romance.
As in her other books, there are sensuous love scenes--this book having more of them as well as more explicit than in the other Laurens books I've read.
Recommendations ;)
I really liked the backstory for Amelia and Luc. She's preferred him as husband material all her life but eliminated all possible other choices before springing her offer on him.
The second twin, Amelia, sets out to marry Luc. For the most part, I enjoyed the story and I love the brief glimpses of how earlier characters are faring.
Amelia and Lucien are so wonderful together. He is a man most suitable for the Cynster side - he has the same qualities of honor, duty and daredevil courage.
Well lets say everything going according to plans. Amelia's happy but in denial.
And Luc is happy but fill with indecision. He wants to tell Amelia that he isn't really poor but without telling her his marrying her because he loves her.
He's trying to keep it for her till the last moment. Can love really be base in lies.
His very starting a life with someone and his already lying to her. Like his mom and Demon told him that it's only get worse.
But I get him, his scared that she'll decide to not to marry him. At least for a little while she's gong to get mad but it will pass if she does love him right.
The plot seems very classic: an offer for a marriage of convenience to which both parties agree both convinced from the first place that convenience is not on their agenda and they expect more from the deal. However classic and light, I really liked this one.
I loved this edition in the Cynster series but I do feel that Laurens's novels can get a bit repetitive and she could do with a different tack in some of them, but I do really like the background mysteries that bring the couples together. I found this book a very satisfying "read" of historical romance.
As in her other books, there are sensuous love scenes--this book having more of them as well as more explicit than in the other Laurens books I've read.
Recommendations ;)
April 12, 2025
Re-read 2018
I'm not feeling the best and wanted to pick up a re-read. I think this is my favorite book in the Cynster series. I've been drawn to the Cynster twins since they first appeared in "Devil's Bride". I liked Amelia's romance better than Amanda's but both books in this duology are interesting. Amelia proposes to a family friend because she's unable to find another man in the ton that she likes. This book focuses on how she and Lucian Ashford's relationship evolves. It's a slightly cheesy, very saucy regency romance. Just the thing when you want some "light" reading.
Re-read 2019
I felt the need to dip back into Lucian and Amelia's story, this is one book in the series that I keep coming back to even if I don't pick up the series for a re-read.
I'm not feeling the best and wanted to pick up a re-read. I think this is my favorite book in the Cynster series. I've been drawn to the Cynster twins since they first appeared in "Devil's Bride". I liked Amelia's romance better than Amanda's but both books in this duology are interesting. Amelia proposes to a family friend because she's unable to find another man in the ton that she likes. This book focuses on how she and Lucian Ashford's relationship evolves. It's a slightly cheesy, very saucy regency romance. Just the thing when you want some "light" reading.
Re-read 2019
I felt the need to dip back into Lucian and Amelia's story, this is one book in the series that I keep coming back to even if I don't pick up the series for a re-read.
April 25, 2016
The only thing that came to me while forcing myself to read and finish (which took me a very long time) this book was boredom. There were no real plot, or at least the execution of the story could have been done in a book half the size of this one.
The story is about a young girl who has always been in love with a man, thus man never looking at her as more than his sister's friend. So taking advantage of her (false) knowlege of his family ruination, she decided to offer herself to him, a mariage for a title and a safe husband in exchange of her dowry. For reason I didn't undestand, as at that point he didn't need her dowry and supposedly had no feeling for her, he accepts her proposal.
Thus follows Lucien going about trying to seduce Amelia (which serves no real purpose as she is already in love with him even if he doesn't know it yet) all the while spending too much time trying to fight the feelings he is developping for her.
But the very source of my boredom was the repetitiveness. There was a sex scene; then scene of Lucien thinking about it, how too much he liked it, how he doesn't want to like it that much, why does he like it that much, how he doesn't want Amelia to know how much he liked it; then scene of Amelia thinking about it too, how she wants it to happen again; then another sex scene. And so on, and so on. And the little paragraphes of the mystery secondary plot put here and there in the story seemed so out of place that they didn't grab my attention.
