I love McKenna's writing and horses! She has a great writing style, and does a good balance of plot and romance. The heroine works for a government agency that investigates the preservation of wild horses, though she has never ridden a horse and works 100% of the time in a cubicle. However, she is sent ALONE to do field work on a remote ranch out west, with no experience horse back riding, or even doing field work (how is she to know what is she supposed to even look for?). The owner of the ranch (Rafe) is accused of shooting mustangs. Despite no evidence and her increasing attraction and belief in him, she "must investigate" in the mountains, not like you know try to find out who made the anonymous phone call, or go through paperwork or records from the ranches, or interview employees. The heroine is afraid to ride a plane alone, yet seems willing to trot off into the mountains for 2 WEEKS to "investigate" when she has NO EXPERIENCE riding or camping. Worse yet, the hero, Rafe, is a huge ass and deliberately pushes her really hard the first day ever riding a horse (to get"back" at her), forcing her to canter (a very difficult riding skill to master) on a mountain tail no less until she has bruises and blood on her legs. This was painful to read, and how mind mindbogglingly stupid and dangerous the premise of this plot was (she also had a serious head injury from a car accident and this recovery is treated poorly). Otherwise, the writing and details are really good and accurate and I felt like I was "there" on the ranch. Why couldn't' they have just made the heroine a more experienced rider and circumvented this cringy plot line? McKenna writes herself into corners in this one,plot wise. I mean, the car accident could have been much more minor, and the heroine more experienced in field work to make some plot elements more believable. Otherwise, it really could have been a perfect romance.