Overwritten
Overwritten and not edited. I gave up counting how many times people rode in police cars to be interviewed by a detective. Then I lost track of the number of times people were meeting in the morning or at night. These people must have drunk a hundred cups of coffee! You can definitely tell a man wrote about the clothing people wore. He listed the items, the colors and details. Didn’t know how to describe the clothes in reference to the people who wore them, or the situations they were in. I thought about giving this story 3 stars, but once I started writing this review and recalling all the bad parts, I dropped the rating.