The story is about a young girl who has always been in love with a man, thus man never looking at her as more than his sister's friend. So taking advantage of her (false) knowlege of his family ruination, she decided to offer herself to him, a mariage for a title and a safe husband in exchange of her dowry. For reason I didn't undestand, as at that point he didn't need her dowry and supposedly had no feeling for her, he accepts her proposal.
Thus follows Lucien going about trying to seduce Amelia (which serves no real purpose as she is already in love with him even if he doesn't know it yet) all the while spending too much time trying to fight the feelings he is developping for her.
But the very source of my boredom was the repetitiveness. There was a sex scene; then scene of Lucien thinking about it, how too much he liked it, how he doesn't want to like it that much, why does he like it that much, how he doesn't want Amelia to know how much he liked it; then scene of Amelia thinking about it too, how she wants it to happen again; then another sex scene. And so on, and so on. And the little paragraphes of the mystery secondary plot put here and there in the story seemed so out of place that they didn't grab my attention.
June 2, 2021
2 stars.
IMO, this is the worst of the series this far.
The story DRAGGGGGGGGGGGED. The whole book was just sex scene after sex scene followed by more sex scenes. Nothing happened. There’s a small mystery element, but it took up minimal space in the book.
I have nothing against erotica... but I didn’t realize that this series had switched into that genre?!
Safety is fine in this book, but hero & heroine knew each other their entire lives and hero has been a manwhore while heroine remained a virgin. Same shit as all the books in this series. /sigh
IMO, this is the worst of the series this far.
The story DRAGGGGGGGGGGGED. The whole book was just sex scene after sex scene followed by more sex scenes. Nothing happened. There’s a small mystery element, but it took up minimal space in the book.
I have nothing against erotica... but I didn’t realize that this series had switched into that genre?!
Safety is fine in this book, but hero & heroine knew each other their entire lives and hero has been a manwhore while heroine remained a virgin. Same shit as all the books in this series. /sigh
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 10, 2019
Another great read. I can always a pleasing read from this author. The Cynster novels are among my favourites.
August 14, 2020
Three and a half stars.
After book eight I expected more fire from Amelia and Luc. Unfortunately this is a weak link in the series for me. Both main characters annoyed me at times and the plot dragged.
After book eight I expected more fire from Amelia and Luc. Unfortunately this is a weak link in the series for me. Both main characters annoyed me at times and the plot dragged.
May 14, 2019
I have no idea why I keep reading those. It's not that they're bad books - they're not badly written, and when the heroines don't make me want to shake them, they're pretty decent characters too. It's just that reading them usually doesn't give me the elusive feels which I'm looking for when reading romance, and they never make a lasting impression.
I spent most of the time distracted and didn't particularly care one way or another about what happened to the hero and heroine, especially considering that we learn pretty early on that they both want the same thing.
It felt pretty light on plot, since . No high stakes, no intensity, no feels dammit.
There's a thief mystery in there too, which I more than did not care one whit about and felt like an afterthought. I suppose one of the reasons for it being included is to drag the story out some more, despite it feeling quite drawn out to me anyway.
I don't hate the narrator (whom everyone else seems to love), but I don't particularly like his interpretation either, especially during passionate scenes.
Familiar characters make appearances and more side characters' stories are already foreshadowed, like Simon and Portia's story that comes next in The Perfect Lover, but I'm not particularly enjoying these books, so maybe I should quit the series.
Previous book reviews:
✦ On a Wild Night (Cynster, #8)
✦ All About Passion (Cynster, #7)
✦ All About Love (Cynster #6)
I spent most of the time distracted and didn't particularly care one way or another about what happened to the hero and heroine, especially considering that we learn pretty early on that they both want the same thing.
It felt pretty light on plot, since . No high stakes, no intensity, no feels dammit.
There's a thief mystery in there too, which I more than did not care one whit about and felt like an afterthought. I suppose one of the reasons for it being included is to drag the story out some more, despite it feeling quite drawn out to me anyway.
I don't hate the narrator (whom everyone else seems to love), but I don't particularly like his interpretation either, especially during passionate scenes.
