This is a soft science fiction story about a girl with the power to manipulate the elements. You might believe she is an anomaly, but she is the norm on her home world. Raya is from a civilization much more advanced than ours on a planet in a distant galaxy.
Raya is designated for a special mission to Earth to assess if our people are ready for first contact. Along her journey, she will face many dangers, including terrorist groups that will do anything to keep her from completing her mission. When she lands on Earth her ship experiences difficulties, and crashes into Lake Ontario. A family in the area comes to her rescue, offering her a safe haven until she can finish her mission and fix her ship, so that she can eventually go back home.
Raya hides the entire purpose of her mission from her new friends as long as she can, but once she eventually unveils it, they pledge to aid her in completing all her tasks, regardless of how risky they might be.
Just finished "Elemental" by Liane Mahugh. I read it on my tablet on the kindle unlimited subscription of my girlfriend.
Raya is the main protagonist of this Sci-fi novel. She was born on a planet where their kinds have developed special powers to control the five elements. This planet is far far away from our planet Earth but she is embarked on a recon mission to our planet in order to get information about the disappearance of a crew that has previously gone to Earth. That very easy premise is the result of a coherent and well developed story. I really liked how Liane links her own world-building with the popular myths of our own world (I will not provide any spoiler here), kudos for that.
I only found that the consistency of the story might be a little bit weird. You will find two different types of a book in one single story, a first part more mature (for my liking) and another one more YA-kind-of-stranger-things type. Anyway, readers of soft Sci-fi and YA are going to like this book, I recommend give it a go!
The beginning of this story felt like such a slog to get through, I understand the world building part but then when it got to Raya's mission prep arc I honestly was not that interested and kinda disappointed. The name of the book is Elemental which obviously describes the power that Raya has, yet we didn't delve into any of Raya's training at all regarding her powers or even anything vaguely space ship related because apparently everything is automated and she just cryosleeps her way to Earth. Instead of a training arc, we just get told she got trained and then we get a walk through of the lab and Dev being Sherlock Holmes detects all possible enemy activity occurring and squanders them before Raya flies to Earth.
Only positive is the author made sure to portray Raya and Dev's relationship quite well because this is relevant later.
Now once Raya has gotten to Earth the story finally gets a bit more interesting where we see Raya navigate the language differences with all the pop culture references, children fairytale stories and movies shes unaware of.
However, I had more irks when reading this part of the story, firstly I didn't even realise Priya and Quinn were teenagers until later in the book when they mentioned they could drive, their initial interactions with Jake and Raya were so childish it made me think they were 10!?
Secondly in no way does it seem plausible that a grown adult would take 3 teenagers to Area51 AND infiltrate it at the same time?!?!?!?!
Thirdly when they actually did reach Area51, why was it so easy for them to breach the base, why were there only cameras and nobody walking around to even just monitor the area.
Fourthly Raya's act of aggression to the General came at me like a surprise because Raya was not portrayed as a violent or particularly aggressive person, yet when it came to finding out information about her people that landed on Earth previously, she decides she chose violence that day and basically threatens the doctor and the general to say what she needs by drugging them and burning them.
Fifthly the fight with the terrorists that arrived on Earth was not amazing, it was honestly weak and underwhelming, you're telling me that there is a whole terrorist group, yet they sent the 2 most incompetent guys to try defeat Raya by using a power blocker tool and no other weapon, skills or plan and they end up getting beat up by 2 non elemental teeangers, absolutely disappointing.
and lastly we come to the end of the book where Raya suddenly decides she wants to stay on Earth??? To do exactly what??? What can one teenage girl even do??? At least if she went back to Solara and reported her findings, her people could then decide on the next steps of either saving the earth or whatever. But nah, she decides she's better needed here on Earth and won't be going back any time soon.
And also during the decision of Raya staying or going back to Solara, Quinn is out here being an absolute loser where he's annoyed if people mention Raya returning to Solara or when Raya has a moment with Dev, her literal boyfriend of many years before he flies back to Solara and Quinn's out here rolling his eyes out of jealousy!??!?!?! Get out of here. If Raya and Quinn somehow end up together at the end of this series, smh.
I believe if I were younger like 12 or 13 then I maybe would've enjoyed this book or at least been more forgiving of everything that went on and been less sceptical than I am now, but alas, I am not 13.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Wow, I loved Raya, the protagonist in Elemental, by Liane Mahugh right from the start. Despite her exceptional abilities she manages to remain humble and demonstrates good character development as she grows more confident in using them. The stakes are high as Raya is sent on a mission all alone far from home to determine what happened to the aliens previously sent to Earth. It was an interesting spin to have Raya come as an alien to Earth instead of the usual people leaving Earth to explore other worlds.
While on Earth, Raya’s life resonated a little bit with Ursa’s, the protagonist in Glendy Vanderah’s Where the Forest Meets the Stars in that she is supported by people on Earth who protect her from the authorities. The romance in the story is sweet. Who wouldn’t love to have someone who is willing to traverse the universe to make sure you are safe and to be with you? I enjoyed reading how the theme of whom to trust played out in the story. A recommended read for those who love alien invasion science fiction.
ELEMENTAL by Liane Mahugh is an interesting, well-written sci-fi tale for the YA crowd, though I do believe it could also be suitable for younger readers, perhaps even middle grade as well. Overall, I have to give this story 3 stars, which in my rating system, means it does its job, with some issues.
