I’ll start by saying this was a fun idea and story. Then I’ll add that it needed more editing and more work before being released. It was fast paced but almost too fast and needed to slow down. I felt the story flying back and couldn’t seem to catch up.
Senri, the half-demon prince, needs Imogen’s, the sorceress in training, help to save his people. But he must lie to her in order for her to help him. He is also trapped in a glen in the middle of an ever-changing woods with a unicorn. Imogen attends an all-girl’s school and is bullied everyday if not threatened.
Becky Puff created an interesting story but the relationships between characters was left undeveloped and childish. Their conversations either jumped too fast or left out details that made it seem childish. The editing phase needed to be done again as I found far too many edits that I found extremely distracting while reading.
Overall, I enjoyed the story itself but it needed a few more drafts before it was released.