Re Lingering Melody - let's just all know that I am a HUGE PW fan girl, so while her writing does have some very valid criticisms - especially in her feminine, delicate almost TSTL h's and very, very Alpha H's - I just don't care. I am biased, I like her h's usually and her H's tend to grow on me by the end- even tho they do all those H things I hate, like bully, blackmail and order people about and seem to enjoy it and NEVER explain themselves until the very, very end. Something about PW's writing really appeals to me, and I don't really want to dissect why cause then the magic might not work any more and I would be bereft of really good rereading material.
So this one starts with our 24 yr old h with twin daughters and her very helpful male older cousin being summoned back to England on the behalf of her cousin's fledgling company. The cousin very kindly took her pregger self in when she was in desperate measures and they all live in Australia, where the cousin has a start up business designing the next greatest thing in computers. Except the computer genesis isn't finished yet and now the cousin's venture capital company is calling him for a business review and an accounting of his progress. Really tho, the whole thing is a set-up. The company review by it's investors is actually a cover for the very angry and possibly mentally disturbed H to get the h back into his clutches.
Our h was a 19 yr old pure and virtuous Yorkshire orphan raised by a Viking grandma and doing a secretarial course when she meets the H for the first time. He is in his thirties and it is total and utter adoration at first sight- for both of them. However our H is a bit a lurvely lady buffet sampler and he has been wronged by the ladies before, so he fights his attraction hard. This is HPLandia tho, and we all know resistance is futile.
This doesn't mean that he and the h run off for wedded bliss in the pink rosy HEA sunset either. He sets the little lady up in his home as his live in lover, the h is utterly in love and doesn't care, but things take a very bad turning when the H wanders off to America, supposedly for a short time and then doesn't wander back. To make things even worse, it appears that the H has returned to the arms of an old lover. A woman the h had heard mention of before, and apparently she dumped the H pretty harshly, leaving a permanent scar upon his heart. The h finds the letter she sent the H that had him rushing off at a moment's notice and it reads like a summons to recommence their one true love.
Since the H communication is non existent, the h has no choice but to believe she was nothing more than a little amusement and she will be cast out at any second. Plus she is now preggers. She leaves the H and flings herself on the mercy of her cousin. They all move to Australia and the h helps him with his company doing office stuff. She also invents a man and a marriage so that no one will make assumptions or judgments about her single mother status.
Then the H's summons arrives and he srsly means to destroy the cousin's business if the h doesn't agree to marry him and have her kids call him dad. The H knows all about the h's life and her twin girls and that other man she married, apparently barely two months after leaving him. The H wants revenge, he thought something horrible had happened to the h since she just walked out with nothing and he worried himself to death. The H has spent a considerable amount of time hunting her down and he was always wildly possessive and jealous. The H plans to tell everyone the h's kids are his and that she has been recovering from a three year illness - apparently he went a bit around the bend when the h left him and his friends and associates grew very concerned.
The h agrees to marry him, she owes her cousin a lot and having his business destroyed because of her mistake isn't a way to do it. She also lies about her daughters' ages. She sees no reason to inflict a father upon them who only wants revenge and might wander off again at any time. Plus the H would probably steal her children, and she isn't having any of that - they are all a package deal and why shouldn't the girls get the benefit of having a wealthy father. \
The h is fully aware it isn't much in the way of retribution for the way he pumped and dumped her, but at least it is something. So they marry and they all move to the H's magnificent country estate. The H is actually a very good father, but he and the h are maintaining a very neutral distance with occasional cutting commentary from the H. The h is very adamant that no boudoir bouncing is going to be happening on her watch, so even tho the H's kisses are divine, they maintain separate rooms.
So the h and the girls settle into life with the H. He has a very motherly housekeeper who seems to think the h is a fragile little duck that needs extra nurturing. Things are going well superficially, the h's cousin is getting on with his company and his new assistant is a girl the h knew at secretarial school, they soon become a couple. Things between the H and h are dicey tho, the h misses the way it used to be and the H is still seething over the supposedly dead husband.
Then the h gets the flu and the house floods from the local river. The H is kinder to the h, but when they have to go to the H's London flat while the house is being restored from the flood, the h runs into a vicious gossip who makes all sorts of comments about the h and her girls and the H's old lover. The H knows that the girls are his, he figured it out right after they married, but the h is really upset that nasty rumors are going round about them all. The H jumps into protective mode and makes arrangements for the gossip to be kicked off her committees and out of their social circle. Then the H forcibly seduces the h, tho she isn't complaining. However this forced seduction that ends in mutual bliss seems to have a very negative impact on the H, he seems to be feeling horribly guilty over the thing - even tho the h was just fine with how it all ended.
Now the h is getting more concerned over the H's increasing moodiness and wonders how long it will be before he goes back to his first true love. Then she sees a letter from America and things come to a head. They all go back to the country house and the H comes in one night and offers the h a divorce. She is shocked, and assumes he wants to return to his real love in America, but the H makes it clear that he is only offering one cause he can't stand to see the h so unhappy anymore. The h assures him she doesn't want a divorce and then they wind up lurvin it up. The H decides to take the h away for a few days and the h is worried again, but she still doesn't mention the fact that she made up a husband and she doesn't bring up his past lover.
The H's surprise is that he bought the h's grandmother's cottage as a present for the h. She is really delighted and finally the whole truth comes out. The h asks him about his former love and the H explains that she was an older woman who dazzled him at first, until she got shares in his company in America and then proceeded to cheat on him, which made him fall out of love and become really cynical and bitter really quickly- until he met the h that is.
The H moved back to England then and built up the business there, letting the American side slowly fade out until the woman had no more influence. The letter the H got was when the woman was dying and she died before he got there. The H had to stay for several days to finish up her affairs, but he got his company shares back. When he returned, he wanted to marry the h cause he figures out he really loved her. But the h had already left him, so he spent four years hunting her down and setting her up to keep her forever.
The h explains that she found the letter, thought she was a temporary amusement, found out she was preggers and went to Australia but then decided to make up a husband so people wouldn't make nasty assumptions. The h and H are both relieved that they were both jealous over non-existent lovers and the H sincerely apologizes for not telling her what he was doing in America to begin with. He is really heartfelt and adorable for the last chapter and half, it was close enough to a grovel that I was just in a swoon.
The H is really, really sweet in his explanations and in how much he loves the h. She had some pretty clueless moments when it came to realizing how much the H loved her - it is pretty obvious for most of the book- but he does do and say some mean things so it all balances out nicely in the end.
Overall this is a very sweet with a side of tartness story that works because the H is just so crazy about the h and she is just so clueless that he does. The h isn't dumb and she isn't vapid, she was just really sheltered and young and to be fair, to the world and the people who talked to her, she really was just the H's latest mistress for a large part of their relationship. She wasn't worldly enough to see how madly in love he was and the H really wanted to have his cake and eat it too, otherwise he would have put a ring on it a lot sooner and maybe the h wouldn't have left him.
The H is also pretty grateful the h kept the twins, he admits that with her thinking he had deserted her, it took a lot of courage to keep them and raise them and he was just happy that they could finally be a real family. For an Alpha H, this one was pretty sweet and the h manages to get there with the realization he loves her in the end and if it had been any other way, I wouldn't have been so entertained for 189 pages.
I like this one a lot, but it may be a bit too soppy romantically for those who love the Vengeful H to be not so sweetly supportive by the end. If you are new to PW, I wouldn't really start with this one tho, the h may be too clueless for a lot of readers. For the HP Veterans this one is a good read and even new HPlandia travelers will appreciate just how nice the H turns out to be by the end of it.