Given that I'm not the demographic for this book about 16-year old Raya and her elemental powers, I thought the story on a whole was rather classic, in a sort of throwback to the 70s and 80s style of young adult sci-fi. For the crowd that remembers movies like Escape From Witch Mountain, ELEMENTAL will definitely hit that nostalgia vibe in its middle section, titled Earth. The section before it, named Solara after Raya's home planet reads like a much different book than the Earth portions, so much so, that the transition really kind of threw me off. The Solara intrigues and political upheaval were interesting, even if the blurb did lead me to believe the plot would primarily take place on our planet. The last section, Roswell was also very different from what came before, reminding me of the teen movies of the 2000s. It was dangerous, tense, and had some good action. I liked that Raya was not a Mary Sue either. IMO the best portions of ELEMENTAL are Solara and Roswell.
What Worked: Raya, her family, and Dev were likable characters and I felt invested in their journey. The rebel faction and their terrorist attacks added a welcome dangerous edge to the early proceedings. Raya's journey on-board the Intrepid (Star Trek references abound!) was surprisingly compelling. I liked the infiltration of the Roswell base, tension there was good, as was the interrogation. Raya's escape from the base was the best part of the book as the action was good and the consequences even better. I gave Mahugh a star for that bit.
What Didn't: I felt the Earth section dragged and was uninteresting, even dull. The author chose to have the teens repeat basic knowledge to Raya along with idioms, metaphors, and stories. This really slowed down the pace and I found myself skimming through alot of it. Raya and her boyfriend Dev seem to have a really one-sided relationship, and most of it on Dev's part. It felt kind of awkward to have him profess how much he loves her and Raya respond blankly. Her interiority was lacking for me. I wanted to like the Earth characters more than I did. Priya's okay, as is Uncle Jake, but Quinn irritated me because he sounded like he was ten years old, not a teenager. He got to be annoying. Some sentences could have been improved with an editor, as they came across stilted. As such, much of the humour didn't work for me.
Final Thoughts: Overall, it's clear author Mahugh has talent, and ELEMENTAL is a solid read. Some parts worked for me, others did not. I do feel like 2/3 of this is a pretty good book. Teens and even MG readers are encouraged to check it out.
Overall, the book was a good read. There were definitely times I thought I knew what was coming & didn’t, & other times where I was right. It definitely ends on a cliffhanger
An enjoyable read following a young girl with extraordinary abilities- the likes of which have never been seen before in one so young. This book is written for a YA audience, but there are deeper themes to be explored aside from cool teenager on a solo space mission. It touches on environmental issues and takes a look at humanity as a whole, causing the reader to think deeply about what we are doing as a species. I really liked the character of Raya. She was a pleasure to read and the interactions between her and ‘Uncle Jake’ were fabulous. I enjoyed how her limited knowledge of earths culture was portrayed.
I enjoyed the second half of this book much more than the first. Until Raya got on her ship and began her mission, I felt that the build up was too long and drawn out. It isn’t that there isn’t interesting stuff happening before that point- it’s almost non stop action, but i chose this book for the blurb, and in the blurb, we were promised a book about a girl from another planet arriving on Earth and having to trust the people she meets, and that is what I wanted to read about.
I did feel that the plot was a little thin in places. I understand this was a YA book and the choice for the MC to be only sixteen is probably to appeal to teenagers, but I cannot understand why a planet’s governing body would allow a sixteen year old with no experience to embark on a solo space mission. Similarly, I can not understand how Uncle Jake could be so irresponsible as to take his nephew and his nephew’s friend on such a dangerous trip. No adult in their right mind would endanger two kids like that, but I guess that is my 40 year old brain talking. I’m sure I would think it was the most amazing thing if I was still a teenager.
Overall I thought this was a good and interesting read with plenty to think about, great characters with distinct personalities and the writing style was easy and pleasant to read.
I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed ‘Elemental’ by Liane Mahugh. I have read other books by her and I couldn’t resist this one. Raya from the planet Solara, is a very gifted young woman in that she can control the elements – earth, air, fire and water. She has been trained to control them and utilise them when needed. Because of her skill, she is sent on a secret mission to Earth to find out what happened to a previous expedition after contact was lost with them seventy-five years ago. But her ship crashes into Lake Ontario and she is rescued by Jake, his nephew and a friend. Thus, beginning an adventure to find the lost ship and keep Raya’s identity hidden. The book has a lovely ‘X-Files’ vibe to it, which is probably why I enjoyed it so much. And the reveal regarding the whereabouts of the lost expedition ship was brilliant. Yeah! Well-written with entertaining and engaging characters. Highly recommended.
I'm not saying it was ancient aliens, but it was ancient aliens.
Elemental is a coming-of-age story. In it, we follow the life of Raya, a precocious young woman who must make a life-altering decision: go on a years-long mission for her planet, leaving behind her family and friends, or take the easier path and stay planet-side, living a safe and normal life?
The target audience for Elemental is young adults. This is a soft science-fiction that teenagers, and even younger people, should enjoy. I couldn’t help but have flashbacks when reading it, to the time I was a kid and saw Disney’s Escape to Witch Mountain. I don’t want to ruin the surprise so I’ll say no more, but the comeuppance Raya finally dishes out is more than satisfying, just like the end of the Disney movie.
