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The Cadeleonian Series #1
Lord of the White Hell Book One
Kiram Kir-Zaki may be considered a mechanist prodigy among his own people, but when he becomes the first Haldiim ever admitted to the prestigious Sagrada Academy, he is thrown into a world where power, superstition and swordplay outweigh even the most scholarly of achievements.
But when the intimidation from his Cadeleonian classmates turns bloody, Kiram unexpectedly finds himself befriended by Javier Tornesal, the leader of a group of cardsharps, duelists and lotharios who call themselves Hellions.
However Javier is a dangerous friend to have. Wielder of the White Hell and sole heir of a Dukedom, he is surrounded by rumors of forbidden seductions, murder and damnation. His enemies are many and any one of his secrets could not only end his life but Kiram's as well.
But when the intimidation from his Cadeleonian classmates turns bloody, Kiram unexpectedly finds himself befriended by Javier Tornesal, the leader of a group of cardsharps, duelists and lotharios who call themselves Hellions.
However Javier is a dangerous friend to have. Wielder of the White Hell and sole heir of a Dukedom, he is surrounded by rumors of forbidden seductions, murder and damnation. His enemies are many and any one of his secrets could not only end his life but Kiram's as well.
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August 19, 2016
1.5 stars. This one started out great for me and I enjoyed it UNTIL the scene in the brothel. POSSIBLE SPOILER: I keep seeing this happening in so many gay romance stories (and I always hate it) where a character has sex with a woman just to prove something, but this one was so disgusting to me, doing it in front of your partner and then being like "What did I do wrong? Why are you mad?... You'll beg me before I come back to you". I was so turned off by all this that the enjoyment I had had thus far completely vanished. I wish I had stopped before that chapter. I KNOW that there were other ways for the author to cause a rift in the relationship or some tension other than the whorehouse. It just....ugh! I was thinking we were going to find out that Javier never had sex with the whores; that maybe he just went into another room or paid them without having sex or something. Anything for him to still remain decent or likable…or different. In what romance is this a good character trait? It was such a tired move. It's unexpected and repulsive and unimaginative. Think of something else that could at least maintain a level of sympathy for the characters. Otherwise it's not consistent with the character building. I tried to read the second book just because I hoped & prayed that maybe it was a dream or an illusion or some other explanation (I know I was pretty desperate there) but I was disappointed. It had lost it's luster. Kiram started out as this amazing young dreamer, talented and strong and ambitious, then suddenly he became this weak, pathetic, horrific stereotype whose sole purpose for living was just to suck Javier off and worship him. This is romance? I had thought the author was a better writer than that. I was told this was a different type of story. I think maybe I will just take a break from reading gay literature for a while, maybe until we get a new crop of writers for this genre.
March 22, 2025
I thought you thought of me better / Someone you couldn't lose / You said, "We're not together" / So now when we kiss, I have anger issues (Casual – Chappell Roan).
Pshhh hey, who was it that said that my immense love for the Master of Restless Shadows books would make it so I'd be disappointed in this? Stand up, where are you!? Oh yeah, it was me that said it. Well me, who’s laughing now!? Again, it’s me, I’m laughing. Man, I love proving the haters wrong (me). Okay, I'm starting to sound like a cave man, so let's get this show on the road. Because really though, I liked this book a whole lot! So much so that I even caught myself several times trying to rush through the pages just so I could find out what was coming next! "Focus got me feeling distracted, calmly overreacting" and all that. The thing is, I never really gave credence to the “voracious” part of “voracious reader,” but considering the hunger I felt while reading this? I totally get it now. It got so bad that I was seriously contemplating starting book two when I was literally still in the middle of this book! Lord of the White Hell is one of those “blink and you’ll miss it” kind of books in that one moment I blinked and noticed that I was already halfway done with the book! I'm on some “bring on the next one even though I’m not done with this one” type shit. I love how naturalistic Ginn Hale’s writing style is, and while her stories never shy away from large, world-ending plots, their respective narratives always stay within the character’s perspective. Meaning that the plot at large never becomes more important than the core human experience. No matter how fantastical, the The Cadeleonian Series will always be about how the terrible actions of the terribly powerful affect real people on the ground and how those people can and will rise up against oppression. Let’s just say that the dialogue in these stories never feel like they’re written down only so they can be quoted and pasted on a coffee mug you’d find while shopping around on Etsy. Is that too specific? Because that’s basically how I felt about the entirety of Thanos’ dialogue in both of the Avengers movies that he appeared in. Sorry, I had to sneak a MCU dig in here somewhere, I guess I’m still bitter over watching that one Captain American movie, and whenever I read something actually good I’m always like “Oh yeah, this is what a good thing is like.” But I think I lost the plot somewhere along the way… um… I think my point was that I spend too much of my time giving a pass to things that are just okay by claiming that they’re “fun” and a “good enough” because damn, lord (of the White Hell) knows I do that with a lot of the books I read, leaving a string of “3-stars in my wake as I finish my next read that was totally fun and good enough. This is my way of saying that reading this book was like awakening from a deep slumber, Kingdom Hearts 2 style!
Like I said, Lord of the White Hell is a great book, and I’d say that it’s especially noteworthy for its wonderful depiction of diversity within its fantasy world because… let’s face it, fantasy is a genre that is rather well known for its lack thereof. Of course, none of this is a new argument, but I think it's important to reiterate regardless. What with Lord of the Rings’ lack of women or Game of Thrones' and its lack of queer characters (and people of color), and don’t get me started on a certain book series about a magical school where the only characters of color have names that are either offensively indicative of their racial background or just down right offensive in and of itself (“Cho Chang”? Come on now) or how the only queer characters are stated as such in tweets! And then it’s funny because whenever fantasy stories do end up trying to “represent” real world cultures, things tend to get a little dicey. I’ve already met my one “Game of Thrones mention quota” and I think it’s gotten to the point where people might think that it's the only fantasy thing I’ve ever watched, so I’ll used a different example. Now they’ll call me “two example man!” Outside of Game of Thrones, we’ve got Skyrim which is a fun and good enough game because it’s cool how the game lets you pick out and play as different races of different cultures. Hey, we’re off to a good start! But then there’s the fact that all of the different races have innate “attributes” instilled within them and it's like... uh, where is this going? For example, there’s the nomad race (who are cat people) that start out as being inherently “better at sneaking ” or there’s the fact that once the races start getting a little bit of melanin in them then they're all of a sudden “better at jumping?” Man, whenever I really think about these things in any kind of depth, all I can say is… yikes! Anyway, let’s hop back on the compliment train, because Lord of the White Hell does not have these problems, and the only reason I’m comparing it so heavily to other books of the like is because I think it’s important for me to remember that sensitive and profound depictions of diversity in these kinds of books is not something to be taken lightly. In fact, I’d say that this book reminded me less of other fantasy fantasy novels and more of contemporary fiction like Darius the Great Is Not Okay or The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian due to its heavy focus on systemic bigotry, queer relationships in an oppressive society, and cultural alienation and racial displacement. Anyway, have I mentioned that I loved this book yet? Well, even if it goes without saying by this point, I think it's worth repeating. I loved this book a whole lot! The story was great, the writing style was great, and most of all… the characters were great!
“You’re going to ruin my reputation.”
“Oh yes, next thing you know people will be saying that you read books.”
“I do read books.”
“Not nice books,”
I mean, Lord of the White Hell follows a somewhat common story featuring the rich boy falling for a “common” boy, but where it differs from all the rest is that it takes the time to let the characters react the same way that real people would. I know that doesn’t sound like much of a compliment, but you’d be surprised at how many books I’ve read that adhered so strictly to tropes that it refuses to let its characters react to the plot naturally. Things happen in the story because they have to happen and we have to get there. And sure, even though it doesn’t take long before Kiram gets all, “Say it loud and there's music playing, say it soft and it's almost like praying” about Javier, I still enjoyed that he didn’t just come running every time Javier snapped his fingers. Characters with some semblance of pride and self-respect, that’s all I’m ever really asking for! On this point though, I will say that I wished the plot focused more on Kiram’s love and talent for machinery, because most of the book is spent with him becoming more of a “manly man” by embracing the Cadeleonian culture. Not that this is bad per se, but I’m not so sure if the assimilation story line was the most interesting aspect of the story to me. And other than the slight messaging of having Kiram “man up” throughout the narrative, you can definitely tell in other ways that this book was written waa~aay back in the prehistoric ages of 2010 in the way that Javier gave of some serious Edward Cullen vibes with his desperate over-protectiveness and animalistic jealously. His immaturity makes sense to the story because despite having his fair share of troubles like his whole “cursed family line thing” (we all have problems dude), at the end of the day he is still a spoiled rich noble who needs to grow up. My fingers are crossed that he does some serious groveling in book two! Otherwise, I thought it was cool how our main character was also Haldiim like Narsi from the Master of Restless Shadows books because even though this is called The Cadeleonian Series, it’s through the Haldiim narrators that we’re able to examine the world through an analytical eye and in any real depth. Kiram is similar to Narsi in their shared racial disquiet over feelings of unmitigated fear and hatred towards the Cadeleonian royal family, whose legacy is one of genocide and colonization but are now treated as celebrities in the present day. Damn, can you imagine if something like that happened in the real world? But they’re decidedly different in that Narsi has immense chemistry with every character he interacts with (“Ain't no particular sign I'm more compatible with”) while Kiram too is kind and good-hearted, but he really only likes two people throughout the story (#relatable). They’re both well-rounded characters, and their differences only helps to emphasize my earlier point about Ginn Hale caring a great deal about showing diversity through her writing.
Otherwise, I was surprised at how quaint this story was in comparison to the Master of Restless Shadows duology. Like, where those books deal with large scale “end of the world” plots, this one's conflict is all about Kiram will fit into the academy. New school, new culture! And we’ve got everything you can imagine; bullies, shitty teachers, and… oh yeah, trying to get an exemption from gym class. Considering that my main hobby is reading, you can probably guess that I used to walk the mile. Anyway, I will say that I’m actually glad that I started this series with the later installments because I’m not so sure if I would have loved these characters the same way I do had I been introduced to them with this book, while everyone’s in their frat boy era and everything. Like damn, these guys kind of suck here! I mean, they’re all younger here and I will admit that there’s something pretty funny in seeing how much of an ass Atreau is in this book, but I’ve personally never found frat boy antics all that entertaining or funny. I really like Conan, but the least funny he’s ever been was when he was doing a “Clueless Gamer” with Zack Efron and Seth Rogan. Gross episode. Off of that, this might come as a surprise to… no one, but I don’t usually like smug, arrogant characters in fiction either. I understand why they’re popular, breaking through to the heart of the heart-breaker is always an enticing fantasy, but it’s never really been my thing. I’m always over there on the other side rooting for them to get cursed or tormented by the amulet or whatever. So yeah, I didn’t love Javier with all his little privileged “charm.” Not even the fact that his family line is cursed could really get me to feel any real kind of sympathy for him (again, we’ve all got problems, my guy). In fact, he’s very similar to Atreau from the later books in terms of swagger and status, but in the Master of Restless Shadows books, we at least understand that it's a front because we get a major glimpse into his head as he’s a pov narrator. He really is a sap deep down. In this book, we only ever see Javier from Kiram’s perspective, so there’s a lack of substance to Javier than there otherwise might have been. To me, Atreau is like Han Solo, because you know how he’s always touted as the coolest man in fiction? Well, in my opinion, he’s only cool because when you actually watch the movies, he’s actually kind of a dork. A flop! It's cool to be uncool, man. Regardless, we’re still only on book one, so we’ve got plenty of time for character development™. Can’t wait! It's probably pretty selfish of me to want Ginn Hale to write more books from this series forever, right? I mean, if Alexander McCall Smith can write a billion of those No. 1 Ladies' Detective Agency books, then why not The Cadeleonian Series? I want, no, I need more from this world!
Dumb love, I love being stupid / Dream of us in a year / Maybe we'd have an apartment / And you'd show me off to your friends at the pier.
