Oh hi. I've arrived in the land of unpopular opinions again, as apparently 1% of reviewers gave this 2 stars. So. Yikes. 😅 This book is SUPER short and an incredibly fast read (the ebook I got from the library was 196 pages), so don't listen to me. If you're interested, read it. Even though it really wasn't for me, I don't regret the few hours it took to read this. So. Ignore me, obviously. Wtf do I know?!
To me...this book seems like it's having an identity crisis. It has some legitimately creepy ghostie moments. There's friendship and fights, crushes and accurate weirdness, family relationships...all kinds of stuff. I think this author really wanted to write a ghost story that made chicago's history fun to read about. She definitely did her research, and the author's note includes suggestions for further reading as well as her sources. But, again, for me, this just tried to do too much.
This started out with Claire being super embarrassed by her (incredibly loving and supportive) parents, which always pisses me off. I wasn't like that when I was 12, so I don't buy the whole "oh they're young, it's how kids are" sort of bs. I really dug into the depths of my memory for times either parent embarrassed me, and I can remember one time and it was only in front of my aunt...and my mom immediately apologized when she saw it upset me. And it was fine. Claire also says something about how middle school is about fitting in, not standing out. Since so many other messages were delivered via a club to the damn head, it would've been nice if that claim had been directly refuted.
I really don't want to complain about this book, because I think a lot of people will like it, especially younger readers. Just ugh. A lot of ugh.
The atmosphere is creepy as hell sometimes, like on the tour and obviously all the ghost stuff. But the rest of it is a weird sort of contemporary book? Idk, I don't read all that much contemporary to begin with, and def not much middle grade contemporary. But it had a weird balance of makeup and crushes...offset by that childlike desire to know everything about the topic you love most.
A lot of the dialogue and expressions were weird to me. Like maybe they were technically what kids might say, but it just doesn't feel right for some reason? Like whenever I hear/see someone say, "I gave it a 4 stars." You either gave it a 4 star rating, or you gave it 4 stars. It gets the point across and I guess it's not necessarily wrong. It just doesn't entirely make sense to me. Which is how I felt every time Claire or Sam said "gah" out loud, or "research is kind of my jam".
There were also a few inconsistencies that bothered me. One time when claire is scared, she runs into the bathroom and locks the door because it's the only room with a door that locks. Then later she tells Sam to lock his door and is serious. Another time she says something about the 12 years she's lived in her house, but then remembers when she was 6 or 7 and they'd just moved in. It was also repetitive as hell - I should've counted how many times claire thinks about telling her dad what's going on but decides she can't trust him not to blow everything out of proportion and embarrass her more.
My reviews are public, but they're more for me. I don't mean to bash anyone or any book (probably, usually), but I have to be honest with myself here so when I return to a review to help my memory, I get a decent picture of how I felt. Which is why I have to say this read like a first draft. In college and beyond, I'd sometimes edit and proofread people's papers. I used the track changes thing, and I'd always say up front, I will be honest and I will expect a revision after my suggestions so I can follow up. Sometimes, I could tell people would just approve all the grammar changes, throw in a few sentences with some detail or elaborating on a point, and maybe rewrite a sentence to really emphasize a point. But I could always tell they made the small changed without rereading the whole thing from the start to make sure all the changes worked and flowed and made sense. That's how this book felt to me. I'm sorry it's harsh, but I did say to not listen to me at the beginning, lol. Read this book - you'll probably like it. I just felt really meh.