Elemental begins with an ancient civilization that has been seeding hominid life for eons, giving them genetic “pushes” to guide their evolution toward higher intelligence, in the hopes of eventually creating societies that themselves can reach out for the stars.
Just how this is done, or how the people of Solara manage to reach out to distant galaxies in months, is not dealt with; like I mentioned, this is a soft science fiction where the story and characters are featured and the science is there to keep the plot moving along — like a supporting cast only given focus when necessary. Technical accuracy takes a back seat to the storytelling, which is not necessarily bad, but if you come at this book looking for hard science you will be disappointed.
Since Elemental is aimed at younger readers, its focus is on the characters and their interpersonal relationships. The world building, while rich in imagery and imagination, is not explored in-depth, and some of the supporting characters appear to be more plot devices than fully-realized individuals. I felt this emphasis, or lack of such, was justified, considering the target audience and the story being told.
The ending is melancholy, which happens to be my favorite. I rarely find happy endings satisfying, so when Elemental broke my expectations of a nice wrap-up and left me feeling a little sad, I was quite pleased — I know, language, what are you gonna do? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
I recommend Elemental to anyone who likes a good, emotional story about people. If you don’t need a happy ending to be satisfied, then this is likely a book for you. I notice the author is suggesting a sequel is on the way, which definitely makes sense considering how we are left wondering what comes next.
I enjoyed Liane Mahugh’s other book ‘The Sentinels’, so I decided to give this one a try. And I’m glad I did; it did not disappoint.
(Mild spoilers) This was an engaging sci-fi adventure. On the advanced planet of Solara, being an Elemental (having control over the elements), an empath, or telepath are commonplace. Raya is the most powerful Elemental that has gone through the training program. When we join the story, she still has to go through ‘the trial’, which is the final part of her training. The trial part of this book was incredibly intense, and I thought it was excellent. We can already see that Raya very much has the powers of a superhero. After the trial, she’s assigned a mission on the far away planet of earth.
Though Solara is an advanced planet, they still have a lot of problems with the AEF, a fundamentalist terrorist group that is against space exploration missions. The scientists were forced to work on the mission in secret with high security because of the threats of terrorism. There were attempts to sabotage the mission, and a lot of anxiety and tension leading up to the launch. This was a gripping part of the book, and it drew me in. I was constantly concerned about how effective the efforts of the terrorists would be.
A lot of this book takes place on Solara, and it was nice to get so much backstory on Raya’s life before she embarks on her mission. This gave a lot more weight to the story as we follow her progress and character development.
Once on earth, Raya was a bit of a fish out of water, having to learn about customs and things she wasn’t familiar with on her planet. These learning opportunities interjected some humor into the story. A small circle of humans came to her aid, but they were not the only ones that noticed her arrival. Pretty soon agents from MUFON (Mutual UFO Network) start snooping around, but that’s not the only threat she faces. I like the close bonds she made with Uncle Jake, Priya and Quinn. They were great supporting characters, and they were essential to the evolution of Raya’s opinion of earth and its inhabitants.
It was interesting when we find out where Raya’s mission is leading her. The mission culminates in an action-packed finale. I felt the story had a great ending and resolution. Raya was a strong character, and I’m looking forward to Mahugh revisiting this universe, there are more stories that should be told with her. There is an excerpt at the end of this book from its sequel, so I’m glad to hear Raya will be back for sure.
This was a fun, imaginative adventure with sci-fi devices and concepts that are really easy to follow. The world building was good, and Raya was a likable character. The moments of action and tension kept me on the edge of my seat. It’s very approachable, and I feel it could appeal to both casual sci-fi fans and avid sci-fi readers.
A teenage alien girl with elemental powers is sent to Earth on a top secret mission in this familiar but enjoyable YA sci-fi novel by Liane Mahugh. During her ritual testing on Solara Prime, Raya demonstrates prodigious abilities to control the five elements. This qualifies her to undertake an important mission to Earth, one with a mysterious agenda. Her boyfriend Dev doesn’t want her to leave him, and the feeling’s mutual; but both accept that Raya’s destiny lies in exploration among the stars.
Unforeseen events complicate the mission, and Raya’s ship crashes near a small town in Canada, where she’s taken in by a local family that soon becomes attached to the curious off-worlder. The truth about why she was sent sets in motion an adventure that will appeal to readers who like fish-out-of-water science fiction stories featuring an alien bonding with human friends.
This is a more standard YA narrative than Ms. Mahugh’s previous book, the affecting supernatural drama The Sentinels. Elemental is more or less sci-fi superhero plotting 101. Couched in familiar tropes, it’s a safe, cozy read that achieves everything it sets out to. None of it surprised me, but I found it enjoyable enough to keep turning the (digital) pages. The writing is polished and steadily paced, and the imagery is fun. From the likeable characters to the third-act setting, it’s a smooth, easy read that has an old-fashioned charm.
The pop culture references and fish-out-of-water jokes are a little overdone. At one point a character recounts the entire plot of Goldilocks and the Three Bears to explain why astrophysicists use the term ‘The Goldilocks Zone’. It could have been done in a line or two. I also think Raya’s superpowers are a bit much. She’s pretty much all the X-Men rolled into one, which lessens the stakes when she has to confront danger. Another quibble I had is that the planet of Solara, and its society, didn’t feel very alien. That’s partly explained by ancestry, but I wanted a little more imagination in the world-building to differentiate it more from Earth.
