Preface: I received a free copy of this novel in exchange for an honest review
Actual rating: 2.5 stars
This story is an odd one. For one, it's very bleak, very dark, very trudging. It's almost a chore to get through at times, because there's no light at the end of the tunnel. That's not inherently bad - and can be done very well - but I don't think it was done very effectively here, it just wore me down as a reader and left me not really caring about anyone introduced in the story, because nothing good was ever going to happen to them.
The story also has a very archaic, stilted style that's very purple prose-y at times. It feels very old-fashioned. It's entirely subjective whether that's good or not, but I personally did not enjoy it, as I felt it added to the bogged-down nature of the story.
Subjective stuff aside, there are other things that this novel simply doesn't do well. The plot is meandering and unfocused, as our hero just wanders from one situation to the next. Even when he gets to what feels like the meat of the narrative, where he meets up with his old war comrades, there's no real goal. Eventually his war buds come up with a plan involving crop seeds, but up until that point, it's just a lot of traveling with no end in sight, while our hero just lets himself be dragged along. There's no tension, no rising action, because we don't know where he's going, and he doesn't seem to care.
The magic/fantasy elements at the end of the story come completely out of left field. Everything with the lost tribe is just very confusing and out of place. It's not foreshadowed in any meaningful way, and just overall didn't make a lot of sense to me, especially in how the conflict with his father ends.
Overall, I wasn't particularly impressed by this novel. People who like the dark, archaic style might enjoy this, but be aware that a lot of this story is just wandering around, and the ultimate conclusion isn't particularly meaningful.