3.5 stars, rounded up
This novel had an intriguing and compelling story and good prose, but it crammed a bit too much in its length, so the overall impression is that it ends up being a bit shallow.
I really liked the author's approach to the Fae, and the way the magic of the protagonist and her community was presented was also very intriguing, but it wasn't explored in any great depth - we're often told that there is a religious aspect to the magic, that there are rituals the community performs together etc, but we're never shown any of them. I hope the next book will go more in depth into those aspects.
The characters were interesting, and I particularly liked the sibling relationship between Joan and her twin, James. The romantic aspect, while it had potential, suffered from having to share space with the very intense plot. There were only a few interactions between Joan and her love interests, so the romance didn't feel very believable, and felt as though it was purely based on physical attraction (particularly when it comes to Rose, because she and Joan meet in this book for the first time, and don't have a prior relationship).
Joan wasn't a bad protagonist by any means, as she was likable and proactive, but I wish her internal arc had been developed better. It's deeply based on her relationship with her Head Orisha, Ogun, but the Orisha in general suffer from a lack of depth in this book, and I think Joan's arc suffered as a result. She can also be, for lack of a better term, very stupid, but she's portrayed as quite smart overall by the narrative, so it makes the writing feel inconsistent. Stupidity/naivete are completely fine character flaws to give to your protagonist, just as it's totally fine to write a smart character who has some blind spots, but it's not the case here: as I wrote above, Joan is overall quite smart, but she misses completely obvious things for what feels like no reason beyond narrative convenience.
Overall, this was a fun read, and it got me out of reading slump, so I do recommend checking it out! It's a debut, and it feels as though the author is still finding her feet a little, but I do have high hopes for her next books.
I received an advance copy of this book from the publisher through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review