Otherwise, I think YA readers, particularly those who aren’t steeped in sci-fi tropes like I am, will find this an entertaining interplanetary adventure. Its blueprints are the classic 1980s family sci-fi movies, which are always fun to revisit. Ms. Mahugh even sets up a sequel, which I’d be interested to read.
The story follows Raya as she is chosen for an important mission to Earth from her home planet Solara. Raya was born an elemental with certain powers, but she happens to harness more than others. I love the chosen trope, so this was a great choice.
Here's what else I thought worked. Who doesn't like sci-fi with magical feelings? I certainly do. Raya is an easy character to like with few flaws, so readers fall in love with her easily. Her boyfriend, Dev is also a super nice character. Actually, all the characters are pleasing, kind, and thoughtful. Which some readers will appreciate, while others might wish for more diversity. There are some "bad guys," but they seem to be more of a nuisance and there isn't one specific antagonist to dislike.
I thought the visuals were well done. Space travel and technology were described well. I commend this author for the research that must have gone onto earth, aliens, area 51, and the galaxy. I know this is fiction, but the story feels well-researched.
The theme and plot were carried out well. The cover matches the feel of the book as well. It is a comfortable middle-grade book for readers.
Here is why I am giving this book a 3 star, and not a 4 star. I did struggle with this rating, but I think this book could have been cut by about 30%. The book blurb suggests that Raya crashes her ship into earth, but this doesn't happen until the second half of the book. It left me eager for her to get her darn ship ready and leave Solara. When she does get to earth, the story slows down while she gets to know teenagers and Uncle Jack. I feel this could have gone much faster, and connections could have been made sooner. There were times the story didn't propel forward or keep pace with the book's first quarter. Things pick up again at the end.
I was also confused about the very ending when some characters split up. I'm trying to give any spoilers here, but something out of the blue happens, and it threw the happy ending for me. The story ends with readers curious about what will happen in the next book.
This book would be well received by middle-grade readers who like a steady slower paced book. There are action scenes, but they are rather spread out. There is a romantic subplot, but it is very middle-grade appropriate. There are family dynamics that are easy to follow as well.
What an amazing story! It's very rare that I read a book that comes together so cohesively with the plotline. The author must've had some great beta readers because every question that I had was answered. And trust me, I had a lot of questions considering it's a story that follows a girl from a distant planet.
Raya is a strong-willed teenager who advances at an early age in her studies and her abilities to manipulate different elements. She's intelligent, witty, and seems to have most everything under control. Of course, she has her flaws like any other. When she's tasked with a secret mission to Earth, she's riddled with anxiety and fear. When she meets humans for the first time, she's a little egotistical when speaking of their primitive ways. And, well, she's got a lot to learn.
The story is separated into 3 parts: the first being Raya's time on Solara her home planet, the second being her study of Earth, and the third with her completing her mission. I will say that you do have to suspend your belief with this one. It's a little unrealistic that a 16-year-old would be sent on a very important mission completely by herself on her first outing. While it's explained in the book why this is, it still seems a little far-fetched, even for someone who is as powerful as her. But hey, it's fiction.
Her boyfriend Dev is also an endearing character who is completely in love with Raya. He has his strengths as well and is a good protector of her. With a terrorist organization running around Solara and sabotaging plans, Raya needed someone who knew the technical aspects of things and his studies in communication engineering definitely come through.
I thought the meeting between Raya and those of Earth was interesting. Her interactions with humans were great and I loved the fact that she didn't just know how to speak English. I will say that the crush one of the humans has on Raya seems a little forced, but other than that, it was cute.
This book is dialogue driven which I liked because I can fill in the details of the scenery and background myself. That may not appeal to others, but I tend to like to learn things through the voices of the characters rather than all the background noise. Overall, I liked the book more than I thought I would and found it hard to put down. I might even pick up the sequel.
Elemental, the first in a series by author, Liane Mahugh, uses the teenage protagonist, Raya, from the planet Solara, attends school to become a space traveler, is put through some tests by the leaders before her ardent journey. That journey on the ship, Solara Prime, sends her to a planet (known to all of us humans) on a path she’ll never forget–speaking the same English language, eating ice cream, and probably never having to fight aliens from other worlds. The author (a lover of the Great Lakes?) does a terrific bit of storytelling by laying out the lead character on her original planet and leads the readers through Raya’s test trials and then onto a passage of a lifetime across the galaxy.
I enjoyed these characters – Dev, boyfriend to Raya, quick to do anything for her – hold a hand, provide an adoring kiss, help her fix a ship, and never leaving her alone. He also had the sympathetic touch and heart that could and might break if her ever lost his love in space or the ardent journey that Raya embarked upon into the galaxy. Professor Tibal, the leader of leaders, who worked closely with Raya, and was very methodical and reassuring, but could hold some mysterious, hidden qualities, especially during the big trial before Raya’s takeoff to another world. Ke’ara, sister of the protagonist, who knew Raya was stronger, but also more tenacious that anyone, and would always lend a watching eye over her sister’s dress code. Priya, from the planet earth, who with her father, discovers the ship landing, is a bit picky on word selection, a bit sarcastic and funny, very smart and aware, but also surprised at some of Raya’s abilities and schemes from her home and planet. Dev, the dedicated boyfriend, who always shows up to save her lover, and secretly wanted to travel in space with Raya.
