Ridiculous
Once again, poor editing on these books. But, a pattern is emerging in Amanda McKinney's writing. Apparently, every character is exactly alike. The male leads are all immature, emotionally crippled, alcoholic womanizers with the social capacity of a rock. Every female lead is a fiesty, stubborn sex pot who somehow possesses the ability to make an emotionally unavailable man-child fall in love with her in a matter of 24 - 48 hours based on a few hours worth of interaction. *insert eye roll here* I mean, does Amanda know how to write anything else? We're getting cookie-cutter characters and the same cliché plot points in every single book.
All of the Steele Shadows Security books have had ridiculous, unbelievable things happen that force the reader to completely suspend disbelief beyond what you have to when reading fiction, but 'Cabin 3' takes the cake! (WARNING: SLIGHT SPOILER ALERT)
Phoenix has been in a freaking coma for weeks after taking a bullet to the brain, but we're supposed to believe that he comes out of the coma, somehow miraculously has enough strength to even get out of bed, jump out of his hospital window, find car keys, drive out to his property, somehow know precisely where his brothers are on their three thousand acre land, bust in and shoot the person responsible for their father's death and his own, near-fatal gunshot wound? Not only is he doing something he should not be medically or physically capable of doing, but he just so happens to do it at the precise second a life was on the line and one second later, someone would have died? Come on! To make it even worse, in the very next chapter we're told the man needs physical therapy because he can't even hold a cup or zip a zipper, but he managed to drive a freaking car, hold a gun, and accurately shoot someone who was holding a hostage in front of them without hurting the hostage? Are you freaking kidding me? It ruins the author's credibility when she expects her readers to be dumb enough to swallow this bull crap. Yes, it's fiction, but it's not science fiction!