Pshhh hey, who was it that said that my immense love for the Master of Restless Shadows books would make it so I'd be disappointed in this? Stand up, where are you!? Oh yeah, it was me that said it. Well me, who’s laughing now!? Again, it’s me, I’m laughing. Man, I love proving the haters wrong (me). Okay, I'm starting to sound like a cave man, so let's get this show on the road. Because really though, I liked this book a whole lot! So much so that I even caught myself several times trying to rush through the pages just so I could find out what was coming next! "Focus got me feeling distracted, calmly overreacting" and all that. The thing is, I never really gave credence to the “voracious” part of “voracious reader,” but considering the hunger I felt while reading this? I totally get it now. It got so bad that I was seriously contemplating starting book two when I was literally still in the middle of this book! Lord of the White Hell is one of those “blink and you’ll miss it” kind of books in that one moment I blinked and noticed that I was already halfway done with the book! I'm on some “bring on the next one even though I’m not done with this one” type shit. I love how naturalistic Ginn Hale’s writing style is, and while her stories never shy away from large, world-ending plots, their respective narratives always stay within the character’s perspective. Meaning that the plot at large never becomes more important than the core human experience. No matter how fantastical, the The Cadeleonian Series will always be about how the terrible actions of the terribly powerful affect real people on the ground and how those people can and will rise up against oppression. Let’s just say that the dialogue in these stories never feel like they’re written down only so they can be quoted and pasted on a coffee mug you’d find while shopping around on Etsy. Is that too specific? Because that’s basically how I felt about the entirety of Thanos’ dialogue in both of the Avengers movies that he appeared in. Sorry, I had to sneak a MCU dig in here somewhere, I guess I’m still bitter over watching that one Captain American movie, and whenever I read something actually good I’m always like “Oh yeah, this is what a good thing is like.” But I think I lost the plot somewhere along the way… um… I think my point was that I spend too much of my time giving a pass to things that are just okay by claiming that they’re “fun” and a “good enough” because damn, lord (of the White Hell) knows I do that with a lot of the books I read, leaving a string of “3-stars in my wake as I finish my next read that was totally fun and good enough. This is my way of saying that reading this book was like awakening from a deep slumber, Kingdom Hearts 2 style!
Like I said, Lord of the White Hell is a great book, and I’d say that it’s especially noteworthy for its wonderful depiction of diversity within its fantasy world because… let’s face it, fantasy is a genre that is rather well known for its lack thereof. Of course, none of this is a new argument, but I think it's important to reiterate regardless. What with Lord of the Rings’ lack of women or Game of Thrones' and its lack of queer characters (and people of color), and don’t get me started on a certain book series about a magical school where the only characters of color have names that are either offensively indicative of their racial background or just down right offensive in and of itself (“Cho Chang”? Come on now) or how the only queer characters are stated as such in tweets! And then it’s funny because whenever fantasy stories do end up trying to “represent” real world cultures, things tend to get a little dicey. I’ve already met my one “Game of Thrones mention quota” and I think it’s gotten to the point where people might think that it's the only fantasy thing I’ve ever watched, so I’ll used a different example. Now they’ll call me “two example man!” Outside of Game of Thrones, we’ve got Skyrim which is a fun and good enough game because it’s cool how the game lets you pick out and play as different races of different cultures. Hey, we’re off to a good start! But then there’s the fact that all of the different races have innate “attributes” instilled within them and it's like... uh, where is this going? For example, there’s the nomad race (who are cat people) that start out as being inherently “better at sneaking ” or there’s the fact that once the races start getting a little bit of melanin in them then they're all of a sudden “better at jumping?” Man, whenever I really think about these things in any kind of depth, all I can say is… yikes! Anyway, let’s hop back on the compliment train, because Lord of the White Hell does not have these problems, and the only reason I’m comparing it so heavily to other books of the like is because I think it’s important for me to remember that sensitive and profound depictions of diversity in these kinds of books is not something to be taken lightly. In fact, I’d say that this book reminded me less of other fantasy fantasy novels and more of contemporary fiction like Darius the Great Is Not Okay or The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian due to its heavy focus on systemic bigotry, queer relationships in an oppressive society, and cultural alienation and racial displacement. Anyway, have I mentioned that I loved this book yet? Well, even if it goes without saying by this point, I think it's worth repeating. I loved this book a whole lot! The story was great, the writing style was great, and most of all… the characters were great!
“You’re going to ruin my reputation.”
“Oh yes, next thing you know people will be saying that you read books.”
“I do read books.”
“Not nice books,”
I mean, Lord of the White Hell follows a somewhat common story featuring the rich boy falling for a “common” boy, but where it differs from all the rest is that it takes the time to let the characters react the same way that real people would. I know that doesn’t sound like much of a compliment, but you’d be surprised at how many books I’ve read that adhered so strictly to tropes that it refuses to let its characters react to the plot naturally. Things happen in the story because they have to happen and we have to get there. And sure, even though it doesn’t take long before Kiram gets all, “Say it loud and there's music playing, say it soft and it's almost like praying” about Javier, I still enjoyed that he didn’t just come running every time Javier snapped his fingers. Characters with some semblance of pride and self-respect, that’s all I’m ever really asking for! On this point though, I will say that I wished the plot focused more on Kiram’s love and talent for machinery, because most of the book is spent with him becoming more of a “manly man” by embracing the Cadeleonian culture. Not that this is bad per se, but I’m not so sure if the assimilation story line was the most interesting aspect of the story to me. And other than the slight messaging of having Kiram “man up” throughout the narrative, you can definitely tell in other ways that this book was written waa~aay back in the prehistoric ages of 2010 in the way that Javier gave of some serious Edward Cullen vibes with his desperate over-protectiveness and animalistic jealously. His immaturity makes sense to the story because despite having his fair share of troubles like his whole “cursed family line thing” (we all have problems dude), at the end of the day he is still a spoiled rich noble who needs to grow up. My fingers are crossed that he does some serious groveling in book two! Otherwise, I thought it was cool how our main character was also Haldiim like Narsi from the Master of Restless Shadows books because even though this is called The Cadeleonian Series, it’s through the Haldiim narrators that we’re able to examine the world through an analytical eye and in any real depth. Kiram is similar to Narsi in their shared racial disquiet over feelings of unmitigated fear and hatred towards the Cadeleonian royal family, whose legacy is one of genocide and colonization but are now treated as celebrities in the present day. Damn, can you imagine if something like that happened in the real world? But they’re decidedly different in that Narsi has immense chemistry with every character he interacts with (“Ain't no particular sign I'm more compatible with”) while Kiram too is kind and good-hearted, but he really only likes two people throughout the story (#relatable). They’re both well-rounded characters, and their differences only helps to emphasize my earlier point about Ginn Hale caring a great deal about showing diversity through her writing.
Otherwise, I was surprised at how quaint this story was in comparison to the Master of Restless Shadows duology. Like, where those books deal with large scale “end of the world” plots, this one's conflict is all about Kiram will fit into the academy. New school, new culture! And we’ve got everything you can imagine; bullies, shitty teachers, and… oh yeah, trying to get an exemption from gym class. Considering that my main hobby is reading, you can probably guess that I used to walk the mile. Anyway, I will say that I’m actually glad that I started this series with the later installments because I’m not so sure if I would have loved these characters the same way I do had I been introduced to them with this book, while everyone’s in their frat boy era and everything. Like damn, these guys kind of suck here! I mean, they’re all younger here and I will admit that there’s something pretty funny in seeing how much of an ass Atreau is in this book, but I’ve personally never found frat boy antics all that entertaining or funny. I really like Conan, but the least funny he’s ever been was when he was doing a “Clueless Gamer” with Zack Efron and Seth Rogan. Gross episode. Off of that, this might come as a surprise to… no one, but I don’t usually like smug, arrogant characters in fiction either. I understand why they’re popular, breaking through to the heart of the heart-breaker is always an enticing fantasy, but it’s never really been my thing. I’m always over there on the other side rooting for them to get cursed or tormented by the amulet or whatever. So yeah, I didn’t love Javier with all his little privileged “charm.” Not even the fact that his family line is cursed could really get me to feel any real kind of sympathy for him (again, we’ve all got problems, my guy). In fact, he’s very similar to Atreau from the later books in terms of swagger and status, but in the Master of Restless Shadows books, we at least understand that it's a front because we get a major glimpse into his head as he’s a pov narrator. He really is a sap deep down. In this book, we only ever see Javier from Kiram’s perspective, so there’s a lack of substance to Javier than there otherwise might have been. To me, Atreau is like Han Solo, because you know how he’s always touted as the coolest man in fiction? Well, in my opinion, he’s only cool because when you actually watch the movies, he’s actually kind of a dork. A flop! It's cool to be uncool, man. Regardless, we’re still only on book one, so we’ve got plenty of time for character development™. Can’t wait! It's probably pretty selfish of me to want Ginn Hale to write more books from this series forever, right? I mean, if Alexander McCall Smith can write a billion of those No. 1 Ladies' Detective Agency books, then why not The Cadeleonian Series? I want, no, I need more from this world!
Dumb love, I love being stupid / Dream of us in a year / Maybe we'd have an apartment / And you'd show me off to your friends at the pier.
December 13, 2017
4.5 Hearts
Mesmerizing
This was my first Ginn Hale and what a way to get introduced to an author!
If you're a fan of high fantasy and haven't yet got around to reading this, it is a must read. Lord of the White Hell has sensational world building that's an enticing blend of uniquely modern and historical, layered characters, a beguiling central relationship with a multidimensional plot too!
Typically YA is hit or miss for me due to unnecessary dramatics and teen angst, but there was none of that here. The growing pains herein struck a chord. Broader in scope than your average teen romance with a Harry Potter vibe and a timeless romance Lord of the White Hell tackles some divisive issues with aplomb and yet remains entertaining rather than preachy. The hurdles Javier and Kiram face are challenging regardless of age but become even moreso when compounded with struggling to find one's identity.
Javier is that strange brew of revered and feared as the keeper of the white hell. He's sort of the defacto leader of the Hellions, the cool kids club at Sagrada, mostly owing to his being a duke but also due to his prowess in the war arts which are of preeminent importance to Cadeleonians. Being the only remaining Tornesal imbues him with a presence and wisdom that belie his age, but it is a heavy cross for one so young to bear and those brief cracks in his facade broke my heart.
Kiram is Haldiim, the first Haldiim ever admitted to the prestigious Sagrada Academy. He's also a bit of child prodigy mechanist and an intellectual. Determined to prove himself to the Cadeleonians as capable while making the most of his time away from home, he is shrewd, resilient and an egalitarian. He's incredibly close to his family, whom he keeps in regular contact with via letters, and that endeared him to me. Assigned as Javier's Underclassman and roommate the attraction between them is instantaneous but in Cadeleonian society homosexuality is verboten. Thus begins the building of tension and the longing. I ❤️ the longing books soooo much!
Kiram is the sole narrator and I always find myself impressed when I feel like I know all the characters without the benefit of being inside their heads. Not only do I feel like that about Javier but Fedeles, Nestor and Elezar. So many of the secondary characters are fleshed out and add to the allure of this narrative.
Their lively banter and sharp wits kept me engaged and wanting more. Javier's arrogant and puckish nature pits well against Kiram's more reserved and contemplative one. They are both kind and generous of spirit, possesses a startling amount of self-assurance for teens and are stubborn, so they are well matched in temperament.
Their desire for each other becomes increasingly ardent as they grow closer, spending more time together training Kiram for the autumn tournament, horseback riding and learning the war arts, something that isn't part of Haldiim curriculum or culture for that matter. So prepare yourself for a slow burn with furtive moments touching, epic tension, desperate kisses and few sexy times.
Lord of the White Hell is splendidly crafted and perfectly balanced between character/relationship development and plot; numerous threads are interwoven to keep the pace steady. A myriad of details bring this world to life from their daily routines to customs and traditions, especially the glorious bells. I loved the bells.