Overall, a great Sci-Fi storyline, very original, especially where most novels of this nature tend to lead the reader on a journey leaving from the planet earth, whereas this read does the opposite. For any space odyssey or futuristic book lover, this novel by Lianne brings forth some great action, great adventure, awesome plot weaves, mind-bending space travel and a great ending, the science fiction buff will never expect, or forget.
This sounded like an intriguing premise - a girl from a distant planet crash-landed on earth and now under suspicion by humans about whether she could be trusted or not. Raya was a likeable and plucky main character. I immediately warmed to her as she clearly had special powers as an Elemental, someone able to control the elements, beyond normal levels of giftedness among her fellow students and I thought her suspicion and paranoia about the people supposed to be helping her - Professor Tibal and Dr. Vinta - was absolutely natural in those circumstances. I also liked how during her six months of preparation for the trip to earth, Raya matured a lot in the sense that she came to understand how her gift would benefit the mission and her people the Solarans. A dramatic part that I liked was learning about how other worlds were terraformed, and how sometimes if the inhabitants of those worlds became warlike or a threat to other planets, there was an implication that the Solarans, as the original host, might wipe them out. This storyline reminded me a bit of the Saiyan race in the Dragonball Manga series, exploring and sometimes destroying other worlds.
In addition to the well-developed sci-fi elements of this story and good world building, the real strength I thought was in the relationships between Raya and supporting characters: her boyfriend Dev and Dad and when on earth, with Uncle Jake, Quinn and Priya. An interaction that stood out as funny was when Raya mistook hotdogs as being made of dogs and her revulsion at this. I also enjoyed the earthlings having to explain slang to Raya, which her translator couldn't follow and the use of sci-fi films to introduce Raya to western culture on earth. The last third of the book was full of drama with Dev rejoining Raya and her new friends, as well as enemies aplenty both through the US military and hostile Solarans. This was a great read with an ending that was neatly wrapped up as a standalone, what with the situation between Dev and Raya, but also sets the scene for a sequel.
ARC Reader for Voracious Readers Only – This is my honest review and opinion about Elemental.
First off, I wanted to thank the author Liane Mahugh for sending me an ARC copy and allowing me the privilege of reading and reviewing Elemental.
Elemental takes place on Solara Prime, a planet that is home to an advanced civilization where some have developed the capability to control the elements. Raya, a 16-year-old girl can control the elements beyond her peoples’ wildest dreams, she is a prodigy and has been selected for a secret mission to travel to Earth. While training for this mission everything takes a turn for the worse when an organization known for their attacks sets their sight on the mission leaving Earth. After stopping their efforts to sabotage the ship, Raya is sent into space for a 6-month journey. After hitting debris while outside of Earth’s atmosphere she crashed lands in Canada. With no way to return home, she hopes to find the necessary parts to repair her ship and complete her mission.
Raya is someone that has been told all her life she is special and will go far, she can do things no one else can. She is one of a kind and instead of letting that get to her head she is still levelheaded and caring. Raya’s character goes from someone who is unsure how her future will look to accepting something that sends her light years away from home. I loved the characters Raya, Dev, “Uncle” Jake, Priya, and Quinn. They were all unique and fit together quite well. I loved that the plot also had “villains” it showed how greedy people can be when introduced to something they want to control or take away from.
I really enjoyed reading this book, it was an original take on fantasy, science fiction, and aliens. The story was unpredictable, making it an interesting read with twists and turns, it was a page turner for me, and I had difficulty putting it down. Liane Mahugh has created a book worth reading, I cannot wait to finish the series and find out what happens with Raya.
In this YA fiction sci-fi tale, Raya is a teenage, humanoid being from the planet Solara Prime, who is trained on a lone mission to visit Earth to find out the fate of a previous convoy to the planet and to report back to her superiors on the status and wellbeing of the inhabitants there. One thing stands in her way: the terrorists who don’t believe in visiting and ‘fixing’ other planets and that their planet should be the highest priority for the Solaran scientists.
The book is in two parts: the first part covers Raya’s life and world on Solara Prime: her family, her boyfriend Dev, and her elemental powers, which she demonstrates to their maximum potential when she has to take part in a frightening trial in order to be chosen for the mission. Her powers mean she can control the elements and this comes in very handy when she comes up against terrorists trying to scupper the mission. The second part relates the events on Earth, where we discover how close in physiology the Solarans are to the people of Earth, and the friends she makes when her ship crashes in a lake in Canada: Uncle Jake, Quinn and Pryria. She sets out to find out what happened to the previous Solaran visitors, leading to an interesting tie-in with the events of Roswell in 1947.
Overall, I enjoyed the book, but although the reader needs to know Raya’s background and about her life on Solara Prime, I felt too many chapters were dedicated to it in the first part of the book and not enough time was given over to her time on Earth in the second part. I was amused by Raya’s impression of alien invasion and guessed immediately her research of Earth involved old B movie sci-fi films. Her character was believable and well-drawn, as were those of Dev and Raya’s new friends. There is an open ending to the book, suggesting a sequel might be in the offing.
Elemental is the story of a young woman named Raya who lives on another planet that is far more evolved than Earth. Her planet is one that is abundant with resources and has aided other life forms across the galaxy for centuries. Some of her people took a mission to visit Earth and it's now up to Raya to locate the missing members of her planet and find out what happened to them.