Familiar characters make appearances and more side characters' stories are already foreshadowed, like Simon and Portia's story that comes next in The Perfect Lover, but I'm not particularly enjoying these books, so maybe I should quit the series.
Previous book reviews:
✦ On a Wild Night (Cynster, #8)
✦ All About Passion (Cynster, #7)
✦ All About Love (Cynster #6)
February 24, 2017
Another fantastic book in this series. I love the detail and plot that's put into these books. So far the alpha males in this series have been absolutely amazing and Luc didn't let me down. Amelia's character was a great addition.
Sexual tension
Alpha male
Feisty/ spirited female
Love
Steamy/ hot
Definitely recommend!
Sexual tension
Alpha male
Feisty/ spirited female
Love
Steamy/ hot
Definitely recommend!
December 3, 2009
Okay, whatever I’ve said about the foregoing Cynster installment…does not apply to this one. If I were (more) delusional (than I already am), I would think that Laurens read my review of On a Wild Night and took everything to heart…
…yes, I said if I were delusional…
But, really, this story of the other twin is infinitely better than that of Amanda’s—the kind of premise I believe should have been used before: ‘claim now, surrender later.’ At least the author was able to show that a ‘heroine’ need not be that most clichéd of personas: a tease. Amelia Cynster used her wits and level-headedness to claim Luc for her own, without dangling the man by strings (the way Amanda did to Martin).
Sure, the suspenseful element in this novel is pretty easy, as well, to solve. But I am just more relieved that, in the world of Cynsters, everything is back as it should be…
I mean, taken in its entirety, it's still not on par with the stories of the Cynster Men. I think more than enough readers, who can be lucid about it, can reluctantly admit that Laurens has shown a fumbling downslide after, say, Gabriel's story (A Secret Love). Chalk it up to a matter of 'being too good to last.'
(One, unfortunately, has to read the first of the Cynster twins’ stories to understand what I’m blathering on about. And if disappointment is indeed evoked by On a Wild Night, one can be reasonably appeased by On a Wicked Dawn.)
It’s called an opinion, mind =)
…yes, I said if I were delusional…
But, really, this story of the other twin is infinitely better than that of Amanda’s—the kind of premise I believe should have been used before: ‘claim now, surrender later.’ At least the author was able to show that a ‘heroine’ need not be that most clichéd of personas: a tease. Amelia Cynster used her wits and level-headedness to claim Luc for her own, without dangling the man by strings (the way Amanda did to Martin).
Sure, the suspenseful element in this novel is pretty easy, as well, to solve. But I am just more relieved that, in the world of Cynsters, everything is back as it should be…
I mean, taken in its entirety, it's still not on par with the stories of the Cynster Men. I think more than enough readers, who can be lucid about it, can reluctantly admit that Laurens has shown a fumbling downslide after, say, Gabriel's story (A Secret Love). Chalk it up to a matter of 'being too good to last.'
(One, unfortunately, has to read the first of the Cynster twins’ stories to understand what I’m blathering on about. And if disappointment is indeed evoked by On a Wild Night, one can be reasonably appeased by On a Wicked Dawn.)
It’s called an opinion, mind =)
March 10, 2009
Someone else might find this a really sexy book with a hint of mystery. ...I am not that someone. She had a power dynamic going in this book that made me uncomfortable--in a twist, the heroine tries to bribe the hero into marrying her with her dowry, and the hero hides the fact that he doesn't need the money and marries her anyway. It should be angsty and interesting, but instead it comes across as him trying not to be controlled by his feelings for her, and instead trying to control her with (increasingly, uh, uninhibited) sex. The whole book felt to me like a laundry list of sexual positions being checked off a list, because I didn't buy the emotion that should have been behind it all. And then, of course, the secret of his wealth is revealed just before the end of the story: the revelation doesn't further complicate anything, she's mad for roughly a page, and then it all goes away.
