Reading Seize the Fire, I couldn't help but suspect that Michael A. Martin must have received a lucrative per-word payment and stretched out things as much as he was capable of. For a taste of the writing style employed here, instead of simply saying somebody was sleeping Martin writes that they were "engaging in the regular pattern of nocturnal dormancy." Because why use one word when nearly a dozen works, amiright?
This unnecessarily long and burdensomely repetitive sophomore Typhon Pact novel focuses around a pair of rival Gorn ships seeking a planet to rebuild their crecheworld following the destruction of their warrior caste's planetary hatchery. One ship possesses terraforming technology and are getting ready to launch an assault against an inhabited planet. The other wants to destroy that technology and gain supremacy over the Gorn entirely. Enter Captain Will Riker and the crew of the Titan, who are caught between a rock and a hard place. Below them are the Hranrarii, a pre-warp civilization unaware how near death's door they are. Due to the Prime Directive, Riker is forbidden from interfering or making contact with the Hranrarii, and his presence in this planet's system puts him directly in the crosshairs of the Gorn. Certainly not an easy predicament!
In case you're ever unsure of just how uneasy this affair is, Martin is sure to remind you often and repeatedly of just how sticky a situation it is. We're told over and over and over and over and over again about how desperately the Federation needs terraforming technology after the Borg's devastating attack the year prior. Nearly every Titan POV character pops ups to tell the reader that the Federation could really benefit from the promise of such technology, but that it could also be used as an incredibly powerful weapon. But the Federation could truly benefit from it, even if it poses a massive existential threat. Still, the Federation could make use of it. But it is dangerous. However, it could really help the Federation recover and rebuild. Although, it could be used against them and any other world should it proliferate. But it also represents a miracle for the Federation and the worlds that suffered under the Borg assault. But, hey, you remember Project Genesis from Star Trek III? Yeah, it could be bad! But it could also be good! Has it been mentioned yet that it could be bad, but also maybe do a whole lot of good? Fifteen percent into this damn book I was already getting sick of the constant reminders about this alien technology!
It doesn't help, either, that every time Martin shifts the story over to the Gorn, the pacing grinds to a freaking halt thanks too many similar and oftentimes impenetrable names, plus even more ad nauseam repetition that the Gorn need to find a new hatchery world tailored specifically for their warrior caste. The rival Gorn ships involve the Ssevarrh and the S'alath, and are crewed by characters like Gog’resssh, Zegrroz’rh, Z’shezhira, and the like. I had trouble keeping track of who was who and on which ship despite the chapter headers telling us which ship was supposed to be which!
To the positive - and there are positives to be sure! - the internal and external conflicts are actually promising and intriguing. Riker wanting to do the right thing and ramming face-first into the Prime Directive is a really neat wrinkle. Points, too, for the Gorn rivalry, which sees a bloodthirsty captain on one side squaring off against bloodthirsty pirates who have their own plans for supremacy over the Gorn Hegemony, and the various ways they conflict with the Titan. I really dug the dilemmas these aspects created for Riker and company, and the climax is suitably action-packed and thorny.
Seize the Fire is ultimately a mixed bag - it has enough going for it to keep the pages turning, but would have benefited from a more judicious and ruthless edit. Martin's prose is unnecessarily bloated, and he spends a lot of time repeating himself, frustratingly covering and recovering the same ground while making questionable plotting and character choices. We get a brief look at Tuvok's service history aboard the Excelsior and his encounter with a Genesis weapon way back when, but it ultimately serves little purpose other than to remind us of how much better The Search for Spock was than the book we are currently reading. Martin also delivers an interesting thread involving the terraforming technology that pops up very, very late in the book and goes absolutely nowhere with it, to the point that I wondered why it was included at all. Quite a lot of Seize the Fire could, and should have, been left on the cutting room floor to the benefit of the end product. What we're given, instead, is a faintly serviceable read that offers glimpses of promise buried under a whole lot of unwanted fat.