Though the novel started off much stronger than it ended I would still recommend this to fans of Sci-Fi and Young Adult novels. When I read the blurb, I felt I was slightly misled just a bit. I thought Raya would be more mysterious and we wouldn't know her backstory right away but the first third of the novel is spent doing just that. It was the most compelling aspect of the novel. I liked spending time on this distant planet seemingly like Earth and getting to know Raya's family and loved ones. It was cool seeing the MC discover her special abilities, but I would have liked to have spent a lot more time with that aspect, especially considering what happens later in the novel.
The second portion of the novel is where Raya journeys to Earth and meets new friends that help her on her mission. This section of the book wasn't bad at all but it was a little rushed in my opinion. Uncle Jake was the only Earthling that stood out for me. The rest of the side characters seemed pretty interchangeable. I lot of the tension and action was resolved a little too quickly and smoothly for my tastes. Raya does face one major challenge that gets her into trouble that was pretty much it. Though I did sort of like the way the book ended, leaving room for a sequel that could perhaps improve upon the original and enhance the world and characters. Could have been more action-packed but there is definitely a lot of potential here. If you're interested give it a try.
Enjoyable sci-fi adventure suitable for younger readers 16-year old Raya is an elemental, someone with the power to control elements, which is unusual but not unique on her home planet of Solara Prime. Raya’s abilities however are exceptionally strong, and she can control a fifth element (lightning) unheard of in her world. Which makes her perfect for a secret mission to Earth. Some people however are not so pleased with her mission and want to sabotage it. This is an enjoyable, easy read. The science fiction element is really soft, which makes it a good introduction to science fiction for younger readers. I liked Raya, I liked Uncle Jake, Quinn and Priya, and the friendship they form. The first half of the story is set in Solara Prime as Raya prepares for her trial first of all and then for her mission. The second half of the story takes place on Earth where Raya befriends the aforementioned Uncle Jake, Quinn and Priya. There is a lot of humour in this part of the story as Raya tries to understand various colloquialisms and cultural references, before getting the opportunity to continue her mission. Her new friends want to help, but what Raya has in mind is very dangerous – and is also a lot of fun to read. I would have liked Solara Prime to be distinctly different from our world – possibly reading about the university accommodation in Galway City made me think the story started in a futuristic Ireland (I was wrong)! The plot is quite straightforward, and there were elements I’d like to have seen developed more. Overall, this story is entertaining, so definitely one a lot of readers would enjoy. If you’re looking for a YA soft sci-fi with endearing characters, check this story out.
I would have enjoyed this book more if it wasn’t so derivative of television/movies. It started out feeling like Harry Potter’s “magic school” (the movie version, not the book) and “it’s up to you to save the world,” went into Star Trek, then into E.T. and went on a blow-by-blow of late 20th-century pop culture. It got tedious.
I really struggled to make it through this book. The writing quality is “all right” but is nothing special or unique—it needs developmental editing to help with flow, consistency and engagement. Some parts have too much scripty dialogue, and the parts that are good at “showing” read like Star Trek fanfic rather than original prose.
Overall, there is little to no character development, and the romantic plotline and elemental magic drop out for most of the book. There’s no consistency or flow to things. It felt like the author was searching for something to write, so rehashing old T.V. shows and movies made it into the final draft when they could have been cut, and each scene/chapter felt disconnected. Books need to reach a reader on a visceral and human level.
Yes, she’s from another planet. We get it (once they launch her into space. There was very little at the beginning to hook me in and make me feel like I was in a new society or that I knew who this person was before she was sent on a mission). I feel like the Earth kids would have more to impart to her than 50 years’ worth of television reruns, though. But where’s the emotional connection to the reader? What is Raya’s inner conflict? What are her motivations? She felt very one-dimensional for a main character.
It felt like the main underlying point of the story was a “save the environment/planet” call to action, but it tended to get lost in all the irrelevant rhetoric.
Raya is a determined teenage girl who demonstrates she is gifted from an early age. Raya excels in her studies and confidently displays her ability to manipulate different elements. Raya is smart, funny and someone who seems to have it all together in life. Eventually, the reader will learn of her misgivings as when she's tasked with a secret mission to Earth, she is overcome with apprehension and fear. Upon meeting with human beings, she becomes arrogant given that they seem so behind the times.
I like how the book had 3 clear sections. First, the reader learns of Raya's lived experiences on planet Solara. Then we come to understand her studies of planet Earth, and lastly, we learn whether her mission on planet Earth has been successful or not. Is the story farfetched? Of course…. But would it be a science fiction story if it wasn’t? Raya’s boyfriend Dev is a charming character and his undying love for her makes for pleasant reading. Dev is protective and strong and has the swoon-worthy attributes expected of a romantic love interest. It turns out that Dev is not just a pretty face and all-around decent guy. He actually understands the technical issues they face and therefore his studies in communication engineering are a massive bonus in assisting Raya with her mission. Due to a terrorist organisation running around Solara and sabotaging plans, Dev’s assistance becomes pivotal to Raya’s success.
Raya’s initial interactions with humans were fascinating and well-written. I enjoyed how she learned to communicate with them given her limitations and language barriers. The dialogue in this book is clever and there were no plot holes. A seamless read which is unique and enjoyable.
