Eudora Welty praised this novel highly in a NYT review, which kicked off a long correspondence with RM recently published in Meanwhile There Are Letters: The Correspondence of Eudora Welty and Ross Macdonald. The letters are quite good. I wish Macdonald's novels were as good as his letters. That would be something. At the risk of contradicting Miss Eudora, whose work I worship, I always feel slightly disappointed in RM's novels. They're good, just not as good as I expect them to be. Still, this is one of the better ones. Great atmosphere, lots of wonderful writing, but with a guy who never met a simile he didn't like, you're bound to get some clunkers, if not outright nonsensical ones. Here's an example of the Good and the Bad, in same paragraph:
"When I turned away from the bright counter, it was almost fully dark. I glanced up at the mountains, and was shocked by what I saw. The fire had grown and spread as if it fed on darkness. It hung around the city like the bivouacs of a besieging army."
The first simile is quite evocative, menacing in tone. The second one is such a weird head-scratcher that it detracts from power of first one.
Another example of RM's yin-yang qualities: He's very good at describing characters, portraying physical and emotional states, but my lord, you need a score card or flow chart to keep track of all of them. I understand that part of RM's larger vision here is the inexorable creep of "moral DDT," as he describes one character, within and across families. But I was constantly having to stop and ask myself, "No who's screwing who here -- literally and figuratively?" And the Misery Index with all these folks makes the House of Atreus look like petty squabblers. Now I like emotional depth in mystery-crime characters (Benjamin Black, aka John Banville, in his Quirke series, does a fine job of creating layers of psych depth without turning the narrative into a dreary slog), but RM lays it on pretty thickly. If that's a valued convention of noir, I guess it's just not one that I appreciate. Ok, so that's on me, not RM. The balance between creating emotional complexity and maintaining narrative suspense in a mystery is a tough one, I admit. RM is just not as good as others, I think.
Despite some well-executed suspense that should've tied together all the threads, in the end, I still wasn't sure exactly who killed who and why?
And despite all this carping, I did like the book well enough to finish it. And it did inspire me to check out the Welty-RM letters, so that's a plus. I look forward to reading more of the letters. Whether the letters will lead me to read more Archer novels -- to be determined.