December is a book I picked up on a whim in Scotland, because the store had a three-for-five-pounds deal. Turned out to be a pretty good move; James Steel's book, while flawed, is a fun read with some kickass action scenes. After a power struggle in Russia, the new president shuts off the gas Russia supplies to the rest of Europe, grinding the UK to a halt and threatening to start a new Cold War. The British government brings in Alex Devereaux, a mercenary who cut his teeth in Africa, to execute a coup d'état.
Spoilers follow...
The biggest problem with December is that it's lead character is flat and dull. Devereaux is given no depth or personality; he's just kinda there. He's a mercenary, and his motivation for taking the job is purely selfish (in addition to ten million pounds, he wants a medal), but more effort could've gone to making him someone the reader cares about and wants to follow. A good point of comparison is Richard Stark's Parker. Parker is one of the most cold-blooded protagonists in fiction, but Stark endears him to us by describing his methodology, his philosophy, his expertise and his professionalism. Steel doesn't do anything like that with Devereaux, he just plops him down and expects us to root for him because he's the hero. Later on Steel attempts to humanize him a little with his feelings for Lara, but it never quite feels authentic. For example, there's a moment when Krymov's forces are pushing through a crowd of protestors on their way to the news building and Lara is in the line of fire. Devereaux shows up and rescues her, but it isn't handled particularly well. We don't really get his insight into the situation, his point of view. He's just there, all of a sudden, to get her to safety. It would've played better if Steel showed us the moment when Devereaux saw she was in danger and made the decision to risk himself (and the mission) to save her. Maybe even have Grigory try to stop him, tell him to leave her, and Devereaux chops him in the throat to get him out of the way and goes anyway. Anything like that, to show his drive to save her. Unfortunately, there's very little reason to care about him.
The others don't fare much better. Devereaux's team are completely interchangeable personality-wise. The members of the revolution feel like they were assembled from a box via instruction manual. Roman Raskolnikov gives no indication as to why he's such an inspiring figure. Lara comes off poorly as well, whining because she's attracted to both Sergey and Devereaux (and, of course, leading them both on as it suits her).
The one character who serves as the exception is Sergey. He's wonderful, a colorful patriot who risks his very enjoyable, comfortable life because he believes in the soul of his country. His scenes are the most fun, and his departure from the story is sad, triumphant and well-earned.
Despite this, I still quite enjoyed the book. I liked the premise a lot, and the action was terrific. The assault on the Siberian prison holding Roman was a lot of fun, and the siege of the news building was exciting in its escalation. I also appreciated how elements in the Russian military had a hard time deciding what to do, and some even went against Krymov's forces to help Roman's revolution. Fyodor's betrayal took me by surprise, and I cursed out loud when Devereaux had to have his finger amputated in the field. In terms of plot, it's a well-constructed book (though the beginning is a bit dull at times), I just wish it had characters worthy of the story.
If you want a fun diversion, you could do worse than December, but don't expect to come away caring about anyone in particular.