"Elemental" by Liane Mahugh offers an engaging science fiction adventure story filled with intrigue, action, and a strong sense of camaraderie among its central characters. The story's well-crafted plot keeps the reader invested throughout.
The author does an excellent job of character development, allowing readers to connect with the main characters, especially Raya and Dev, on an emotional level. Raya's journey to Earth in search of her people's legacy and Dev's pursuit of her add depth and purpose to the narrative. The supporting characters, Jake, Priya, and Quinn, are relatable and contribute significantly to the story's charm.
The book combines elements of a young adult coming-of-age tale with classic science fiction themes. It explores topics such as friendship, belonging, and the potential for positive change, both on a personal and global scale. The inclusion of environmental themes, such as renewable energy sources, adds a contemporary relevance to the story.
The pacing of the book is well-balanced, with a mix of action sequences, character development, and emotional moments. The writing style is clear and accessible, making it suitable for young adult readers while still offering substance for a broader audience.
The epilogue provides a satisfying conclusion to the story, offering a glimpse into the characters' lives after their adventures. It ties up loose ends while leaving room for the possibility of future encounters.
"Elemental" is a captivating and heartwarming read that combines science fiction elements with a strong sense of character-driven storytelling. It's a recommended choice for readers who enjoy young adult science fiction with themes of friendship, environmental awareness, and adventure.
Like teenagers everywhere, Raya isn’t satisfied with what she’s got. A talented and gifted student of extraordinary elemental abilities who’s been elected to undergo The Trial earlier than most, and with a dedicated boyfriend in desirable Dev, she nevertheless foresees a boring future working in weather control.
It’s her lucky day though, as Raya’s considerable powers mean that she’s been selected for an important mission in her home planet Solara’s quest for intelligent life on other planets located far and wide throughout the universe. It won’t be plain sailing though, as it turns out that Solara is in trouble, on the verge of running out of essential resources—water, soil, oxygen—and there are those who will go to great lengths to ensure that any viable planets encountered by the Solaran search teams will be exploited, rather than encouraged to grow and interact with Solara. Raya is despatched to distant planet, therefore, and what she finds there isn’t necessarily what she was hoping for.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story by author Liane Mahugh, which made entertaining reading for a grown adult even though it’s aimed at a ten-to-eighteen-year-old audience. It’s well-paced and detailed, with the seriousness of terrorist activity balanced by the humour of Raya’s attempts to adapt to the society of the planet on which she finds herself, not to mention a cross-over into recent human history and mystery. It also seems a well-edited piece, with only the occasional grammatical error which is neither here nor there, and an ending which leaves open the possibility for a sequel while not leaving the reader in irritating limbo. Good work.
Elemental is an enjoyable, easy-to-read, young adult sci-fi novel. It wasn't quite what I expected from the blurb, which centers around the main character, Raya, crash landing on Earth. That doesn't actually happen until halfway through the book, and although I enjoyed the earlier section where Raya is preparing for her mission on her home planet, I kept wondering when the story as teased in the blurb would start. Once Raya does get to earth there are some fun fish-out-of-water moments, but this section of the book feels younger than the earlier section probably because of the multiple teenage characters whereas earlier in the book Raya is the exceptional teen surrounded by adults and an older boyfriend.
I like how this book explores themes such as humans depleting resources on earth and damaging the planet. This is something that also happened in the history of Raya's people who, after abandoning their original home planet, have advanced far past this point.
As an adult reading this book, I found it difficult to suspend my disbelief that a sixteen year old would be sent on such an important solo mission but younger readers should have no issue. Overall, I feel this is a book that would appeal well to young adult and middle grade readers rather than adults who like to read YA.
The book ends in a manner that's clearly setting it up for a sequel but it's also a satisfying ending for the story.
The story follows a seventeen-year-old girl Raya who lives on Solara Prime. Her species are very similar to humans, however, they have evolved to be able to manipulate the elements around them such as earth, air, and water. When Raya finishes her studies, she is sent to Earth to investigate the species that live there and report on their developmental progress. To her surprise the planet is surrounded by space junk, the atmosphere and water are polluted, and the humans are fighting wars with each other. Raya has to make a decision if further progress of humans poses a danger to other species in the universe and if the planet should be just exploited for its resources.
Although the idea of the story is very interesting, the author spends a lot of time preparing Raya for the departure rather than focusing on the heart of the story. While on Solara Prime, Raya seems to be an arrogant teenager whose only negative is lack of any friends and not being able to keep secrets. The Solarians who are any good at their job are Raya and her perfect boyfriend Dev. In general, Solarians do not strike as nice a species as everyone seems to be snappy at each other, calling each other names, making insinuations and not trusting each other's expertise. I was happy to see that Raya was able to make friends on Earth, however, it is not clear if Raya improved as a person.
I was surprised that I enjoyed "Elemental" as much as I did, as I'm not usually a big reader of YA science fiction. However, I was drawn in by the cool cover and decided to give it a shot. And I'm glad I did.
"Elemental" can be broken down into three distinct sections. In the first section, the author, Liane Mahugh, sets up the scene. We witness Raya going through a sort of 'graduation' before she is sent on a great and important adventure. This section introduces us to Raya and her relationships, laying the groundwork for us to appreciate what comes later. As we observe her struggle with her training and mission,
In the second section, which takes place on Earth, we see Raya as a fish out of water. While there are certain shades of Eleven from "Stranger Things" in her portrayal (the super-powered outsider who doesn't understand the world around them), Raya possesses her own unique charm. What's interesting is how it reminds me of that stage in life (like starting a new job, moving to a new place, or entering university) where you transition from a place of confidence to one where you have to rediscover yourself. This metaphor is fitting to find in a YA novel, and it's well-handled.
