4 stars for keeping me turning the pages… but the plot was weak in several places, so that was disappointing because the author had a wonderful story to work with, but worked in too many details for it to remain a romance forward novel.
When the ending is explained (sort of) there are just too many questions left unanswered, and since the author stuffed the story with characters, we also have quite two-dimensional H & h and supporting cast. Like a play, where people enter the stage, say their lines and exit. They serve no purpose.
Questions:
Why did the h allow herself to be drawn into the au pair’s “trick” when she knew her employer had it out for her? Knowing what was at stake if she were to be fired?? Age could be one answer, but when the h is introduced to us, the author draws as mature, so this seems out of character.
Why does Zara (h’s first employer) have such key role in the book? I mean, twice she comes and delivers monologues to the h, to what purpose??
Why was Lydia such a ninny? Not explained. H’s brother (Lydia’s husband) is said to be intelligent, but the storyline shows otherwise.
Just, disappointing. Too much time spent on the supernatural elements, it negated the romance completely for me.
The H made a grand declaration of “we don’t have tomorrow” but it was just dialogue, and didn’t have any bearing on what follows.