I've read four Stephanie Laurens works so far, really liked two, and really disliked two. This doesn't bode well, and I was so excited about finding a new Regency author with a backlist I could devour. :/
I've read four Stephanie Laurens works so far, really liked two, and really disliked two. This doesn't bode well, and I was so excited about finding a new Regency author with a backlist I could devour. :/
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 14, 2013
This is Amelia and Lucien's story. I had to laugh at how Amelia decided to handle the whole marriage thing. While her idea was unique it did get the job done. The scene where she proposes to Lucien is also very funny. There is a mystery in this story but not like the earlier ones. While Amelia does get in a fix Luc is there soon enough to keep anything bad from happening. This story is mostly about Luc and Amelia reconciling themselves to their new life. Both these characters are stubborn and more than a little uncertain about the other but they do come around in the end.
It was nice to see that Devil finally told Honoria that he loved her. It has been six years after all. I was glad to see the wedding take place at the Place and to get a look at all the Bar Cynster and their wives. Mostly we get to see Dowager Duchess and Lucifer and Phyllida. As always this book will steam up your day, week and probably month. Ms. Laurens writes some of the hottest love scenes on the market even after all these years. This story is a good addition to the overall series.
It was nice to see that Devil finally told Honoria that he loved her. It has been six years after all. I was glad to see the wedding take place at the Place and to get a look at all the Bar Cynster and their wives. Mostly we get to see Dowager Duchess and Lucifer and Phyllida. As always this book will steam up your day, week and probably month. Ms. Laurens writes some of the hottest love scenes on the market even after all these years. This story is a good addition to the overall series.
January 28, 2017
First things first, Ms. Laurens, please never use the word "ruthless" ever again. This request also includes the words "ruthlessly" and "ruthlessness." Really, never again. You probably want to lay off "rampant" as well. You're welcome.
There were elements of this book that were fun. Amelia Cynster is a great character and Luc has his moments. Sadly,the structure and pacing is just off. The "mystery" is completely tacked on. It comes out of nowhere and then is not mentioned for close to 100 pages. Also, the relationship hurdles are repeated without progress or regress over and over. The book would have been better if it had been 100 pages shorter. Not an unpleasant book, and the sex scenes are fun, but if you skip it you won't miss it.
There were elements of this book that were fun. Amelia Cynster is a great character and Luc has his moments. Sadly,the structure and pacing is just off. The "mystery" is completely tacked on. It comes out of nowhere and then is not mentioned for close to 100 pages. Also, the relationship hurdles are repeated without progress or regress over and over. The book would have been better if it had been 100 pages shorter. Not an unpleasant book, and the sex scenes are fun, but if you skip it you won't miss it.
March 31, 2025
I love this one! I remember liking this one before this which was about Amelia’s twin. But this one really focused on Amelia and Luke and their relationship.
Amelia knows that after Luke’s father died, his family struggled from debt and lack of funds. She has loved Luke her whole life so one night she proposes they marry so he will have her dowry.
However, at the same time that Amelia suggests the two wed, Luke comes into a great deal of money. For some weird reason he doesn’t tell Amelia that he cares about her and has money he just goes along with her plan.
Throughout the whole book they are trying to get the other one to confess their true feelings. The sex is good and plentiful and there is some drama! All around 2 thumbs up!
Amelia knows that after Luke’s father died, his family struggled from debt and lack of funds. She has loved Luke her whole life so one night she proposes they marry so he will have her dowry.
However, at the same time that Amelia suggests the two wed, Luke comes into a great deal of money. For some weird reason he doesn’t tell Amelia that he cares about her and has money he just goes along with her plan.
Throughout the whole book they are trying to get the other one to confess their true feelings. The sex is good and plentiful and there is some drama! All around 2 thumbs up!
June 30, 2013
This was probably my least favorite Cynster book to-date. I felt like the plot was a little thin and convoluted, the book could have been way shorter than it was and the side plot was not only silly, it felt a contrived.
If you want to read this because you're a fan of the series, go for it. If you are reading the series in order I would encourage you to not let it turn you away from some of the other really great more recent additions to this quirky family's saga. If you're just picking this one up randomly? I'd take a pass. There are other great books out there.