Part 1 ends on a funky and conflictual note, though, so having the second book on hand would be advisable. I've already begun the second because I had to know all the things and I sort of wish I could reserve rating this one until I've finished that one but *shrugs*
Highly recommend to high fantasy and YA/NA fans.
A review copy was provided.
Mesmerizing
This was my first Ginn Hale and what a way to get introduced to an author!
If you're a fan of high fantasy and haven't yet got around to reading this, it is a must read. Lord of the White Hell has sensational world building that's an enticing blend of uniquely modern and historical, layered characters, a beguiling central relationship with a multidimensional plot too!
Typically YA is hit or miss for me due to unnecessary dramatics and teen angst, but there was none of that here. The growing pains herein struck a chord. Broader in scope than your average teen romance with a Harry Potter vibe and a timeless romance Lord of the White Hell tackles some divisive issues with aplomb and yet remains entertaining rather than preachy. The hurdles Javier and Kiram face are challenging regardless of age but become even moreso when compounded with struggling to find one's identity.
Javier is that strange brew of revered and feared as the keeper of the white hell. He's sort of the defacto leader of the Hellions, the cool kids club at Sagrada, mostly owing to his being a duke but also due to his prowess in the war arts which are of preeminent importance to Cadeleonians. Being the only remaining Tornesal imbues him with a presence and wisdom that belie his age, but it is a heavy cross for one so young to bear and those brief cracks in his facade broke my heart.
Kiram is Haldiim, the first Haldiim ever admitted to the prestigious Sagrada Academy. He's also a bit of child prodigy mechanist and an intellectual. Determined to prove himself to the Cadeleonians as capable while making the most of his time away from home, he is shrewd, resilient and an egalitarian. He's incredibly close to his family, whom he keeps in regular contact with via letters, and that endeared him to me. Assigned as Javier's Underclassman and roommate the attraction between them is instantaneous but in Cadeleonian society homosexuality is verboten. Thus begins the building of tension and the longing. I ❤️ the longing books soooo much!
Kiram is the sole narrator and I always find myself impressed when I feel like I know all the characters without the benefit of being inside their heads. Not only do I feel like that about Javier but Fedeles, Nestor and Elezar. So many of the secondary characters are fleshed out and add to the allure of this narrative.
Their lively banter and sharp wits kept me engaged and wanting more. Javier's arrogant and puckish nature pits well against Kiram's more reserved and contemplative one. They are both kind and generous of spirit, possesses a startling amount of self-assurance for teens and are stubborn, so they are well matched in temperament.
His body ached just thinking of the mistakes that he longed to make.
Their desire for each other becomes increasingly ardent as they grow closer, spending more time together training Kiram for the autumn tournament, horseback riding and learning the war arts, something that isn't part of Haldiim curriculum or culture for that matter. So prepare yourself for a slow burn with furtive moments touching, epic tension, desperate kisses and few sexy times.
Lord of the White Hell is splendidly crafted and perfectly balanced between character/relationship development and plot; numerous threads are interwoven to keep the pace steady. A myriad of details bring this world to life from their daily routines to customs and traditions, especially the glorious bells. I loved the bells.
Part 1 ends on a funky and conflictual note, though, so having the second book on hand would be advisable. I've already begun the second because I had to know all the things and I sort of wish I could reserve rating this one until I've finished that one but *shrugs*
Highly recommend to high fantasy and YA/NA fans.
A review copy was provided.
January 18, 2025
I am in an epic book coma. This was soooo damn good. Oh my, and this when I haven't been able to read YA in years. I am in absolute heaven. Incredible.
I am so happy that I could finally bring myself to read this. It's as perfect as all the many high fantasy stories I read as a teenager.
It's a story that develops slowly, has relatively few fantasy elements, at least in this first book, and yet is quite fascinating. The setting in the academy is interesting, a mixture of university, steampunk and military school and all wrapped up in religion.
It is a homophobic monarchical society in which the church wields quite a lot of power. A dangerous terrain for Kiram, who grew up free and without all the superstitions.
Naturally, he falls in love almost immediately with his roommate Javier, the Lord of the White Hell, whatever that means. Everyone is afraid of Javier and tries to keep him under control. But Kiram doesn't believe in all this nonsense. Between all the fights at the academy and the secrets that Kiram gradually brings to light, the two nevertheless grow closer.
But don't expect too much, they only have one night together and only a few moments when they are close. But apart from the last chapter, there isn't too much drama. The last chapter, however, might be problematic for some readers, see triggers below.
The writing is incredibly crafted. The storytelling, even if only from Kiram's perspective, is immensely satisfying.
“You really don’t know the first thing about fighting, do you?”
“I know that a quick fist is the first sign of a slow wit.”
This elicited a laugh from Javier. Very gently, he washed the blood from Kiram’s nose and mouth. 🤭
Kiram kept his eyes closed, fearing his resolve would collapse if he looked into Javier’s eyes. Then he’d kiss his mouth. He’d run his hands over his chest and down to his thighs. His body ached just thinking of the mistakes that he longed to make. Kiram started to pull his hand back but Javier tightened his grip. Kiram relented too easily.
“I want to be with you. But then you know that. Does it please you to know how much I want you?” Blatant hunger edged Javier’s voice. “That I lie awake, staring at your sleeping body, thinking of how close you are and how easily I could reach you? How easily I could tear off those flimsy white clothes you wear and have you? Some nights I hardly sleep at all.” 💗💞💖
It's the first book to go on my favorites shelves this year, really excellent and I'm looking forward to the second book.
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Minor spoilers probably ahead
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Content warnings: homophobia, religious zealots, superstition, sword fights, injuries, quite a lot of blood, death of a horse, women aren't faring well here, they're either whores or mothers, most of the characters are men, medical experiments on a secondary character
Cheating between MCs: No
Other person drama: yes (visit to a brothel where Kiram has to watch Javier getting a BJ from a whore - the final chapter)
Breakup: yes (even if they weren't really together at all due to the circumstances that a relationship isn't even possible)
Kinks: none
I am so happy that I could finally bring myself to read this. It's as perfect as all the many high fantasy stories I read as a teenager.
It's a story that develops slowly, has relatively few fantasy elements, at least in this first book, and yet is quite fascinating. The setting in the academy is interesting, a mixture of university, steampunk and military school and all wrapped up in religion.
It is a homophobic monarchical society in which the church wields quite a lot of power. A dangerous terrain for Kiram, who grew up free and without all the superstitions.
Naturally, he falls in love almost immediately with his roommate Javier, the Lord of the White Hell, whatever that means. Everyone is afraid of Javier and tries to keep him under control. But Kiram doesn't believe in all this nonsense. Between all the fights at the academy and the secrets that Kiram gradually brings to light, the two nevertheless grow closer.
But don't expect too much, they only have one night together and only a few moments when they are close. But apart from the last chapter, there isn't too much drama. The last chapter, however, might be problematic for some readers, see triggers below.
The writing is incredibly crafted. The storytelling, even if only from Kiram's perspective, is immensely satisfying.
“You really don’t know the first thing about fighting, do you?”
“I know that a quick fist is the first sign of a slow wit.”
This elicited a laugh from Javier. Very gently, he washed the blood from Kiram’s nose and mouth. 🤭
Kiram kept his eyes closed, fearing his resolve would collapse if he looked into Javier’s eyes. Then he’d kiss his mouth. He’d run his hands over his chest and down to his thighs. His body ached just thinking of the mistakes that he longed to make. Kiram started to pull his hand back but Javier tightened his grip. Kiram relented too easily.
“I want to be with you. But then you know that. Does it please you to know how much I want you?” Blatant hunger edged Javier’s voice. “That I lie awake, staring at your sleeping body, thinking of how close you are and how easily I could reach you? How easily I could tear off those flimsy white clothes you wear and have you? Some nights I hardly sleep at all.” 💗💞💖
It's the first book to go on my favorites shelves this year, really excellent and I'm looking forward to the second book.
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Minor spoilers probably ahead
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Content warnings: homophobia, religious zealots, superstition, sword fights, injuries, quite a lot of blood, death of a horse, women aren't faring well here, they're either whores or mothers, most of the characters are men, medical experiments on a secondary character
Cheating between MCs: No
Other person drama: yes (visit to a brothel where Kiram has to watch Javier getting a BJ from a whore - the final chapter)
Breakup: yes (even if they weren't really together at all due to the circumstances that a relationship isn't even possible)
Kinks: none
December 29, 2024
I am at a loss for words, but ultimately, the last 5 minutes absolutely ruined all joy and now I need to read book 2 to see if one MC can redeem himself because I hate him and I hope the white hell eats and rots him from the inside out and then rats gnaw on his festering body after, and then spew the pieces into a sewer...........
(This is a high epic fantasy, with a CRUMB of plot and a CRUMB of romance because I assume book 1 is all world building and book 2 may be plot-heavy???)
(sometimes the words in this would make you feel like "in the town of hooblydoopyskunt in the province of blimkinponskonzo with the hespalianaser race of thernanadoniskio and my friends razelaphatoss and greg" and your brain is like:
But you do pick it up eventually, it's just ALOT of characters and ALOT of places and magic systems to put into one pea-sized brain - my brain)
(This is a high epic fantasy, with a CRUMB of plot and a CRUMB of romance because I assume book 1 is all world building and book 2 may be plot-heavy???)
(sometimes the words in this would make you feel like "in the town of hooblydoopyskunt in the province of blimkinponskonzo with the hespalianaser race of thernanadoniskio and my friends razelaphatoss and greg" and your brain is like:
But you do pick it up eventually, it's just ALOT of characters and ALOT of places and magic systems to put into one pea-sized brain - my brain)
December 23, 2017
Wow! Ginn Hale can surely write her fantasies. The world and the character building of this novel is quite exceptional. 👏 I freaking loved it. ❤️ This reminds me quite a lot of C.S Pacat’s Captive Prince trilogy. Don’t get me wrong, they are totally different books but somehow, it gives you that feeling of mysterious, you-don’t-know-what’s-going-to-happen, kept-you-on-the-edge-all-the-time vibe. This is not a fluffy, cheesy read with a lot of smut. The book is fairly long for MM romance (though this is more of a fantasy genre .. 😉) with 368 pages. And also, it’s a 2 books series so if you can’t commit to it, just skip it. However, if you love thriller MM romance laced with epic fantasy theme and a beautiful world building, you are going to love the hell out of this book. 🤗
Kiram is a Haldimm and a genius mechanical engineer. Haldimm is a minority group in the kingdom of Cadelon, where the majority of the people are Cadeleonian who frown upon not only the lifestyle and the ways of Haldimm but also their religion. He’s the first ever Haldimm to be accepted to the prestigious Sagrada Academy and He’s very looking forward to his adventures. However, on his first day, he was thrown into the same room to live with Javier who not only is the duke of Rauma but also is believed to be damned and the possessor of the white hell by Cadeleonians. Having to share the room with Javier during his stay in Sagrada Academy is proving to be difficult not because the guy is believed to be the lord of white hell but because he is proving to be arrogant, proud and terribly sarcastic. 😁 At the same time, Kiram wants Javier and he wants him bad. 😌 But the penalty of men loving men outside of Haldimm district is death.
Javier Tornesal has been alone for a very long time. Parents passed away by the damned cursed that’s haunting upon all of Tornesal bloodline. Everyone is afraid of him and loathed him and regarded him as a damnation. At the same time, they can’t touch him since he’s the duke of Rauma and the cousin of the crown prince. And that Haldimm who happens to be his underclassman and the roommate intrigued him. That brat Kiram not only isn’t afraid of him, he downright ignored him and refused to talk with him for weeks. However, Javier isn’t without charms himself. 😉 He can be pretty persuasive and seductive when he truly wants something or someone.
