I used to read these Animal Ark books as a kid. I definitely would have read this growing up. And I wish I had, because I would have gotten more out of it. It wasn’t a bad story, not at all, just wasn’t great either.
I liked that Mandy’s best friend James came along on their vacation to Ireland, as he always does on their vacations. I wonder if there’ll be some romance between them if this series covers them growing up. (Always looking for romance in stories).
I loved the mention of basking sharks, because I just saw on Shark Week this year, that the only sharks Ireland has are basking sharks. So that was a cool mention.
Ponies are flight animals that run when attackers come, like deer and zebras do.
The Connemara pony came with the Celts when they raided Ireland over a thousand years ago. They tamed them, used them for farm work and pack carrying.
Coast guard cottages, away from the village, had good views of the ocean.
I always find it weird when books use parents’ first names instead of calling them mom or dad. I kept getting Adam, the dad, mixed up with James, Mandy’s friend.
There was an overuse of exclamation marks. It ruined what a character was saying. Just like that episode of Seinfeld, where Elaine writes with exclamation points. Totally unnecessary and changes what’s being said. A lot of them didn’t need to be used and should have been taken out.
It annoyed me that Mandy and James didn’t want to go to the race, they wanted to try and get the halter off the foal, when the horses come to drink water twice a day. Just go to the race and try afterwards!
I liked that both Mandy’s parents were vets. I like when couples are in the same/similar careers.
Mandy’s parents happen to have their vet bag and rifle to shoot tranq darts with them on their Ireland vacation. Why would they bring that stuff with them? Were they expecting to be taking care of horses on their vacation? Unless this was a medical trip, it didn’t make any sense to have their gear with them.
Every Irishman considers himself an expert on horses, and Ireland has a horse race 250 days of the year.
Sean Malone was a cool character, how he has a way with horses, and could approach an unbroken horse and have it eating out of his hand in thirty minutes.
I loved Sean training with the horse. How he didn’t use a lunge rein, and kept the horse trotting around the ring, which told the horse to keep her distance. He waited for the horse to ask him to come in from the fence again. The horse will give signals that she wants to talk. He switched from watching her head to her shoulders. Her ears flicked to Sean and then she lowered her head, telling him she’s listening and waiting for him to tell her what to do.
He kept her running until she lowered her head inches from the ground, and he let her slow to a trot and come away from the fence. That meant she was ready to “talk” and Sean was ready to let her.
He walked up to her without making eye contact and rubbed her, then slowly turned & she followed him wherever he moved.
The horse trusted him because he knows what she’s thinking. She didn’t want to canter in the ring forever, wanted him to be nice to her.
He’d saddle her next time and go through the process again, making her start out running beside the paddock until she was ready to make a deal with him.
It also annoyed me when Mandy asks Sean I bet you’re wondering why they came to his house and he says to apologize for yelling at him,& then neither her nor James actually apologize to him. He’s the one who says he’s sorry for being suspicious of them!
In her head Mandy was ashamed of thinking Sean put the halter on the foal. She should have said it out loud.
Then James says “We’re all sorry that Connie is still wearing that halter. But being sorry doesn’t get us very far. That’s why we came to see you.”
I loved that Sean snuck out to meet Mandy and James even though his dad had grounded him.
With deer and zebra in the wild, if their young were ill, the herd would move on to fresh pasture or to keep away from predators, but the mom would stay with her baby to protect it.
The horse training in here was like what I read in Heartland, and have seen on the show of the same name.
Sean worked with the wild horse, until she dropped her head and made a chewing motion. When he turned and the horse came to him, but shied when he went to put on the halter, he started over. The horse knew his signals more quickly, knew what he wanted, & would wanna come and talk sooner. When the horse got close he rubbed her over& was able to put the halter on.
I loved that James seemed jealous of Mandy talking about Sean and his way with horses, how she wants to learn how to do it.
“I’m going back to the cottages. I don’t feel like sitting around in Molloys all night listening to more stuff about brilliant Sean Malone!”
And:
‘“We could get Sean to help us.” For James, this was a hard suggestion to make. “I’m sorry I was rotten about him earlier,” he added.’
Mandy was seriously dense for not immediately knowing what Mr. Malone and O’Rourke were talking about. Pretty clear they were horse thieves& they were talking about Rosie.
Sean was such a cool character:
“It’s one thing take an odd foal or two out of a here every now and then. No one notices that, except your son, maybe.”
“Hmm.” It was Malone’s turn to stay quiet.
“He’s got eyes in the back of his head,” the farmer complained. “It’s a good thing he was away at school when I put that halter on the chestnut foal in the first place.”
-James thought Sean didn’t care enough to see the horses while they’re being held in the farmer’s field, but it turns out his dad sent him to Galway to get him out of the picture while they stole the horses.
I LOVED when he showed up!
“Sean!” Mandy gasped and got up from the ground. She began to run again. “What are you doing here?” He was supposed to be in Galway, miles from here.
“Causing a stampede—what does it look like?” he yelled back. He drove the ponies toward the farmer, arms raised, pushing them on. His face was pale and drawn in the morning mist, his dark hair wet with dew. “You didn’t think I was going to let them take Rosie, did you?”’
Of course Mandy had to steal the show and use Sean’s training methods to get Rosie and lead her out of the field. That was Sean’s place to do.
‘He approached Mandy and stood by her side. “You did it!” he whispered with a smile.
Holding her head high, steadying Rosie, she nodded. “I did what you do. I talked to her!” she agreed.’
“All thanks to Sean,” Mandy insisted. “I remembered what he did and copied every single movement!”
At least she gave Sean some Credit.
It skipped over the moment of them setting Rosie and Connie free, which was disappointing.
It was ridiculous they didn’t even tell the cops on Sean’s dad and his accomplice, just swept the matter aside! Sean’s dad came around way too easily, and is just gonna accept Sean’s gift of horse training even though he never has. Not very likely. Only in a novel would that happen this suddenly and easily.
Molloy got back at Tom O’Rourke by banning him from his shop/bar which apparently is worse than going to jail in a town like that. But no punishment for Malone?
The ending could have been better. It would have been nice to end with Sean watching the horses with them. I wanted more friendship between them, and a real apology on Mandy and James’ part.
I really liked Sean’s character, his ability with the horses, the fact that he struggled with knowing his dad was stealing horses but not wanting to turn him in. How his parents were divorced and he goes away to school, & checks on the horses while he stays with his dad. And how he could be a real trainer in a few years.
The book centered a little too much on the horses, & I wanted more on Ireland. More sight-seeing and fun in Ireland, rather than getting caught up in horse thievery and it taking up their whole vacation. And I still want an explanation of why her parents had their vet stuff on vacation in Ireland!
Simple, action-packed book on horses. But could have been better in certain areas.