Not an auspicious beginning for our lovers…Sian is more than a little obnoxious. Being an arrogant a** is, of course, a staple of many romances and I really found myself disliking him, but Ariana’s almost amused reaction to him defused my dislike. She found him unusual and somewhat unexpected, but not particularly attractive. And their association was based on a real and practical need. I appreciated the way Ms. Jones allowed the characters to be themselves, and to interact in natural and believable ways. Their developing romance was by turns awkward and kind and gently passionate, with just a touch of hopelessness. Like they were willing to take what they could get in the face of the terrible destiny that we can feel they are headed toward.
Not that there weren’t a few small missteps. Sian notes that “she had healer’s hands, soft and white and delicate.” Really? I guess if you assume a healer is too good to get her hands dirty, and probably has other people to pick and prepare her supplies for her, but I didn’t get the impression that Arianna was that sort of person. I also thought there should have been more to establish the legitimacy of the prophesy. Some old guy, obviously well into senility, writes something that indicates to our MCs that Ariana is supposed to lead an army into battle, so she just off and obediently changes to course of her life to follow it. I wanted a stronger motivation. I wanted to know why I should believe.
I was a little surprised that Sian turned out to be a remarkably practical and mildly likable person, but not unbelievably so. He is dedicated and impatient, all business by habit but he, predictably, is derailed by his growing attraction to the woman who he is preparing to save the world. It is revealed fairly early that the prophesy says she will die, and it is to the credit of the writing that I wasn’t sure if she would permanently die or not. Seemed like it could go either way. There’s an epic going on, and epics are known to sacrifice characters along the way.
Ms. Jones’ writing is vivid and fascinating and often surprising in small ways. She doesn’t fall back on clichés, but creates well rounded characters. Heroes with flaws, villains that you can’t help liking just a little bit every now and then. It seems to be a trademark of her style that she can create a black souled person who you want to see redeemed, even as you know they have to die.
I found myself a little disappointed by what seemed like a fairly unimaginative solution to Ariana’s Final Fate, which had been built up so much by the story. Everything that came afterwards was anticlimactic, and it went on for far too long to be deemed an epilogue. All story momentum and energy had been lost and I kept fighting the urge to skip forward just to see if anything interesting were going to happen. Which it didn’t. Ms. Jones would have done better to have condensed it and made it a prologue for Prince of Fire, which is where it belonged.
I will mention that I greatly regret having read Prince of Swords before reading Prince of Magic. It makes much of the book feel like an anticlimax, knowing what is going to happen.