As the relationship between Kiram and Javier blossomed from friendship into something more, they will have to face the ultimate issue of so many differences between them. Can Javier gave up his dukedom and everything for being together with Kiram? Kiram surely can’t be and won’t be the secret lover of the duke of Rauma. 😌 That’s not the way of Haldimm. He can be himself at home, courting other young guys or be courted by other eligible bachelors and have a very merry life with a man who’d devote everything to him. He does love Javier but he won’t be satisfied with trysts here and there being in the dark forever. Not only that, they learned that the curse that’s haunting Javier’s family is not really a curse. It is actually done by someone very vindictive and greedy who lusts after the dukedom of Rauma. So many issues, so many differences and so many bridges to overcome. 😭 Will these two star-crossed lovers be able to overcome everything and prove “love conquers everything in the end”? 🙏
The relationship between Javier and Kiram is really delicate and tenuous. 🤔 Both of them admitted that they were instantly attracted to each other but UST between them was really high. There was no actual physical relationship between them until two third of the book. However when it comes to that, it was glorious! 😍👏 It was not like those titillating, obscene kind of smut. It was a gentle, seductive and beautifully-written love making. ☺️ There were a lot of relationships dynamics in the novel. Many side characters, the students of Agrada Academy, Kiram’s best friend and his relationship, Javier and his Hellion friends, even the relationship between riders and horses. 🧡 The whole novel was masterfully written and the storyline and the plot were very well-constructed. 👏 And talk about a damn cliffhanger! 😒 The ending of this book was the mother of cliffhangers! 😑 I think I’m going to die with frustration if the second book of the series isn’t already out and I have to wait like one year for it. Thank God that I already have second book ready and waiting on my kindle. 🤗 This was a phenomenal book and worth every second reading and reveling it. 💚
Favorite excerpts from the novel: 💛❤️💛
”A soul could not be given up any more than joy or kindness could be bottled and sold at market. Only in death could the soul leave the flesh.”
“To fear what you do not understand is to mistake ignorance for safety.”
“I want to be with you. But then you know that. Does it please you to know how much I want you?” Blatant hunger edged Javier’s voice. “That I lie awake, staring at your sleeping body, thinking of how close you are and how easily I could reach you? How easily I could tear off those flimsy white clothes you wear and have you? Some nights I hardly sleep at all.”
“It’s the way things will always be, because you’re a Cadeleonian and a nobleman. You’ll never be able to dance with me or share a house with me or call me your lover.”
5 it was onehelluva magical, epic, finger-licking delicious and glorious stars
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Kiram is a Haldimm and a genius mechanical engineer. Haldimm is a minority group in the kingdom of Cadelon, where the majority of the people are Cadeleonian who frown upon not only the lifestyle and the ways of Haldimm but also their religion. He’s the first ever Haldimm to be accepted to the prestigious Sagrada Academy and He’s very looking forward to his adventures. However, on his first day, he was thrown into the same room to live with Javier who not only is the duke of Rauma but also is believed to be damned and the possessor of the white hell by Cadeleonians. Having to share the room with Javier during his stay in Sagrada Academy is proving to be difficult not because the guy is believed to be the lord of white hell but because he is proving to be arrogant, proud and terribly sarcastic. 😁 At the same time, Kiram wants Javier and he wants him bad. 😌 But the penalty of men loving men outside of Haldimm district is death.
Javier Tornesal has been alone for a very long time. Parents passed away by the damned cursed that’s haunting upon all of Tornesal bloodline. Everyone is afraid of him and loathed him and regarded him as a damnation. At the same time, they can’t touch him since he’s the duke of Rauma and the cousin of the crown prince. And that Haldimm who happens to be his underclassman and the roommate intrigued him. That brat Kiram not only isn’t afraid of him, he downright ignored him and refused to talk with him for weeks. However, Javier isn’t without charms himself. 😉 He can be pretty persuasive and seductive when he truly wants something or someone.
As the relationship between Kiram and Javier blossomed from friendship into something more, they will have to face the ultimate issue of so many differences between them. Can Javier gave up his dukedom and everything for being together with Kiram? Kiram surely can’t be and won’t be the secret lover of the duke of Rauma. 😌 That’s not the way of Haldimm. He can be himself at home, courting other young guys or be courted by other eligible bachelors and have a very merry life with a man who’d devote everything to him. He does love Javier but he won’t be satisfied with trysts here and there being in the dark forever. Not only that, they learned that the curse that’s haunting Javier’s family is not really a curse. It is actually done by someone very vindictive and greedy who lusts after the dukedom of Rauma. So many issues, so many differences and so many bridges to overcome. 😭 Will these two star-crossed lovers be able to overcome everything and prove “love conquers everything in the end”? 🙏
The relationship between Javier and Kiram is really delicate and tenuous. 🤔 Both of them admitted that they were instantly attracted to each other but UST between them was really high. There was no actual physical relationship between them until two third of the book. However when it comes to that, it was glorious! 😍👏 It was not like those titillating, obscene kind of smut. It was a gentle, seductive and beautifully-written love making. ☺️ There were a lot of relationships dynamics in the novel. Many side characters, the students of Agrada Academy, Kiram’s best friend and his relationship, Javier and his Hellion friends, even the relationship between riders and horses. 🧡 The whole novel was masterfully written and the storyline and the plot were very well-constructed. 👏 And talk about a damn cliffhanger! 😒 The ending of this book was the mother of cliffhangers! 😑 I think I’m going to die with frustration if the second book of the series isn’t already out and I have to wait like one year for it. Thank God that I already have second book ready and waiting on my kindle. 🤗 This was a phenomenal book and worth every second reading and reveling it. 💚
Favorite excerpts from the novel: 💛❤️💛
”A soul could not be given up any more than joy or kindness could be bottled and sold at market. Only in death could the soul leave the flesh.”
“To fear what you do not understand is to mistake ignorance for safety.”
“I want to be with you. But then you know that. Does it please you to know how much I want you?” Blatant hunger edged Javier’s voice. “That I lie awake, staring at your sleeping body, thinking of how close you are and how easily I could reach you? How easily I could tear off those flimsy white clothes you wear and have you? Some nights I hardly sleep at all.”
“It’s the way things will always be, because you’re a Cadeleonian and a nobleman. You’ll never be able to dance with me or share a house with me or call me your lover.”
5 it was onehelluva magical, epic, finger-licking delicious and glorious stars
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
December 25, 2022
4 Stars
I’ve yet to be disappointed with any of Hale’s works, and this was no different.
This contains quite a heady mix of complex world building, complete with two opposing cultures, religious fervor dealing with one’s salvation, and a magical bent, all with warring political machinations and betrayal against the backdrop of a school academy and young men on the brink of maturity and real life consequences.
Javier is cursed. He’s also cavalier, charismatic, and skilled in smarts, weapons, and fighting. He’s not only magical but his social standing is immense, making him fearsome and compelling all at the same time. Though he’s arrogant, he’s loyal and protective towards those he loves. Javier wants better for himself and his family, but the curse runs through his bloodline and there’s no way out.
Kiram is a foreigner, highly sheltered being from a prominent family. His race has been persecuted and deemed lesser, but his genius gets him a rare coveted spot in the Sagrada Academy. Circumstance puts him and Javier as roommates as they are outcasts for different reasons, and Kiram slowly realizes that Javier is a pawn in a sinister conspiracy that could enslave everyone.
Overall, this was not only a complex suspenseful mystery, but also a burgeoning love story between two people who are divided by class as well as foundational beliefs. I was never once bored as Hale knows how to expertly create an intricate alternate universe, knows how to do an exquisite slow burn. I look forward to the conclusion as to how she will make things right between “cursed” Javier and the idealistic Kiram. These two young men from different backgrounds will have to find a way to work together to defeat not only inherent prejudice and societal rules but the corrupt royalty and religious leaders of the highest hierarchy. Not an easy feat for sure, but I’m confident Hale will deliver with the ultimate satisfying win!
I’ve yet to be disappointed with any of Hale’s works, and this was no different.
This contains quite a heady mix of complex world building, complete with two opposing cultures, religious fervor dealing with one’s salvation, and a magical bent, all with warring political machinations and betrayal against the backdrop of a school academy and young men on the brink of maturity and real life consequences.
Javier is cursed. He’s also cavalier, charismatic, and skilled in smarts, weapons, and fighting. He’s not only magical but his social standing is immense, making him fearsome and compelling all at the same time. Though he’s arrogant, he’s loyal and protective towards those he loves. Javier wants better for himself and his family, but the curse runs through his bloodline and there’s no way out.
Kiram is a foreigner, highly sheltered being from a prominent family. His race has been persecuted and deemed lesser, but his genius gets him a rare coveted spot in the Sagrada Academy. Circumstance puts him and Javier as roommates as they are outcasts for different reasons, and Kiram slowly realizes that Javier is a pawn in a sinister conspiracy that could enslave everyone.
Overall, this was not only a complex suspenseful mystery, but also a burgeoning love story between two people who are divided by class as well as foundational beliefs. I was never once bored as Hale knows how to expertly create an intricate alternate universe, knows how to do an exquisite slow burn. I look forward to the conclusion as to how she will make things right between “cursed” Javier and the idealistic Kiram. These two young men from different backgrounds will have to find a way to work together to defeat not only inherent prejudice and societal rules but the corrupt royalty and religious leaders of the highest hierarchy. Not an easy feat for sure, but I’m confident Hale will deliver with the ultimate satisfying win!
July 13, 2016
In thrall again.
Oh man, this is good, and fun, and got enough sanctioned violence to be so satisfying. Between the friendships, the curse, the power struggles, and the societal boundaries being trampled this has enough going on to keep interest. Basically, I highlighted stuff while reading, but couldn't be bothered to come here and update--no time. Later, chickadillas.
Overall, a high fantasy page turner that's sucked me right into book #2.
NOTE: This is definitely part one of a two part book, so stopping after one isn't possible.
Oh man, this is good, and fun, and got enough sanctioned violence to be so satisfying. Between the friendships, the curse, the power struggles, and the societal boundaries being trampled this has enough going on to keep interest. Basically, I highlighted stuff while reading, but couldn't be bothered to come here and update--no time. Later, chickadillas.
"He’ll make a better impression without a hell-branded duke flustering his little flock of hens.”
Overall, a high fantasy page turner that's sucked me right into book #2.
NOTE: This is definitely part one of a two part book, so stopping after one isn't possible.
July 2, 2010
I particularly like the blend of mystery, romance, and fantasy here. I think Hale does some of the best world building I've come across -- in this case a combination of Middle Eastern and Castilian -- and so much of it lies in the small details. And yet for all the complex world-building, the focus of the story remains intimate and vividly personal (which is sometimes a complaint of mine in fantasy -- too often the story goes so big scale it's off the page). Really well done. I finished it and was instantly ready to dive into Book 2.
December 30, 2018
Beautifully written, Ginn Hales’ novel Lord of the White Hell was difficult to put down. There was almost a bitter sweetness in finishing that last page and knowing I’m going to have to be less of an impatient pants, that I normally am, in the wait for the next book.
The scene is deftly set by the author. The world building around this renaissance fantasy is rich with crisp, clear detailing. As a new student at the Sagrada Academy, Kiram initially struggles to find his way through the upper crust of Cadeleon society, espeically as he is Haldiim. He finds it hard to fit in with the social mores, so very different from his own less ridged culture, but begins to make friends with some help from Javier an upperclassman and heir to the Dukedom of Rauma. Kiram begins to feel a burgeoning attraction towards his arrogant roommate and while homosexuality is an accepted part of Haldiim culture it is expressly forbidden in Cadeleon. Underlying this more human drama is the story of Javier and a strange and terrifying magical inheritance that threatens not only himself, but also his friends and Kiram.
Rich world building and storytelling is only part of this novels charm. I initially felt that the relationship between the two main characters would unfold down fairly standard lines, exploring familiar tropes. But the author did anything but, and the relationship between Kiram and Javier develops with surprising twists, turns and had great depth to it. The tension between the two is beautifully created and they’re two characters you’ll find yourself totally wrapped up in. Brilliant.
