I was going to give this one 3.5 stars, but then the ending was rather lame so it got knocked down to 3. But at least I thought this book was much better than Freefall, the first book in the High Risk series.
Crossfire continues Ross's series about a bunch of former Navy SEALs trying to figure out civilian life after a mission gone wrong that had them all leaving the service. This book features Quinn McKade, the sniper of the SEAL team. Quinn is living in Somersett, SC and is now writing military fiction books. He also works with the private security group, Phoenix from time to time. The heroine is Cait Cavanaugh, a cop turned FBI agent who has been in several other of Ross's books. Quinn and Cait have a history together - they first met years ago when Quinn dated Cait's roommate. Both felt the connection, but Cait didn't want any part of a military man, and Quinn was dating the roommate. But neither forgot the other. Then when the both attended the same wedding, they ended up in bed, but Cait was afraid and ran off the morning after. Quinn's never stopped wanting her, and Cait hasn't been able to push him from her mind.
Now, years later, the two are thrown together again when a sniper starts targeting innocent victims in Somersett. Cait reluctantly uses Quinn's sniper expertise to aid the case and Quinn is more than happy to help, and to get closer to Cait. As the body count rises, Cait begins to see Quinn isn't quite who she thought he was and her heart softens toward him. But before they can think of moving their relationship forward, they have to catch the person making target practice of ordinary citizens, and who plans to make Cait a target as well.
One of the biggest things I didn't like about the first book in the series, Freefall, was how segregated the romance and the suspense plot were. You had the romance on one side and the suspense on the other and the two didn't meet until rather late in the book. It made things kinda weird and rather dull. But in Crossfire there's much better integration between the romance and the suspense. The two are very heavily intertwined as Cait's investigating the crimes and Quinn's unofficially assisting. It makes the story read much better and feel more whole, not like reading two separate stories. So on that aspect, this book was heads and tails better than the previous one.
On the flip side, unlike Freefall where the romance is very prevalent and quick in developing, the relationship between Quinn and Cait is very slow in progressing. There's an obvious chemistry, and many references to what happened between them in the past and that they wanted each other now. But it's not until rather late in the book that things move forward between them. Even saying that, I can't say I minded too much. It kinda worked for the story. I did think Cait did a rather abrupt about face regarding her feelings for Quinn. She just suddenly goes from trying to keep him out to thinking orange blossums. It was a little too sudden.
I also thought the characters lacked some depth, to a certain degree. Quinn's got a very complicated past and I felt Ross glossed over that too much. I wanted to know more about what he'd went through as a child because the details she gave were rather sketchy.
The suspense aspect was pretty good, if a bit disturbing, and more plausible than one would like to think considering something like that has actually happened in real life at least once. Like the first book, I do wish Ross hadn't given quite so many details about the upcoming victims before they got whacked. It's so damn depressing. There were also some procedural things that didn't seem quite kosher. Quinn was more involved in the investigation than he probably should have been.
If I had to make two main complaints, though, one would be that Ross has a bad habit of sticking completely random scenes in where they don't seem to fit. There was one section where you're reading a discussion between Cait and Quinn about the nature of snipers. It's an important thing for the investigation and for Cait to learn more about Quinn. Then the chapter abruptly ends and a new one starts that about some little boy you've never met and know nothing about who is thinking about how he's starting a new school and worried about his stuttering problem. Then the chapter ends and you go back to Cait and Quinn discussion snipers. As a reader, it's like, wait? What? Where that come from and why is it there? It ruins the flow of what you're reading and seems completely illogical. The boy ends up playing a small, somewhat important role, but there's got to be a better way to fit those scenes in than sticking them in the middle of a scene with the H/H. Ross just has a bad habit of sticking non-sequitur chapters that break up the flow in a bad way.
The second complaint would be the ending. Which seemed rushed and a bit incomplete. The whole suspense plot is about an anonymous wannabe-sniper seemingly picking people off at random. Then the end rolls around and all you really get is the person's name and a few spare facts about him...and the revelation that another person was involved with only the barest of facts about that. When I finished, I didn't really have that feeling of closure regarding the suspense aspect of the book. I just wanted to know more and felt rather frustrated that the author skipped over so much. It was disappointing and knocked my overall opinion of the book down.
Still, I enjoyed this one much more than Freefall. It was much more interesting and engaging. I wouldn't call it a great book, but if I'd bought it (instead of taking it out of the library) I wouldn't have considered it a waste of money. And I enjoyed it enough to want to move on to the next book, which just came out. So for those of you who felt Freefall fell flat and debated whether to read more, you might want to give this one a chance. It's not a perfect book, but it was good enough.