I love historical novels and I really wanted to like this book, but it's impossible. It started too chaotically and unstructured, as if the author felt it was necessary to shortly mention all kind of stuff about Solomons life before starting to tell his actual story. That was the first 100 pages. Then this Master Hiram finally turned up (which is a little late for a character whose name is in the title, if you ask me) and I read about him moaning about his homesickness and doubts for another 100 pages.
Ok, so after thinking about putting it aside, I just forced myself through it (mainly because I already got through half of the book and I want to mark it as read xD). But oh my god, it's really extremely boring. It's repeating itself all the time. And it's contraditory as well. (Now I'm writing that down, it's like the Bible itself!) Example: on page 288, Master Hiram tells Solomo 'The temple is ready'. Wordly. Then, on page 292, Solomo asks him when they can celebrate the inauguration. Hirams answers that the vestibule and some side buidlings aren't ready yet so the temple is not ready to be opened. WHAT?!
There are a LOT of characters that are against the building of the temple. Actually everyone is except for Solomon, but no serious attempts are made to really avoid the construction. It's just dull moaning ALL THE TIME. Hiram disappears for at least ten times. The characters are flat and do not develop. Nagsara, Solomon wife, is pathetic. The writer describes magic as if he believes in it himself. Then I got to question myself if he wanted to write a historical novel or a fantasy book.
I actually doubt if the writer reviewed his book after he finished his first draft and if an editor read it before it got published.
I am so disappointed.