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A struggling comedian, trying to make a name for himself, gets offered a gig that can make or break his career.

Meanwhile, a murder contract is placed on the dark web to ensure that the show is very eventful.
Graphic scenes of violence

Short Novelette

92 pages, Paperback

Published March 18, 2022

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Sea Caummisar

82 books1,383 followers
Enter the dark mind of Sea Caummisar.
Sea Caummisar is a horror author specializing in extreme horror and splatterpunk. Titles include the Deadly Reality TV Series, Verdict Realty, Games and many more. When she is not writing, she is usually busy reading. If you want to keep up with what she is reading or writing you can follow her on Goodreads. She loves hearing from her readers on Facebook and Twitter.

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708 reviews98 followers
October 14, 2022
Don't listen to that guy... Death and murder CAN be funny!

I love watching Stand Up comedy again lately, and to have that part of my brain ooze into the dark & creepy part of my brain was such a delight!
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44 reviews11 followers
September 26, 2022
Eee gads!!! sea is brutal !!! Ice ice baby!!! She knows her way around a body 🤪

She really has a way for you to feel her characters pain and torture. Whew 😅
Profile Image for Sophie.
247 reviews21 followers
March 14, 2024
Another cracking read from Sea Caummisar. This one was just as brutal as the rest but had a more fun side to it than others, the story was great and fast paces and I honestly didn't see that ending coming, it snuck up on me!! Loved this short, fun read!!
Profile Image for Sharon Leung.
583 reviews32 followers
June 29, 2022
Loved it

Sea Caummisar never fails to amaze me with her stories, and I am yet to read one that I haven't been totally immersed Into. This story has a few characters, the main being trick the comedian and Iced the dark web contact. Both amazing characters that through the authors writing brings out the natures and personalities of them throughout the read. The twist at the end was great and puts the characters in a new light. I also enjoyed this read as parts were funny, and for an extreme horror this can be unusual as laughter and extreme horror you wouldn't think would work. But I assure you this one does due to the characters. And laughter is much needed In The world at the moment. So you get your fix of blood and gore with extreme violence, with a giggle or two for extras. So I definitely recommend you give this a try and enjoy the mind of a great author.
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Author 25 books264 followers
September 18, 2024
This is another great story from this author. The brutality and gore are all there for the liking. I love the twist in this one. Well done, Sea. Recommended.
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45 reviews
December 31, 2024
Why did I read this? (I read it to get one more short read in to 2024). But what did I just read? It had absolutely no point or plot. It was written to just be disgusting. I actually enjoy some of this authors work, but this was not it.
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238 reviews7 followers
October 5, 2022
Trick is a comedian. His name isn’t known yet and he is struggling to make his name known. He even makes jokes during his skits about how he gets paid in alcohol. When he’s suddenly met with an offer he couldn’t refuse by way of working with a well-known comedian, he jumps on the chance, as the accommodations are too good to be true.

We meet Iced, the dark web hitman, hired for the job of ruining said big-named-comedian’s comedy show by killing and posing people on stage, so that when the curtains open, the audience gets a front row seat of absolute ruin. Who says death can’t be funny?

In a mere 66 pages, I absolutely was glued to this story. Because we have two stories being told here of the lowly comedian and the popular hitman, they eventually run together with a showcase showdown that happens towards the end. In the meantime, we see a few twists and turns before our conclusion.

This story was graphic and entertaining all the way through, and you start to sympathize a bit for Trick – we’ve all been there, starting from the bottom, never feeling like we are where we NEED to be in life. We don’t know too much about Iced, other than he’s really good at what he does and earns respect from other dark web hitmen/women by the end of the story.

This was a complete story and I loved it from start to finish, and it doesn’t overstay its welcome and add storyline plots that do not need to be there. It’s cut and dry and great! Read it!
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June 23, 2023
well shit…..

This is my favorite book with the exception of “My favorite fan #3”. I am a comedian and can absolutely agree that 99% of us are very dark. This was eerily relatable till the crazy twist. Love, love, loved it!!!!! Renee Luczynski
526 reviews48 followers
November 3, 2024


This was a short but awesome story.... Not as brutal as some of the previous stories I've read by Sea Caummisar but it was a fast paced who done kind of story with a awesome twist at the end. I highly recommend this one and all Sea Caummisar books she fuckin rocks.

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225 reviews2 followers
May 10, 2025
I latterly had no idea what was happening lol till part two ,, I was expecting more hectic ness as my first book from sea was the bag of doom so that put expectations high for this and it just didn’t meet that bar
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205 reviews5 followers
July 7, 2022
The Punched Line

A quick read , not as bloodthirsty as previous books . Not one of my favourite offering from Sea Caummisar
Profile Image for Amanda Elizabeth Myers.
266 reviews7 followers
October 23, 2023
I love Sea Caummisar and everything of her’s I have read. Yes, this was short but it was packed full of brutality and loved the ending!!
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726 reviews17 followers
April 2, 2024
I always enjoy the darkness in Caumissars books, but unfortunately I felt this one overall kind of lacked.
Profile Image for lolly Storm  sparrow.
108 reviews4 followers
July 9, 2024
Magic!

The twist at the was incredible, I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
Had an undertone of menace from the offset, it was as usual well thought out, intense and slightly insane.
Incredible
987 reviews27 followers
December 18, 2023
Iced didn't do kills just for money, he loved the thrill of the taboo, he got off, he loved the feeling of power, the adrenaline following through his blood. Trick was a comedian, a dime a dozen, nothing special to differentiate from others. Trick is offered a once in a lifetime gig. Iced wearing a gimp suit, no trace of hairs, no DNA, will decapitate a head, dig the insides out and shove the head inside the body. Now that's comedy. The gimp suit wearing Iced laughed as he hit the claw part of a hammer into a security guards head, raining tears of blood. A baby dolls head shoved in his arse. People are going to become famous. Not just on the dark web.
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