If you want to read this because you're a fan of the series, go for it. If you are reading the series in order I would encourage you to not let it turn you away from some of the other really great more recent additions to this quirky family's saga. If you're just picking this one up randomly? I'd take a pass. There are other great books out there.
February 28, 2017
I loved this book and I can't believe reading some of the reviews we were reading the same book . If you don't enjoy the steamy parts then stick to Jane Austen and don't read Stephanie Lauren's books. I think all ladies should have a Luc Ashford in their lives.
May 17, 2018
Lots of good sexy times, but the story line was plodding. Luc's character eventually redeemed himself in the end, but all the angst! Ugh, that drives me crazy.
May 3, 2018
3.5 wicked stars
February 20, 2013
Really more like 2.5 Stars to be honest.
Time again for the monthly Cynster novel. I was really, really wanting this one to be good! I mean, really. But I thought it was rather boring. It wasn't that I disliked the characters, in fact they were both alright, Amelia was a little too perfect for my tastes, but Luc was a good one. But it was just that nothing happened. It started off great, the beginning where he comes home drunk to find her waiting for him, and her proposal, and his subsequent acceptance and collapse, it was great, I was eager to read on. I had really hoped they would marry right away and then spend the rest of the book getting to know each other better and all that good stuff, but they had to go slow so the ton wouldn't worry about the reasons behind them getting married. I got aggravated with him worrying so much about what everyone else was going to think. Then he gets all controlling for a bit, telling her what kind of dresses she's allowed to wear, and who to dance with and stuff, and I got irritated a little bit more. Thankfully he eased off on that stuff once they were married. There was no real conflict, or angst, or drama in this one. It was bland. Nothing happened much at all. They went riding, they stayed home, they checked on the tenants, they hosted a few guests, they walked in the gardens, they visited the kennels, they had dinner, etc. Nothing eventful. The mystery wasn't very mysterious, or intriguing, and no real threat ever appeared. Even the final confrontation scene with the villain was handled as easy as milk and cookies, and though Amelia was dumb to go running off into the dark forest after him, I never worried for her safety because, of course, Luc and everyone else would be right behind her. At least in some other novels the villain slaps her around a bit or something, this she just stood there calmly talking to him for a couple minutes until Luc showed up. Blah. It was slow going, felt like a slog to get through most of it until the last 15-20% or so, then I actually enjoyed it a little, seeing the family all together, Luc's and the Cynsters, and the plan to finally get some kind of action going. Or maybe it just seemed like it went by faster and easier because I was excited that the end was near. But I did like it there closer to the end, and it's because of that that I will continue on with the series. Also because I already own them and have spent the money on them, so I might as well read them. All in all, this one wasn't terrible, and I didn't find myself wanting to yell at the characters like I did in Amanda's book, so that was a little plus. There was way too many sex scenes in this one though, more even than in the last one! I found myself skimming paragraphs, which I very, very rarely ever do, ever in any kind of book. So that was a bit of a minus. I did like how Luc knew and accepted, at least in his own head, that he loved her, and just was trying to figure out how to tell her, instead of being in denial and fighting his feelings and all that through the whole book. It was a nice change to see a man in a Cynster story who knew it was love in his own mind, and didn't question that he knew. As for the scene where Devil finally tells Honoria after 7 years of marriage that he loves her... that was kinda lame. After he hinted that he might, I was hoping for some kind of big declaration, darling, I love you and all that, some appreciation for putting up with him and bearing him children, but no. He says 'Did I ever tell you I love you?' To which she says, 'No, as you very well know.' Then he makes a stony face and says, 'Well, I do.' Oh gee! How romantic. You big mush-ball you. Didn't even technically say 'I love you.' Cop out. But, I did have to give him props for finally after all these years telling her in some way, shape, or form, so I guess it's better than nothing. This one leaves me feeling like 'meh', and I hope the next one's better. 2.5 Stars!
