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211 pages, Hardcover
First published May 17, 2011
I just have to say that i agree with a lot of people, this series is lacking. Its funny and cute but it can be annoying at times. I just feel like this series is a little bit childish and should be aimed at 10 to 13 year old girls.
Even Twilight is better with word choices and the amount of action that goes on in the whole series. Sometimes I felt like I was reading the PG rated version of Twilight. At least Bella wasn't dating Edward just for the simple fact that he was a vampire, unlike Raven, who says she "loves" Alex and would love him even if he wasn't one. Bullshit. Don't get me wrong and all, I do believe that she might love him like she says she does but there's Trevor, her childhood nemesis, and which despite everything that's gone down between the both of them, there's no denying the sexual tension that exist in their messed up relationship.
I feel like punching Raven in the face whenever she gets jealous of Trevor being kissed by other chicks. Bitch if you like him so much, dump Alexander and get laid already! If I were Raven, i'd go for Trevor. Why? Just for the simple fact that Raven is annoying and doesn't know what she actually wants in life. I feel like she only wants Alexander because he's a vampire and she's always wanted to be one.
It leaves me wondering if she would have gone out with him even if he hadn't been a vampire. Why am I left asking myself those kinds of questions? There's a part in the book where Raven is thinking about why she feels jealous of Luna, because she was bitten by Sebastian and Alexander hasn't done that to her. And then in cryptic cravings she's all like, " that's the reason I like you guys, because you dress the way you do and are like me." Babe, you aren't like them and will never be even if you do turn. Your just an overly obsessive girl who's reckless and who can't think it through about what becoming a vamp would require her to do, one, having to lie to your parents and no choice but to move away from them and your best friend. Second, you wouldn't be able to walk out into the sunlight anymore. Third, no reflection! As much as vampires are cool and all, I rather be an ass-kickingSHADOWHUNTER!!!
And like someone in another review wrote,"Schreiber leaves to many problems unresolved and can't seem to make loose ends meet." That's the whole problem with this series, it's lacking, not enough action, unresolved problems, and having no point what-so-ever in the story. It just seems like a total disgrace and an insult to teen girls who love reading about gothic love stories. Like Ellen is mocking vampire stories and just making her story a cheesy parody of something that could have been more if more efforts had been made to make this story one of a kind. Even though I've just completely bitched about this series, I'm still gonna read the last book. I want to see this series through.