An automatic star up for the (relatively) nontoxic depiction of a poly situation. Some additional/clearer explanations of compersion would have been nice to have, especially since many of the other (valid!) points the book was trying to make were of the preachy (pun intended) variety anyway.
The language works fine, surprisingly even in sex scenes (most of the time). I have no reference point to judge the americanisms, though, so taking those at face value. I didn’t catch any typos, but then again I was reading this in a state of complete exhaustion, so probably would have missed them anyway.
Plotwise not much in here, the beginning was clunky af and the ending I can’t make my mind up about… Sort of respect the no-apologies-stopping-here-because-real-life-works-this-way approach, but a part of my brain is naturally shouting for a proper ending. Uh, yeah, no - leaning towards this counting as a positive. But ask me again in 30 minutes…
A short-story-length quick read, but am still thinking about it a few days later, which is always a good sign. And now after typing that, I am tempted to rate this at 4 stars, but, but.. No plot :(