This book felt so wonderfully original, engaging and clever, I just loved it. I cannot wait for the next installment in this remarkable tale and an not really sure I can wait for September!
You can pre order both books at the Blind Eye Books website and if you get in before June 15th there are some great discounts.
5 Star Plus Read.
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First read April 11th 2010.
Re read March 2015.
The scene is deftly set by the author. The world building around this renaissance fantasy is rich with crisp, clear detailing. As a new student at the Sagrada Academy, Kiram initially struggles to find his way through the upper crust of Cadeleon society, espeically as he is Haldiim. He finds it hard to fit in with the social mores, so very different from his own less ridged culture, but begins to make friends with some help from Javier an upperclassman and heir to the Dukedom of Rauma. Kiram begins to feel a burgeoning attraction towards his arrogant roommate and while homosexuality is an accepted part of Haldiim culture it is expressly forbidden in Cadeleon. Underlying this more human drama is the story of Javier and a strange and terrifying magical inheritance that threatens not only himself, but also his friends and Kiram.
Rich world building and storytelling is only part of this novels charm. I initially felt that the relationship between the two main characters would unfold down fairly standard lines, exploring familiar tropes. But the author did anything but, and the relationship between Kiram and Javier develops with surprising twists, turns and had great depth to it. The tension between the two is beautifully created and they’re two characters you’ll find yourself totally wrapped up in. Brilliant.
This book felt so wonderfully original, engaging and clever, I just loved it. I cannot wait for the next installment in this remarkable tale and an not really sure I can wait for September!
You can pre order both books at the Blind Eye Books website and if you get in before June 15th there are some great discounts.
5 Star Plus Read.
http://sharrow.wordpress.com/2010/04/...
First read April 11th 2010.
Re read March 2015.
February 14, 2025
Starting my re-read of this series so I can fully appreciate book 6 as it’s been about 10 years since I started them. I opted for the audio version this time and it did not disappoint, lovely narration. Despite this being about 14yrs old I still loved it! Some words/actions are something that you don’t see in more recent books - didn’t bother me I was happy to look past them but may bother some readers. I found this refreshingly well written, original and with more far depth than many newer fantasy m/m books out these days.
Ginn Hale is a masterful m/m storyteller. This is world building done right. I can easily imagine the intricate universe built here with a strong history, the magical element and a melting pot of interesting cultures.
Javier and Kiram were always my favourite couple in this series but I’m loving seeing future mc’s from their early days - this series is written so that it is not neon signed above characters heads who are going to be the future MCs. The coming storylines and character arcs are subtle. Fedeles in particular is fascinating to read again from this early perspective, having had read his POV now in book 5.
This is a duology and ends, not on a cliffhanger but definitely with a strong need to continue the story immediately.
Ginn Hale is a masterful m/m storyteller. This is world building done right. I can easily imagine the intricate universe built here with a strong history, the magical element and a melting pot of interesting cultures.
Javier and Kiram were always my favourite couple in this series but I’m loving seeing future mc’s from their early days - this series is written so that it is not neon signed above characters heads who are going to be the future MCs. The coming storylines and character arcs are subtle. Fedeles in particular is fascinating to read again from this early perspective, having had read his POV now in book 5.
This is a duology and ends, not on a cliffhanger but definitely with a strong need to continue the story immediately.
January 6, 2024
“Kiram couldn’t help but think that the older man had taken a quick dislike to him. Probably because he was supposed to be a gifted thinker and he’d just fallen out of a carriage onto his face.”
Why haven’t I read or heard about this book before???? IS SO GOOD.
The story is very different and somewhat unique.
The writing is so good and funny, the description is amazing.
The friendships are so CUTE!!!!! 🤩
The romance reminds me a bit of Baz and Simon from Carry On, because they are roommates and there’s one character that everyone thinks is bad and the other doesn’t think that but at the same time very different AND I LOVE IT.
The characters are so badass and strong but at the same time so fragile, funny, and interesting.
Each characters is amazing in their own way. LOVE IT.
The book itself is FANTASTIC!
🙌💜
AND WHAT THAT HELL WAS THAT ENDING?????? LIKE WHAT? That’s not how you end a book!!!!!!!! 😱🤬
September 5, 2010
My quest to find quality gay fantasy novels leads me to suffer through a lot of small-publisher dreck, rife with awkward, overwritten prose, cliched characters, terrible covers, amateurish typesetting, and many, many typos. While Lord of the White Hell has terrible cover art and its share of typos, it's actually quite well-written, with a strong novelistic voice, complicated, interesting characterizations, and a strong sense of setting and sensual detail.
The book follows the basic trope of the fantasy academy, except with college-age students who are fully sexualized. The story is set in the POV of a 17-year-old mechanical genius named Kiram, who is attending an elite military academy in a country called Caledonia, which has religious, political, and ethnic tensions with his home country of Haldiim. So you get the general fish-out-of-water tale, with the added bonus that Kiram is gay, which is accepted in Haldiim but greatly frowned upon in Caledonia.
Anyway, Kirim is set up in a room with the hottie upperclassman Javier, who is Caledonian and a Duke, but also ostracized because everyone is scared of him, since he apparently has a "white hell" inside him, which gives him some very simple powers. Kirim thinks this is superstition, but he's still wildly attracted to Javier, and it's pretty obvious from the start that the feeling is mutual. Their personalities don't mesh easily, but they do become friends . . . and more . . . as they struggle together to figure out who is casting a curse that's killing off Javier's family.
This is barely a fantasy novel, beyond the semi-medieval setting and Javier's seldom-used powers. It's much more of a romance, even falling into that genre with some purplish emotions, although I welcomed a gay romance with a semi-fantasy setting while still feeling disappointed that it was more romance than fantasy. The challenging characterizations carry the story relatively well, keeping interest up even when the plot digresses and loses earlier, potentially fascinating threads.
Finally, the story feels incomplete, without a full arc and climax -- there's already a sequel available, and I'll bet that one feels more like a Part II than a true second book.
The book follows the basic trope of the fantasy academy, except with college-age students who are fully sexualized. The story is set in the POV of a 17-year-old mechanical genius named Kiram, who is attending an elite military academy in a country called Caledonia, which has religious, political, and ethnic tensions with his home country of Haldiim. So you get the general fish-out-of-water tale, with the added bonus that Kiram is gay, which is accepted in Haldiim but greatly frowned upon in Caledonia.
Anyway, Kirim is set up in a room with the hottie upperclassman Javier, who is Caledonian and a Duke, but also ostracized because everyone is scared of him, since he apparently has a "white hell" inside him, which gives him some very simple powers. Kirim thinks this is superstition, but he's still wildly attracted to Javier, and it's pretty obvious from the start that the feeling is mutual. Their personalities don't mesh easily, but they do become friends . . . and more . . . as they struggle together to figure out who is casting a curse that's killing off Javier's family.
This is barely a fantasy novel, beyond the semi-medieval setting and Javier's seldom-used powers. It's much more of a romance, even falling into that genre with some purplish emotions, although I welcomed a gay romance with a semi-fantasy setting while still feeling disappointed that it was more romance than fantasy. The challenging characterizations carry the story relatively well, keeping interest up even when the plot digresses and loses earlier, potentially fascinating threads.
Finally, the story feels incomplete, without a full arc and climax -- there's already a sequel available, and I'll bet that one feels more like a Part II than a true second book.
January 5, 2022
3.5 🌟 Ideally, this is a 4-star book. But, for some weird reason, throughout the book whenever I read about the love interest, Javier, I ended up thinking and comparing him with Baz from the Simon Snow series Carry On. Now, those who have read it will know, that no YA book boyfriend can ever be like Baz.🥰🥰
Still, I liked most of the fantasy elements, like world-building and magic systems which revolved around students of Sagrada Academy in Caledonia. Karim is from the Haldiim district, a child prodigy and an outsider to the Academy. There is widespread xenophobia against the people of Haldiim in Caledonia because of their strained mutual past.
Javier, the love interest is the duke of Tornesal. A broody hellion who is rumored to be a carrier of White Hell and trying hard to win over Karim. However, the religion of Caledonia criminalizes homosexuality and this makes the romance super slow burn.
The side characters are well written and the writing has quite an easy flow. But, the most delightful thing was the mystery plot and the banter among members of Hellion.
On to the next book…...because I am intrigued about the mystery(though it's pretty easy to guess) and to see more romance between Karim and Javier.
Still, I liked most of the fantasy elements, like world-building and magic systems which revolved around students of Sagrada Academy in Caledonia. Karim is from the Haldiim district, a child prodigy and an outsider to the Academy. There is widespread xenophobia against the people of Haldiim in Caledonia because of their strained mutual past.
Javier, the love interest is the duke of Tornesal. A broody hellion who is rumored to be a carrier of White Hell and trying hard to win over Karim. However, the religion of Caledonia criminalizes homosexuality and this makes the romance super slow burn.
The side characters are well written and the writing has quite an easy flow. But, the most delightful thing was the mystery plot and the banter among members of Hellion.
On to the next book…...because I am intrigued about the mystery(though it's pretty easy to guess) and to see more romance between Karim and Javier.
January 5, 2015
What the hell just happened? After such a great read, that was a terrible ending to Part 1 - sickening and disappointing! I know I had all sorts of lovely gushing praise formed in my mind ready for the review, until about 5 minutes from the end, but for the life of me, I can't remember any of it now...as I just kind of numbly watched the ending scenes, knowing what was going to happen but hoping I was going to be wrong... and I still feel kind of shocked the author chose to go this way when the same kinds of things could have been achieved in other ways that didn't ruin the characters...
I know this is an alternate world where beliefs etc are different, but what just happened completely changes the characters - Javier, not only for the things he does at the end, but almost worse, that he doesn't seem to understand what's wrong with what he's done by the cruel way he speaks to Kiram - and Kiram for accepting this (as he undoubtedly must if we are to have a story in Part 2), as I had thought he was a stronger character with more self-respect.
This was heading for a 5 star, favourite read rating but now the ending has completely ruined that.
Full review and star rating to follow when I can be more impartial, as at this point it's just going to be a rant without being able to focus on all the good things about this one. Unfortunately the shiny excitement I had about this one has been ruined and I won't be able to view this in quite the same light.
I know this is an alternate world where beliefs etc are different, but what just happened completely changes the characters - Javier, not only for the things he does at the end, but almost worse, that he doesn't seem to understand what's wrong with what he's done by the cruel way he speaks to Kiram - and Kiram for accepting this (as he undoubtedly must if we are to have a story in Part 2), as I had thought he was a stronger character with more self-respect.
This was heading for a 5 star, favourite read rating but now the ending has completely ruined that.
Full review and star rating to follow when I can be more impartial, as at this point it's just going to be a rant without being able to focus on all the good things about this one. Unfortunately the shiny excitement I had about this one has been ruined and I won't be able to view this in quite the same light.
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September 1, 2015Talked about this with Elisabeth Lane and Willaful on the AAR blog:
Elisabeth: I’m so excited that Willaful is joining in our chat about Lord of the White Hell today. Say hi Willa!
Willa: Hi, everyone! I was wondering if you guys brought me in for this one because you know I love m/m romance in classic literature contexts. If so — well played! I was flashing back to Anne McCaffrey’s Harper Hall series, and other boarding school fantasies I loved as an adolescent. It’s all there: the strict class system, the bullying of the outsider, the misfit finding his place in the social structure (which almost always comes at a cost.) The explicit sex is new, of course!
AJH: Yes. *shifty look* That was exactly why we brought you in. Actually, it was partly your known fondness for queered-up stories – so there’s definitely some sort of method in our madness. Occasionally. LotWH really was like one of those classic school stories, wasn’t it? I was basically characterising it as “gay Tamora Pierce” while I was reading.
Elisabeth: Though the sex is quite a bit more explicit in this one than in the YA fantasy I remember from my youth. It took me by surprise actually.
