Great storyline
The story line is really good, but there were so many errors that should have been caught during the editing. Things were said earlier in the book and then later said again as if it was the first time revealing the information. Happened a few times and it’s really distracting because we already have the information and then it’s introduced again as something new.
There were a few conversations with Prof. Halifax that revealed some things, but Raven seemed to glaze over the revelations which should have been vital information to her. But later in the book, another nod to some of the first information would be divulged again and Raven would only pick up on some of it.
The way this is written, Raven has a hard time putting two and two together. Just as in my last review, I feel like Raven is doing any research or study on magic outside of what’s taught in the classroom unless it was pertaining the the magic thief. She hasn’t tried to learn anything about her parents, despite gleaming a little more about their position in the magical world. Is her last name even really Winters?
Despite how far her relationships have gotten with the boys (no spoilers 😉), she still hasn’t looked up anything about mates and mating, nor mages in general. Her classes do not seem to be species specific so she’s likely just getting general information. She hasn’t tried to find out anything about her, or any other, species’ characteristics. She has a long way to go for me, especially after being introduced to us as a grown, independent 21 year old that had to grow up fast. She’s not showing any attributes of being a grown responsible person. I mean, she does seem mature most times, but that’s about it.
Anyway, I hope the writing gets better, the storyline is a good one. Happy reading!