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Invidia

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It’s been two months since his girlfriend, Annabell, defeated her enemy. It’s Halloween and everything seems to be going fine. And why not, when he’s Derrick Clark, the new hottie at Madison High and he’s dating one of the most gorgeous, popular girls ever... who just happens to be the new Queen of the undead…

As if high school isn't hard enough, just think how hard it is to get his vampire girlfriend out of his head and stay focused on school. Then, without warning, Derrick has to deal with yet another vampire who has his eyes on Annabell, and who may have an ulterior motive for arriving

As their relationship deepens, Derrick and Annabell must face new peril as Annabell takes on the role of Queen and is threatened by old enemies who destroyed her family and now seek to take her crown.

256 pages, Paperback

First published January 1, 2009

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Nicci Sefton

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These books are fiction books for all ages. The Series is called The Deadly Sins because I wanted
to write something everyone could relate to because its human nature, but I knew no one would listen to
them if it was just about a normal high school boy or girl because it’d seem too tangible, but I knew if
I put some kind of twist to it and exaggerate the sins’ scenarios it’d have adventure and thrills that will
draw people in and make them listen. Henceforth, why they are vampire books. Wither we like it or not
vampires, today, seem to grab our attentions everywhere we go and who better to teach us about sins then,
what some people seem to call them, the very essence of sin. They know better than anyone what these
deadly sins are capable of and our excellent teachers

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April 11, 2011
Annabell Crystal has the world at the tip of her beautiful, lethal fangs. She has vanquished an evil presence, assumed her rightful heritage as the queen of the vampires, preserved her virtue, and accepted the human, Derrick, as the love of her life and her probable king. Immortality never looked so good. Then Donavon Snider enrolls at Madison Prep High School, and Annabell’s horrific past comes crashing in to claim her soul.

An ancient German family of murderous, sociopathic vampires, the Sniders dispute Annabell’s claim to royalty, and they will stop at nothing to destroy her. Donavon has long been infatuated with the mysterious and powerful young queen. Although the Crystal family’s strength is legendary, they are matched by the psychotic determination of Donavon’s sisters, Eliza and Valisia, and Annabell is brutally kidnapped by the Snider coven. The Crystal family, along with Derrick and his best friend, Paul, will stop at nothing to save her.

Invidia, the second book in Nicci Sefton’s The Deadly Sins Series, provides tangible suspense. The pursuit and battle between the families is vigorous and well described, and Sefton includes several plot twists and a very complex historical narrative. Characters, Paul’s in particular, continue to develop as the novel progresses. He enables a story complication, and his relationship to Annabell’s formidable sister, Precious, becomes more significant. Romance is intensified, and the climax is modern and vividly imagined, set at an outdoor rock concert. Readers can clearly anticipate a sequel.

However, as in Luxuria, the story and much of the character development is very heavily influenced by other, best-selling vampire series. Also, though improved, stylistic errors in grammar, syntax and spelling continue to damage the writing throughout the novel. Careful editing would improve Sefton’s work.

Contains: mild violence, mild profanity, and sexual content
Reviewed by: Sheila Shedd
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