The last section is the crescendo, and I don't want to spoil it by giving anything away. But I will say that the finale is worth the wait, especially if you have a bit of a geeky inclination when it comes to Alien lore.
The Solarans are an advanced race of aliens whose main aim is to explore and help other races. In some cases if they encounter races who are a danger to the universe then they will be destroyed. Raya, a young Solaran who has some amazing elemental powers is sent to a little planet called Earth on a reconnaissance mission to report of their progress and also to search for her people who had also been sent there many years before but they had lost contact with them as soon as they had arrived. When she arrives she experiences some difficulties and crashes. But she is rescued by three humans. Jake, Priya and Quinn. She soon makes friends with them and develops a bond. However her initial findings of the planets progress is not very promising. Also the truth behind her people coming before and what happened to them could spell trouble for the planet. Could her friendship with the humans change her mind. This story is very cleverly written and is rather intriguingly written from an alien’s POV. There are some genuinely laugh out load moments as Raya gets use to Earth’s customs and to the long string of pop culture references that Quinn likes to spout on about. It’s got a great pace to it and kept me entertained throughout. I hope we see more Raya in the future.
The Solarans are an advanced race of aliens whose main aim is to explore and help other races. In some cases if they encounter races who are a danger to the universe then they will be destroyed. Raya, a young Solaran who has some amazing elemental powers is sent to a little planet called Earth on a reconnaissance mission to report of their progress and also to search for her people who had also been sent there many years before but they had lost contact with them as soon as they had arrived. When she arrives she experiences some difficulties and crashes. But she is rescued by three humans. Jake, Priya and Quinn. She soon makes friends with them and develops a bond. However her initial findings of the planets progress is not very promising. Also the truth behind her people coming before and what happened to them could spell trouble for the planet. Could her friendship with the humans change her mind. This story is very cleverly written and is rather intriguingly written from an alien’s POV. There are some genuinely laugh out load moments as Raya gets use to Earth’s customs and to the long string of pop culture references that Quinn likes to spout on about. It’s got a great pace to it and kept me entertained throughout. I hope we see more Raya in the future.
Elemental: a YA Sci-Fi Adventure, is a gripping fantasy tale of an advanced group of humanoids living in a distant solar system. Raya, the main character, has a talent for controlling the elements, thus, she is an Elemental. But Raya is far more gifted than her peers and seems to be able to control her powers in an amazing way. She lives in the capital city of Solara with her mother, father, and sister. But her father has been works at a remote site and has not been home for months. Raya also has a boyfriend, Dev, an inventor who works for the Technology Council. Once Raya passes her final test, called a trial, she is offered a dangerous mission, one that requires her to travel away from her solar system to a distant planet. The vital need for this journey is revealed to Raya, a secret kept from all but a few people in their population. This mission would require her to be away from her friends and family for at least two years. Will she accept this challenge? I found this to be a well-written, creative story. The pacing was effective and kept my interest throughout. Although there will be a continuation to this story, the book ends at a satisfactory place. I recommend this book to readers of Science Fiction, Apocalyptic, and futuristic adventure tales.
There’s a lot going on in this sci-fi world – space exploration, telekinetic and telepathic abilities, terrorists, government secrets – but it all ties together nicely. Raya is young but powerful, with a knack for controlling the elements to a degree seldom seen on her planet. The people of Solara Prime once seeded many of the universe’s other planets with life, but now their own planet is facing environmental disaster. Raya is sent on a solo mission to Earth, with multiple goals: Find the survivors of an earlier mission, and see if the Earth might be able to help her own planet.
The books starts out slow, but it’s interesting enough to keep you invested. We get to see the trials Raya must face to graduate, and then we’re walked through the process of launching the spacecraft that will eventually take her to Earth. The story really takes off once she reaches Earth. Her interactions with the first humans she meets are a lot of fun. This eventually leads to an exciting road trip, culminating at a secret military base.
I love “fish out of water” stories, especially when they involve two cultures learning more about each other. There’s a lot here to like, and the story is definitely worth a look.
"Elemental: Teen and Young Adult Sci-Fi Adventure Novel" by Liane Mahugh is a captivating tale beloved by sci-fi enthusiasts. Mahugh skillfully intertwines friendship, personal growth, and adventure in a mysterious world governed by elemental forces. Readers praise its unique narrative, well-developed characters, and intricately crafted universe. True to its name, "Elemental" takes readers on an unforgettable journey through young adulthood and the vast expanse of the universe. With its compelling plot and richly portrayed characters, this book immerses readers in a world of wonder and excitement. Delve into "Elemental" and embark on an extraordinary adventure that will keep you eagerly engrossed until the very last page. Discover the magic and mystery that reside within the pages of this remarkable novel, and let yourself be transported to a universe where limitless possibilities await. Experience the thrill of unexpected twists and turns as the story unfolds. Lose yourself in the vivid descriptions that bring the world of "Elemental" to life. Feel the tension rise as the protagonists face challenges and discover their true potential. This is a book that will ignite your imagination and leave you yearning for more. Don't miss out on this remarkable journey