Tempt, the fourth book in the Off-Limits series is a steamy read with some of my favorite, swoon-worthy tropes. After all, who doesn’t love a forbidden, age-gap romance?
While this story does read as a stand-alone, I could tell that I would’ve enjoyed it more if I’d read the previous three books in the series. Of the glimpses we saw, Sawyer and Olivia already hold a special place in my heart.
As for our protagonists, Kat and Daniel, they too captured my heart. Kat, our wild and spirited female lead, built an unbreakable bond between her and Andy- Daniel’s son; one I wish we could’ve seen more of. There were moments when we, as the readers, are told about conversations that took place between the pair, rather than shown. These scenes are essential not only to Andy’s character development but also to the audience’s understanding of the dynamic between Daniel and his son and why having Kat, as a nanny and even perhaps as more, is crucial. Applying this tactic for the sake of keeping up the pace took away from the depth of the story, making it feel surface-level at best. There were so many scenes that were glossed over that truly would’ve taken the characters and their story to the next level.
The novel was fast-paced, an aspect I would’ve been able to appreciate more if there were fewer points of conflict. When creating an emotional connection between the reader and the character, there needs to be a core moment that aligns with the narrative of the subplots that define who the character is and why. Whatever this moment may be, it needs to stand out amongst the rest, not become an equal counterpart. In this story, we learn about our main female protagonist’s backstory in the spur of the moment; no foreshadowing to build up to a sole climax. Using this structure makes the story seem unorganized and poorly planned. I loved the idea behind each conflict, but the story would’ve needed to be significantly longer for these moments to live up to their potential. After each chapter, I just kept wanting MORE. The bones of the story are the most difficult part, and I can say without a doubt, the author nailed it. But it’s when we get to the embellishments that the novel falls short. There needs to be a deep understanding of who the characters were, are, and will be and why on the author’s behalf before the audience can root for them. When writing, authors need to be their story’s biggest supporter and that means taking risks.
In regards to the caliber of writing, I found it to read immaturely, but nevertheless, in a slightly enjoyable manner. The tone isn’t so unbearable that it becomes unreadable.
Overall, it was a light and easy read; one that I by no means regret. It’s invigorating to discover and take a chance on new authors. While this story may not’ve been for me, I don’t doubt that it could be someone else's favorite.
Thank you to Valentine PR and Piper Lawson for providing me with this ARC. As always, all opinions are my own and are not influenced by early access to this title.