Despite the considerable difficulty to judge a work like this, where several factors can veil the originally intended meaning, such as language in itself, the translation, the interpretation of symbols or the competence and knowledge of the reader, I’m gonna try to argue with some points that were made in the main text.
In the prologue, the unknown author made it very clear that this work is highly at risk of being misunderstood. In fact, he even warned against reading it, unless one is „secretly stirred by the spirit of god“ and „inclined by grace towards the highest level of contemplative activity“ (Prologue, page 12).
I can both understand and not understand this warning. There is this highly complex and abstract metaphysical concept of a totally transcendent god, who can only be „known“ through a cloud of unknowing, which means the total annihilation of all conceptual thinking. This is definitely prone to being misunderstood if you’re not able to explain it with absolutely plausible logic and coherence.
At this point I anchored my basis of arguing, because I could relate this concept to other versions of the perennial philosophy.
“Nirvana is where there is no birth, no extinction; it is seeing into the state of suchness, absolutely transcending all the categories constructed by mind, for it is the Tathagatas inner consciousness.” (Lankavatara Sutra)
This knowing of god or reality through pure awareness of existence is also found in a concept in parts of Hindu philosophy, called “Sat Chit Ananda”, which means “Being, Consciousness, Bliss”.
This is exactly what Aldous Huxley experienced when he took Mescaline and looked at a vase with flowers: “I was not looking now at an unusual flower arrangement. I was seeing what Adam had seen on the morning of his creation – the miracle, moment by moment, of naked existence.”
Furthermore, i experienced this altered state of consciousness “myself” in a state of no-self, through the consumption of psilocybin mushrooms.
So, regardless of wether you wanna call it god, brahman, nirvana or anything else, unconceptual, ego-less marveling at the naked fact of existence is what this “handbook of contemplation” is about.
Now, to continue my point about his warning against reading the book:
I can understand it on the one hand, but on the other hand, it seems like he knew subconsciously that he could have explained it better.
This might seem radical, but if you look at other versions of the perennial philosophy, you will see that it is indeed possible to write unmistakably about the transcendent substance of existence and especially of how to “get there”.
Stoicism for example provides probably one of the most strikingly clear sets of ethics, logic and physics, which is absolutely coherent in itself. Now, Marcus Aurelius never wrote his meditations for the public, but I’m 100% sure that he wouldn’t have warned against reading it out of a fear of getting misunderstood.
His meditations also didn’t center around the contemplation of the transcendent substance of existence, but were more about how to live perfectly, but that right living and contemplation is inextricably linked together is exactly what the unknown author of the cloud should have explained more clearly.
He did that to some extent, but he didn’t provide precise ethical and moral maxims that would have helped the reader in the process of leading a more contemplative life and, above all, would have reduced the risk of misunderstanding dramatically.
Another problem I see is his idea of god being radically transcendent, rather than transcendent and immanent at the same time.
Contemplating the naked fact of unmanifested existence is only possible if there is something that this unmanifested existence is manifested in. If there would be nothing in the entire universe (meaning all of existence) which would embody it, existence couldn’t exist.
God, or the naked, unmanifested fact of existence, can then be reached by contemplating the transience of things.
Existence itself is the only thing being permanent.
But this existence is also the core of all manifestations, only that they are transient.
A flower is a manifestation that will die and become something else, but the substance of it is naked existence.
In Spinozas words:
“By substance I understand what is in itself and is conceived through itself, i.e., that whose concept does not require the concept of another thing, from which it must be formed. (E1D3)”
This is of course very hard to “see” in manifestations like flowers or anything else, but without manifestations it couldn’t be seen at all and there wouldn’t even be something to perceive it in the first place.
Overall, this is one of the more complex and challenging accounts of the perennial philosophy, but nevertheless worth reading. I can only speak for myself, but exploring exoterically different religious texts made me understand the individual metaphors and symbols and their common mystical core way better, as opposed to just studying one religious branch in particular.
“And if it seems to you that there is any material in it that you would like to have more fully expounded, let me know what it is and your ideas about it, and I will improve it if I can, to my humble ability” (page 100)
If the unknown author really meant what he wrote, he could hopefully reply to it without disregarding my arguments as coming from a “worldly chatterer, public self-praiser or fault finder” (cf. page 12).