Okay first of all, this book is ALL tell and no show! We don‘t see our main characters, getting to know each other. We don’t see them connecting with each other or ANYONE. We are just told. We are told that they care about each other deeply and that they love ach other oh so much but we don’t see why. What do they like about each other HOW DO THEY GET TO KNOW EACH OTHER. In the end it said how much the H loved talking to the h and that he would never get tired of it but we never see what they talk about. Except how perfect they are for each other and how much they love each other forever —.—
We are also told when moments are touching or emotional without any buildup or anything touching really happening because we as readers do not get to know the characters! Any of them!
There is one scene in the book where it is told that the h connects with the people there and how the soldiers tell funny storys and we don‘t even see any interaction! Nothing!
And there is sooo much info dumping. One second these characters know nothing and the next the h‘s *inner druidess feels something is true* and then we have to read three pages full of dialogue where we get told what the „inner druidess“ feels is the truth and the future about. X,y and Z. Without any hint any glimps into the thoughts of the h, any vision or whatever. We are just told, told, told. We are told they are incredibly attracted to each other without seeing why, we are told that they love each other without seeing why and we are told how much the people mean to the h without seeing her talk to ANYONE except for maybe 2 people she says 2 sentences to. We don’t get to see the castle we don’t get to see ANYTHING. We are told the characters remember each other and when that is the time to show us some memorys, some moments they shared over the years, to make sense of the instant familiarity they feel we get… you guessed it NOTHING. We are just told „oh we have been here together“ and that is it!! This is so wild to me. How can you write something like this. This book needed an editor. It could have been decent if it had one.
A good thing tho? Building up the suspense before the next chapter starts is something the author does well. So there is that.