DNF around 125 pages. I really WANTED to finish this book, because it's such a fascinating and important topic.....but alas, it wasn't for me. The author should definitely be applauded for the amount of research that went into the book, and for really helping to bring Anarcha's story into the light....but unfortunately there were some storytelling choices made that made me unable to finish it. The author took too many asides writing about historical people who were only slightly related the the main story, or going on and on about celestial events. The book could have easily been 1/4 shorter if this was tightened up. It took me about 6 days to read this far, so it felt unnecessarily dense.
I also found the "speculative non-fiction" to be a bit...weird. Like, the information in the book is based on historical documents and interviews, but then the author embellishes stuff here and there as it pleases him. Yes, it's definitely SPECULATIVE non-fiction, as the author discloses on the "sources" page. However, the average reader may not realize what the means going forward. It basically means the author can fill in the gaps by just...making it up. Sometimes this works, sometimes it doesn't. For example, one part that made me cringe was this:
Anarcha [an enslaved woman] met one of the servants at Montgomery Hall, or Alfred or Frederick or Bill, or she grew friendly with Dr. Sims' Burnett or Allen, and it was then that she learned what it meant for a man to be with a woman. They stole moments. They stole moments the way that slaves stole waffles and chickens, and now she knew what it was like to hold a man, because it was the first time her hands were not bound.
This feels strange to me, to set this scene that Anarcha and her paramour "stole moments" and that this was the first time she knew what it was like to hold a man......but then leave the speculation of WHICH man entirely vague except to suggest 6 different possibilities. Because...we don't know. Which means we also don't know if they "stole moments" together or if she was finally enjoying consensual relations. It feels like it would have been more honest storytelling to just say, "At some point Anarcha evidently found a new lover, because she was soon pregnant again." If you want to embellish it, then you could say something like, "That may have been the first time that Anarcha knew what it was like to be held tenderly, instead of against her will..." Something like that. The point is that instead of making stuff up, it's fine to just acknowledge that some stuff is unknown, and use words like "maybe" or "perhaps". It's fine to SPECULATE on what really happened, but to write it as factual just feels uncomfortable to me.
But honestly, the part that I had the hardest time with and ultimately made me quit this book was THE WRITING. Generally it was fine, but there were times where I felt like one sentence didn't flow into the next in a way that made sense. It was like I had to pause and extrapolate the meaning or read between the lines....Argh, I can't explain it, and of course I didn't take note of an example. What I DID take note of was the run-on sentences. These were SO BAD in places that I had to wonder if the author even had an editor.
Example:
Dr. Sims had told the cursed women that it was possible for them to have babies, and in fact after the first experiments he didn't discourage them from having babies so long as they didn't all have babies at the same time, because what the experiments were supposed to prove was that a cursed woman could become a cured woman who returned to her plantation to have more babies for herself and her master."
One sentence like that by itself isn't too bad, but it was immediately followed by:
Dr. Sims' first experiments did not succeed, and sometimes they went horribly wrong, but something he came close to a cure, and when it he did, it was a chance to see what happened when a partially cured woman gave birth, whether her hole would open up again."
Hmmm....that was immediately followed by the paragraph about Anarcha's unknown lover and their stolen moments, so I was already feeling my skeptical eyebrow arching. And then on the very NEXT page was this behemoth:
Dr. Harris owned a plantation and slaves in Lowndes County, he owned property and more slaves in Autauga County, and he owned property and slaves in Montgomery too, and because he had medical training like Dr. Sims he took pity on the cursed women whose masters didn't want them anymore, so he bought them all even though they were worthless, and that was why Anarcha's baby would go to Lowndes County or Autuaga County, and when the time came and Anarcha's baby arrived--this time the baby was a large boy, but nature took a true course--she was permitted to let the baby suck for five days and then the nameless baby was sent to Autuaga County to be raised by slaves that belonged to the young woman who was now Dr. Harris' wife."
Phew, that's quite the sentence. It was kind of the last straw to me because I was getting more and more annoyed by how many run-on sentences there were in this book.
Also, there was a line where a speculum was described as a "cold tongue" sliding inside of her, and that skeeved me out...so much. It was especially ick since the woman in question was an enslaved woman suffering from a horrific medical condition where urine and feces were leaking out of her vagina.....That's definitely not the time to use tongue imagery.
It's tough, because flipping ahead in the book I see parts that look really interesting and that I want to learn about....but I'm just impatient with the tangents and the uneven writing. I'll probably go find another documentary or article to learn more about the rest of Anarcha's life, rather than push through this book. What I would really like to see an engaging historical fiction book based on Anarcha, written by a woman of color.
(Lastly, I noticed that the author has a tendency to comment defensively on negative reviews for his book.....which is pretty tactless. Just accept that not everyone is going to like your book.)