Willa: Anne McCaffrey only wished she was this hot. It didn’t shock me though; the sexual tension was built up so well, the actual sex just flowed naturally from it.
AJH: Oh gosh, I’m jaded. Maybe I’m just used to m/m being explicit-by-default. I noticed there was more sex than in typical YA fantasy but it’s … very sweet, isn’t it? Like I would be perfectly happy for A Young Human to read it. It felt refreshing to me — not flinching away from the fact that teenagers who love each other are probably going to have lots and lots of sex, but always grounding that sex in emotion and tenderness and comradeship and passion.
Elisabeth: Oh, I agree with you. It was lovely. And it’s definitely what I would have loved to have read when I was a teenager. It conformed a lot better to the average teen experience than the sweet kissing and fade-to-black scenes I recall. Or maybe I was just reading really tame stuff? And I don’t really read any YA now except the very popular things that get made into movies so I’m sure the standards have changed in the 20 years since then.
Willa: I think most mainstream YA is still relatively tame. But I agree, the sex scenes are lovely and appropriate. “Explicit” kind of has the wrong connotation, really.
AJH: Yes, it’s hard to know how to categorise it. I thought it was kind of important, in a way, because there’s a prevailing sense of queer-intimacy being inherently more … God what’s the word … challenging? than het-intimacy. Like you often see things getting classified differently if they’re queer. Or it’s perceived as somehow more harmful for children to learn about queer sex than it is for them learn about hetsex. And so on. But, errr, sex aside, how did you find it?
Willa: I thought it was an exhilarating read. The writing isn’t particularly lush or lyrical; its strength is in the dialogue, the characters, the exciting story, and the excellent pacing. The thrilling parts are balanced with dialogue and friendly interaction, the angst with humor
Elisabeth: I agree with you. The characterization of Kiram in particular was really well done, I thought. He’s clearly outside the structures of this other society. He doesn’t fit in, pretty much in any way because he’s a different race and he’s gay, which is normal in his culture, but very much not okay in the culture he’s found himself in. And he’s an intellectual rather than this very physical warrior-like guy like most of the other boys.
Willa: I loved that culture clash! Kiram has so much inner strength because of his background.
AJH: I also loved the fact he learns to be effective at the physical warrior-stuff as well. Not in a superhero way and he’s never going to be the toughest guy in the room, but I liked how it subtly deconstructed those sort of ideas about masculinity and strength. What makes you good in a fight is being taught how to be good in a fight. Even if you’re a slender, perceived-to-be-effeminate guy. Again, it reminded me a lot of Alanna learning to be a badass and how to play to her speed over her strength.
Catch the rest of it here.
Elisabeth: I’m so excited that Willaful is joining in our chat about Lord of the White Hell today. Say hi Willa!
Willa: Hi, everyone! I was wondering if you guys brought me in for this one because you know I love m/m romance in classic literature contexts. If so — well played! I was flashing back to Anne McCaffrey’s Harper Hall series, and other boarding school fantasies I loved as an adolescent. It’s all there: the strict class system, the bullying of the outsider, the misfit finding his place in the social structure (which almost always comes at a cost.) The explicit sex is new, of course!
AJH: Yes. *shifty look* That was exactly why we brought you in. Actually, it was partly your known fondness for queered-up stories – so there’s definitely some sort of method in our madness. Occasionally. LotWH really was like one of those classic school stories, wasn’t it? I was basically characterising it as “gay Tamora Pierce” while I was reading.
Elisabeth: Though the sex is quite a bit more explicit in this one than in the YA fantasy I remember from my youth. It took me by surprise actually.
Willa: Anne McCaffrey only wished she was this hot. It didn’t shock me though; the sexual tension was built up so well, the actual sex just flowed naturally from it.
AJH: Oh gosh, I’m jaded. Maybe I’m just used to m/m being explicit-by-default. I noticed there was more sex than in typical YA fantasy but it’s … very sweet, isn’t it? Like I would be perfectly happy for A Young Human to read it. It felt refreshing to me — not flinching away from the fact that teenagers who love each other are probably going to have lots and lots of sex, but always grounding that sex in emotion and tenderness and comradeship and passion.
Elisabeth: Oh, I agree with you. It was lovely. And it’s definitely what I would have loved to have read when I was a teenager. It conformed a lot better to the average teen experience than the sweet kissing and fade-to-black scenes I recall. Or maybe I was just reading really tame stuff? And I don’t really read any YA now except the very popular things that get made into movies so I’m sure the standards have changed in the 20 years since then.
Willa: I think most mainstream YA is still relatively tame. But I agree, the sex scenes are lovely and appropriate. “Explicit” kind of has the wrong connotation, really.
AJH: Yes, it’s hard to know how to categorise it. I thought it was kind of important, in a way, because there’s a prevailing sense of queer-intimacy being inherently more … God what’s the word … challenging? than het-intimacy. Like you often see things getting classified differently if they’re queer. Or it’s perceived as somehow more harmful for children to learn about queer sex than it is for them learn about hetsex. And so on. But, errr, sex aside, how did you find it?
Willa: I thought it was an exhilarating read. The writing isn’t particularly lush or lyrical; its strength is in the dialogue, the characters, the exciting story, and the excellent pacing. The thrilling parts are balanced with dialogue and friendly interaction, the angst with humor
Elisabeth: I agree with you. The characterization of Kiram in particular was really well done, I thought. He’s clearly outside the structures of this other society. He doesn’t fit in, pretty much in any way because he’s a different race and he’s gay, which is normal in his culture, but very much not okay in the culture he’s found himself in. And he’s an intellectual rather than this very physical warrior-like guy like most of the other boys.
Willa: I loved that culture clash! Kiram has so much inner strength because of his background.
AJH: I also loved the fact he learns to be effective at the physical warrior-stuff as well. Not in a superhero way and he’s never going to be the toughest guy in the room, but I liked how it subtly deconstructed those sort of ideas about masculinity and strength. What makes you good in a fight is being taught how to be good in a fight. Even if you’re a slender, perceived-to-be-effeminate guy. Again, it reminded me a lot of Alanna learning to be a badass and how to play to her speed over her strength.
Catch the rest of it here.
January 24, 2020
Awesome awesome awesome!!
How did this book not cross my radar before now?? While the world building is not exactly unique. There’s elements that’s been done before. But the story telling...omg, it’s so awesome!!
I actually got so worked up, trying to buy book 2 to continue, I ended up buying book 1 again *facepalm* lol...
Off to book 2! =]]
How did this book not cross my radar before now?? While the world building is not exactly unique. There’s elements that’s been done before. But the story telling...omg, it’s so awesome!!
I actually got so worked up, trying to buy book 2 to continue, I ended up buying book 1 again *facepalm* lol...
Off to book 2! =]]
July 20, 2010
There aren't many books I consider to be epic masterpieces. When an author writes a book that will be labeled as such, and knowing that have achieved a deep emotional response from a reader, that is where they deserve a major pat on the back. This is where a reader will finish reading the last page and finally release a deep breath they have been holding inside because they have been on the edge of their seat the entire time. And, they will most likely go back and re-read it all over again.
An author who has written such a book has truly accomplished something incredible.
That book is Lord of the White Hell: Book One by Ginn Hale.
Ginn has written a story of wonderment that has amazing world building and not to be forgotten characters. Lord of the White Hell will astound you. This is an adult read with a gay romance, but also has a feel of a fantasy young adult book. The main protagonist is seventeen-year-old Kiram, who is given the chance of the lifetime in attending the very affluent Cadeleonian Academy. Kiram is not a Cadeleonian, but is Haldim. Because Kiram is from a different race, he's looked down upon and is a victim of bigotry. Kiram is a very skilled as a machinist and his father is a well known candy maker. Kiram knows he won't fit in, but will try his best to excel, seeing as no full-blooded Haldim has ever been accepted into the school.
Kiram ends up being roommates with Javier Tornesal, duke of Rauma, who will be his mentor of sorts. Javier is well respected, admired and equally feared not only because of his station in life but because he has a deadly curse living inside of him. This curse is known as the white hell and through punishment by the hands of the school priest and deep physical and mental spiritual mediation, Javier can keep it under control.
Kiram doesn't believe all this hell nonsense because his religious beliefs are very different from the Caledonians. His is intrigued by Javier, more than he would like to admit. Javier is very handsome and gives off this vibe of entitlement and power. When the two men are first introduced, Javier does his best to seduce Kiram. Even though some of the students do have affairs at the school, it isn't acknowledged, but kept as a dirty secret. Kiram comes from a culture where men can be together out in the open, so this is a culture shock. He refuses to be one of Javier's playthings and used in such a demoralizing way.
Javier keeps his distance, but is always watching Kiram as they both maneuver around the school. Kiram is the subject of some scorn from his students and a few teachers, but he finds acceptance with Javier's simple cousin Fedeles and Nestor, who is very friendly and looks up to him. Kiram and Javier eventually become close, where Javier takes on the role as Kiram's protector and guide. And because Kiram's feelings for Javier have grown, he welcomes any interaction and attention Javier throws his way.
Soon Kiram joins Javier's cliché, known as the Hellions, who pal around together and end up at the local brothels. Kiram doesn't like this side of the Hellions and of Javier, who always goes along with them. He is very confused because Javier looks upon him with great desire and seems to be very jealous, especially when Kiram mentions an old lover back at home. No one else seems to be aware of the attraction these two have for each other and they can barely keep it in check.
Then Kiram's uncle comes for a visit during an annual tournament and brings warnings. He wants Kiram to leave the school and come back home for his protection. Kiram refuses because he wants to remain with Javier. After some investigation, they figure out that Javier's curse is not what it seems and perhaps someone wants to kill Javier and gain a great reward.
It's so hard to explain why Lord of the White Hell is a remarkable book. Compelling, well written, romantic and thrilling are just a few words to describe this latest by Ginn Hale. There is great balance in regards to the world Ginn has created, mainly with the relationship between Kiram and Javier. Their romance is written in such a way that those who may not be comfortable with a male/male attraction will not mind in the least. Ginn has a wonderful way of building up a connection between these two and you can't help but want them to be together.
The magical side of things is a downplayed and I really was expecting Javier's release of the white hell everyone keeps mentioning. I assume this will come more into play in the sequel. The ending will have you anxious for the next book, which is played very well on Ginn's part.
There is so much more to recommend about Lord of the White Hell. Magical and remarkable is what Ginn Hale has accomplished here.
An author who has written such a book has truly accomplished something incredible.
That book is Lord of the White Hell: Book One by Ginn Hale.
Ginn has written a story of wonderment that has amazing world building and not to be forgotten characters. Lord of the White Hell will astound you. This is an adult read with a gay romance, but also has a feel of a fantasy young adult book. The main protagonist is seventeen-year-old Kiram, who is given the chance of the lifetime in attending the very affluent Cadeleonian Academy. Kiram is not a Cadeleonian, but is Haldim. Because Kiram is from a different race, he's looked down upon and is a victim of bigotry. Kiram is a very skilled as a machinist and his father is a well known candy maker. Kiram knows he won't fit in, but will try his best to excel, seeing as no full-blooded Haldim has ever been accepted into the school.
Kiram ends up being roommates with Javier Tornesal, duke of Rauma, who will be his mentor of sorts. Javier is well respected, admired and equally feared not only because of his station in life but because he has a deadly curse living inside of him. This curse is known as the white hell and through punishment by the hands of the school priest and deep physical and mental spiritual mediation, Javier can keep it under control.
Kiram doesn't believe all this hell nonsense because his religious beliefs are very different from the Caledonians. His is intrigued by Javier, more than he would like to admit. Javier is very handsome and gives off this vibe of entitlement and power. When the two men are first introduced, Javier does his best to seduce Kiram. Even though some of the students do have affairs at the school, it isn't acknowledged, but kept as a dirty secret. Kiram comes from a culture where men can be together out in the open, so this is a culture shock. He refuses to be one of Javier's playthings and used in such a demoralizing way.