Time again for the monthly Cynster novel. I was really, really wanting this one to be good! I mean, really. But I thought it was rather boring. It wasn't that I disliked the characters, in fact they were both alright, Amelia was a little too perfect for my tastes, but Luc was a good one. But it was just that nothing happened. It started off great, the beginning where he comes home drunk to find her waiting for him, and her proposal, and his subsequent acceptance and collapse, it was great, I was eager to read on. I had really hoped they would marry right away and then spend the rest of the book getting to know each other better and all that good stuff, but they had to go slow so the ton wouldn't worry about the reasons behind them getting married. I got aggravated with him worrying so much about what everyone else was going to think. Then he gets all controlling for a bit, telling her what kind of dresses she's allowed to wear, and who to dance with and stuff, and I got irritated a little bit more. Thankfully he eased off on that stuff once they were married. There was no real conflict, or angst, or drama in this one. It was bland. Nothing happened much at all. They went riding, they stayed home, they checked on the tenants, they hosted a few guests, they walked in the gardens, they visited the kennels, they had dinner, etc. Nothing eventful. The mystery wasn't very mysterious, or intriguing, and no real threat ever appeared. Even the final confrontation scene with the villain was handled as easy as milk and cookies, and though Amelia was dumb to go running off into the dark forest after him, I never worried for her safety because, of course, Luc and everyone else would be right behind her. At least in some other novels the villain slaps her around a bit or something, this she just stood there calmly talking to him for a couple minutes until Luc showed up. Blah. It was slow going, felt like a slog to get through most of it until the last 15-20% or so, then I actually enjoyed it a little, seeing the family all together, Luc's and the Cynsters, and the plan to finally get some kind of action going. Or maybe it just seemed like it went by faster and easier because I was excited that the end was near. But I did like it there closer to the end, and it's because of that that I will continue on with the series. Also because I already own them and have spent the money on them, so I might as well read them. All in all, this one wasn't terrible, and I didn't find myself wanting to yell at the characters like I did in Amanda's book, so that was a little plus. There was way too many sex scenes in this one though, more even than in the last one! I found myself skimming paragraphs, which I very, very rarely ever do, ever in any kind of book. So that was a bit of a minus. I did like how Luc knew and accepted, at least in his own head, that he loved her, and just was trying to figure out how to tell her, instead of being in denial and fighting his feelings and all that through the whole book. It was a nice change to see a man in a Cynster story who knew it was love in his own mind, and didn't question that he knew. As for the scene where Devil finally tells Honoria after 7 years of marriage that he loves her... that was kinda lame. After he hinted that he might, I was hoping for some kind of big declaration, darling, I love you and all that, some appreciation for putting up with him and bearing him children, but no. He says 'Did I ever tell you I love you?' To which she says, 'No, as you very well know.' Then he makes a stony face and says, 'Well, I do.' Oh gee! How romantic. You big mush-ball you. Didn't even technically say 'I love you.' Cop out. But, I did have to give him props for finally after all these years telling her in some way, shape, or form, so I guess it's better than nothing. This one leaves me feeling like 'meh', and I hope the next one's better. 2.5 Stars!
May 19, 2021
2021 reread - yeah no, this one is pretty much a middle of the road, nothing spectacular Cynster novel. Not a whole lot happens, the mystery is way too simple and easily resolved. The "conflict" is basically Luc refusing to tell Amelia he loves her for THE ENTIRE FUCKING BOOK for absolutely no reason. I'm not surprised this one got 3 stars from me the first time around, and that I never revisited it before... and now, 3 stars is generous, I'm just meh on this one.
I'm serious, he has no good reason beyond an unfounded and frankly gross fear that she will use his feelings to manipulate him. He is actually convinced without any evidence whatsoever that Amelia will steal all his power in their relationship as soon as he tell her he loves her, and start forcing him to do things he doesn't want to do because that's what women do, they manipulate you ... see, I told you, gross. It's even more infuriating given there is no reason given for him to have such a disgusting view of Amelia and women in general - it's not like he was manipulated by a former lover or maternal figure. In fact every woman in Luc's family that is on the page is loving and kind, so his attitude is an insult to all of them, but most of all it's an insult to me because in 2021 I have absolute zero fucks to give to emotionally stunted men. He also spent the whole book keeping secrets from Amelia and then wondering why she wasn't being totally honest with him about her own feelings because she doesn't want to scare off the fragile man by using the word love before he's ready to hear it. I'm convinced Amelia could have done better than this idiot, she certainly deserved better.
