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Lucky
Sims has a real thing for his fellow cop, Lucky. Young, hot, and just innocent enough to appeal to Sims' alpha side, Lucky is the perfect candidate to become Sims' new lover. Now all he has to do is convince the kid to take him on. Can Sims show Lucky that living up to his name is easier than he thinks?
8 pages, ebook
First published January 1, 2009
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About the author
J.J. Massa
49 books42 followersSo, about me. I’ve been writing sensual romance—and some other stuff—for about five years now. What a busy five years it’s been, too. I’ve met a lot of great people along the way.
I’m blind and have been for more than a decade. I don’t go anywhere without my best buddy, Cosmo. He’s my guide dog. Once in a while, he turns up in my stories, incognito, of course. He and I travel when we can via planes and trains; we don’t really care for long car trips. Hmmm…what else? We have a couple of cats that keep us on our toes. They’re good for tons of aggravation and entertainment. I got them for Cosmo, but I don’t think he appreciates them as much as he should.
We love the beach, though we don’t get there as often as we’d like. I live on the Jersey Shore so the only excuse I have for not hitting the sand is that it’s cold and besides that, I can’t drive.
When I’m not writing, I teach blind people how to use adaptive technology so that they can surf the web. I meet plenty of interesting people that way and it keeps me from ever getting complacent. …Not to mention the inspiration for stories that I get. It’s a job that keeps on giving. Actually, I’m not sure it’s really a job; more like a thing I do.
Cosmo likes chunky peanut butter and rawhide bones. I drink way too much coffee—black and strong. I like red wine at night sometimes but he’s a teetotaler. He stays away from alcohol and chocolate these days.
And that’s all I can think of just now. I hope you enjoy the website. Mae’s done some great things with it. I’ll keep writing if you keep reading. Just bear with me if I slow down now and then. Thank you. I really appreciate you stopping by.
I’m blind and have been for more than a decade. I don’t go anywhere without my best buddy, Cosmo. He’s my guide dog. Once in a while, he turns up in my stories, incognito, of course. He and I travel when we can via planes and trains; we don’t really care for long car trips. Hmmm…what else? We have a couple of cats that keep us on our toes. They’re good for tons of aggravation and entertainment. I got them for Cosmo, but I don’t think he appreciates them as much as he should.
We love the beach, though we don’t get there as often as we’d like. I live on the Jersey Shore so the only excuse I have for not hitting the sand is that it’s cold and besides that, I can’t drive.
When I’m not writing, I teach blind people how to use adaptive technology so that they can surf the web. I meet plenty of interesting people that way and it keeps me from ever getting complacent. …Not to mention the inspiration for stories that I get. It’s a job that keeps on giving. Actually, I’m not sure it’s really a job; more like a thing I do.
Cosmo likes chunky peanut butter and rawhide bones. I drink way too much coffee—black and strong. I like red wine at night sometimes but he’s a teetotaler. He stays away from alcohol and chocolate these days.
And that’s all I can think of just now. I hope you enjoy the website. Mae’s done some great things with it. I’ll keep writing if you keep reading. Just bear with me if I slow down now and then. Thank you. I really appreciate you stopping by.
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February 27, 2010
This short story is essentially one sex scene between Lucky and Sims in the men’s room at the police station they both work at. Sims happens to walk in while Lucky is changing and although he’s not entirely sure the half naked man before him really is Lucky, Sims takes a chance and both men are rewarded with some sweet, half asleep sex. Unfortunately there is not much depth given to either man and there is even less context to the story considering the entire 8 page short details a single sex scene.
The story is told in first person point of view from Sims and the sentences tend to be repetitive from the start. For example, this is the beginning of the story:
"When I walked into the men’s locker room, I could hear muffled swearing. The police station was always so quiet this time of night, or morning, depending on your view. Dawn was still a few hours away, no matter how you looked at it.
I made my way to my own locker, wondering who the irritated detective could be. It was late, as I said, and usually deserted. Whoever the unhappy guy was, he was turning the air blue with his language."
So the quiet, empty feeling to the locker room is established firmly and that is important as the two police officers have sex without thinking about such things as closing and locking the doors, nor worrying about being caught.
The narrator, Sims, mentions several times having a crush on Lucky but this seems mostly based on lust and desire. Sims says nothing more than he has wanted to have sex with Lucky for some time now and is glad to finally have the opportunity, but this seems at odds with later statements where he mentions wanting to be exclusive with the younger man. So neither character is developed much, leaving this as a sweet, quiet sex scene between two semi-tired men that finally consummate the desire between them.
The author does inject some authenticity to the scene, detailing the position they end up in as somewhat awkward, which it seemed to be. The language and tone tended to be quiet and subdued, perhaps influenced by the isolated atmosphere and lack of external context. Although they were in a locker room in a police station there were no outside sounds, noises, interruptions or anything that would intrude upon this small bubble Sims and Lucky were within. For an extended sex scene with a very middle of the night quiet lassitude about it, you might enjoy this offering.
The story is told in first person point of view from Sims and the sentences tend to be repetitive from the start. For example, this is the beginning of the story:
"When I walked into the men’s locker room, I could hear muffled swearing. The police station was always so quiet this time of night, or morning, depending on your view. Dawn was still a few hours away, no matter how you looked at it.
I made my way to my own locker, wondering who the irritated detective could be. It was late, as I said, and usually deserted. Whoever the unhappy guy was, he was turning the air blue with his language."
So the quiet, empty feeling to the locker room is established firmly and that is important as the two police officers have sex without thinking about such things as closing and locking the doors, nor worrying about being caught.
The narrator, Sims, mentions several times having a crush on Lucky but this seems mostly based on lust and desire. Sims says nothing more than he has wanted to have sex with Lucky for some time now and is glad to finally have the opportunity, but this seems at odds with later statements where he mentions wanting to be exclusive with the younger man. So neither character is developed much, leaving this as a sweet, quiet sex scene between two semi-tired men that finally consummate the desire between them.
The author does inject some authenticity to the scene, detailing the position they end up in as somewhat awkward, which it seemed to be. The language and tone tended to be quiet and subdued, perhaps influenced by the isolated atmosphere and lack of external context. Although they were in a locker room in a police station there were no outside sounds, noises, interruptions or anything that would intrude upon this small bubble Sims and Lucky were within. For an extended sex scene with a very middle of the night quiet lassitude about it, you might enjoy this offering.
September 12, 2010
3.5 out of 5
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