Javier keeps his distance, but is always watching Kiram as they both maneuver around the school. Kiram is the subject of some scorn from his students and a few teachers, but he finds acceptance with Javier's simple cousin Fedeles and Nestor, who is very friendly and looks up to him. Kiram and Javier eventually become close, where Javier takes on the role as Kiram's protector and guide. And because Kiram's feelings for Javier have grown, he welcomes any interaction and attention Javier throws his way.
Soon Kiram joins Javier's cliché, known as the Hellions, who pal around together and end up at the local brothels. Kiram doesn't like this side of the Hellions and of Javier, who always goes along with them. He is very confused because Javier looks upon him with great desire and seems to be very jealous, especially when Kiram mentions an old lover back at home. No one else seems to be aware of the attraction these two have for each other and they can barely keep it in check.
Then Kiram's uncle comes for a visit during an annual tournament and brings warnings. He wants Kiram to leave the school and come back home for his protection. Kiram refuses because he wants to remain with Javier. After some investigation, they figure out that Javier's curse is not what it seems and perhaps someone wants to kill Javier and gain a great reward.
It's so hard to explain why Lord of the White Hell is a remarkable book. Compelling, well written, romantic and thrilling are just a few words to describe this latest by Ginn Hale. There is great balance in regards to the world Ginn has created, mainly with the relationship between Kiram and Javier. Their romance is written in such a way that those who may not be comfortable with a male/male attraction will not mind in the least. Ginn has a wonderful way of building up a connection between these two and you can't help but want them to be together.
The magical side of things is a downplayed and I really was expecting Javier's release of the white hell everyone keeps mentioning. I assume this will come more into play in the sequel. The ending will have you anxious for the next book, which is played very well on Ginn's part.
There is so much more to recommend about Lord of the White Hell. Magical and remarkable is what Ginn Hale has accomplished here.
September 10, 2012
This is a beautifully crafted fantasy. Books 1 and 2 are really the two halves of one story - you can't read just one. The world-building is seamless, the action is riveting and unpredictable, and the romance develops slowly with appropriate ups and downs that fit the young characters and the forces arrayed against them. This is appropriate for older YA too - there is one episode of more explicit sex in the second book but it was not erotic, and most of the sex is off-page or lightly described. A lovely pair of books, with a HEA at the end. I didn't think these were as stunning as Wicked Gentlemen for pure originality and complexity of character, but they are sweeter, more romantic and less dark. Highly recommended.
August 18, 2014
From the first page I was totally absorbed with this book and couldn't put it down. I really could have done with another few hundred pages or so as I didn't want it to end and had to slow down to delay the inevitable.
I loved the developing, intense relationship between Kiram and Javier and also thought there was a good balance between the characters and the world building, which was new and exciting.
Well done Ginn Hale and thanks for such a great read !!!
I loved the developing, intense relationship between Kiram and Javier and also thought there was a good balance between the characters and the world building, which was new and exciting.
Well done Ginn Hale and thanks for such a great read !!!
January 21, 2018
Few pages into this book and I knew it was going to be good. The writing/story just flows so well, I couldn't stop reading. I had never even heard of this author , she writes so beautifully. I can't wait to start the second book especially after that ending.
June 4, 2023
Comfy.... no it a Cozy Fantasy with a cursed prince.
February 28, 2021
3.5
Still appealing on the 2nd read and didn't loose some of it's magic. It's one of those books that I even can appreciate more now than when I read it for the first time. Some situations are more clear, the interaction between the characters are easier to understand. What I didn't remember is that book 1 is more about Kiram finding his place at the academy, the up and down of his blossoming relationship with Javier while the mystery creeps in oh so slowly. With a different ending it would be a perfect new adult fantasy romance and I might have a slight nagging about it having the potential of more ... but as it is there is nothing to nag about because it is more, perfectly balanced and never bland or fluff. It's just that book 1 is not complete without book 2.
It certainly has not the originality or darkness of Wicked Gentlemen but comparing both would be comparing apples and oranges. It's after all a book about YA bordering into NA and alone for that it has to follow a different path. Now on to book 2.
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Rating of the first read: 4 stars
It hasn't the most convincing cover but for me it was the right book at the right time. Didn't know that my mind was set for fantasy until I started to read Lord of White Hell, didn't even know that it also is about a romance and at the beginning it doesn't look like it really does. There it got me with its rich but familiar world-setting, some kind of late medieval Andalusia with slight traces of steam punk and a promise of magic, a new-adult story set in an old fortress changed into a college/univerity where Kiram, who's part of an ethnic minority with different believes than the ruling class, has to find his place as the first accepted student of his people. Of course there is also another misfit and both become roommates if only because no one else wants to room with them - for different reasons because Javier is part of the ruling class of Cadeleonia, a duke even, but his family is haunted by a deadly curse and he is also living with the White Hell inside of him.
We only get to know that world from Kiram's view, so it takes time to accept and then understand that White Hell and while it's a dark world it's not despairingly dark. There is eventually camaraderie and friendship and a deliciously slow burn romance which is a sin for Cadeleonians although quite the norm for Karim's people.
It's the way Ginn Hales weaves her tale that does it for me. Everything has its place and fits together, nothing comes out of the left field even if you only understand that she gave the details of a certain turn of the story some time ago. There's no smoke and mirrors here, the story grows somehow organically and I really appreciate that. I appreciate it so much that I even turn a blind eye on Javier's behavior during their fight. He's only 20 after all, in a bigoted, superstitious culture.
What I didn't appreciate is the ending. It's not even a HFN and although it's reasonable it might put some readers off who like their heros pure and strong. It's a kind of cliffhanger while there was no need for it - I'm going to read the next book anyway.
Still appealing on the 2nd read and didn't loose some of it's magic. It's one of those books that I even can appreciate more now than when I read it for the first time. Some situations are more clear, the interaction between the characters are easier to understand. What I didn't remember is that book 1 is more about Kiram finding his place at the academy, the up and down of his blossoming relationship with Javier while the mystery creeps in oh so slowly. With a different ending it would be a perfect new adult fantasy romance and I might have a slight nagging about it having the potential of more ... but as it is there is nothing to nag about because it is more, perfectly balanced and never bland or fluff. It's just that book 1 is not complete without book 2.
It certainly has not the originality or darkness of Wicked Gentlemen but comparing both would be comparing apples and oranges. It's after all a book about YA bordering into NA and alone for that it has to follow a different path. Now on to book 2.
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Rating of the first read: 4 stars
It hasn't the most convincing cover but for me it was the right book at the right time. Didn't know that my mind was set for fantasy until I started to read Lord of White Hell, didn't even know that it also is about a romance and at the beginning it doesn't look like it really does. There it got me with its rich but familiar world-setting, some kind of late medieval Andalusia with slight traces of steam punk and a promise of magic, a new-adult story set in an old fortress changed into a college/univerity where Kiram, who's part of an ethnic minority with different believes than the ruling class, has to find his place as the first accepted student of his people. Of course there is also another misfit and both become roommates if only because no one else wants to room with them - for different reasons because Javier is part of the ruling class of Cadeleonia, a duke even, but his family is haunted by a deadly curse and he is also living with the White Hell inside of him.
We only get to know that world from Kiram's view, so it takes time to accept and then understand that White Hell and while it's a dark world it's not despairingly dark. There is eventually camaraderie and friendship and a deliciously slow burn romance which is a sin for Cadeleonians although quite the norm for Karim's people.
It's the way Ginn Hales weaves her tale that does it for me. Everything has its place and fits together, nothing comes out of the left field even if you only understand that she gave the details of a certain turn of the story some time ago. There's no smoke and mirrors here, the story grows somehow organically and I really appreciate that. I appreciate it so much that I even turn a blind eye on Javier's behavior during their fight. He's only 20 after all, in a bigoted, superstitious culture.
What I didn't appreciate is the ending. It's not even a HFN and although it's reasonable it might put some readers off who like their heros pure and strong. It's a kind of cliffhanger while there was no need for it - I'm going to read the next book anyway.
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September 8, 2021
I was in the mood for an M/M fantasy romance, and this one came highly recommended. It starts out strong, but then slowly devolves into a snoozefest.
Kiram Kir-Zaki, dark-skinned and blond, is a rich merchant's son allowed into the Sagrada Academy for his intelligence. He's of a different race and nationality, however, to the other Cadeleonian noblemen's sons. He's therefore assigned to share a room with Javier Tornesal, Duke of Rauma, a royal cousin who's also Lord of the White Hell - controller of a demonic magic inherited from his ancestor. Everyone is terrified of Javier, which is why Kiram is sent to room with him. Kiram doesn't believe in the Cadeleonian hells, but he's forced to admit that there's definitely something about Javier which makes him terrifying, even as he's wildly attracted to him.
While the attraction is mutual, Cadeleonian religion forbids gay relationships. This brings up what is probably most people's biggest issue with the book: OW drama.. Literally, OW drama: Javier continues to visit prostitutes after making overtures to Kiram, because he has to put up a manly and heterosexual front to avoid suspicions from his friends. Kiram obviously takes this badly.
In an M/F relationship I would NEVER tolerate this, but somehow it being M/M I was fine to carry on. That doesn't mean, though, I expected Kiram to just instantly forgive Javier and fall back into his arms. People have to maintain their self-respect and dignity, no matter their orientation. Kiram doesn't; he turns from a smart, capable young man to Javier's lapdog. More than the OW drama, this is what put me off the book.
It's also frankly kind of boring. Since it's long, and with a convoluted plot, I struggled to evince any interest whatsoever in stuff that wasn't Javier and Kiram's relationship. This ultimately killed the book for me.
I'm still looking for an M/M book that's even half as good as Cassandra Gannon's Best Knight Ever...
Kiram Kir-Zaki, dark-skinned and blond, is a rich merchant's son allowed into the Sagrada Academy for his intelligence. He's of a different race and nationality, however, to the other Cadeleonian noblemen's sons. He's therefore assigned to share a room with Javier Tornesal, Duke of Rauma, a royal cousin who's also Lord of the White Hell - controller of a demonic magic inherited from his ancestor. Everyone is terrified of Javier, which is why Kiram is sent to room with him. Kiram doesn't believe in the Cadeleonian hells, but he's forced to admit that there's definitely something about Javier which makes him terrifying, even as he's wildly attracted to him.
While the attraction is mutual, Cadeleonian religion forbids gay relationships. This brings up what is probably most people's biggest issue with the book: OW drama.. Literally, OW drama: Javier continues to visit prostitutes after making overtures to Kiram, because he has to put up a manly and heterosexual front to avoid suspicions from his friends. Kiram obviously takes this badly.
In an M/F relationship I would NEVER tolerate this, but somehow it being M/M I was fine to carry on. That doesn't mean, though, I expected Kiram to just instantly forgive Javier and fall back into his arms. People have to maintain their self-respect and dignity, no matter their orientation. Kiram doesn't; he turns from a smart, capable young man to Javier's lapdog. More than the OW drama, this is what put me off the book.
It's also frankly kind of boring. Since it's long, and with a convoluted plot, I struggled to evince any interest whatsoever in stuff that wasn't Javier and Kiram's relationship. This ultimately killed the book for me.
I'm still looking for an M/M book that's even half as good as Cassandra Gannon's Best Knight Ever...
October 1, 2013
Perhaps a little slow to start but a very good to excellent fantasy-M/M romance novel. The plot and characters are slowly uncovered piece by piece, keeping the reader enthralled while simultaneously creating a story thick with tension. So many bits of knowledge discovered ended up being something entirely different from what one first thought, creating conspiracy on conspiracies. A truly intriguing story - but with one problem I really should mention - it ends almost in a cliffhanger, as the reader is totally aware that the story is nowhere near finished. Normally I would detract from the rating for such an ending, but as I know the sequel is readily available, I'll let it slide just this once!
November 27, 2022
Hmmm…based on reviews, I expected to LOVE this. I didn’t.