This is a minor thing, but kids in books - even teenage sisters who will feature in future books - almost never work for me. Luc's younger sisters are supposed to be spitfires? Nah, it came across as obnoxious and took the spotlight away from Amelia, the supposed heroine of the novel, and made her seem weaker by comparison because she's not challenging Luc for being a dumbass like his sisters did. I don't care that this is set in a historical time period, it was written in the 21st century, and I am not here for a story about a heroine who has to agree with everything her husband says in public or even among family, only to hope he'll listen to her views later. NOPE NO WAY, THROW IT AWAY AND SET IT ON FIRE.
I was not paying as close attention to this one, it just wasn't very interesting and if I listened too closely then Luc's actions and inner monologue was infuriating, so I powered through to be able to move on to the next book. ...I may have to take a break from the series before coming back to my reread, there's been too many meh or aggravating heroes in the last few books.
I'm serious, he has no good reason beyond an unfounded and frankly gross fear that she will use his feelings to manipulate him. He is actually convinced without any evidence whatsoever that Amelia will steal all his power in their relationship as soon as he tell her he loves her, and start forcing him to do things he doesn't want to do because that's what women do, they manipulate you ... see, I told you, gross. It's even more infuriating given there is no reason given for him to have such a disgusting view of Amelia and women in general - it's not like he was manipulated by a former lover or maternal figure. In fact every woman in Luc's family that is on the page is loving and kind, so his attitude is an insult to all of them, but most of all it's an insult to me because in 2021 I have absolute zero fucks to give to emotionally stunted men. He also spent the whole book keeping secrets from Amelia and then wondering why she wasn't being totally honest with him about her own feelings because she doesn't want to scare off the fragile man by using the word love before he's ready to hear it. I'm convinced Amelia could have done better than this idiot, she certainly deserved better.
This is a minor thing, but kids in books - even teenage sisters who will feature in future books - almost never work for me. Luc's younger sisters are supposed to be spitfires? Nah, it came across as obnoxious and took the spotlight away from Amelia, the supposed heroine of the novel, and made her seem weaker by comparison because she's not challenging Luc for being a dumbass like his sisters did. I don't care that this is set in a historical time period, it was written in the 21st century, and I am not here for a story about a heroine who has to agree with everything her husband says in public or even among family, only to hope he'll listen to her views later. NOPE NO WAY, THROW IT AWAY AND SET IT ON FIRE.
I was not paying as close attention to this one, it just wasn't very interesting and if I listened too closely then Luc's actions and inner monologue was infuriating, so I powered through to be able to move on to the next book. ...I may have to take a break from the series before coming back to my reread, there's been too many meh or aggravating heroes in the last few books.
June 10, 2010
Amelia Cynster's twin sister has recently married and now she knows it is time to put her plans into motion. She has always loved Lucien Ashford, a good friend of the family's. She has known him since she was a little girl. While Lucian is fond of Amelia, she knows that he does not share the same feelings for her. However, she does believe that under the right circumstances it would be possible for Lucian to grow to love her too. She knows that Lucian is lacking the funds that he will need for his sisters' coming out. She proposes a marriage of convenience that with her large dowry will be sufficient to solve all of Lucian's money problems. He agrees to the marriage, although he just recently managed to solve his own money problems for himself and decides that marrying Amelia fits him just right.
Right away Lucian and Amelia both are hiding something from the other and that is they both are in love with the other without the other actually knowing it. So they both set out to seduce the other in the hopes of making the other fall in love as well. I really enjoyed this plot device because the story really focused on the romance between the characters. Another bonus was that this book was very sensual in nature, so sensual in fact that I had a hard time rating it. I was tempted to give it a burning rating because of the numerous sex scenes, but the language was far from graphic, more like subtle and poetic. I did feel that the story at 420 pages, could have been scaled down by about 100. After a while, I felt things were too drawn out and became repetitive.
