The basic idea was behind Mesmerized was interesting, a woman is being sacrifed to Poseidon and is bound and thrown off a cliff into the see only to be rescued by a gorgeous man who is a descendant of Poseidon... and unknown to her, her betrothed. His people, since they live on land, aren't quite merfolk but with their connection to the sea they are close.
Mesmerized ended up being more on the ok side, although I did like both of the leads, there were just too many detailed love scenes for this short a story. Don't get me wrong I do like some steam with my story, but I am not an erotic reader, so I like it better when the love scenes actually move the story forward. The first few couplings did do that but the last few didn't and I started skimming them to find out what happened next...