It took me awhile to get into this and I’m not sure I ever really did, “ get into it. Maybe it was the bland narration that stopped me from fully enjoying this. Maybe it was me.
YA
Steampunk (kinda)
Very character driven
Lots of stuff going on
Lots of characters (although we are eased into getting to know them)
Magic
Bigotry
Something sinister is going on
Do I care enough about what is developing to read on? Maybe Maybe. This is definitely part one of two with no solid conclusion in this one.
Maybe maybe maybe.
It took me awhile to get into this and I’m not sure I ever really did, “ get into it. Maybe it was the bland narration that stopped me from fully enjoying this. Maybe it was me.
YA
Steampunk (kinda)
Very character driven
Lots of stuff going on
Lots of characters (although we are eased into getting to know them)
Magic
Bigotry
Something sinister is going on
Do I care enough about what is developing to read on? Maybe Maybe. This is definitely part one of two with no solid conclusion in this one.
Maybe maybe maybe.
April 29, 2010
Book one of Ginn Hale’s new fantasy novel is a classic epic fantasy story. Here the thick, intricate world building is infused in every page, every detail of the story so that the writing and pace can sometimes be dense, but fantasy fans will be thrilled with the total immersion in a fabulous, exciting, and innovative new world. The characters and story come to life with an interesting and pretty complicated plot filled with intrigue, drama, mystery, and a touch of hopeful romance. This is the type of story that fans will appreciate and dive into while reveling in the constant world building. The hanging ending especially will keep readers on edge wanting to continue the series. This is easily one of the best books you’ll read this year.
The fantasy story follows the third person perspective of Kiram, a 17 y/o Haldiim mechanist going to a Cadeleonian Academy. Although he’s an outsider, he makes a few friends and is accepted into a popular group due to his upperclassman roommate, Javier. Javier’s family is under a curse that drives those afflicted mad. Kiram’s natural curiosity and sympathy have him wanting to help find a cure but the complicated political and cultural boundaries between his own Haldiim culture and the Cadeleonians may make his quest impossible. Not to mention the growing friendship and romance between Kiram and Javier may be acceptable among the Haldiim but Cadeleonians will not accept any such relationship. Kiram is caught between impossible forces on both sides, not quite sure who to trust.
The writing is incredibly good, as to be expected of Hale. Those familiar with other works by the author will recognize her style of lyrical writing and flair for prose. The world building is incredibly complex and almost overwhelms the story. On the one hand, this is clearly the point. The story and level of detail are meant to immerse the reader totally into the fantasy world. Every action, thought, dialogue is steeped in the new and interesting realm created. This gives a very traditional fantasy setting that fans of the genre will adore. This also tends to keep the pace slower with a somewhat dense amount of information constantly unveiled. I didn’t mind the slower pace, often re-reading passages and going back to confirm details. I didn’t find the writing or story hard to read at all, just very involved and complex. There is a small appendix with names and definitions but most of these can be easily gleaned within the context of the story itself.
While the world building and its creation may be the real star, the plot stands well with a lot of great drama and intrigue. Kiram is the fulcrum of all the various subplots as they all relate in some way to him and his journey. His friendship with schoolmates Nestor and Javier’s cousin Fedeles are wonderful insights into the growing camaraderie between boys away at school, while his budding romance with Javier shows the complexity of young love. The mystery portion relies on Kiram’s search for a cure to the curse affecting Javier’s family and especially Fedeles while Kiram navigates the social, political, and cultural differences between the Haldiims and Cadeleonians. His search feels authentic, honest, and steeped in the new reality. There are no surprise revelations, no sudden clues, but a methodical, almost tediously slow foundation built step by step. This keeps the mystery interesting while still always keeping the reader aware that Kiram is a stranger and outsider with unpopular customs and beliefs.
The characters are fully developed and each offers something to the story. Javier and Kiram are the main characters obviously but their understated romance is very secondary to the action and mystery. The story is careful to follow Kiram’s journey through school with all the unpopular subjects such as sword play, while pitting him against Javier’s subtle seduction. Kiram really shines as a young man mature beyond his years, eloquent, intelligent, and very knowledgeable about his cultural past and responsibilities. He feels a lot of self applied pressure to represent his people well in a climate he perceives as hostile and rigid. The comparison of his beliefs to the Cadeleonians is not always positive and there is definitely some narrator influence as Kiram obviously prefers and believes in his versions of truth and the past, but his ability to be open minded creates a wonderfully rich and interesting young man. Just as the complexity afforded Javier shows a complicated personality beyond the easy appearance and one that fascinates in every scene.
From the very beginning, you’re thrown into the fantasy world and this never lets up. Immediately immersed into a complicated story and world so there is little to do but enjoy the ride. There is a large hanging ending, which I usually hate, but done so well here that it works. Readers will want to get book two, but there is a nice pause between the two books with a well chosen break point. I personally can’t wait for book two and the complete story is likely one to be unique, memorable, and compelling for fantasy fans. Those readers unfamiliar with such dense world building may be lost initially but the threads start to come together pretty quickly so stay with it, the story is absolutely worth the effort. This is a story you’ll want to read again and again.
The fantasy story follows the third person perspective of Kiram, a 17 y/o Haldiim mechanist going to a Cadeleonian Academy. Although he’s an outsider, he makes a few friends and is accepted into a popular group due to his upperclassman roommate, Javier. Javier’s family is under a curse that drives those afflicted mad. Kiram’s natural curiosity and sympathy have him wanting to help find a cure but the complicated political and cultural boundaries between his own Haldiim culture and the Cadeleonians may make his quest impossible. Not to mention the growing friendship and romance between Kiram and Javier may be acceptable among the Haldiim but Cadeleonians will not accept any such relationship. Kiram is caught between impossible forces on both sides, not quite sure who to trust.
The writing is incredibly good, as to be expected of Hale. Those familiar with other works by the author will recognize her style of lyrical writing and flair for prose. The world building is incredibly complex and almost overwhelms the story. On the one hand, this is clearly the point. The story and level of detail are meant to immerse the reader totally into the fantasy world. Every action, thought, dialogue is steeped in the new and interesting realm created. This gives a very traditional fantasy setting that fans of the genre will adore. This also tends to keep the pace slower with a somewhat dense amount of information constantly unveiled. I didn’t mind the slower pace, often re-reading passages and going back to confirm details. I didn’t find the writing or story hard to read at all, just very involved and complex. There is a small appendix with names and definitions but most of these can be easily gleaned within the context of the story itself.
While the world building and its creation may be the real star, the plot stands well with a lot of great drama and intrigue. Kiram is the fulcrum of all the various subplots as they all relate in some way to him and his journey. His friendship with schoolmates Nestor and Javier’s cousin Fedeles are wonderful insights into the growing camaraderie between boys away at school, while his budding romance with Javier shows the complexity of young love. The mystery portion relies on Kiram’s search for a cure to the curse affecting Javier’s family and especially Fedeles while Kiram navigates the social, political, and cultural differences between the Haldiims and Cadeleonians. His search feels authentic, honest, and steeped in the new reality. There are no surprise revelations, no sudden clues, but a methodical, almost tediously slow foundation built step by step. This keeps the mystery interesting while still always keeping the reader aware that Kiram is a stranger and outsider with unpopular customs and beliefs.
The characters are fully developed and each offers something to the story. Javier and Kiram are the main characters obviously but their understated romance is very secondary to the action and mystery. The story is careful to follow Kiram’s journey through school with all the unpopular subjects such as sword play, while pitting him against Javier’s subtle seduction. Kiram really shines as a young man mature beyond his years, eloquent, intelligent, and very knowledgeable about his cultural past and responsibilities. He feels a lot of self applied pressure to represent his people well in a climate he perceives as hostile and rigid. The comparison of his beliefs to the Cadeleonians is not always positive and there is definitely some narrator influence as Kiram obviously prefers and believes in his versions of truth and the past, but his ability to be open minded creates a wonderfully rich and interesting young man. Just as the complexity afforded Javier shows a complicated personality beyond the easy appearance and one that fascinates in every scene.
From the very beginning, you’re thrown into the fantasy world and this never lets up. Immediately immersed into a complicated story and world so there is little to do but enjoy the ride. There is a large hanging ending, which I usually hate, but done so well here that it works. Readers will want to get book two, but there is a nice pause between the two books with a well chosen break point. I personally can’t wait for book two and the complete story is likely one to be unique, memorable, and compelling for fantasy fans. Those readers unfamiliar with such dense world building may be lost initially but the threads start to come together pretty quickly so stay with it, the story is absolutely worth the effort. This is a story you’ll want to read again and again.
Want to read
December 11, 2015Thank you, Secret Santa!!! *happy dance*
June 12, 2016
Review for book #1 and #2
If you like fantasy and romance, this is your book. I think it is my (new) favourite combination. Reading this was a bliss, heaven-like, being in my happy place, all the goodness.
This is me and these books:
Both parts—romance and fantasy—are equally great and satisfying, and I think that's pretty amazing and satisfying.
Let's start with the romance:
So, together these books are 700 pages, more or less, and this really is enough time for everything a romance should have to offer: the getting to know each other, a push and pull and (sexual) tension, developing feelings of affection and love, ups and downs, conquering both internal and external problems, and love, so much realistic and tender and passionate love.
Seriously, this was glorious.
Mild spoiler:
Coming to the fantasy part of the story:
Oh, what wonderful world building—not the annoying one with lots of info blah and stuff! I thought the world with its cultures and politics and magic and religions was not only thought out very well but was also presented in a manner that was a delight to experience. It was like living in this world, like breathing the air, experiencing it.
I thought the Haldim matriarchy was a very interesting touch, especially because it wasn't all female cliché. It wasn't all nice and things. It was really fascinating to see the dominant, decision making role played out by women. And... They fucked up, too. That was kind of eye-opening.
The plot was awesome. AWESOME. Interesting, suspenseful, even surprising—I didn't guess who the bad guy was. Moreover, the pacing of the story line was exceptionally great, too. There are slow and calm parts to the story, but it never gets dull, and then you sit there on your sofa, or wherever, and bite your nails because, because you can't stand the tension and want them to have their happy ending and defeat the bad guys already. It never gets too much, though, which I appreciated a lot.
So. Wow. What a book. I can't recommend this enough :)
If you want, there's a teaser in the spoiler here...
If you like fantasy and romance, this is your book. I think it is my (new) favourite combination. Reading this was a bliss, heaven-like, being in my happy place, all the goodness.
This is me and these books:
Both parts—romance and fantasy—are equally great and satisfying, and I think that's pretty amazing and satisfying.
Let's start with the romance:
So, together these books are 700 pages, more or less, and this really is enough time for everything a romance should have to offer: the getting to know each other, a push and pull and (sexual) tension, developing feelings of affection and love, ups and downs, conquering both internal and external problems, and love, so much realistic and tender and passionate love.
Seriously, this was glorious.
Mild spoiler:
Coming to the fantasy part of the story:
Oh, what wonderful world building—not the annoying one with lots of info blah and stuff! I thought the world with its cultures and politics and magic and religions was not only thought out very well but was also presented in a manner that was a delight to experience. It was like living in this world, like breathing the air, experiencing it.
I thought the Haldim matriarchy was a very interesting touch, especially because it wasn't all female cliché. It wasn't all nice and things. It was really fascinating to see the dominant, decision making role played out by women. And... They fucked up, too. That was kind of eye-opening.
The plot was awesome. AWESOME. Interesting, suspenseful, even surprising—I didn't guess who the bad guy was. Moreover, the pacing of the story line was exceptionally great, too. There are slow and calm parts to the story, but it never gets dull, and then you sit there on your sofa, or wherever, and bite your nails because, because you can't stand the tension and want them to have their happy ending and defeat the bad guys already. It never gets too much, though, which I appreciated a lot.
So. Wow. What a book. I can't recommend this enough :)
If you want, there's a teaser in the spoiler here...
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November 21, 2016Thanks for the gift, secret santa!
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