Aside from the main conflict of misinformation between Lucian and Amelia, there was also a mystery involving a thief. The mystery was slightly cliched in that the big reveal ended with Amelia in danger and Lucian rescuing her. I really can't take points off for that because I enjoy it when the hero comes to the heroine's rescue. Even though Amelia put herself in danger after having a TSTL (Too Stupid Too Live) moment. For the most part this was an enjoyable read even if it was drawn out a tad too much for my liking.
Right away Lucian and Amelia both are hiding something from the other and that is they both are in love with the other without the other actually knowing it. So they both set out to seduce the other in the hopes of making the other fall in love as well. I really enjoyed this plot device because the story really focused on the romance between the characters. Another bonus was that this book was very sensual in nature, so sensual in fact that I had a hard time rating it. I was tempted to give it a burning rating because of the numerous sex scenes, but the language was far from graphic, more like subtle and poetic. I did feel that the story at 420 pages, could have been scaled down by about 100. After a while, I felt things were too drawn out and became repetitive.
Aside from the main conflict of misinformation between Lucian and Amelia, there was also a mystery involving a thief. The mystery was slightly cliched in that the big reveal ended with Amelia in danger and Lucian rescuing her. I really can't take points off for that because I enjoy it when the hero comes to the heroine's rescue. Even though Amelia put herself in danger after having a TSTL (Too Stupid Too Live) moment. For the most part this was an enjoyable read even if it was drawn out a tad too much for my liking.
January 22, 2015
This book caught my interest for the first 20 pages. By page 80 my eyes were crossing with boredom. I finally resorted to skimming until I got to pages with meat and found a few here and there and a lot at the end of the book. Up until then the characters were either thinking about having sex, having sex, or thinking about just having had sex. It got so repetitive that I could barely read it. I did finish, after a fashion, but I now remember why I stopped reading Ms. Laurens. On the positive side, she still writes well, the pace flows smoothly if very slowly, and she has not succumbed to boredom herself, which I cannot say for Catherine Coulter whose writing ha taken on a rhythmic quality that lulls you to sleep and requires little thought from her. At least I found a way to read this book without that happening, but it was a close call in places.
February 19, 2013
2.5 stars and it only got the extra 1/2 because of the last 10-12% of the book. The first 85% or so draaaagggggeeeedddd so badly I wanted to flounce. A mystery was hinted at and then promptly forgotten about for the next 3 or 4 chapters for us to watch Amelia and Luc pretend to not love one another while trying to make the other love them. BORING. Then, the mystery was mentioned again. Take that cycle and repeat several times over.
When the action finally got going, it was GREAT! I loved watching Simon with Luc's sisters. Could I hope that he and Portia end up together when she's older? *just checked - they do! YAY!!!* Here's hoping their story will be better than this one :)
When the action finally got going, it was GREAT! I loved watching Simon with Luc's sisters. Could I hope that he and Portia end up together when she's older? *just checked - they do! YAY!!!* Here's hoping their story will be better than this one :)
January 14, 2017
Re-read 2017
This is my favorite Cynster book and I think it's because it's one of the tropes that I actually like which is friends to lovers. I listened to the audiobook this time and it was a bit strange listening to the intimate scenes in the books being read out loud. The book is about Amelia one of the Cynster twins and her relationship with a friend of the family Lucien Ashford. Amelia believes that Ashford's family needs money and proposes marrying him so he can have access to her dowry to help the family and she'll no longer have to deal with the marriage mart.
This is my favorite Cynster book and I think it's because it's one of the tropes that I actually like which is friends to lovers. I listened to the audiobook this time and it was a bit strange listening to the intimate scenes in the books being read out loud. The book is about Amelia one of the Cynster twins and her relationship with a friend of the family Lucien Ashford. Amelia believes that Ashford's family needs money and proposes marrying him so he can have access to her dowry to help the family and she'll no longer have to deal with the marriage mart.
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